Unit+1+Writing 牛津上海版八年级英语上册

Module1Unit1MylifePenfriendsPeriod3WritingAlettertoapenfriendA0KnowthetaskBeforeyouwriteWereceivedaletterfromJonWearegoingtowritebacktohimandbehispenfriendAlettergreetingsignatureaddressdateclosingbodyformat&layoutAbouthimselfAbouthisfamilyAbouthisschoolAboutphotoscontent&structuremannersA1Review:Howtowritealetter?Beforeyouwrite2MiddleStreet

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England

UKNumberandStreetTownCity(district)PostcodeRegioncountrysmallestbiggestA2Review:HowtowriteanaddressinEnglish?Beforeyouwrite上海市闵行区水清路769号邮编20119928ShuiqingRoadMinghangDistrictShanghai201199ChinaA2WritedownthefollowingaddressinEnglishBeforeyouwriteBeginningEndingIsawyournameinfenriendsmagazine,andlwouldliketobeyourpenfrend.First,Iwilltellyousomethingaboutmyself,...Itwasgreattohearfromyou,Jon.Ihopeyou’llwriteagainsoon.B1Think,concludeandmimicWhleyouwriteWhatshouldwewriteinthebodypart？ReasonofwritingThanksalotforyourletter.I’mhappytobeyourpenfriend.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.LeadinIenclosedaphotoofmyselfandsomeofmyschoolfriends...Ihopeyouwillwritetomesoonandtellmeallaboutyourself.ExpectationEnclosur(附件)

addressdategreetingbodyclosingsignatureoneselffamilyschoolphotosB2Thinkandlist:Whatdoyouwanttowriteabout?WhleyouwriteThisiswhatJonwriteinhisletterMakealistofwhatyouwanttowriteWhatIwanttowriteaboutmyselfmyschoolmyhousethecityIliveinmypetmyidolsmyfavouritefilmsmyfavouritegamesbooksIliketoreadmyhobbiesmyambitionmyfamilyB2MakealistofwhatyouwanttowriteaboutWhleyouwriteWhatIwanttowriteaboutmyselfmyschoolmyhousethecityIliveinmypetmyidolsmyfavouritefilmsmyfavouritegamesbooksIliketoreadmyhobbiesmyambitionmyfamilyB3GroupthetopicsonyourlistWhleyouwritemyhousemypettopicdetailsPara.TopicDetails1234familymyhouse,mypet,myparents,theirjobs………………Deletetopicsthatcan‘tbegroupedoradddetailstothemWhleyouwriteB3GroupthetopicsonyourlistBelogicalwhenintroducingourselvesWhatelseshouldwepayattentiontowhenwritingaletter?ChoosedifferentwordsorphrasestoenrichlanguageBepoliteandsincerewhenwritingaletterinteractwiththereceiverbyaskingquestionsB4WriteareplytoJon’sletterWhleyouwriteRememberto：coverthesixbasicelements(address,date,greeting,body,closing,signature)haveproperbeginningandendinginthebodypartbelogicalwhenintroducingyourselfItwouldbebetterifyou：choosedifferentwordsorphrasestoenrichlanguagebepolite

andsincereinteractwithJonbyaskinghimsomequestionsC1Evaluateeachother’swritingaccordingtothechecklistAfteryouwrite信件6大基本元素coverthesixbasicelements少/错一项，结构0.5bodypart有合适的开头结尾（开头原因&引入+结尾期待）haveproperbeginningandendinginthebodypart少一点，内容1分介绍自己的时候有逻辑belogicalwhenintroducingyourself错一处，结构0.5语言丰富choosedifferentwordsorphrasestoenrichlanguage做到2处，结构0.5礼貌真诚bepolite

andsincere两点都做到，结构1通过询问与Jon互动interactwithJonbyaskinghimsomequestions语法一处0.5分

addressdategreetingbodyclosingsignature8+8+4Thereare4peopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyfather,mymother,Tomandme.Myfatherisanengineerandmymotherisashopassistant.Thereare4peopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyfather,mymother,Tomandme.Myfatherisanengineerandheworksinaverymoderntechnologycompanyandmymotherisashopassistant.Shesellsshoesinashoppingmall.Wesometimesgooutingtogetheratweekends.Tomisnotmybrotherbutourpetdog.Heisverylovely.Ialwaystakehimforawalkafterschool.Tip1:Adddetailedinformation （添加细节信息）C2LearnsometipsofimprovingyourletterAfteryouwriteIaminYear8atGardenSchool.Itisfarawayfrommyhouse.Myclassmatesandteachersarefriendlyandhelpful.Mydeskmate'snameisAlice.HermotherisanurseandsheoftentakesAlicetotraveltootherplaces.IaminYear8atGardenSchool.Itisfarawayfrommyhouse.Unlikeyou,Ihavetotakeabustoschool.Butsometimesmyfatherdrivesmetoschoolifitrains.Iusuallyhavesevenclassesatschool.Afterschool,wecanattenddifferentclubs.IamamemberoftheArtClub.Icandrawsomepicturesanddocrafts.That'sfun!Myclassmatesandteachersarefriendlyandhelpful.Mydeskmate'snameisAlice.HermotherisanurseandsheoftentakesAlicetotraveltootherplaces.Tip2:Cutoutirrelevantinformation （删除无关信息）C2LearnsometipsofimprovingyourletterAfteryouwriteMynameisNina.IamaChinesegirl.Iam14yearsold.IliveinShanghaiwithmyparents.Shanghaiisaninterestingcity.TherearemanyotherinterestingcitiesinChina.Itisfamousforitsnightviewsanditisknownasa‘ShoppingParadise’.IfyoucometoShanghai,I’msureyou’lllikeit.MorepractiseAfteryouwriteC3ImproveyourwritingAfteryouwriteUseabluepenAddsomedetailedinformationCutoutirrelevantinformation.Aletter