读后续写圣诞节神秘礼物学案-2023届高三英语二轮复习

读后续写原题：AlthoughitwaslessthantwoweeksbeforeChristmas,Ifounditdifficulttobeinafestivemood.WehadmovedtoCanada,andholidaysweredifficultforusbecausewemissedourfriendsandrelativesinMinnesota.Ourfamilywasalsogoingthroughaverydifficultyear,withhealthproblemsandaseriouswork-relatedproblemformyhusband.(感觉这个剧情好熟悉，这学期有篇完形填空也是如此，全家失业，儿子掉进池塘，两只小狗救儿子)"Mom,HowIwishwecouldspendChristmaswithGrandpaandGrandmainMinnesota.Ireallymissthemandmyfriendsthere."saidmyfifteen-year-olddaughter,Rachel."Iknow,Rachel.SowouldI,"Isaid."ButMinnesotais2,000kilometersaway.Don'tyourememberhowharditwastodriveinthatsnowstormlastyear?Andthenthetemperaturedroppedto-30℃onourwayback?""Iremember,"shesaidandduckedherheaddisappointedly.WethoughtdrivingtoMinnesotaforChristmaswastooriskyandbuyingairlineticketsforthreepeoplewasoutofthequestion.WewouldbespendingChristmasaloneinCanada（看看咱们说的：有钱没钱，回家过年）,andhadnomoneyforaChristmastreeoraChristmasdinner（上文提到丈夫遇到严重工作危机，也解释了为什么havedifficultyinmoodforChristmas很难有那种过节的心情).Weweresurprisedwhenthedoorbellrang(这里忽然想到了电影：《绿皮书》末尾，黑人音乐家唐博士在大雪纷飞的圣诞夜敲响原先对他有“偏见”的托尼家的门）.Itwasdark（温州二模隧道里的“黑”？）andcoldoutside（欲扬先抑？）,andweweren'texpectinganyone.Hesitantly（情绪描写传神）,Rachelstoodupandwentforwardtoopenthedoor,andthensaid,"Mom,there'sabigbox（广州二模Outsidethebox里的盒子？还没往下看，狗血一下：盒子里会藏人么？？？）onthedoorstepandnobodyisouthere!"Myhusbandalsowentandlooked.Buttherewasnobodyinsight.Theybroughttheboxin.Weweresurprisedtofindthattheboxcontained（包含，这几年高考中请注意该词的熟词生意：抑制）manypackagescoveredinbrightChristmas（bright圣诞节，与一开始形成对比）paper.Eachhadatypewrittennote:OpenDec.14,OpenDec.15...Therewereatotaloftwelve-the"TwelveDaysofChristmas."（这里有点泪奔，经常看到新闻里，亲人“离去）会给至亲留下陪伴成长信件，每年一封）Thenoteread:OurLOVEisgivenanonymously（匿名地）,soenjoyfunwithyourfamily,butdon'ttellanyoneplease(为什么不能告诉别人？）.注意：1．续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。续写第一段:Afterthat,weopenedonemoregifteachday.______续写第二段:Weopenedthe12th​文章主旨：圣诞节是一年中最特别的时刻之一，然而这对于那些离家远行的人来说，可能会变得特别艰难。但这个故事也展示了人们可以从其他地方寻找到爱与善意，并在节日里分享。各段中心思想：第一段：即使是圣诞节，对于那些离家远行的人，度过这个节日可能变得困难；第二段：Rachel和母亲都想念明尼苏达州的亲戚和朋友；第三段：由于种种原因，他们不能在圣诞节时回家；第四段：一个神秘礼物盒子改变了他们的圣诞节，他们发现有人爱他们，并希望帮助他们过节。情感线：全篇情感线非常饱满，主要展示人们在圣诞节期间如何找到爱与善意。尽管主人公和她的家人面临许多挑战和困难，但是一份爱和礼物改变了他们的经历，并将他们拉回节日氛围中。本文主要的比喻是“十二天的圣诞节”，这是一个旧的、传统的准备节日的方式。同时，这些神秘的礼物也可以比作“尽管你可能没有在家里过节，但我们仍然想给你一个美好的礼物，让你感受到这个节日的魔力。”环境描写和心理描写：文章描述了加拿大寒冷的天气和主人公家庭内部的压力。心理描写包括瑞秋和母亲的思念、失落感和焦虑，以及他们收到礼物时的惊喜和感激。Twelve有什么特殊含义：12被称为“圣诞十二夜”或“圣诞节前夕”，是圣诞节庆祝活动的一个旧习俗。“TwelveDaysofKindness”是指从圣诞节到1月6日的期间，人们会进行善良的行为和分享礼物。官方参考范文：Afterthat,weopenedonemoregifteachday.Beforeuncoveringthebox,wewouldsitaroundthetableexpectantly（与原文不期待打开门对比）andmadewildguesses（与刚开始没心情对比）atwhateachpackagecontained.Thencametheexcitingmomentwhenthemystery（礼物没看到，神秘人究竟是谁？）wouldbesolved.Everybodywouldroarwithlaughter.Aseachpackagewasunwrapped,werealizeditwasanunknownCanadianfriendwhowasthinkingofus,lovingus,andwishingusawonderfulChristmas（ususChristmas单押？？）.Amazementneverceasedandthegiftopeningeventuallybecamapartofour-dailyroutine.WealllookedforwardtothearrivalofChristmas.Weopenedthe12thpackageonDecember25th.Wecouldn'tcontainourexcitement,anxioustowitnessthefinalsurprise.Insidetheboxwasanotewhichread:"AChristmastreeandaChristmasdinnerareawaitingyouonthedoorstep.MerryChristmas!"(开头说买不起圣诞树，这不就来了？？）Rachelsprangtothehandleandswiftlypulledthedooropen.Atthesightofthepleasantsurprise,Racheljumpedwithjoyandscreamedwithexcitement.Tearsmistedmyeyesandweweresothankfultobeloved!Butforthestranger'sgenerosity,ourfamilywouldn'thavegonethroughsuchahappyChristmas.试水版Afterthat,weopenedonemoregifteachday.Eachpackagewascarefullywrappedandcontainedthoughtfulgiftsthatbroughtourfamilyclosertogether.Oneday,wereceivedaboardgameandspenttheafternoonplayingandlaughingtogether.Anotherday,wefoundarecipebookandcookedaspecialChristmasmealwithingredientswealreadyhadathome.Thesegiftsnotonlyremindedusofthemagicoftheholidayseasonbutalsohelpedustofindjoyinourcurrentsituation.Weopenedthe12thpackageonDecember25th.Insidewasacardthatread:"MerryChristmas!Wehopeyou'veenjoyedtheTwelveDaysofKindness.Rememberthatevenwhenyou'refarfromhome,youarelovedandappreciated.Happyholidays!"Tearswelledupinoureyesaswerealizedthatsom