2021年托福写作真题分析

Inordertosucceed，youshouldbemorelikeothersthanbedifferentfromeveryoneelse.Disagree：apersonshouldbecreativeandinnovative.Forexample：SteveJobs->Ipod，Iphone，Ipad.Apersonshouldnevergiveupandworkhard:Forexample：WinstonChurchill->nevergiveup->successinWorldWarTwoScientistsnevergivesup：ThomasEdisonthroughtrialsanderrorsimproveelectroniclightsEdisonsaid：Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspirationAllschoolteachersshouldberequiredtotakecourseseveryfiveyearstoupdatetheirknowledge.Agree:knowledgeisupdatedveryfast:forexample：computerscience，physics等方面举例阐明知识更新快，language方面也有诸多新单词和新说法浮现。teachingskillsaredevelopingveryfast.Forexample:TheformalcrammingmethodischangedintointeractiveteachingWithPowerPoint，projector，Ipad，teachershavetolearnthosenewskills.Improvingschoolisthemostimportantfactortosuccessfuldevelopmentofacountry.Agree:1)SchoolscantraintalentsforthecountryForexample：HarvardPrincetonOxford等培养了诸多economist，Politician，scientist为社会做贡献。可以说美国英国社会成功很大限度上是那里教诲好，特别高等教诲好。2)Schoolscanimprovetheoverallatmosphereandcivilizationlevelinthecommunity.Forexample：可以说Cambridge，Oxford等就是一种小镇和大学城，整个居民都收到文化氛围影响，提高市民素质和文化水平，市民可以完善和提高自我，成功机会更多，因此对整个国家和社会都好！Anefficientleaderalwaystriestomakeeveryonefeelthattheyarepartofmakingadecision.Agree：1）everyonefeelsimportantandwillworkwithenthusiasmandpassion.Forexample：Ex-CEOofGE，JackWelchrespecteveryoneinthecompanyandinviteordinaryworkerstomeetingsandofferthemtherighttoparticipateinthedecisionanddiscussion最后公司做得较好！另一例子ThomasEdison：她“创造工厂”，把许多不同专业人组织起来，里面有科学家、工程师、技术人员、工人共100多人，这些人均有权利参加决定，爱迪生许多重大创造就是靠这个集体力量才获得成功。2）itcanreduceandavoidmistakesbylettingthemcomeintothedecision.Forexample：可以减少“groupthink”后果，不能每次都只听领导意见，形成groupthink，最后导致负面影响。Itisbettertorelaxbywatchingamovieorreadingabookratherthandoingphysicalexercise.

这个题目可以分两种不同人来说。平时喜欢静人应当多做physicalexercise，然后举例阐明好处；寻常运动比较多人应当选取watchingamovie等，然后说说看书或者电影好处。Itistheresponsibilityofthegovernmenttoprovidehealthcaretoeveryoneinthatcountry.（下面是30分范文，可做参照）Whiskingthedustofthesurfaceandopeningthescrollofhistory,wecaneasilyfindoutthatthegovernmentwhodoesn'tcareaboutthelivesofthehumanbeingslivinginthecountrywillcertainlyneverlasttoolong.Andtherefore，agoodgovernmentshouldpaymuchattentiontothelivingconditionofeveryoneinthecountry.However，thefinancialsituationsvaryamongdifferentcountries，andcorrespondinglytherewillbefiercedebatesaboutthecaresystem，suchashealthcare-whetherthegovernmentshouldprovidehealthcaretoeveryoneinthecountry.Frommypointofview，Ithinkthewriter'sassertionisfundamentallycorrect，anditistheresponsibilityofthegovernmenttoprovidehealthcaretoeveryone.

Firstofall，thehealthcareprovidesthebasiccaresystemforthehumanbeingsanditshowsthebasichumanityinthegovernment，whichIthinkissignificantespeciallyforagovernment.Whengoverningthecountry，onlythiskindofhumanitycanmakethepeoplebewillingtobeunderthechargeofthegovernment.Andasweknow，thewarsledbythepeopleinthecountryaremostlycausedbytheunfairsituation，whichteachesustheimportanceofhumanity.Therefore，thehealthcaresystemcanbeanimportantfoundationofthegovernment.Sointhisdegree，it’sreallyofgreatsignificanceforthegovernmenttoprovidethehealthcaretoeveryonelivinginthatcountry.

Ontopofthat，thehealthcarecanmakethepeoplepaymoreattentiontotheirhealth，whichisthemoreseriousproblemforahumanbeing.Healthisthebaseofthebody，andifyourcitizensareunhealthyphysicallyormentally，youcouldneverexpectthemtobehappyinthecountry.Andwithouthappiness，peoplemaylivewithangerorwarsbutnoharmony，whichistheworstthingforagovernment.Andnoharmony，noprogress.Inthisaspect,providingthehealthcaretothecitizensinthecountrycanindirectlycontributetotheprogressandimprovementswhicharemostlyledbypeoplethemselves.Inaword，itisworthyofdoingthat.

However，providingthehealthcareforeveryonedoesn’tsuiteverycountryintheworld.AsIsaidabove，thefinancialsituationsvaryamongdifferentcountries，andasforsomepoorcountries，providingthehealthcaretoeveryonemaybemoreacursethanablessing.Themoneythatgovernmentusestoprovidethehealthcarecomesfromtaxes，andrequiringthemtoprovidehealthcaretopeoplemeansthegovernmentwillhavetogetmoretaxesfromthecitizens，whichisnotsuitableforpoorcountries.Soasforthesecountries,healthcaretoeveryoneisunavailableandimpractical.

Despitethefactthatpoorcountriesmayhavenochancetoprovidethehealthcaretoeveryoneinthecountry，formostofthecountriesintheworld，thegovernmentshoulddoso，inordertoensurethehealthcareforcitizens，whichwillbeatotalblessingandbenefitforthem.Alsosuchasystemwillbebeneficialtothegovernmentitself.It’sawin-winsituation!Inordertosolvetheproblemsofthepresentandthefuture，peopleshouldreviewthepast.Agree：1）peoplecangetlessonsandexperiencesfromthepastmistakesanderrors.Forexample：从过去经历或者某次失败懂得要有responsibility，要获得成功要nevergiveup，hardwork，从某次懂得要有teamworkspirits等2）somecoreprinciplesandvalueswouldneverchangeoverthousandsofyears.例如中华人民共和国Confucianism，emphasisonfamilyimportance美国英国freedom和democracy，dependence这样理念，都要从中学到东西，为当前和将来服务。8.Whichismoreimportant，theabilitytobeadaptedtonewjobenvironmentortheexcellentknowledgeforjob.Theabilitytobeadaptedtoanewenvironmentismoreimportant.1)Theworldischangingfastandpeopleoftenchangetheirjobsandmovetootherplaces，sotheyshouldhaveagoodcommunicationabilityandskillstoquicklygetusedtonewenvironment.Forexample:可以举例中学公立学校教师和私立学校教师区别，一种是有固定周末和假期，一种没有；一种是被别人尊重对象，一种是一种“产品”，可以谈谈两种环境不同。同步上级和同事也不同。因此需要人有良好沟通能力和技巧才干迅速适应新环境和新工作。否则就会浮现问题。因此，这种状况下适应能力比excellentskillforjob重要。2)Whenpeoplechangetoanewenvironment，itismoreimportantforthemtolearnnewskillsinsteadofusingtheoldone.Therefore，theactivelearningabilityisveryimportanttogetusedtothenewenvironment.Forexample，可以谈谈本来做IT或者软件工程师当前来做这个公司CEO，那么需要哪些新能力和技巧去迅速学习。因此这个时候学习能力就比excellentknowledgeforjobs重要。9.Todaychildrenarelessdependentontheirparents.Agree：1）childrencanturntocomputersandothermoderntechnologyforhelp.Forexample，可以举例阐明当前网络多么发达，可以上搜索引擎，可以有Twitter，facebook等小孩子可以去聊天，可以很方面在网上或者书店查看资料等2）the