新教材高中英语UNIT4BODYLANGUAGE表达作文巧升格学案新人教版选择性

UNIT4BODYLANGUAGE介绍性说明文介绍性说明文是根据某种特定的需要，对事物的性质、特点、功能做出客观、科学的解释，从而给人知识或传播信息的一种文体。它主要运用说明的表达方式，向别人介绍清楚事物是怎么样的。对被介绍对象起解释、阐述的作用。[基本框架]第一段：开头对要说明的事物或事情简要介绍(点题)；第二段：按照题目提供的信息分层次，按照一定的顺序进行说明，注意语言的客观简明；第三段：结尾照应开头(题目没有特殊要求，不要对此事物发表看法)。[常用词块]1．befamiliarwithitshistory熟悉它的历史2．otherimportantaspects其他重要的方面3．raisetheirawarenessofkeepingfit提高他们的健身意识4．playaveryimportantroleindailycommunication在日常交流中起着非常重要的作用5．thereasonsbehindthis这背后的原因6．theapplicationofnewtechnologies新技术的应用7．accountfortheincrease解释增加的原因8．foronereasonoranother因某种理由9．anumberoffactors许多因素10．beontheincrease正在增长[常用语句]★精彩开头Today,thetopicis...今天的主题是……Whenyoufind/see...,whatshouldyoudo?当你发现/看到……，你应该怎么做？Asisknowntoall,itisimportantto...众所周知，……是很重要的。★正文佳句Thereasonfor...isthat...……的原因是……Thisbringsouttheimportantfactthat...这引出了一个重要的事实……Moreimportantly,youshould...更重要的是，你应该……Itiswellknownthat...isveryimportantinourdailylivesbecause...众所周知……在我们的日常生活中很重要，因为……...cannotonly...,butalso...……不仅……，而且……...isveryimportant/convenient/helpfulwhenpeoplewantto...当人们想要……时，……很重要/方便/有用。★余味结尾Itwouldgiveusachanceto...这将给我们一个机会……Inaword,aslongasyou...youcan...总之，只要你……你可以……Ifyoucandowhathasbeenmentionedabove,you...如果你能做到以上所提到的，你……[升格示例]根据下面提示写一篇英语短文介绍肢体语言。1．肢体语言的作用(如传递信息等)；2．明白在不同文化中肢体语言的重要性；3．你对肢体语言的看法。，标题已给出；2．可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。BodyLanguage_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[学生习作]BodyLanguagePeopleusebodylanguagetosendmessages.Itishelpfulbecauseitcanhelpmakeyoueasilyunderstood.Whenyouaretalkingwithothers，youarenotjustusingwords，butalsousingbodymovements.Bodylanguageisdifferentindifferentcountries.Itisimportanttoknowthemeaningofgesturesandmovementsinforeigncountries.Usingbodylanguagecorrectlywillhelpcommunicatewithpeople.Ithinkthatitisimportantinourlivestolearnandusebodylanguage.点评：1.该习作语言准确，而且使用了非谓语动词、复合句等，总体来说是一篇不错的作文，但也存在一些问题。2.文章没有分段，缺少框架意识。3.语法结构不够多样，句式不够丰富多变。如没有使用被动语态。4.衔接不够顺畅。[升格作文]BodyLanguageBodylanguageisusedbypeopletosendmessagestooneanother.Whentalkingwithothers,youarenotjustusingwords,butalsousingexpressionsandbodymovements.Differentcountrieshavedifferentbodylanguage.Whenyouuseaforeignlanguage,itisimportanttoknowthemeaningofgesturesandmovementsintheforeigncountries.Usingbodylanguageinacorrectwaywillhelpcommunicatewithpeopleandmakethestayinaforeigncountryeasyandcomfortable.Inaword,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatimportanceinourlivestolearnandproperlyusebodylanguage.人们之间的沟通除了通过语言外，还可以借助身势语。在英语课上，老师让你根据下列要点用英语写一篇关于身势语对人们交流的帮助的短文。学会使用身势语的好处：1．帮助传递信息；2．借此了解一个国家的文化；3．……要求：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]Firstofall,bodylanguagehelpsustogetourmessagesacross.Sometimesitmaybemoreeffectivethanwords.Also,whenwedon'tknowhowtoexpressourselvesclearly,wecanusebodylanguage.Havingawideknowledgeofaforeigncountry'sbodylanguagecanalsohelpuslearnaboutitsculture.What'smo