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Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter并列分句Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.现在分语短语简单句Inthefarmthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2))Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.简单句+形容Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter原因副词TheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseasHefeltveryTheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryTheyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseasTheyoungpilot''''''''sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryExtremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseasTheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryItbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryBeingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryTheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryTheyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryWhentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryAstheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryTheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltvery用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句，尤其是(j)和(k)这两款；接着便是并列句(h)。如果大多数人的句子只限于(b),(g),(h),(j)和(k)这五种，而其他的则弃如敝屣，不是很可惜吗？1Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape转换为前置定语)Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.)Weak:TheteammembersaregoodRevision:TheteammembersyWeak:Oneworker'snistheeliminationofRevision:Oneworker'sneliminates3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”Weak:ThereisnoopportunityforRevision:NoopportunityforpromotionWeak:HerearethebooksyouRevision:Thebooksyouorderedhave1、PoorMysupervisorwentpastmyBetterMysupervisorsaunteredwalkedslowlypastmydesk.2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.Better:Shecomparespricesand1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.Better:Charityhassupportedtheorganization.2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonate.Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonate.1、Wordy:MylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolateImproved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolate2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyour Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyour 3、RedundantWehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.4、RedundantMysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentImproved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferent五、杜绝陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextImproved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnext首先，一个段落必须有一个中心即思想，该中心由句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个(stickorholdtothetopic)，这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性(completenessoradequateness)。句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth)，这就是连贯性(coherence)。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。JoeandIdecidedtotakethelongtripwe'dalwayswantedacrossthecountry.Wewerelikeyoungkidsbuyingourcamperandstockingitwithallthenecessitiesoflife.Bellabakesthebestrhubarbpie.WestartedoutinearlyspringfromMinneapolisandheadedwestacrossthenorthernpartofthecountryWebothenjoyedthosepeoplewemetatthetrailerpark.JoereceivedawatchathisretirementdinnerTooursurprisewefoundthatwelikedthewarmsouthernregionsverymuch,andsowedecidedtostayhereinNewMexico.本段的句是段首句，controllingidea（中心思想）是takethelongtripacrossthecountry。文中出现两个irrelevantsentencesBellabakesthebestrhubarbpieJoeandI，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joereceivedawatchathisretirementdinner这一句更是与句不MynameisRoseanna,andIliketokeepphysicallyfit.Iusedtoweightwohundredpounds,butIjoinedtheYMCAforanexerciseclassanddietprogram.InoneyearIlosteightypounds.Ifeelmuchbetterandneverwanttohavethatmuchweightonmyfive-feetframeagain.Iboughttwonewsuitcaseslastweek.EverydayIpracticejoggingthree,swimmingfifteenlaps,liftingtwenty-poundweightsandyingtennisforonehour.Mymotherwasaprematurebaby.controllingidea是liketodeepphysicallyfitirrelevantsentencesItwonewsuitcaseslastweekMymotherwasaprematurebaby从上面两个例子可以看出，nativespeakersirrelevantsentencesPhysicalworkcanbeausefulformoftherapyforamindinturmoil.Workconcentratesyourthoughtsonaconcretetask.Besides,itismoreusefulto youproducesomethingratherthanmoreanxiety本段的句是段首句本段的两个推展句均不能回答句中问题什么是＂amindin100～12040Itisnotalwaystruethatagoodpictureisworthathousandwords.Oftenwritingismuchclearerthanapicture.Itissometimesdifficulttofigureoutwhatapicturemeans,butacarefulwritercanalmostalwaysexinit.Itisnotalwaystruethatapictureisworthathousandwords.Sometimes,picturesareprettyuselessthings.Ifyoucan'tswimandfallintheriverandstartgulwater,willyoubebetterofftoholdupapictureofyourselfdrowning,orstartscreaming"Help"?连贯性A．按时间先后排列(chronologicalarrangement)Wehadanumberofclosecallsthatday.Whenwerose,itwasobviouslylateandwehadtohurrysoasnottomissbreakfast;weknewthediningroomstaffwasstrictaboutclosingatnineo'clock.Then,whenwehadbeendrivinginthedesertfornearlytwohours-----itmusthavebeenclosetonoontheheatnearlyhidusin;theradiatorboiledoverandwehadtousemostofourdrinkingwatertocoolitdown.Bythetimewereachedthemountain,itwasfouro'clockandwewereexhausted.Here,judgementranoutofusandwestartedthetoughclimbtothesummit,notrealizingthatdarknesscamesuddenlyinthedesert.Sureenough,bysixwewerestrugglingandAndrewverynearlywentdownasteepcliff,draggingmmedandmealongwithhim.Bynine,whenthewindhowledacrosstheflatledgeofthesummit,weknewasweshiveredtogetherforwarmththatithadnotbeenourluckyrose＂（起床）写起，然后是吃早餐(＂nottomissbreakfast＂,＂closingatnineo'clock＂)，然后是＂closetonoon＂，一直写到这一天结束(＂Bynine--")。B.按位置远近排列(spatialarrangement)Fromadistance,itlookedlikeaskinnytube,butaswegotcloser,wecouldseeitfleshoutbeforeoureyes.Itwastubular,allright,butfatterthanwecouldseefromfaraway.Furthermore,wewerealsoastonishedtonoticethatthebuildingwasreallyintwoparts:apagodasittingontopofatubularone-storystructure.Standingtenfeetaway,wecouldmarvelathowmuchofthepagodawasmadeupofglasswindows.Almosteverythingunderthe roofwasmadeofglass,unlikethetubethatitwason,whichonlyhadfour.Inside,thetubewasgloomy,becauseofthelackoflight.Thenasteep,narrowstaircasetookusupinsidethepagodaandthelightchangeddramatically.Allthosewindowsletinafloodofsunshineandwecouldseeoutforacrosstheflatland.最后是＂insidethepagoda＂……当然，按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要，也可以由近及C.按逻辑关系排列(logical按重要性顺序排列(arrangementinorderofIfyouworkasasodajerker,youwill,ofcourse,notneedmuchskillinexpressingyourselftobeeffective.Ifyouworkonamachine,yourabilitytoexpressyourselfwillbeoflittleimportance.Butassoonasyoumoveonestepupfromthebottom,youreffectivenessdependsonyourabilitytoreachothersthroughthespokenorthewrittenword.Andthefurtherawayyourjobisfrommanualwork,thelargertheorganizationofwhichyouareanemployee,themoreimportantitwillbethatyouknowhowtoconveyyourthoughtsinwritingorspeaking.Intheverylargebusinessorganization,whetheritisthe thelargecorporation,ortheArmy,thisabilitytoexpressoneselfisperhapsthemostimportantofalltheskillsamancanpossess."moreimportant""mostimportant"Ifareaderislost,itisgenerallybecausethewriterhasnotbeencarefulenoughtokeephimonthepath.Thiscarelessnesscantakeanynumberofforms.Perhapsasentenceissoexcessivelyclutteredthatthereader,hackinghiswaythroughtheverbiage,simplydoesn'tknowwhatitmeans.Perhapsasentencehasbeensoshoddilyconstructedthatthereadercouldreaditinanyofseveralways.Perhapsthewriterhasswitchedtenses,orhasswitchedpronounsinmid-sentence,sothereaderlosestrackofwhentheactiontookceorwhoistalking.PerhapssentenceBisnotlogicalsequeltosentenceAthewriter,inwhoseheadtheconnectionisclear,hasnotbotheredtoprovidethemissinglink.Perhapsthewriterhasusedanimportantwordincorrectlybynottakingthetroubletolookitup.Hemaythinkthat"sanguine"and"sanguinary"meanthesamething,butthedifferenceisabloodybigone.Thereadercanonlyinferwhatthewriteristryingtoimply.这一段谈的是awriter'scarelessness，先给出一个generalstatement作为句，然后通过5个由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-generalIdonotunderstandwhypeopleconfusemySiamesecat,Prissy,withtheoneIhadseveralyearsago,Henry.Thetwocatsareonlyalikeinbreed.Prissy,aquiet,femininefeline,lovesmedearlybutnotpossessively.Shelikestokeepherdistancefrompeople,exertherindependenceandisneversorudeastobeg,lick,orsniffunceremoniously.Herusualpostureissittingupright,eyesclosed,perfectlystill.Prissyisaverypropercat.Henry,ontheotherhand,lovedmedearlybutpossessively.Hewasmyshadowfrommorningtillnight.Heexpectedmetoconstantlyentertainhim.Henrynevercaredwhosawhimdoanything,whetheritwasdecorousornot,andheusuallyoffendedmyfriendsinsomeway.Thecatmadehimselfquitecomfortable,onthetopoftheevision,acrossstranger'sfeetorlaps,inbeds,drawers,sacks,closets,ornooks.Thedifferencebetweenthemisimperceptibletostrangers.行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他来实现请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下Walter'sgoalinlifewastoeasuccessfulsurgeon.First,though,hehadtogetthroughhighschool,soheconcentratedallhiseffortsonhisstudies---inparticular,biology,chemistry,andmath.Becauseheworkedconstantlyonthesesubjects,Walterbecameproficientinthem;however,Walterforgotthatheneededtomasterothersubjectsbesidesthosehehadchosen.Asaresult,duringhisjunioryearofhighschool,WalterfailedbothEnglishandLatin.Consequently,hehadtorepeatthesesubjectsandhewasalmostunabletograduateonschedule.Finally,onJune6,Walterachievedthefirststeptowardrealizinghisgoal.本文中起承上启下的词语有两种，一种是转换词语(transitionalwordsorphrases)的其他连接(linkingdevices)前者依次有：first,though,so,inparticular,and,because,however,besides,asaresult,both…and,consequentlyand,finally.he,he,his,his,he,these,themhethosehishethese,his.本10526个词，约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由120个词也是不无好处的。differentinmanyways.Speechdependsonsounds.Writinguseswrittensymbols.Speechdevelopedabout500000yearsago.Writtenlanguageisarecentdevelopment.Itwasinventedonlyaboutsixthousandyearsago.Speechisusuallyinformal.Thewordchoiceofwritingisoftenrelativelyformal.Pronunciationandaccentoftenlwherethespeakerisfrom.PronunciationandaccentareignoredinwritingAstandarddictionandspellingsystemprevailsinthewrittenlanguageofmostcountriesSpeechreliesongestureloudnessandriseandfallofthevoiceWritinglacksgestureloudnessandtheriseandfallofthevoice.Carefulspeakersandwritersareawareofthedifferences.Speakingandwritingaredifferentinmanyways.Speechdependsonsounds;writing,ontheotherhand,useswrittensymbols.Speechwasdevelopedabout500000yearsago,butwrittenlanguageisarecentdevelopment,inventedonlyaboutsixthousandyearsago.Speechisusuallyinformal,whilethewordchoiceofwriting,bycontrast,isoftenrelativelyformal.Althoughpronunciationandaccentoftenlwherethespeakerisfrom,theyareignoredinwiringbecauseastandarddictionandspellingsystemprevailsinmostcountries.Speechreliesongesture,loudness,andtheriseandfallofthevoice,butwritinglacksthesefeatures.Carefulspeakersandwritersareawareofthedifferences．Inthemovie,RobertRedfordwasaspy.Hegoestohisofficewherehefoundeverybodydead.Otherspieswantedtokillhim,sohetakesrefugewithJulieChristie.Atherhouse,hehadwaitedfortheheattodiedown,buttheycomeafterhimanyway.Everybodylooksforsatisfactioninhislife.Theywanttobehappy.Butifheseeksonlypleasureintheshortrun,the willsoonrunoutofpleasureandlifewillcatchuptohim.Theyneedtopursuethedeeperpleasureofsatisfactioninworkandinrelationships.Nowmorethanever,parentsneedtobeintouchwiththeirchildren'sactivitiesbecausemodernlifehasthetendencytocausecleavagesinthefamily.Youneedtoarrangefamilylikeitsothatfamilymemberswilldothingstogetherandknowoneanother.Youneedtogiveupisolatedpleasuresofyourownandrealizethatparentshaveasetofobligationstosponsortogethernessandthereforesponsorknowledge.1、句必须是可辩论的，不能是说事实，而是说观点ThemeStatement全文的2、句的位置最好在第一段的最后一句12、句＋支撑句3、句不能定得太宽，也不能才窄原因大概是1吧，说不完或者没有支持的句是不能接受的12、不要引入任何新的。第二、词汇量太小，且对已学词汇不清Someoneconsiderthatfreshwaterwillnottouchit'send.(961月，2分)2）Oneman'slifelackofmoneyhewillimpossibletoliveon.（951月，5分）3）Asisknowthattherearemuchfakecommoditiesintoday'ssociety.(9712月，6分5、6"Manisiron,andfoodissteel.",＂Womenarehalfsidesky.＂。此外，语言错误的普遍性和严重性十分惊人，比如，主谓不一致，名词单复数不分，动词时态语态，常用词拼写错误比比皆是。这些严重地和清楚，将直接影响整篇文章的写作质量。大四、六级考试和入考试的实践都表明，，为改变这种状况从剖析考生作文中的典型病句入手，对写作测试中的基本句子结构和写法进行评，否定结构除了在助动词、情态动词，behave后面加notnot介词against,beyond,but,except,without,...形容词和动词absent,deny,differ,different,fail, ,ignore,miss,refuse,thelast,usedto,reluctant,lack,want,...短语keep...from,protect...from,prevent...fromletalone,atalossinvain,insteadofoutofthequestion,ratherthan,too...to,bynomeans,anythingbut,...Womenfailtogettheequalrightsinsome在一些国家里妇女没有得到的权利Thisisbynomeansthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergy这不是解决能源的最好的办法WeshouldprotecttreesfrombeingIn wecouldnotmakeanail,letalone(make)barelyhardlyfewlittlerarelyscarcelyseldom,notall,noteveryone,noteverything,...具WecouldhardlyseeanyfreshvegetablesinwinteronmarketseveralyearsTheseyoungpeopleknowlittleabouthowtochoosegoodbooksto有些词和词组形式上是否定结构，但其含义是肯定的，比如：cannotbut,can'thelp,nosooner...than,not...until,innotime,noneotherthannothingbut,等等。例句：1）Wecan'tbutfacethereality.2）TheseoldbuildingswillberecedbymodernapartmentbuildingsinnoOnnoaccountshouldwefollowblindly.Nowherehastheworldeverseensuchgreatenthusiasmforlearningasinour五、含有it的结构Asisknowntoallofusthatscienceandtechnologyyanimportantroleinthedevelopmentofsociety.Itisknowntous,practicemakesItisknowntoallofusthatscienceandtechnologyyanimportantroleinthedevelopmentofsociety.(或:Asisknowntoallofus,science...)Itisknowntousthatpracticemakesperfect或:Asisknowntous,两个考生了it和as的用法。如果用it作形式主语，后面的主语从句必须由that引起；如果用as，则thataspracticemakesperfect。ItItisnecessaryforustomasteraforeignlanguageskillfully.Itmakesdifferencewhetherwecouldpurifytheairornot.Wefinditratherdifficulttopreventpeoplefrom ngthat.Modernsciencehasmadeitpossibleforbabiestogrowhealthilyandforpeopletolivelonger.Itisonlybythiswaythatwecanachievesuccess.Itwasthenthatpeoplebegantorealizetheimportanceofcontrollingpopulation.Agreement:Ambiguity:尽量不去使用可能引起歧义的词语或句子。Brief:文章"简为贵"，要抓住要点，简明扼要。Coherence:文理通顺，前后连贯。Development:的发挥应当充分、合理、正确Division:词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当，划分要清楚，避免使用重复字句和片段Figures:Inflateddiction:Key:用适当的突出，每段都应有句Logical:Message:Omit:Proposition:Punctuation:Relevant:Sentencepattern:Strait:Style:Tense:Theme:选题得当，突出。·表层进·表举例·表解释·表总结·表强调·表让步·表比较·表转折·first,firstlytobeginwithsecond,secondlytostartwiththird,thirdlywhat'smorealsoandandequallyimportantbesidesinadditionfurtherinthefirstcestillfurthermorelastlastbutnottheleastnextbesidestoomoreoverforexamplefortoillustrateasanillustrationafterallasamatteroffactfranklyspeakinginthiscasenamelyinotherinsummaryinawordinbriefinconclusiontoconcludeinfactindeedinshortinotherwordsofcourseitistruespeciallynamelyinallthatistosummarizethusashasbeensaidaltogetherinotherwordsfinallyinsimplertermsinparticularthatonthewholetoputitdifferentlyofcourseaboveallmostimportantemphasiscertainlyinstillinspiteofallthesameevensoafterallconcessiongrantednaturallyofcourseincomparisonlikewisesimilarlyequallyhoweverlikewiseinthesamebycontrastalthoughatthesametimeincontrastneverthelessnotwithstandingonthecontraryontheotherhandotherwiseregardlessstillthoughdespitethefactthatevensoeventhoughforallthathoweverinspiteofafterawhileagainandthenaslongasatlastatlengthatthattimebeforebesidesearliereventuallyfinallyformerlyfurtherfurthermoreinadditioninthefirstceinthepastlastlaymeanwhilemoreovernextnowpresentlysecondshortlysimultaneouslysincesofarsoonstillsubsequentlythenthereaftertoountiluntilnow段首句（一）ManypeopledonotdoubtthatAissuperiortoB,whileothersthinkquitedifferentlyontheissue ally,IstandonthesideofASomepeoplesayA,otherpeopleargueB.Inaword, .ButIcannotagreethispointofviewformanyreasons.Therearedifferentviewsconcerningthistopic.SomepeopleliketoCHOOSEA,someprefertoCHOOSEB. ally,IpreferB.IthinkBhasmoreadvantages.Frommypointofview,itismoreadvisabletoCHOOSEAthantoCHOOSEB.5.DespitethefactthatmostpeoplepreferA,IwouldliketochooseBbecausethefollowingreasons.Ingeneral,Ipreferto AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldliketoprefer Whenitcomesto ,mostpeopletendtobelieveA.ButothersconsiderBas Whenaskedabout ,thevastmajorityofpeoplewouldsupportthatA.ButothersregardB Attheriskofaddresstheissuetoodirect,IpreferAbecauseIthinkthat Whenaskedabout ,manypeoplegivetheiropinionsthat ,butotherpeoplemay differentlyWhenfacedwith ,quiteafewwouldclaimthat ,butothers,incontrast,deem Wheninquiredabout ,thevastmajorityofpeoplewouldliketo ,butotherpeople,whoholdanoppositeview,consider as When ismentioned ,mostpeoplebelievethat ,butotherpeoplewouldratherthink as Whilemanypeoplemaysticktomeideathat ,Iwouldliketoprefer （二）A.Oneofthegreatestwritersoncesaidthat .Now,itstillhasitssignificantrealisticvalueIwouldfollowthereasoningthat Manypeopleadvocatethat .Theyclaimthat .Myopinionisthesameastheirsinthefollowingreasons.Itotallyagreewiththestatementthat .ThereasonsarepresentedbelowAfterponderingthisquestiononmanyoccasions,Ifinallyreachedtheconclusionthat somethingworthytodoandIcannotskipit.myargumentsforpointarelistedasIagreewiththeabovestatementbecause Nowhereintheworldhastheissueof beensomuchdebatedlikeinoursocietyIagreewiththestatementthat withoutreservationbecause .10.Thinkinglogically,Icanonlysaythatthetitlestatementisvalidbecause IfullysupportthestatementabovebecauseIamverysurethat SomemayholdtheopinionthatAAA.Butothershaveanegativeattitude.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreethat ManyonehavetheideathatAAA.However,manyothersdisagreewiththisargument.Butbothsideoftheproblemwhether aresupportedbygoodreasons.Recently,ithasbeenmuchdebatedovertheproblemofAAA.ThosewhoobjecttoAAAannouncethat .ButthosewhofavorAAAutterasonorousvoicethat Recently,thereisvehementdiscussionontheissueof .Thosewhocriticize argue .Theyclaimthat .Butpeoplewhofirmlyadvocate ,ontheotherhand,argue Thereisamuch-debatedproblemtodayabout .Thosewhoobjectto arguethat Theyareverysureabout .Butpeoplewhoprefer ,ontheotherhand,claimthat B.Untilrecently, wasviewedas .ButpeoplearetakingafreshlookatitRecently,weoftenhearabout .ButisitThesedays,itisoftenheardabout .ButisthisreallythetruthIfeelsuchanattitudeisnegative,andthatitcanbring Somepeopleargueasifitisageneraltruththat .Buttobefrank,Icannotagreewiththemfortheflowingreasons.Despitethefactthatmanypeoplebelievethat ,Idoubtwhethertheargumentcanbearmuchysis.Althoughsomepeopleholdtheopinionthat ,Iwonderwhethertheargumentcouldbearcloseexamination.Inthenationwide,discussion,manypeoplearguethat .ButIcansaynothingbut AdvocatesofAAAproclaimthat ,butI Untilrecently, wasregardedas .But Somepeoplethinkthat ,butIdisagreewiththisopinionfornumerousreasons,asbelowNow,itisincreasinglymentionedthat .Suchpeoplethink .ButIcanonlycastdoubtonwhether Now,itiswidelybelievedthat .Thesepeoplethink .ButIwonderif Icannottotallytheideathat .Because,inmypointofview,Ibelieve Asamatteroffact,Isupportthat ,butIcannotagreewiththetitlestatementNowadays,itiswidelyheldthat .Peopleofthiskindthink .ButIdoubtwhether 结尾句Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat Allreliableevidencespointtoonesaying,thatis Forthereasonspresentedabove,Istronglycommittothenotionthat Whileitistruethat ,Ithinkthat GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined,Icanonlysaythat Thisisnottosaythat .Butintermsof ,itis Therefore,itiseasytodrawtheconclusionthat Recognizingthefactthat shoulddriveustoconcludethat Toputallintoa ,I Inaword,Isupportthestatementthatitisbetterto （一）Itisgenerallybelievedthat..isahottopicwhichiswidelytalkedaboutbothathomeandabroad.Nowourernmentattachesgreatimportancetosolvingthis tistsinthisfieldhaveputforwardanumberofsuggestionstendingtorelieveit.Tobeginwith,weshould..Furthermore,..Itisclearthat..People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplethinkthat..Accordingtothem,allofusshould..Othersarguethat..Intheiropinion,nobodycan..without..Thereisnodoubtthat..Asaconsequence..Inshort,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat..Itisbecause..Somyconclusionisthat..(107Thereisnodenyingthefactthat…ispopulartopicwhichismuchtalkedaboutnotonlyby…,butalsoby…Itisgenerallythoughtthat…Thereasonsfor…areasfollows.Tobeginwith,…Secondly,…Therefore,weshouldattachgreatsignificancetosolvingtheproblem.Thereare,Ithink,atleasttwopossiblewaystocopewithit.Thefirstwaytotackleitistoappealtothetotakedrasticmeasuresto(do)…Theotherthatisworthadoptingistoworkoutnewregulationsto(do)…OnlyinthiswaycanwesucceedindealingwiththeprobleminthenearToconclude,itseemsobvious…Sotheprospectwearelookingforwardtowillbebothbrightencouraging.(127（二）Asisshowninthetable(orinthepicutre),…droppedfrom…in1996.Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,…hasgreatlyincreased(ordecreased)inthepast…years(ordecades),reaching…in1996.Fromthetablewecanalsoseethattherehasbeenasharpdecline(orrise)in…Itisclearthat…Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsfor…Ontheonehand,…Let’shaveanexampletoillustratethegreatincreasein…Ontheotherhand,…isduetothefactthat…Inaddition,…isresponsiblefor…Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow…Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyacceptable.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelievethat……Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundwell-grounded.(126 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lrightfromItwillhelpchildrentoformagoodhabitofdealingwith改进ItwillhelpchildrenlearntomakegooduseofThoughitisnotthebestjob,itaffordtohis改进ThoughitisnotthebestjobajobisajobHecanmakeendsmeetwithit.Sincepeoplearealwaysnotsatisfiedwiththeirpresentsituation,theywantfurtherdevelopment.改进Sincepeopleareneversatisfiedwiththeirstatusquotheywantfurtherdevelopment.Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobwhichcaneasilybig改进Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobthatcanbringthembigmoney.Theylikeanactivelifebutnotapeaceful改进TheylikeanactiveliferatherthanapeacefulSomecigarettesmayevencostalargersumof改进SomecigarettesmaycostevenFirstlydissatisfactionencouragesthediscoveryofnewproducts.改进:Firstly,dissatisfactionencouragestheinventionofnewInordertosuittheneedsofenteringintowork,studentsmustgraspsometechnicalskills.改进Inordertomeettheneedsoffutureworkstudentsmustlearnsomepracticalskills.Itisverynecessarymorequalifiedscientistsand改进QualifiedscientistsandtechniciansareingreatThisknowledge eapartofyour改进:Thisknowledge 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