人教版八年级下册英语 Unit 1 -Unit 3 作文解析含解析

八年级下unit1-unit3作文精讲Unit1DearTom,Iamsorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Asweknow,healthisveryimportanttoallofus.Youshouldn'tplaythemobilephonegamesallthetime.Itisharmfultositinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Sinceyouhavesomeproblemswithyourneck,youshouldstopplayingthemobilephonegamesfirst.Thenyoushouldtakebreaksafteryouplaywithyourphone.Besides,exercisecanhelpyoukeephealthy.Sotrytotakemoreexercise.Ifyourneckstillhurts,thengotoadoctor.Ifyoufollowallthesetips,you'llbebettersoon!Yours,Henry本单元话题为“healthandfirstaid”要求根据某一健康或意外问题给出自己的建议。写作时，要根据提示描述问题；其次要给出合理化的建议；最后要表达祝愿。在给出建议时可以适当运用should/shouldn’t+动词原形；表达祝愿时可以使用祈使句或一般将来时。思路点拨：第一段：引出话题第二段：展开表述：指出问题并给出自己的合理建议第三段：结尾——表达祝愿第一段：引出话题besorrytodo... 很遗憾做...Asweallknow/Asisknowntous 众所周知Asfarasweknow 众所周知It’simportant/essentialforsbtodo... 对某人来说做某事是重要的/至关重要过渡句：herearesomeways/suggestionstokeephealthy 接下来说一下保持健康的方法仿写：1.众所周知，保持身体健康对人们是很重要的。_____________________________________________________________________这里有一些帮助你保持健康的建议。_____________________________________________________________________第二段：展开表述：指出问题并给出自己的合理建议注意：在给出建议时，可以用衔接词连接几条建议，文章会更有层次和逻辑性。衔接词第一，首先 Firstly/tobeginwith/firstofall/inthefirstplace/atthebeginningof第二，其次，更多 Secondly/besides/next/then/moreoverInaddition/additionally/what’smore/furthermore/afterthat/apartfromthis最后，简言之 Finally/eventually/inaword/allinall/tosumUp/onthewhole/lastbutnottheleast/generallyspeaking/inconclusion/Toconclude/tosummarize/inbrief/inshort/insummary指出问题：sbshouldn’t/arenotsupposedtodo... 某人不应该...It’sharmfultodo... 做某事是有害的表达建议的句型：personallyspeaking 就个人而言Aslongasyou....,youwillgetbetter. 只要你...，你就会感觉更好了needtodo... 需要做...It’snecessaryforsbtodo... 对某人来说做某事是必要的sbfind/thinkitadj.todo... 某人发现做某事是....的sbhadbetterdosth 某人最好做...（为了保持健康的）具体建议：haveabalanceddiet 有平衡的膳食eatlessjunkfood 吃更少的垃圾食品takeexercise(everyday/onceaweek/...) 做运动（每天/一周一次/...）getupearlyandgotobedearly 早睡早起havearest/break 休息一下getenoughsleep 获得充足的睡眠eatmorefreshvegetablesandfruiteveryday 每天吃更新鲜的蔬菜和水果onlybyexercisingregularlycanwekeepourbodyataproperweightandstayhealthy只有通过定期运动才能让我们的身体保持健康，身材匀称neverstayuplate 从不熬夜learntoreducepressure 学会减压stopplayingthemobilephonegames 停止玩手机游戏stayawayfromjunkfood 远离垃圾食品getinto/developahealthylivinghabit 养成健康的生活习惯注意：每个建议都是基于一定的理由给出的。每个建议对应的理由自己需要头脑风暴，赶紧练习吧！___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第三段：结尾——表达祝愿Astheoldsayinggoes,/thereisanoldsayinggoesthat... 俗话说healthiswealth/healthishappiness 健康就是财富/健康就是幸福physicalhealthcanhelpustostudybetter 身体健康是学习的保障let'sdo... 让我们...if...,wewill... 如果...，我们会...takeactiontodo... 采取行动做...followthetips 遵循建议lead/livea/anadjlife 过着...的生活仿写：首先，你不应该抽烟（smoke），抽烟有害健康。_____________________________________________________________________就个人而言，有平衡的膳食对你来说是很重要的。_____________________________________________________________________只要你有了充足的睡眠，你会感觉更好的。_____________________________________________________________________学会减压也是很重要的。你会发现停止玩手机游戏可以帮助你放松。_____________________________________________________________________每天尽量吃新鲜的水果和蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品。只有这样你才能保持身体健康和身材匀称。_____________________________________________________________________俗话说，健康就是财富。_____________________________________________________________________因此，我们要行动起来，保持健康！_____________________________________________________________________如果你能遵循建议，相信一定会过上幸福健康的生活！_____________________________________________________________________希望你能尽快好起来！_____________________________________________________________________Unit2DearTom,How'severythinggoing?LastSunday,Ididsomevolunteerworkintheneighborhoodofourschoolwithmyclassmates.Andweweregladwecoulddosomethingmeaningful.Inthemorning,wehelpedtocleanthestreet.Andthenwewenttotheoldpeople'shometohelpthemdohousework.Intheafternoon,wetoldstoriestothekidsinthechildren'shome,Iwasexcitedaboutstayingwiththem.Thatday,Iwasbusybutveryhappy.Ithinkit'sgreattobeavolunteer.Helpingotherscanbringhappinessnotonlytoothersbutalsotoourselves.Yours,Henry本单元话题为“volunteeringandcharity”主要谈论如何提供帮助、宣传和倡导公益等。写作时，注意表述为他人提供帮助和服务的想法，可以用情态动词could表达如何为他人提供帮助。思路点拨：第一段：开头——点明时间、地点及人物第二段：展开表述：写出活动的具体内容第三段：结尾——表明自己对志愿活动的观点第一段：开头——点明时间、地点及人物过渡句：sthplaysanimportantpart/roleinmylifeandIdidalotof/differentkindsof...lastterm....在我的生活中扮演了重要的角色，因此上学期我做了各种各样的...第二段：展开表述：写出活动的具体内容活动内容较多，用衔接词连接，会使文章更加有层次和逻辑性举个例子：forexample/instance/suchas/take...forexample表递进的连接词：What'smore/inaddition/besides/furthermore/moreover/furthermore/additionally总结的连接词：Inconclusion/inaword/tosumup/inbrief/insummary/toconcludetosummarize/inshort转话题：bytheway；whenitcomesto；Asfor...；whentalkingabout...Apartfromthat；lastbutnotleast志愿活动（列举）washclothes/cleanrooms 洗衣服/打扫房间tellmanyinterestingstoriestosb 给某人讲很多有趣的故事teachsbtodo... 教某人做某事giveawaysthtosb 把某物捐赠给某人cleanup 打扫；清洁pickupandsortrubbish 捡垃圾并且分类helptofixupthebroken... 帮助修理坏掉的...还有什么活动吗？头脑风暴一下！____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（为了让自己的志愿活动描写地饱满起来，可以让自己在描述活动的同时，添加一些做这些志愿活动的对应理由）仿写：比如说，我上周就在养老院扫地、清理窗户。__________________________________________________________________为了让他们开心起来，我会给老人们读有趣的故事。__________________________________________________________________既然你喜欢小动物，你也可以在宠物医院做志愿工作。__________________________________________________________________另外，你也可以去图书馆和博物馆去尝试一下。__________________________________________________________________要成为一名优秀的志愿者，最好提高自己的沟通技巧。__________________________________________________________________为了让他们开心起来，我会给老人们读有趣的故事。__________________________________________________________________第三段：结尾——表明自己对志愿活动的观点好词好句摘取：Therealhappinessistoshareyourhappinesswithothers,...isagood/perfectwaytodoit.真正的快乐是要和别人分享的，...就是很好的分享快乐的方式...candowhat...lovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime...可以让你同时做自己爱做的事和帮助人的事Thoughwewere...,wefeltvery...to... 尽管我们...，我们感到很...去...serving/helpingotherscanbringushappiness帮助别人可以给我们带来快乐helpingothersishelpingourselves帮助别人就是帮助自己It’smeaningfultodo...做...是有意义的试着用好词好句结尾：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unit3Doyouthinkamiddleschoolstudentshoulddochoresathome?Inourdailylife,someparentsthinkthatstudentsshouldstudyintheirfreetime.Theydon'tlettheirkidsdoanychores.Theythinktheonlythingkidsneedtodoistostudywell.Idisagreewithit.Ithinkit'sgoodforkidstodosomechores.Firstly,doingsomechoresathomecanmakeusindependent.Wecan'tdependonparentsforever.Soweshouldlearntodosomechores.Secondly,whenwedochoresathome,wecanunderstandourparentsbetter.Thirdly,wecanalsorelaxourselvesfromhardworkatschool.Inaword,Ithinkstudentsshoulddosomechoresintheirfreetime.本单元话题“choresandpermission”围绕这一话题，能用should/shouldn't谈论自己对做家务的看法，学会分担家务，促进与家庭成员之间的情感交流。写作体裁以议论文为主。议论文有三要素：论点、论据和论证。首先在开篇部分，直接提出要讨论的问题；然后在正文部分，对所提的问题进行论证；最后在结尾部分总结、归纳，并提出自己的观点。思路点拨：第一段：开篇点题——列出家长的做法并表明自己的观点——做家务对孩子有好处第二段：展开论证——论证做家务的好处第三段：总结归纳——再次表明自己的观点第一段：开篇点题——列出家长的做法并表明自己的观点——做家务对孩子有好处1.peoplehavedifferentideas/opinionsabout... 人们对此有不同的看法2.somepeoplethink....,some... 有些人认为...,有些则...3.inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned/fromthepointofmyview/tomymind依我看来it’sourduty/responsibilitytodo... 是我们的义务/责任去...第二段：展开论证——论证做家务的好处可以套用的句型或短语：helpsb(to)dosth 帮助某人做某事helpsbwithsth 在某方面帮助某人makesbadj. 使某人....If...,willdo... 如果...,会....notonly,but(also)... 不仅，而且teachsbtodosth 教会某人做某事it’sadjforsbtodo... 对某人来说做某事是...的agoodwaytodo... 一种...的好方式做家务的具体好处（例举）developonesindependence 培养某人的独立getmanylifeskills 获得很多生活技能trainonesabilities 训练某人的能力buildasenseofresponsibility 养成责任感geta（strong）sense/feelingofsatisfaction 获得（强烈的）满足感lookafter/takecareofoneself 照顾自己understandourparentsbetter 更好地理解我们的父母relaxourselvesfromhardworkatschool 从沉重的学业中放松自己takegoodcareo