【读后续写公开课】读后续写《The-Last-Delivery》课件

ContinuationWriting

TheLastDeliveryInterpretationoftheText(6elements)AstoryhowwherewhenwhywhowhatarichcoupleTheporterInterpretationoftheText文本解读(Who)StrangersReadforthethreecluesTimePlotEmotionsTask1:Readingforthetime(when)1._______purchasingeverythingtheywanted2._______,hesettledfor$15.3.____________passed,___________passed.4.____________,theywentbacktothemarkettoinquire5._______hearingthat,thehusbandhadtearsinhiseyesAfterFinallyOnehourtwohoursUponImmediatelyHappySatisfiedAnxiousAfraid,AnxiousShocked,AshameTask2:Readingfortheplot(summary)Arichcouplewas______(throw)abigpartyattheirhouse,sotheywentshoppingatthemarket.After_________(purchase)everythingtheywanted,theycalledaporter______wasanoldage,unhealthylooking______(carry)theirstufftotheirhouseforamere$15.Theywaited_________(anxious)fortheirstuff,_______theoldporterdidn’tappearallthetime.Theytook______forgrantedthattheoldporterwasathief.Uponhearingthenewsfromanotherporter,theywerestruckdeadwith_____________(embarrass),feelingtheblood_________(rush)totheirface.throwingpurchasing

whoitbuttocarryanxiouslyembarrassment

rushingTask3:ReadingforEmotions(T/F)Theoldporter:Theoldporterwasunwillingtodeliverthestuffforamere$15thoughhewaspoorandunhealthy.()Therichcouple:1.Therichcoupledidn’tmindpayingalotfortheparty.()2.Therichcoupleshowedgreatsympathytotheoldporterandpaidhimimmediately.()3.Therichcoupleregardedtheoldportertobeathiefwhenhecouldn’tappearintime.()TTFF

Let’sdiscuss!1.Discusswithyourpartnersandraisesomereasonablequestionsaccordingtothegivensentences.2.Discusswithyourpartnersandformyourwritingideas.

Task1:Interpretationofthegivensentences(首句解读)NewInformation④Whydidtheoldporteraskthenewporter

tohelpdeliverthegoods?

Para.1Theangrywifeaskedhim,“Whereisthatoldthief?Thisisourstuff.”①Whatwasthenewporter’sreactionwhenhearingtheangrywife’swords?②Wherewastheoldporter?③Whathappenedtotheoldporter?Interpretationofthegiveninformation(首句解读)NewInformation③Whatalifelessondidthewifelearn?Para.2Uponhearingthat,thehusbandhadtearsinhiseyesandturnedtohiswife.①Whatdidthehusbandsaytohiswife?②Howdidthewifereacttoherhusband’swords?Whatlessoncanwegetfromthestory?Weshouldrespecteveryoneregardlessoftheirfinancialandsocialstatus.Wecan’tjudgeabookbyitscover.arichcoupleTheporterTask2:Interpretationofwritingideas写作思路解读(1)glaringather

resentfullywasabouttoaddmorecontemptuouscommentswasstruck

dead

with

shamearichcoupleTheporterInterpretationofwritingideas写作思路解读(2)confused,respondedatonce,regretted,stoodthereembarrassedsmiledandcontinuedhisdeliveringinthesunTheMicro-skillsTraininginwriting：1.又累又饿，老人在灼热的大中午再也走不动了。①Theold______________________________goanyfurtherinthisheatofthenoon.(运用..too...to...句型))②___________________,theoldportercouldn’tgoanyfurtherinthisheatofthenoon.(运用形容词作主语补足语)wastootiredandhungrytoTiredandhungry2.妻子尴尬地站在那里，满脸涨得通红。①Thewifestoodtherewithembarrassment,________________________________________.(运用并列句结构)②Thewifestoodtherewithembarrassment,________________________________________.(运用现在分词作状语)③Thewifestoodtherewithembarrassment,________________________________________.(运用介词with的复合结构)④Thewifestoodtherewithembarrassment,________________________________________.(运用独立主格结构)andshefeltthebloodrushingtoherfacefeelingthebloodrushingtoherfacewiththebloodrushingtoherfacethebloodrushingtoherface老人诚实的品质让妻子深受触动，脸上写满了愧疚之情。①_____________________________________________________,

guiltwritteninherredface.(运用…so...that...结构)②_____________________________________________________,

guiltwritteninherredface.(运用So...that放句首的倒装句型)③____________________________________________________,guiltwritteninherredface.(运用强调谓语动词句型)()④_______________________________________________________,guiltwritteninherredface.(运用强调句句型)ThehonestyoftheoldporterdidstrikethewifeagreatdealSohonestwastheoldporterthatthewifewasstruckagreatdealItwasthehonestyoftheoldporterthatstruckthewifeagreatdealTheoldporterwassohonestthatthewifewasstruckagreatdeal4.那时，她才意识到不能以貌取人。①________________________thatwecan’tjudgeabookbyitscover.(运用“only+状语”放句首的倒装句句型)②__________________________thatwecan’tjudgeabookbyitscover.(运用“Notuntil”放句首的倒装句句型)③_____________________________

thatwecan’tjudgeabookbyitscover.(运用“Itwasnotuntil...that...”的强调句型)

NotuntilthendidsherealizeOnlythendidsherealizeItwasnotuntilthenthatsherealizedShareyourstory!Groupdisscussion.Trytoinferandwritedownkeywords,phrases

orsentencesonthepaperandthenputthemintoacompletestory.WritingCriteria:1.Yourstoryshouldbecoherent(连贯)，logicalandreasonable.2.Yourwritingshouldberichinvocabularyandsentencepattern.

ContiunationWritingPossibleversion1Paragraph1Theangrywifeaskedhim,“Whereisthatoldthief?Thisisourstuff.”Shewasabouttoaddmorecontemptuouscommentsontheoldporterwhenshesuddenlynoticedthatthemanwasglaringather

resentfully.“Madam,pleasecalmdown.Jackisnotathief!”retortedtheporter,“Heisactuallyterriblysickandisn’tabletoearnenoughtoevenhaveasinglemealoftheday.Justnow,onthewaytodeliveryourstuff,hewastooweaktogoanyfurtherinthisheatofthenoon.Despitefallingdown,heneverforgothispromiseandhandedme$15,keepingtellingmetodeliveritasfastaspossible”

Possibleversion1Paragraph2Uponhearingthis,thehusbandhadtearsinhiseyesandturnedtohiswife.“Hewashungry,hewaspoor,buthewastrulyanhonestman,”thehusbandadmittedwithtremblingvoice.Atthat,thewifewasstruck

dead

with

shame,heart

beating

painfully

fast

and

banging

against

her

ribs.Howcouldshebeangrywithsuchakindandresponsibleman?Likeachildwhomadeamistake,shehadnocouragetolookintoherhusband’seyes.Throughalltheseunexpectedthings,iteventuallydawnedonherthathonestyhasnoclassandsheshouldrespecteveryoneregardlessoftheirfinancialandsocialstatus.评点：妻子的傲慢与年轻工友的义愤填膺，丈夫的热泪盈眶与妻子的满脸窘迫，这些细节的描写，都使人物的鲜明的性格跃然纸上。“contemptuous”,“resentfully”,“retort”,“struckdeadwithshame”等与情感有关的高级词汇的使用，使文章变得有血有肉，读起来津津有味。最后，妻子的幡然悔悟对文章进行了一个主题上的升华，通过人物的改变给故事画上了圆满的句号。Possibleversion2Paragraph1Theangrywifeaskedhim,“Whereisthatoldthief?Thisisourstuff.”

Baffled,theporterrespondedatonce,“YoumeanJack?Heisnotathief!HeisthebestguyI’veeverknown.”However,thewifesneered,“Youmustbehisaccomplice,orourstuffcouldn’thaveendedinyourcart.”Theporter,hisfaceflushing

with

irritation,retorted,“Wearenotthieves.Weearnourlivinginanhonestway!ActuallyJackhadacaraccidentafterhesetoffwithyourshopping.Thoughbadlyinjured,heanxiouslycalledmeupandhandedme$15tohelphimdeliveritforyou.”

Possibleversion2Paragraph2Uponhearingthis,thehusbandhadtearsinhiseyesandturnedtohiswife.“Honey,wedidmisunderstandsuchanhonestman.Weowehimasincereapology,”regrettedthehusband,seekingforhiswife’sadvice.Butthencameadeadsilenceforawhile.Thewifestoodthereembarrassed,thebloodrushingtoherface.Neverdidsherealizesuchapoormanshouldbesohonestandresponsible.Withquiveringvoice,thewifepolitelyapologize