Unit+4+Why+dont+you+talk+to+your+parents+写作微策略与指导 人教版英语八年级下册+

OREO写作原则介绍Recently,ParentsMagazine

interviewedCathyTaylor

andotherMoms.They

sharedtheiropinionsabout

after-schoolclasses.Herearethetop3opinions.01"

After-schoolclassescanhelpkidsgetinto

agooduniversity.”02

"Iwantmychildtobeasuccessful

person.”

03"It'sgoodforchildrentostartlearning

fromayoungage.”Whatdoyouthinkofthese

opinions?Agreeordisagree.

Why?Today,let'stry

a

very

effective

waytoshow

ouropinions:

OREO

writingmethod(奥利奥写作法)Opinion-Tellyourreaders

howyoufeelaboutsomething.（告诉你的读者你对某事的感受）Reason-Tellyourreaderswhy

youfeelthatway.

（告诉你的读者你为什么这样想。）Examples-Giveyourreaders

examplesofwhyyoufeelthat

way.（给你的读者举例说明你为什么有这种感觉。）

Opinion-Tellyourreadersone

moretimeaboutyouropinionand

yourfeeling.（再一次告诉你的读者你的观点和感受）Whatistheboy'sproblem?Hisproblemisthathecan'tgetonwithhisfamily.Relationsbetweenhisparentshavebecomedifficult.2.Hiselderbrotherisnotnicetohim.Brainstorm如果你赞同：Agree:O（观点）:Kidsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassestocompeteandwin.R（理由）:After-schoolclassescanhelpstudentsimprovetheirgradesanddobetterinstudysothattheycanbemorecompetitive.E（例子）:Ourneighbor'ssongotbadgradesatfirstinmiddleschool.Hisparentsthensenthimtoafter-schoolclassestolearnexamskills.Finally,hegotintoagoodhighschoolanduniversity.O（观点）:Soafter-schoolclassescanhelpkidsbemoresuccessfulinstudy.如果你不赞同：Disagree:O（观点）:Toomanyafter-schoolclassesarenotgoodforkids'development.R（理由）:Toomanyafter-schoolclassescouldmakestudentsstressedout.E（例子）:Theydon'thavetheirowntimetorelaxsuchaslisteningtomusicorwatchingamovie.Theydon'thavetimetothinkforthemselves,either.O（观点）:After-schoolclassesisnotgoodforkids'mentalandphysicalhealth.Brainstormmorereasons，你还能想到更多赞同或反对的理由吗？Agree01learnexamskills02getintoagoodhighschool03getintoagooduniversity04developthehobbies05makemorenewfriends06begoodforfutureDisagree01toomuchpressure02causealotofstress04notgoodforkid’shealth05shouldspendmoretimeonexercise

扩写

怎样才能使语言更丰富呢？我们可以使用扩句技巧。那怎样巧妙扩句呢？1.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids.扩写:说明原因。Parentsshouldletkidsbekidstoletthemhaveahappychildhood.Afterall,theyhavetocompetewhentheygrowolder.2.Parentscareaboutusmostintheworld.扩写:描写人物多用定从Parentsaretheoneswhocareaboutusmostintheworld.3.Manystudentsdon'thavetimetorelax.扩写:举例子Manystudentsdon'thavetimetorelax,suchaslisteningtomusicorwatchingamovie.Theydon'thavetimetothinkforthemselves,either.4.After-schoolclassesmakekidsmore

competitive

instudy.扩写:说结果After-schoolclassesmakekidsmore

morecompetitive

in

studysothattheycanwininimportant

examsandgetintoagooduniversity.写作要求Writealettertothemagazinetoexpressyouropinionsonafter-schoolclassesforchildren.结构开头、主体和结尾要清楚。内容包括三个主要内容:主题句、支撑句、结论句。语言运用丰富的表达，打动读者。书写书写要优美整齐。

范文赏析

DearSir:

Inmyopinion,it'snecessaryforustotakeafter-schoolclasses,

becausetheseclassesaregoodforourdevelopment.Inthefirstplace,after-schoolclassesaregoodforthechildren'sfuture.Theycanhelpchildrengetintogoodschoolsanduniversities.What'smore,someclasseshelpchildrenlearnimportantskillsnottaughtatschool.Theseskillsmayactuallyhelpchildrenrelax,suchasplayingsportsorplayingamusicalinstrument.Lastbutnotleast,peoplelearnbetteratayoungerage.Childrenhavemoretimethanadults,sotheyshouldlearnasmuchastheycanbeforetheygettoobusytolearnnewthings.

Inaword,ifchildrenaregladtohavetheseafter-schoolclasses,theywillgetalotfromthem.Yourstruly,Linda这篇文章采用了奥利奥的写作方法：观点-理由-例子-观点，结构清楚，内容全面。运用了丰富的表达方式，能够打动读者。且使用了合适的连接词，行文流畅。下水文1：DearSir/Madam,Iagreethatchildrenshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesbecauseit'simportantfortheirfuture.Ihaveseveralreasonsforthis.Firstly,someclasseshelpchildrentolearnimportantskillsnottaughtatschool.Theseskillsmayhelpchildrenrelax.Secondly,Ibelieveitisbetterifparentstrytoreallyunderstandtheirchildren'sinterestsandabilitiesfirstsothattheywillmaketheirchildrentakeclassestheyneed.Perhapsparentscouldletchildrendecideforthemselves.fchildrenareallowedtotaketheclassestheychooseforthemselves,theywillbesuccessfulandhappy.Yourstruly,Linda下水文2：DearSir/MadamIdon'tagreewiththeideaofsendingkidstoafter-schoolclasses.Becausealltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforchildren.It'snotgoodforachild'sdevelopment.Ithinkit'sbetterthatparentsshouldn'tcomparetheirchildrenwithotherchildren.It'scrazyandunfair.Perhapsparentsshouldlettheirkidsbe