寒假作业讲评高二英语程萍萍

短文改错专题

长郡滨江中学寒假作业讲评主讲：程萍萍Ⅵ假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；题目要求1

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标点符号"四不改"2010-2015高考

改错考点分布统计表动词名词形副介词代词连词冠词2011322101120124211200201321211212014116100120153121111趋势2+/-1+2+11+/-1+/-1/-项目年份动词形，名词数，区分形和副；介词看搭配，代词人称数；逻辑偶尔有，连冠常光顾。实词：名、动、形、副变形虚词：介、代、连、冠、系/助动词添、改、删I动词形

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