高三短文改错二轮改错公开课课件

Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank,Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speedup!”

“Slowdown!”

“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.（作者暑假学车的经历,8句，109词）17年高考I卷改错eighteenth∧the/mybutwentwordsTurnlatersuddenof数词误用冠词/代词的漏用连接词逻辑错误谓语动词时态错误名词数的误用谓语与非谓语的错用副词的多余副词的语义错误词性误用介性误用第1页/共27页

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.(叔叔开的饭店生意兴隆及成功秘诀,8句，93词）16年高考I卷改错where∧havehonestyandusedofasteadilyhis连接词逻辑错误连接词错用连接词重复使用动词时态错误词性误用介词漏用冠词错用代词逻辑错误词性误用动词语态的误用第2页/共27页短文改错考些什么？怎么考？你有什么解题经验和大家分享？长度：2.内容：3.体裁：4.考点

：5.考法：短文有6～10句话，含92～119个词。取材于学生习作，贴近学生生活。除2013年Ⅱ卷是说明文外，其余都是记叙文。动，名，形，副，介，冠，代，连词等。1)8:1:1的规律即：8个改错题，1个加词题，1个删词题2）每个句子最多不超过两个错误,一词改一词第3页/共27页改错要容易，考点须牢记；根据考点找错误，逐一排查高速度。三个步骤1.从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态和语态。2.从句子入手，依据考点，逐句分析，推敲语法。3.从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代。第4页/共27页1.(2017全国Ⅰ卷)Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,butonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.2.(2017全国Ⅰ卷)Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthewords,“Speedup!”

“Slowdown!”

“Turningleft!”

3.(2016全国Ⅰ卷)Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethat…4.(2016全国Ⅰ卷)Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.haveTurnwentused考点1谓语动词的错误第5页/共27页5.(2017全国Ⅲ卷)Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,butalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.6.(2017全国Ⅲ卷)Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastaken,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.

7.(2016全国Ⅱ卷)Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakingatrip.8.(2016全国Ⅱ卷)Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.havebecamechooseshould第6页/共27页9.(2014全国II卷)Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsofflowersand…Wecanlieonthegrass…Theteachersherearekind…Theyarenotonlyourteachers…

looks归纳总结：主要考查动词的时态和语态，主谓一致、语气等。第7页/共27页1.(2017全国Ⅱ卷)Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,whichisontherooftopoftheirhouse.2.(2017全国Ⅱ卷)Whensummercomes,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!3.(2016全国Ⅱ卷)Wecanchoosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.∧interestedto考点2非谓语动词的错误taking第8页/共27页4.(2016全国Ⅲ卷)IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.5.(2016·浙江)Hewouldaskwhowewereandpretendnottoknowingus.wearingknow归纳总结：主要考查动词不定式、动词-ing形式以及过去分词的用法、谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用、并列结构中非谓语动词的误用等。作主语或作介词宾语，该用动词-ing形式时却用了原形。尤其注意分清to是介词还是不定式符号。固定结构中不定式符号的缺失与多余。情感类动词的-ed分词与-ing分词的区别。作定语、状语或补语时，非谓语动词形式用错。第9页/共27页1.(2017·全国Ⅰ)Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword，“Speedup！”“Slowdown！”...2.(2016全国Ⅰ卷)Myuncletellsmethatthekeytosuccessishonest.3.Jaybeganhisperformancewithoneofhismostfamoussong.考点3名词错误wordshonestysongs第10页/共27页4.(2017全国Ⅱ卷)Besides,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.5.(2016全国Ⅱ卷)Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.6.(2016全国Ⅲ卷)Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Tips:可数名词大于一时要用复数，不可数名词一般没有复数形式。如air,milk,water等物质名词与music,advice,fun，knowledge，progress等抽象名词是不可数名词，一般是没有复数形式的。还有luggage/baggage,furniture,equipment,information等都是容易出错的不可数名词。informationknowledgeyears第11页/共27页7.(2011全国课标卷)WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelentmelotsofclothes.表示“某人的”本应用名词的所有格，文中却没用。如上题。注意，以下情况中，名词所有格后的名词可省略：abutcher’s(shop)肉铺，atailor’s(shop)裁缝店，abarber’s(shop)理发店，adoctor’s(office)诊所，mysister’s(home)我姐姐家，其中shop,office,home等表示处所的词都可以省略，直接用名词所有格表示。friend’s归纳总结：主要考查名词的数(可数还是不可数，单数还是复数)，偶尔考名词的格，以及转换成名词词性的用法。第12页/共27页1.(2017·全国Ⅰ)ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleoftheroad.2.(2016全国Ⅰ卷)Instead,hehopesthathisbusinesswillgrowsteady.3.(2017全国Ⅲ卷)Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatestmusicalbums.4.(2016·全国Ⅲ)Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.5.(2014全国I卷)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.考点4形容词及副词错误suddensteadilyworsttastydifferent第13页/共27页6.(2015全国II卷)Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.7.(2013全国II卷)Interesting,ithadaconnectiontotheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.8.(2017全国Ⅰ卷)IwassonervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.terriblyInterestinglylater第14页/共27页9.(2017全国I卷)IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.10.(2015全国II卷)Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.11.Ifoundthetestdifficult,butItriedhardlytodoit.hard归纳总结：主要考查形容词和副词的词性辨析（混淆错用）、词义辨析、比较等级和最高级的错用等。adj.作定语、表语、宾补adv.修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子作状语第15页/共27页1.(2017·全国Ⅰ)ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenstopjustinthemiddleontheroad.2.(2016·全国Ⅰ)Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichinashortperiodoftime.3.(2017·全国Ⅱ)Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.4.(2016·全国Ⅲ)NowIamleavinghometocollege.5.(2015陕西)Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.6.(2015·全国卷Ⅱ)Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.考点5介词错误∧ofoffor总结归纳：in主要考查介词的意义和用法、固定搭配中介词的误用、介词的缺失与多余等。第16页/共27页1.(2017·全国Ⅰ)Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.2.(2016·全国Ⅰ)Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsofbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.3.(2017·全国Ⅱ)Theylivefarfromtheschool，andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.

4.(2016·全国Ⅱ)Butinthatcase，wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.考点6冠词错误∧theaan∧the第17页/共27页5.(2016全国Ⅲ卷)Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingand…6.(2015全国II卷)Helikeditsomuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop…Awomansawhimcryingandtoldhimtowaitoutsideashop.the归纳总结：主要考查固定搭配中的冠词误用，定冠词和不定冠词表示泛指和特指的误用，不定冠词a和an的混用，以及冠词的缺失与多余等。第18页/共27页1.(2016·全国I)Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteadily.2.(2017·全国Ⅱ)MrandMrsZhangallworkinourschool3.

(2017·全国Ⅲ)Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.4.(2016·全国Ⅱ)Itdoesnotcostmany，yetwecanstilllearnalot.5.(2016·全国Ⅲ)Atfirst，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.考点7代词错误hisbothmymuchmyself第19页/共27页6(2016·全国Ⅲ)Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.7.WhenJaybegantosingtheseventhsongitcalledSunnyDay,itstartedtorain.∧I总结归纳：主要考查各类代词的用法（人称代词/形容词性的物主代词/反身代词/不定代词）、代词指代的人或事物前后不一致、代词的缺失或多余以及it的不当使用等。第20页/共27页

1.(2017·全国Ⅰ)Beforegettingintothecar，IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders，soonceIstartedthecar，mymindwentblank.2.(2016·全国Ⅰ)Thoughnotverybig，buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.3.(2016·全国Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.4.(2016·全国Ⅰ)Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusedforcooking.考点8连词错误butwhereand第21页/共27页5.(2017全国Ⅱ卷)Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestedinplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.

6.WhenJaybegantosingtheseventhsong…,itstartedtorain.Therefore,theconcertwasnotinterrupted…7.(2013全国I卷)Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.∧whichHoweverand总结归纳：第22页/共27页WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalr