Unit4Whatsthebestmovietheater？八年级上册英语单元写作深度指导（人教版）（教师版）

Unit4What’sthebestmovietheater？单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度说明文（介绍城镇中的各类场所）介绍＂……之最＂，如某个地方、某次活动等，并阐明＂之最＂的理由本单元的话题是“介绍城镇中的各类场所”，学生可通过比较，谈论这些场所最好或最坏的方面，内容常涉及城市或人物之间的比较及个人的偏爱等。在写作过程中，学生应做到以下几点：1.对某个问题所持的看法和主张要鲜明，并且论据要充分;2.对若干事物进行比较时，要正确使用形容词和副词的比较级和最高级，尤其要注意句型中than，in，of的用法。1.能用形容词和副词的最高级表达＂……之最＂；2.能用＂because＂阐明＂之最＂的理由；3.写作微技能：能认识到文章的开头和结尾对整篇作文的重要性。注意：1.体裁：说明文；2.人称：用第三人称；3.时态：用一般现在时。1.要善于抓住事物的特征介绍事物，一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征，就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征，才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。2.要遵循一定的顺序介绍一件事物，目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等，因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物：（1）时间顺序，即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。（2）空间顺序，即按事物空间位置的顺序，由上至下，由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。（3）逻辑顺序，即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明，如由概括到具体，由整体到部分，由现象到本质，由表及里，由原因到结果，由主要到次要，由特点到用途等。【词汇积累】1.creative有创造力的2.carefully小心地；谨慎地3.beautifully漂亮地4.sofar到目前为止5.have...inmon有相同特征；(想法、兴趣等方面)相同6.allkindsof各种各样的beupto是……的责任；由……决定playarole发挥作用；有影响makeup编造(故事、谎言等)10.themostfortableseat最舒适的座位11.forexample/suchas 例如12.beclosetohome 离家近13.thebiggestscreen最大的屏幕14.take…seriously认真对待15.thefreshestfood最新鲜的食物【句型积累】1.Theclothingstoreisthebestintownbecauseithasthemostclothes.在镇上，这家服装店是最好的，因为它拥有的衣服最多。Theseatsinthecinemaarecleanandfortable.电影院的座位又干净又舒服。Allofthemhaveonethinginmon.PeoplelikeshoppinginRunfaSupermarketbestbecauseithasthebestservice.人们最喜欢去Runfa超市购物因为它的服务最好。That’suptoyoutodecide.那就由你自己来决定。Thetheaterhasthebestservice.Theywerepleasedwiththenicefood.他们对食物很满意。8.It’salwaysinterestingtowatchotherpeopleshowtheirtalents.看别人展示他们的才能总是有趣的。9.Talentshowsaregettingmoreandmorepopular.才艺表演节目正变得越来越受欢迎。10.Youcansitthemostfortablybecausetheyhavethebiggestseats.在那里你坐得最舒服，因为那儿的座位是最大的。11.Youcanbuyclothesthemostcheaplythere.你在那里买衣服最便宜。◆开头句①Therearemanyinterestingplacesinmytown.②Therearethreerestaurantsnearourschool.③Ididasurveyaboutthethreerestaurantsinmyneighborhood.Herearetheresults.◆中间句①ScreenCityisthebestmovietheatertogotobecauseithasthebiggestscreensandthemostfortableseats.②DelightRestaurantisthemostpopularrestaurant.Ithasthemostdeliciousfoodandthelowestprice.③Itspriceishigherthanthatoftheothertwo，butIliketherestaurantbestbecauseitsserviceisthebestofall.④However，ithastheworstqualityamongthethreerestaurantsanditsserviceisn'tgoodenough.◆结尾句①Ilovemytownverymuch.②Whichrestaurantdoyoulikebest?③That'suptoyoutodecide.【谚语积累】Agoodbookisthebestoffriends，thesametodayandforever.好书如挚友，一生永相伴。2．Heknowsmostwhospeaksleast.大智若愚。3．Hopeforthebest，butpreparefortheworst.抱最好的希望，做最坏的打算。【万能写作模板】模板（事物）is/lies（地理位置）.Ithas/is（特征）.Therearemanyplacesofinteresthere,forexample,（景点介绍）.Therearealsomany（人们的活动、风俗等）.Ihope/think（看法和感受）.你居住的城镇里有哪些有趣的地方？假如今天的英语作业是介绍你们城镇里最有特色的一些场所，请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。提示：1．Whichtheateristhebest?2．Whichparkdopeopleusuallygoto?3．Whichschoolisthebest?…要求：1．语句通顺，逻辑连贯，可适当发挥；2．词数80左右。【审题指导】1．本文为说明文，时态要用一般现在时；2．结构：总—分—总。先总体交代要写的内容，再分别描述各个最好的场所及原因。注意写作中形容词或副词最高级的运用【思路点拨】【组句成篇】Onepossibleversion：Therearemanyinterestingplacesinmytown.ScreenCityisthebestmovietheatertogotobecauseithasthebiggestscreensandthemostfortableseats.Besides，peoplecanenjoythebestservicethere.WaterParkisthemostcrowdedplaceonweekends.Parentsandchildrenliketotakeawalkthere.TheNo.3MiddleSchoolisthebestschoolinmytown.Ithasfantasticteachersandanexcellentlibrary.DelightRestaurantisthemostpopularrestaurant.Ithasthemostdeliciousfoodandthelowestprice.Ilovemytownverymuch.Weletomytown.一、词汇(一)短语1.有相同特征_____________________________________2.各种各样的_____________________________________3.由……决定_____________________________________4.最舒适的座位_____________________________________5.发挥作用_____________________________________6.例如_____________________________________7.离家近_____________________________________8.最大的屏幕_____________________________________9.认真对待_____________________________________10.最新鲜的食物_____________________________________【答案】1.have…inmon2.allkindsof 3.beupto4.themostfortableseat5.playarole6.forexample/suchas 7.beclosetohome 8.thebiggestscreen9.take…seriously 10.thefreshestfood(二)写出下列形容词或副词的最高级1.popular_____________________________________2.fresh_____________________________________3.cheap_____________________________________4.bad_____________________________________5.good/well_____________________________________6.quickly_____________________________________7.big_____________________________________8.friendly_____________________________________9.close_____________________________________10.fast_____________________________________11.quiet_____________________________________12.beautifully_____________________________________13.easy_____________________________________14.much_____________________________________15.fortable_____________________________________16.creative_____________________________________17.boring_____________________________________18.serious_____________________________________【答案】1.mostpopular 2.freshest3.cheapest 4.worst5.best6.mostquickly7.biggest 8.friendliest 9.closest10.fastest 11.quietest 12.mostbeautifully13.easiest14.most 15.mostfortable 16.mostcreative17.mostboring18.mostserious二、句子积累根据汉语意思完成或翻译句子。1.我的家乡是最受欢迎的城镇。Myhometownis___________________________________________________town.2.在镇上，这家服装店是最好的，因为它拥有的衣服最多。Theclothingstoreisthebestintown_____________ithas____________________________clothes.3.人们最喜欢去Runfa超市购物因为它的服务最好。PeoplelikeshoppinginRunfaSupermarket_________________becauseithas___________________________________________________.4.在镇上，行知书店拥有最便宜的书。XingzhiBookstorehas___________________________________________________intown.5.观看别人展示才艺总是有趣的。It’salways_______________towatch_____________people_____________________________________.6.他们努力寻找最令人兴奋的魔术师。Theytryto________________________the_________________________________________________.7.每个人都会找到各自的所爱。___________________________________________________________________________________8.那就由你自己来决定。___________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.themostpopular 2.because；themost 3.best；thebestservice4.thecheapestbooks 5.interesting；other；showtheirtalents6.lookfor；mostexcitingmagician(s)7.Thereissomethingforeveryone.8.That’suptoyoutodecide.三、以读促写根据所给汉语或首字母提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。DearAnna,I’mgladtohearthatyouareingtomyhometownforatrip.Myhometownisagoodplacetohavefun.Youcanvisitsomeplacesinmyhometown.For1(实例),allthebookstoresaregood,butBookCityis(最舒服的)seats.However,inXingzhiBookstoreyoucanbuybooksthe5(最便宜地).The6(最受欢迎的)clothingstoreisAnta’s.Ithasthebestclothes.Kappaisthe7(最糟糕的).Ithasreallybadservice.Asforrestaurant,mostpeoplethinkMiaoxian’geisreallygreat.Itp8themostinterestingmusicandhasthe9(最新鲜的)food.Ofallthecinemas,CinemaCityisthebestcinemabecauseithasthebestsoundandyoucanalsositthe10(最舒服地)there.Butthemoviet11arethemostexpensive.Lastweek,therewasagreatschool12(才能)showinCinemaCity.Inthetalentshow,Elizawasa13(获胜者).Shewonthe14(奖)forthebestp15.Shecouldplaytheguitarupsidedown.Theprizefortheloudestperformerwenttothemathteachers.Theysangthe16(最漂亮地).IthinkyoucangotothemovieinCinemaCitywithmewhenyouvisitme.Butthat’su17toyoutodecide.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.【答案】1.example 2.most3.service 4.mostfortable 5.mostcheaply6.mostpopular 7.worst 8.plays 9.freshest10.mostfortably11.tickets 12.talent13.winner 14.prize 15.performer16.mostbeautifully17.up（一）1．我们都居住在温馨而又幸福的环境中，我们在这里快乐地成长并且有着美好的记忆。请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你所居住的小区。1.你的小区的位置及基本情况；2.你最爱去的地方及原因；3.你对小区的感受。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】本文以一般现在时为主，结合第三人称和第一人称。第一段介绍小区的位置以及名字；第二段介绍小区的周边基本情况，自己最喜欢去的地方以及原因；最后一段表明自己对小区的感受。保证叙述完整，条理清晰。【满分作文】MyhomeisonJieFangRoad.ItiscalledRainbowmunity.It’sverybeautifulandpeaceful.Thereisabigsupermarketnearmyhome.Therearequiteafewpeopleonweekends.Peoplelikeshoppingthere.Acrossfromit,thereisalibrary.Thereareallkindsofbooksinit.Ienjoyreadingbooksthere.It’sveryquiet.Thereismovietheatrebehindthelibrary.Ithasthemostfortableseatsinthecity.Itisthebestplaceformeandmyfriendstorelax.Weoftengotothemoviesontheweekend.Ilikemymunityalot.Weleyoutovisitmymunity.2．你校围绕“爱家乡，说特色”进行了讨论。请根据下表信息，写一篇不少于80词的短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。ThebestNameReasonStoreXinmate你可以很便宜地买到衣服MovietheaterNewCenturyTheater有最舒服的座位和最好的服务SchoolXinhuaHighSchool有最有才能的老师和最大的校园(campus)Radiostation97.0FM它播放最优美的音乐Yesterdayourschoolhadabigdiscussionaboutwhichplacewethinkisthemostspecialinourhometown.Herearetheresults._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】本文以一般现在时为主，主要采用第三人称介绍家乡的特色地方。承接文章的开头，引起下文；第二段分别介绍最好的商店、电影院、学校和广播站的名字，并说明原因；最后一段向大家发出邀请来家乡参观。可自由发挥，保证条理清晰。【满分作文】Yesterdayourschoolhadabigdiscussionaboutwhichplacewethinkisthemostspecialinourhometown.Herearetheresults.ThebestclothesstoreisXinmate.Youcanbuyclothesverycheaplythere.ThebestmovietheaterisNewCenturyTheater.Ithasthemostfortableseatsandthebestservice.ThebestschoolisXinhuaHighSchool.Ithasthebiggestcampusandthemosttalentedteachers.Thebestradiostationis97.0FM,anditplaysthemostbeautifulsongs.Ifyouetoourhometown,I’msurethatyouwillhaveawonderfultime.3．书面表达假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Annie打算暑假来你市旅游，她想了解一下你市东方海滩的情况。请你根据以下提示，给Annie写一篇100词左右的书信。开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。名称东方海滩位置城东10千米特点世界上最好的海滩之一，沙细，水净，浪小最适合的运动游泳，沙滩排球交通条件有很多云海滩的公交车，出租车随时乘坐DearAnnie，I'mverygladtohearthatyou'lltraveltomycity._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，LiHua【解题思路】本文是材料作文。所要描述的内容已经给列出了。学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。在写作之前要认真审题。首先要注意文章的时态，这是对东方海滩的描述，所以用一般现在时即可。因为是给友人介绍，所以用第一人称。写作禁止逐句翻译。注意连词的应用，衔接到各个知识点，以提高作文档次和点亮文章亮点。【满分作文】DearAnnie，I'mverygladtohearthatyou'lltraveltomycity.NowletmetellyousomethingabouttheEastBeach.TheEastBeachisintheeastofthecity，10kilometresaway.It'soneofthebestbeachesintheworld.Thesandthereissoft.Thewateriscleanwithsmallwaves.It'ssuitableforswimming.andplayingbeachvolleyball.Youcangettothebeacheasily.Manybusescantakeyouthere.Youcanalsotakeataxiatanytime.Therearetoilets，dressingroomsandshops.Ithinkyou'llhaveagoodtimethere...I'mlookingforwardtoyouring.Yours，LiHua【亮点词汇】besuitablefor适合 takesbtosomeplace带某人去某处takeataxi乘出租车 haveagoodtime玩得愉快文中还出现一些高级词汇如clean，suitable，fine,wave，提高文章的档次。【高分句型】①It'soneofthebestbeachesintheworld.这是世界上最好的海滩之一。使用英语中的固定结构oneof＋the＋最高级＋名词复数形式，“最……之一”把句子意思表达的特别清晰明了。②Ithinkyou'llhaveagoodtimethere...我认为你在那里会玩得很开心。4．假如你的英语老师布置任务让你调查你所在社区的三家超市（TaiheSupermarket，SunshineSupermarket，HappySupermarket）从price，quality，service三个方面做比较，选出你最喜欢的一家超市。词数90左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】本文采用第三人称，以一般现在时为主。文章第一段比较三个超市的价格、质量和服务。第二段总结目前最受自己最喜欢的超市。保证叙述完整。【满分作文】Therearethreesupermarketsinmyneighborhood.Ofthethree,SunshineSupermarketisthebiggestandhasthebestservice.However,peopledon’toftengotherebecausethegoodstherearethemostexpensive.HappySupermarket’sgoodsarecheaperthanSunshineSupermarketanditsserviceisasgoodasSunshine’s.Butit’snotconvenienttoparkthecars.AsforTaiheSupermarket,it’sthesmallestofthethree,butitsserviceisasgoodasSunshine’s.Theirgoodsarethebestamongthethree.Lotsofthingsarethecheapest,soIlikeitbest.Inaword,TaiheSupermarketissofarthebestplaceformetogoshopping.5．假如你的外国朋友Tom下个月要来北京旅游，作为一个北京人，请你给他写一封信，介绍一下北京最值得去的一些地方，并阐述原因。字数：70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示：1.What’sthemostbeautifulscenicspotinBeijing?2.What’sthebestshoppingmallinBeijing?3.What’sthenicestrestaurantinBeijing?DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyouareingtoBeijing.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinBeijing.Yours,LiMing【解题思路】本文应该用第三人称来介绍北京著名的地方；时态以一般现在时为主。在介绍地点时，侧重阐述介绍该地点的缘由。同时，注意地点等专有名词的书写。【满分作文】DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyouareingtoBeijing.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.AsaBeijinger,IthinkthemostbeautifulscenicspotinBeijingistheGreatWall.It’sthelongestwallintheworld.YoucannotonlyenjoytheviewsbutalsolearnaboutChinesehistoryandculture.Takingphotosthereisagreatidea.Besides,youcangotoJoyCityShoppingMall.It’soneofthebiggestshoppingmallsinBeijing.Intheend,remembertotastethefoodinQuanjude.Ithasthemostdeliciousfood—BeijingRoastDuck.IhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinBeijing.Yours,LiMing1.（2023·辽宁阜新·统考中考真题）根据要求完成作文。“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”阅读不仅能让我们获得知识，而且能开阔我们的眼界。在科技发达的时代，人们有多种多样的阅读方式，比如看纸质书、报纸和杂志，在线阅读或者使用app听书等。你最喜欢哪一种阅读方式呢？请以“Myfavoritewayofreading”为题写一篇英文短文。提示词语：ebook,environment,convenient,download,searchforinformation提示问题：1.What’stheimportanceofreading?2.What’syourfavoritewayofreading?3.Whydoyouchoosethisway?(至少写出2点理由)要求：1.紧扣主题，语言连贯，语法正确，书写规范。2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名，词数在60—80词左右。MyfavoritewayofreadingToday,readinghasbeeanimportantpartofeverydaylife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤】第一步，介绍读书的重要性；第二步，介绍你最喜欢的阅读方式；第三步，介绍为什么选择这种方式。【满分作文1】MyfavoritewayofreadingToday,readinghasbeeanimportantpartofeverydaylife.Aspeople’slivingstandardisimprovingconstantly,readinghaswontheheartsofmostpeople.Themorebooksweread,thewiserwe’llbee.Therearemanykindsofreadingways,suchasnewspapers,magazines,ebooks,etc.paredwithreadingebooks,readingpaperbooksismyfavorite.Firstly,readinginthelibrariesandtakingawaybooksbackhomearesimpleandeveryonecandoit.Secondly,paperbooksdolessharmtooureyesifweusetheproperpositions.Ifeelrelaxedafterlookingthroughsomeinterestingicbooksandstorybooks.Thirdly,paperbookscanbereusedoverandoveragainiftheyarekeptwell.Moreover,wecantakedownsomeusefulnotesandmakelearningmarkswhilereadingeasily.Asthesayinggoesthat“readingistheeducationinaclassroomthathasnowalls”.Let’sstarttoreadameaningfulbook.【满分作文2】MyfavoritewayofreadingToday,readinghasbeeanimportantpartofeverydaylife.Readingnotonlyprovidesuswithendlessknowledge,butalsomakesusunderstandwhat’sgoingonaroundtheworld.Withtherapiddevelopmentofmoderntechnology,ourreadingwayshavechangedalot.Therearemanykindsofreadingways,suchasnewspapers,magazines,ebooks,etc.Ilikereadingebooksbest.First,wecaneasilydownloadnewbooksfromtheInternet.Itismucheasierandquickertosearchforthemessageswewanttoread.Andwecanalsowritenotesormarksomeimportantinformationinanebook.Moreover,anumberofebookscanbestoredinasmallmachine,whichiseasytotake.Lastbutnotleast,ebookssavealotofpaperandaregoodfortheenvironment.Inshort,nomatterwhichwayyouchoose,Ihopeyoucanfeelthejoyofreading.【亮点词汇】①takedown记下②doharmto对……有害③the比较级,the比较级越……，越……【高分句型】①Therearemanykindsofreadingways,suchasnewspapers,magazines,ebooks,etc.（Therebe句型）②Let’sstarttoreadameaningfulbook.（祈使句）2.（2022·江苏南通·统考中考真题）华夏大地，人杰地灵；中华文明，源远流长。假如你是李华，你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。注意：1.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。LearningthatyouareinterestedinChina,Ifeelhonoredtointroducemycountrytoyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述，也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。【满分作文】LearningthatyouareinterestedinChina,Ifeelhonoredtointroducemycountrytoyou.First,therearemanygreatmeninourcountry,suchasYuanLongping.YuanLongpingisknownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”.Hemadeagreatcontributiontotheworldfoodsupply.Second,therearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinChina,suchastheGreatWall.ItisknownasoneofthesevenWondersoftheWorld.Third,Chinaalsohasmanytraditionalfestivals,suchasSpringFestival,DragonBoatFestival,MidAuturmnFestivalandsoon.ChinesepeopleattachthemostimportancetotheSpringFestival.3.（2021·四川资阳·统考中考真题）假如你是李华,将在英语课上做值日报告。请以“Afterclassservicesinourschool”为题,介绍课后延时服务活动的情况。请根据以下提示准备发言稿。

（1）活动内容（如：做作业,参加体育、艺术等活动）；

（2）你最喜欢的活动及原因；

（3）你的收获或感受。注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息；（3）开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dearclassmates,IamLiHuaandverygladtostandhere.Thetopicofmydutyreportis“Afterclassservicesinourschool”.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________