2020中考英语书面表达指导教学课件

Englishwriting初中英语新课程标准

五级写作目标：能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能简单描述人物或事件能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标中考作文评分标准第一档（17-20分）写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构第二档（13-16分）基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有少量语法错误。第三档（9-12分）写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。第四档（5-8分）写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。第五档（0-4分）言不达意，不知所云。注意：0分作文：1.空白卷2.原本照抄试卷上的阅读文本。3.全中文4.全拼音5.无一个单词与规定内容有关。以下情况不给满分作文：书写差，字迹不工整。有标点符号和大小写错误的文中只要有一处及以上语言错误。

文中出现自己的姓名和学校名。

超出字数过多的（原则上不超出30词）DearDr.Know，

I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.

What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Pleasewritesoon.

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicstructure(基本结构安排)basicsteps(基本写作步骤)search（审）list（列）add(加)connect(连)beautify(美化/修改)审体裁

（记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文…）审题型(文字提示类、图画提示类、图表提示类和开放作文等）审主题（抓要点，紧扣主题，心中有数，不任意发挥）审人称（第一人称，第二人称，三人称）审时态（特定的文章有特定的时态…；根据内容斟酌每个句子的时态）审（search）健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。要点一定要齐全，切勿漏掉。列（list）2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载

如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用

简单的句子列出文章的要点。2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载加（add）加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，吸引评卷教师的注意。2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.anicehead(thebeginning)anicetail(theending)anicebody加:2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载连(connect)恰当运用关联词，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然，连贯，流畅。2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载美（改）修改文中的小错误（人称、时态、单复数、单词拼写、标点、大小写等等）。选好词造句，修改文章。注意书写的规范，语言的精确性。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底，美化文章，赢得读者的共鸣。2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(beautify)2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（谚语）/saying2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水难收。一天一个苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇

甚至善用高级词汇2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Whichisbetter?

他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Whichisbetter?

我希望你能帮助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Whichisbetter?

他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Whichisbetter?

最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.

我认为学英语很有趣。

我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills（“写”的技巧）2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载

她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“写”的技巧）2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载书面表达写作技巧审列加连美提示策略：熟悉句型特点（如五种简单句的基本结构，疑问句，感叹句等）背诵范文有的放矢勤训练仔细审题切莫偏2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载知己知彼，学范文Lookatthesmallpaper！2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载

ToBeaGreenerPerson

Asweknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworseanditisourdutytotakeactiontoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldsavewater,electricityandpaper.Whenwebrushourteeth,we’dbetter

turnoffthetap.Whenweleavetheroom,weshouldshutofftheelectricity.Weshouldalsousebothsidesofthepaper.Wecantakeaclothbagwhenwegoshopping.Don’tbuyunnecessarythingsinthesupermarket.It’sgoodforourhealthtowalkorridetoschoolinsteadoftakingcars.Don’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.Let’sactnowandmakeourworldmoreandmorebeautiful.

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ToBeaGreenerPerson

Asweknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworseanditisourdutytotakeactiontoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldsavewater,electricityandpaper.Whenwebrushourteeth,we’dbetter

turnoffthetap.Whenweleavetheroom,weshouldshutofftheelectricity.Weshouldalsousebothsidesofthepaper.Wecantakeaclothbagwhenwegoshopping.Don’tbuyunnecessarythingsinthesupermarket.It’sgoodforourhealthtowalkorridetoschoolinsteadoftakingcars.Don’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.Let’sactnowandmakeourworldmoreandmorebeautiful.

2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载Goodwords:Goodsentences:Connectionwords:2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载

TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybestto

doeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!

It’syourturn!（请分析以下的文章）2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载写作的“五项基本原则”

一、长短句原则

Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.

二、主题句原则

Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam（主题句）.Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.

2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载三、一二三原则

1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast4）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly5）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally6）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally7）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast8）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally9）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand10）foronething,foranotherthing2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载2020中考英语书面表达指导教学PPT下载四、短语优先原则

Icannotbear/standit.Icannotputupwithit.Iwantit.

Iamlookingforwardtoit.

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五、多变句式原则

Ienjoymusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.

Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.

Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.

hen,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,sothat…ThisiswhatIcando.Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.

Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisa