读后续写：救援类-狗狗救人讲义-高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写原题：阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短又。英语汉语Haveyouevernoticedhowcertainsmellscancallupparticularemotionsormemories?你是否注意到某些味道可以唤起特定的情感或记忆？Awhiffofperfumeorafter-shaverecallsafavoriteperson;thedelicioussmellofwarmbreadticklesthetastebuds.一股香水或剃须后水的气息会让人想起喜欢的人；温暖面包的香气则会勾起味蕾的愉悦。Thinkaboutnewlycutgrassorhowtheairsmellsafterathunderstorm.Burningleavesonfreshandcoldfalldaysalwaysremindmeofthefootballattheweekend.想象一下刚割完草地之后的味道，或雷雨后空气的气息。在空气清新，天气寒冷的秋天，燃烧树叶的味道总是让我想起周末的足球。PerhapsthesmellsthatsurroundChristmascarrythemostmemories.Thefreshgreensmellofpinetrees;thefragrancesofavarietyoffood,especiallytheonesgivenoffbycookiesbeingbakedinanovenandhotchocolate.Moreover,

thescentofwoodsmokearoundtheburningfire(果木烤鸭的味道？？)

canalsobringwarmthandthecomfortablefeelingtoourmind.也许，围绕圣诞节所散发出的味道承载着最多的回忆。松树的清新绿色气息；各种食物的香气，特别是烤在烤箱里的饼干和热巧克力。此外，着火的火堆周围散发出的木烟气味也会给我们带来温暖和舒适的感觉。ButthesmellIassociatebestwithChristmasandwinterisawetdog.Ourdogwasmostlyanoutdoordogandwasoftenwetcompletelyintherain.Wetriedtodryhimoffassoonashecamein,grabbingtheold,dirtytowelbythedoor.Heusuallyshookhimselfbeforewecouldcatchhim.Thewallsofthebackentrywerealwaysspottedwithbrownmudallwinter.Webrushedhimregularlyinspringandsummerwhenwinterfurfelloutbyhandfuls,butbathswererare.So,ofcourse,hissmellbuiltupovertime.Tryaswemight,wenevercouldcompletelygetridofthatsmell.Itlayhiddendeepinhisfurandskin.但是，我最能与圣诞节和冬天相联想的味道是一只浑身湿透的续小狗。我们的狗犹如常年厮混在外不归家的“小野狗”，它在雨中经常被完全淋湿。我们他进屋后，会尽快用门边的脏旧毛巾擦他。它通常会在我们追上他之前就自己摇晃身体把水甩出去。整个冬天，后门入口的墙上总是点缀着棕色泥巴。春夏季节，当冬季毛发大量脱落时，我们会定期给它梳毛，但洗澡的次数很少。所以，它身上的味道随着时间积累越来也重。无论我们怎样尝试，都永远无法完全消除那种深藏在皮毛和肌肤深处的味道。Thedistinctivesmellofthewetdogwasa

reminder

oftheChristmasvacationwhenIwastwelve,andthecousinsfromOhiowerevisiting.浑身湿透的小狗身上那独特的气味让我想起了我十二岁时的圣诞假期，那时我从俄亥俄州远来的表兄弟姐妹也在一起。Wehadgottenshiny,slipperyflyingsaucersasgiftsandwerealsoblessedwithfreshsnow.我们得到了有光泽的、光滑的飞碟作为礼物，更幸运的是刚下了一场雪。Thefourofusspentasmuchtimeaspossibleslidingdowntheshorthilltothepond.我们四个人尽可能多地花时间滑下通往池塘的小山坡。Naturally,wetestedtheiceonthepondbeforeslidingthefirstday,andweknewwecouldslideacrossitandlengthenourride.当然，在第一天滑之前，我们测试了池塘上的冰，我们知道我们可以在上面滑行并增加我们的滑行距离。续写第一段：Onthethirdday,weweresoeagertoplaythatwedidnotcheckit.___续写第二段：Isteppeddownthebankcarefullytoreachhim,butthedogwasfaster._____

试水作文：续写第一段：Onthethirdday,weweresoeagertoplaythatwedidnotcheckit(着急玩耍，没检查--伏笔：会掉下去成为落汤"狗").___

Weassumedthattheicewouldstillbestrongenoughtosupportourweight.Asusual,mycousin,Jackson,wasthefirstonetoslidedowntheshorthill,andthenKarryandRoy(我也是真爱粉，请不要喷我).However,justasIwasabouttoslidedown,I

heardacrackingsoundcomingfromthesurfaceoftheriver.

Iquicklyturnedmyheadtowherethesoundcamefrom,andsaw

Roycrashingthroughtheiceholdinghisflyingsaucer.

Overcomewithawaveofterror,myheartcouldbefeltpoundingfiercelywithinmychest.Nevertheless,aninnervoiceimploredmetoactandIknewthatImustcometohisrescue.(哈哈，这段熟悉么？我的学生应该很熟悉了，平时我在课堂上教你们的模板是：Awaveofterrorfloodedoverme,andIcouldfeelmyheartpoundingwildly.However,itstruckmethatIhadtorescuehim.)续写第二段：Isteppeddownthebankcarefullytoreachhim,butthedogwas

faster.(感觉这里和上文，我们正准备给它擦干身体，它立刻甩了甩身体对应，小狗“反应快”，以及小狗救小朋友，成了真的落汤狗，那种气味成为一种reminder)Hesensedthedangerandracedacrossthethinningice,reachingmycousinjustintimetohelppullhimtosafety.Asweallstoodthere,

wet

andshivering,the

smell

ofourwetdogfilledtheair,

areminder

ofthebondwe

shared

andthe

adventureswehad

thatwinter.Fromthenon,the

scent

ofawetdogwouldalways

bringbackmemories

ofthatChristmasvacationandthelovewehadforourbrave,loyalcompanion.（感觉有点处理的不太好，cousins会不会出场时间太少？）附官方参考答案范文Onepossibleversion:Onthethirdday,weweresoeagertoplaythatwedidnotcheckit.Afewdegreesofwarmthaddedasmalllayerofwatertoourslide,increasingourspeedandexcitement,MybrotherPeterslidhappilyandrapidlydownthehillandontothepond,Secondslater,hewasstrugglingintheicywater.Peterwasonlyeightandnotagoodswimmer,especiallywrappedinaheavywintercoatandboots,Ithappenedallofasuddenandmadeusallinpanicandscream.Isteppeddownthebankcarefullytoreachhim,butthedogwasfaster,Hejumpedintothewater,grabbedPeterbyhisailinghand,andpulledhimtoshore.ThecousinsandIwereabletofinishpullingPeteroutoftherigidwater.Youcanguesstherestofthestory.WemanagedtowrapPeterinourcoatsandgethim