读后续写主题写作之心理活动公开课 公开课比赛一等奖

备战2020高考英语读后续写微技能指导人物心理活动描写：精准性和丰富性

南漳一中赵金玉Step一Leadin1.Withsomanyteacherssittingintheclassroom,Iamsonervousthatmyvoice__________.2.HearingthatCharliehadpassedaway,Kathywastotallyoverwhelmedby______.istremblinggriefStep二Appreciate一、Keywords（一）Hesitate(犹豫)

Thensheasked,hesitating,filledwithanxiousdoubt.（二）Nervous/Frightened（紧张、害怕）Isaidnervously,myvoicetremblingabit.Iwasseizedbyasuddenimpulse（冲动）torun.Feartookholdofme./Panicseizedus.Ireplied,feelingalump(块状物)riseinmythroat.Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled\frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.（三）Ashamed（羞愧）Mythroatwasdryandmyfacewasburningup.SoashamedwasIthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning/thebloodrushtomyface.Idroppedmyeyes(垂下眼睛).（四）Sad/depressed(悲伤、抑郁)Griefcomesinwaves.悲伤如潮水一般涌来。Arippleofsadnesswelledupinsidehim涌起阵阵悲伤Thegloom（忧郁）deepenedastheresultcamein.更加难过Myheartseemedtobetorn.(心都要撕碎了)Hereyesarefloodedwithtears.（泪如涌泉）Tearsarerollingdownfromhereyes.IfeltsosadthatIfoundmyselfcryingunconsciously,unabletoholdbackmytears.（无意识的哭泣，无法抑制泪水）Anairofsorrowanddepressionsettledoverthecrowd（一种悲伤和沮丧的氛围笼罩着人群）（五）Angry生气beredwithanger/rage(愤怒);boilwithrage;befilledwithfury（愤怒）Sheshookherfistathim.她向他挥动拳头.Thereplyofthemanagainfueledthefoolishofficer’sanger(火上浇油、更加愤怒).Hisfriend,whosepatiencehadwornthin(耐心被消磨光了),phonedtocomplain.Myteacher’seyeswereshiningwithanger.（怒火直冒）Shecouldfeeltheangergrowing,bubblingupinsideher.如起泡一般变大Runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒气冲冲fueln.&v.1.给……加燃料2.增加、刺激bubblen.&v.1.起泡，冒泡2.洋溢着，充溢（六）Lonely（孤单）Ifeelabandonedbytheworld被全世界抛弃。Iendedupfeelingcompletelylostandabandoned.Weallhavemomentsofdesperation.我们都有沮丧的时候。EversinceIlosthim,Ihavebeenfacedwithadeepsenseofloss(失落感)--afeelingwhichisdifficultformetodescribeinwords(难以用语言描述).（七）happy/ecstatic/radiant/warm开心、温暖Bathedinsunshine,weallcheeredandjumpedwithjoy.(欢跳着)

TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan’scheeks.(幸福的泪水淌下)Hiseyestwinklewithpleasureeverytimeherememberslastwinter.每当他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。Smilesaredancinginhiseyes./Hereyesdancedwithjoyandhappiness.(眼笑眉飞)Ilaughedoutloud/laughedheartily(哈哈大笑)whenIsawthatfunnyvideo.当我在看有趣的录像的时候我大声笑了。Eyeslightup.精神振奋、高兴Hersmilehitthedeepestofmyheart.她的微笑触动了我内心深处。Hearingthis,everybodywaswildwithjoy(欣喜若狂)（八）Shocked/startled/stunned/surprised震惊Hearingthebadnews,Maryfrozewithshock,asifrootedontheground.(僵住了，像扎根在地上一样)Thecarwasgoneinseconds,leavingAliceshakingherheadindisbelief.难以置信地摇头Isensedaflashofsurpriseinhiseyes.我感觉到他眼里的一丝惊讶。（九）Disappointed/frustrated沮丧Overcomewith/bymybitterdisappointment(极度失望),Irefusedtobecomforted.WhenIsawthepileofdirtydishes,myheartsank.我看到那一堆肮脏的餐具时,感到很扫兴.inlowspirits\inanunpleasantmood情绪低落；沮丧（十）Jealous嫉妒Thissensegivesmeaheadacheandmakesmejumpfromenvytoseverehate(从嫉妒发展到极度憎恨).（十一）Regret/遗憾Drivenbyasenseofregret(受到遗憾的驱使)hedecidedto...（十二）curious/好奇Burningwithcuriosity,sheranacrossthefieldafterit.二. usefulexpressions（一）表示人物喜乐1、既兴奋又开心amixtureofexcitementandhappiness2、心情愉快incheerfulspirits3、振作精神keepupone’sspirits4、满意的表情asatisfiedlook5、高兴地跳起来dance/jumpforjoy6、流下幸福的泪水tearsofhappinessflowingdown7、感到鼓舞的feelinspired/encouraged8、精神高涨beinhighspirit（二）表示悲忧消沉1、强烈的失落感astrongsenseofloss2、陷入绝望fallintodespair3、悲痛欲绝cryone’sheartout4、怀着沉重的心情withaheavyheart5、沮丧的withasinkingheart6、情绪低落bedowninspirits7、垂头丧气loseone’sspirits8、意志消沉abrokenspirit（三）表示怨怒1、不断地抱怨complainconstantly2、气得满脸通红flamewithanger3、愁眉苦脸haveaworriedlook4、气冲冲地跑出房间runoutoftheroominaburstofanger5、感到尴尬的feelembarrassed6、感到困惑的feelpuzzled/confused7、感到沮丧的feelfrustrated/depressed8、感到恼怒的feelannoyed9、感到泄气的feeldiscouraged（四）表示其他情绪1、aforgivingspirit宽容的精神2、withakindandgood-humoredspirit以和蔼可亲的态度3、underthedominationoftheseemotions在这些情绪的控制下4.flyoffthehandle勃然大怒5.loseone’stemper发脾气6.dropopeninsurprise惊奇地张大了嘴（五）与heart搭配的短语1.withaheavy/sinking/brokenheart怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心2.withalightheart心情轻松地3.touchone’sheart打动了某人的心4.pierceone’sheart刺痛某人的心5.followone’sheart跟随某人的心6.pouroutone’shearttosb.向某人倾诉自己的心声7.filledone’sheart充满某人的内心8.one’sheartisbreaking某人的心正在碎9.one’sheartmelted心被融化了10.one’sheartisbeatingfast跳得很快11.one’sheartispoundingwithexcitement激动得直跳(poundvi.心脏狂跳，怦怦地跳)12.one’sheartisthumpingwithfear因恐惧而砰砰作响（thumpv.撞击，怦怦地跳）13.heartbeinone’smouth紧张得心都到了喉咙眼(六)与tear搭配的短语1.beintears含泪2.havetearsinone’seyes眼里含着泪水3.burstintotears放声大哭4.fightbacktears抑制住泪水5.beclosetotears/onthevergeoftears快要哭了step三practise写作练习

（一）根据提示填空：1.Thehorrorofmyexperience____________________(numb)(已使我感觉迟钝).2._______________________(blank)(她两眼发直),notknowingwhattosaynext.3.________________________________(confirm)(他颤抖的双手和茫然的眼神进一步证实了)herearlierperceptionthathewasextremelyillatease.hasnumbedmysensesShestaredblanklyintospaceHistremblinghandsandblankstareconfirmednumbadj.麻木的，迟钝的，呆滞的v.使麻木，使迟钝blankadj.空白的，茫然的4.Therewas________________(distant)(她眼中时时流露出心不在焉的神情),herthoughtselsewhere.5.Heisareckless(不顾后果的，粗心大意的)driverandoftendrives_____________(absent)(漫不经心).inanabsentwayadistantlookinhereyesdistantadj.遥远的；疏远的；冷淡的；恍惚的；出神的adistantrelativeabsentadj.缺席的；心不在焉的；出神的absent-minded（二）将下列句子翻译成英文：1.听到这个消息，他给了我一个呆滞的笑容______________________________________2.从电话里听起来帕特非常冷淡和疏远。______________________________________3.她怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心，看着他走了。_______________________________________

Hearingthenews,heshowedmeawoodensmile.Patsoundedverycoldanddistantonthephone.Withaheavy/sinking/brokenheart,shewatchedhimgo.

4.他的悲惨故事打动了她的心.____________________________________

5.当我想起他们的悲伤时，我的心很痛。__________________________________