高考英语三轮冲刺查补易混易错点12 应用文写作之告知信、建议信、道歉信（含解析）

查补易混易错点12应用文写作之告知信、建议信、道歉信体裁命题形式写作主题2022新高考I卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈II卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈全国卷乙卷说明文投稿利用填表调查结果给报社投稿甲卷应用文投稿以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿2021新高考I卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福II卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福全国卷乙卷应用文发言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”为主题写一篇发言稿参赛甲卷应用文征求建议征求外国朋友建议，哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人2020全国卷I卷应用文投稿写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛II卷应用文日记写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动III卷应用文求助信给外教写一封信，请帮忙指导【告知信】首段：交代写信背景及写信目的I'mmorethandelightedtoknowthatyouwill...Therefore，I'mwritingtoremind/informyou...得知你将……我非常高兴。因此，我写信提醒/通知你……I'mveryexcited/gladtoknowthatyoutakeagreatinterestin...Consequently，I'dliketointroduce...toyou.得知你对…很感兴趣，我非常兴奋/高兴。因此，我想给你介绍…Knowingyouintendto/aregoingto...，Iamdelightedtosharewith./tellyousomeinformationabout...知道你打算…..，我很乐意和你分享/告诉你一些关于……的信息。主体部分：阐述活动目的及活动内容Inordertoraiseourawarenessofenvironmentalprotection，wewillorganizeatree-plantingactivityinthewesternmountainousarea.为了提高我们的环保意识，我们将在西部山区组织一次植树活动。Thedetailsof..areasfollows.一些关于…的细节如下。Theeventisscheduledtostartat..活动安排在……（时间）开始。Firstly，inorderto.，youshould..Besides，you'dbetter..首先，为了……，你应该……。另外，你最好……Toachievebetterperformance，you'dbetter..为了获得更好的表现，你最好…….尾段：表达祝愿与期待Ifyouhaveanydifficulty/troublein...，pleasefeelfree/donthesitatetoturntomeforhelp.如果你在……方面有任何困难，请尽管找我帮忙。Wishyouanice/pleasantstay/timein...！祝你在……过得愉快！Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucan...如果你能够，我将非常感激。【满分范文】DearTom，KnowingyoutakeagreatinterestinChineseculture，IamdelightedtosharewithyousomeinformationabouttheBeijingOperaWeek.It'stheperfecttimeforyoutojoinusbecausetheannualBeijingOperaWeekiscomingsoon.Therewillbelotsofrehearsalsbeforetheshowsandwe'dlikeyoutoplayarole.Youdon'thavetomemorizelinesbutneedtolearnsomemovements，sobesuretocometotheconcerthallforpracticeonFridayandSundayevenings.Inordertofeeleasyandcomfortable，you'dbetterwearlightclothesandshoes.Ihopeyouwillfinditfun.Yours，LiHua【建议信】首段：开门见山表明写信目的I'mverysorrytohearthatyouhavetroublein.......atthemoment.Herearesometipsforyou.获悉此刻你遇到……麻烦，我深感遗憾。这是给你的一些建议。Learningthat......，'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto........得知，我写信给你一些关于如何…的建议。主体部分：提出具体建议Whenitcomestosuchasituation，Iwouldliketosuggestthat........Foronething，........Foranother,.......What'smore........当遇到这种情况时，我想建议…。一方面，……。另一方面，……。而且，…AsfarasI'mconcerned/Frommypointofview，itisagoodideato......./itwouldbewiseofyouto.......Besides，Istronglyadviseyouto..Lastbutnotleast，youcan.........就我而言/在我看来，……是个好主意/你……是明智的。此外，我强烈建议你……。最后但同样重要的是，你可以……尾段：希望采纳建议并表示祝福Personally，itwouldbebeneficialifyoustickto........在我看来，如果你坚持……的话会有好处的2.Iwillbeveryhappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会很开心。Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。【满分范文】DearMichael，I'mmorethandelightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheTraditionalChineseCultureCompetition.I'mwillingtogiveyouahandandoffersomepracticalsuggestionsatyourrequest.Tobeginwith，itisnecessaryforyoutoconsultsomebooksconcerningtraditionalChineseculture，thusbroadeningyourhorizonsandwellequippingyouforthecomingcompetition.Secondly，whynotwatchsomevideoclips？Youareboundtogetsomeinspirationfromthem.Asforwhenandwheretomeet，canwemakeitat4：00thisFridayafternooninyourclassroom？Ifit’snotconvenientforyou，pleaseletmeknowwhattimeissuitableforyouinadvance.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua【道歉信】首段：表明写作意图，对某事表示歉意1.I'mtrulysorrytotellyouthat.….,andI’mwritingtoexpress/conveymydeepestapologytoyou...很抱歉告诉你……，我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。2.Iamwritingtooweyouanapologyforbeingunableto...我没能……,我写信向你道歉。3.IamterriblysorryforwhatIdid,butbelieveIdidn'tmeanto...对于我做的事，我感到十分抱歉。但请你相信,我并非有意要……4.IapologizemostsincerelyforwhatIsaidthatday.Ididn'tmeantohurtyou.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。5、Pleaseforgivemefornotbeingabletoinformyou.请原谅我没能通知你。6、Ioweyouanapologyforbeingunabletohelpyou.我没能帮助你，应该向你道歉。7.IamindeedsorryforwhatIsaid,butbelieveIhadnointentionto...对于我说的话，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要......。8.Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords.请原谅我说话欠妥。 主体部分：说明道歉的具体原因1、IfeelawfullysorryaboutitandIwonderifit'sconvenientforyoutomakeitanothertime.为此我感到非常抱歉，我想知道你是否方便另约时间。2、Muchtomyregret,Iwasunableto.….andIwishthatmyapologycouldhelptosomeextent.很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。3、I’mafraidIhavebroughtyoutoomuchtroubleandIwantyoutoknowhowregretfulIamfeeling.恐怕我给你带来了太多麻烦，同时我也想让你知道对此我觉得很抱歉。4、Ijustdonotknowwhattosayaboutthematter. 关于这件事我不知该说些什么。5、IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.我想让你知道现在我是多么遗憾。6、Ididnotmeantohurtyourfeelings.我不想伤害你的感情。7、Ifeelyouaredispleasedatmyfailingtokeepmypromise,butIhopeyouwillforgiveme.恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴，但是希望你能原谅我。段尾：再次表明歉意，请求谅解并提出补救措施1.Onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.对于造成的不便，我再次表示歉意。2.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapologies.我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。3.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain请允许我再次表示歉意。4.I'msorryforalltheinconvenience.我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。5.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyoncemoreforanyinconveniencecaused.对于任何带来的不便，请再次接受我真诚的道歉。满分范文DearTom,Iamterriblysorryfornothavingattendedyourclassontime.NowIamwritingyouthislettertoshowmydeepregret.Iwillbeverygratefulifyouarekindtolistentomyexplanation.BecauseitismyfirsttimetoliveinGuangzhouandIcannotadapttotheweatherherequickly,I'vehadaheadachethesedays.behonest,IthinkyouwillbemybestteachertohelpmeimprovemyEnglish.SoIapologizeagainformynotattendingyourclass.IwillmakemygreateffortonEnglishinthefutureandwillnotdisappointyounexttime!Iwonderifyoucouldexcuseme.Sincerelyyours,LiHua写作模板Dear______(称谓)Awareofyourenthusiasmfor/Delightedtolearnthat______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣),I’mwritingtoextendmy______(看法、关心、欢迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation. ______(活动信息).Tobeginwith,______(要点一).Furthermore,______(要点二).Tosumup,______(要点三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua写作模板Dear______(称谓)Youcan’timaginehow______(情感)Iamhearingabout______(写信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedto______(建议一).Additionally(Foronereason),itmakessenseto______(建议二/理由一).Moreover（Foranotherreason）,______(建议三/理由二)isalsoagoodchoice.Dobearinmindthat（Therefore）______(建议四/理由三) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandwewill______(以上建议的好处).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表达希望接受建议).Yoursincerely,LiHua写作模板Dear______(称谓)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthat______(写信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.Somethingunexpectedhappenedand______(失约理由).Shallwefixanothertime?I’llbeavailableanytimeafter______(补救办法).Will______(另约时间)suitsyourconvenience?Ifit’sok,let’smeetat______(见面地点).Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua1．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由。注意：1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【参考答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。【详情解析】1.词汇积累通知：tell→inform除此之外：inaddition→besides适合：fit→suit有空的：available→free2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.拓展句：Inaddition,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiParknextSaturday,whenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)2．（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；⑶希望从中有何收获。注意：⑴词数不少于100；⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【参考答案】DearChris,

I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.It’sourgreatpleasuretohaveyouvisitourschoolandgivealectureonwesternartduringthecomingsummervacation.Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadvice,andIhopethatIcangainmoreknowledgethroughthelecture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。【详情解析】1.词汇积累做演讲：givealecture→makeaspeech提供：providesb.withsth.→refersb.sth.机会：opportunity→chance采纳建议：takeone’sadvice→followone’sadvice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.拓展句：Westernmusic，whichisservedasabridge，providesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）3．（2023届辽宁省普通高中高三第二次模拟考试英语试题）假定你是李华，你的一个朋友经常感到疲惫，因此非常苦恼。请你给他一些建议，要多锻炼，提高身体素质。内容包括：1.锻炼的好处;2.建议一种锻炼形式并说明理由。3.祝愿健康。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Tobefitandhealthyyouneedtobephysicallyactive.Regularphysicalactivitycanhelpprotectyoufromdiseases.Cyclingisahealthyexercisethatcanbeenjoyedbypeopleofallages.Itonlytakestwotofourhoursaweektoachieveageneralimprovementtoyourhealth.Itcauseslessstrainandinjuriesthanmostotherformsofexercise.Besides,cyclingdoesnotrequirehighlevelsofphysicalskill.Onceyoulearn,youdon’tforget.Isincerelyhopeyouwillbehealthyandenergeticwiththehelpofphysicalexercise.【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“朋友经常感到疲惫，因此非常苦恼”给他写一封建议信，内容包括：锻炼的好处、建议一种锻炼形式并说明理由并祝愿健康。【详情解析】1.词汇积累获得：achieve→obtain此外：besides→what’smore要求：require→demand真诚地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Tobefitandhealthyyouneedtobephysicallyactive.拓展句：Youneedtobephysicallyactivesothatyou

keepfitandhealthyand,moreimportantly,moreenergetic.【点睛】【高分句型1】Cyclingisahealthyexercisethatcanbeenjoyedbypeopleofallages.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Onceyoulearn,youdon’tforget.（运用了once引导的条件状语从句）4．（2023届天津市南开区高三资料调查试卷英语试题）假如你是晨光中学的李津，你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习，希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：(1)表示欢迎；(2)简单介绍天津；(3)推荐一处旅游景点并给出理由。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearChris,I’msogladtoreceiveyouremail.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopethisishelpful.Can’twaittomeetyou!Yours,LiJin【参考答案】DearChris,I’msogladtoreceiveyouremail.WhatmakesmereallyexcitedisthatyouaregoingtovisitTianjin.Whatawonderfulidea!Welcometomyhometown!Tianjinisacitywithalonghistory.Theweatherisgoodbutperhapsalittlebithotinsummer.You’llhavevarioussnacksinTianjinandmeanwhilefindlotsofwesternstylebuildingshereontheFiveMajorAvenues.Ifyouwanttoenjoybeautifulcityviews,HaiheRivershouldbeagoodchoice.Ifyouliketohavefunandseesomeanimals,theWaterParkandTianjinZoocouldmakeyoucontent.MyfavoriteplaceistheAncientCultureStreetwherethereareplentyofinterestingtraditionalthings.Ihopethisishelpful.Can’twaittomeetyou!Yours,LiJin【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是晨光中学的李津，你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习，希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。【详情解析】1.词汇积累各种各样的：various→avarietyof欣赏：enjoy→admire/appreciate满意的：content→satisfied与此同时：meanwhile→atthesametime2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Tianjinisacitywithalonghistory.拓展句：Tianjinisacitywhichhasalonghistory.【点睛】【高分句型1】WhatmakesmereallyexcitedisthatyouaregoingtovisitTianjin.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）【高分句型2】MyfavoriteplaceistheAncientCultureStreetwherethereareplentyofinterestingtraditionalthings.（运用了where引导的定语从句）5．（2023届陕西省西安市新城区高三下学期第二次模拟考试英语试题）假定你是李华，为迎接高考，学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的征文比赛活动，请你以Howtokeeppositiveunderpressure为题写一篇短文参赛。内容如下：1.背景介绍；2.提出建议；3.鼓励前行。注意：1.词数应为100左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Howtokeeppositiveunderpressure_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】HowtokeeppositiveunderpressureWiththecollegeentranceexamapproaching,somesenior3studentsareloadedwithextrapressure.Howtokeeppositiveiscrucialtoimprovinglearningefficiency.Herearesometipsforthat.Firstofall,beconfidentinyourself.Nomatterwhatarises,believeyouhavetheabilitytodealwithit.Second,focusyourattentiononperformingthetaskathandinsteadofworries,fearsanddoubts.What’smore,setshorttermgoalsandrewardyourselfwhenyouhaveachievedeachone,whichwillmakeyoufeelmotivatedtokeepupwiththegoodwork.Keepingahealthylifestylesuchasbalanceddietsorregularexercisealsomattersinreducingpressure.Nopressure,nodiamonds.Sopleasechoosetobepositiveevenifyouarefacingpressure.【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，为迎接高考，学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的征文比赛活动，请你以Howtokeeppositiveunderpressure为题写一篇短文参赛。【详情解析】1.词汇积累首先：firstofall→tobeginwith集中：focuson→concentrateon实现：achieve→realize处理：dealwith→handle2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Keepingahealthylifestylesuchasbalanceddietsorregularexercisealsomattersinreducingpressure.拓展句：Itiskeepingahealthylifestylesuchasbalanceddietsorregularexercisethatmattersinreducingpressure.【点睛】[高分句型1]Howtokeeppositiveiscrucialtoimprovinglearningefficiency.(运用了“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构)[高分句型2]What’smore,setshorttermgoalsandrewardyourselfwhenyouhaveachievedeachone,whichwillmakeyoufeelmotivatedtokeepupwiththegoodwork.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)6．（2023届海南省高三一轮复习调研考试英语试题）近年来，中学生近视率呈上升趋势。请你为学校“英语园地”宣传栏写一份倡议书,呼吁大家合理用眼,保护视力。倡议书内容包括：1.倡议的原因和目的；2.提出合理用眼的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Protectoureyesight________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】ProtectoureyesightRecentyearshavewitnessedanincreasingnumberofstudentswhobecomenear-sighted,bringingeyesightproblemsofteenagerstopublicattention.Therefore,Icalloneveryonetotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectoureyesight.Wecanmakeitahabittostopforafewminutesduringourstudyandlookatdistantobjectstogetregularbreaks.Besides,weshouldkeepatleast30centimetersawayfromthereadingmaterial.Lastbutnotleast,wheneversignsofeyesightproblemsoccur,consultadoctorimmediately.Intheseways,wecanprotectourselvesfrombecomingnear-sighted.【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。近年来，中学生近视率呈上升趋势。请你为学校“英语园地”宣传栏写一份倡议书,呼吁大家合理用眼,保护视力。【详情解析】1.词汇积累呼吁：callon→appealto咨询：consult→counsel立即：immediately→atonce采取措施：takemeasures→takeaction2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Therefore,Icalloneveryonetotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectoureyesight.拓展句：Therefore,itiseffectivemeasuresthatIcalloneveryonetotaketoprotectoureyesight.【点睛】[高分句型1]Recentyearshavewitnessedanincreasingnumberofstudentswhobecomenear-sighted,bringingeyesightproblemsofteenagerstopublicattention.(运用了who引导定语从句)[高分句型2]Wecanmakeitahabittostopforafewminutesduringourstudyandlookatdistantobjectstogetregularbreaks.(运用了it作形式宾语)7．（2010·山东·高考真题）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数120~150；2.可适当增加细节。DearTom,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Sincerelyyours

LiHua【参考答案】DearTom,IwasfartoohappythatwemadeanappointmenttovisitBeijingtogethernextweekend.HowIappreciatetheopportunitytobeyourguideinBeijing!ButI’mafraidwe’llhavetomakeitanothertime,becauseI’llbemeetingmyuncleattheairport.HeisonbusinessfromAustralia,andwillbehomeforonlytwodays.It’sararechanceforourfamilytogetreunitedsincehelefthometenyearsago.Ihopeyou’llforgivemefornotkeepingmyword.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,wecanmakeittheweekendafternext,oryoumaymakethechoice,OK?Bytheway,myfamilyandIwillbeoverjoyedtohaveyourcompanywhenmyuncleishome.Ifyouhavenoplan,pleaseletmeknow,andI’llfetchyouuponmyuncle’sreturn.Haveahappyweekend.Sincerelyyours

LiHua【语篇解读】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。【详情解析】这是一篇电子邮件写作，写作缘由是因为自己因故，而不能赴与在上海上学的英国朋友Tom下周末去北京旅游的约定。邮件内容主要包括表达歉意，解释原因，以及另约时间。在结构上面，文章使用了三段式，第一自然段首先真诚地表达自己的歉意，第二自然段，仔细说明自己失约的缘由，第三自然段，再次主动真诚的邀请Tom一起去北京旅游。文章结果层次分明，调理清晰。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。时态：用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：HowIappreciatetheopportunitytobeyourguideinBeijing!这句话运用了感叹句。Ifit’sconvenientforyou,wecanmakeittheweekendafternext,oryoumaymakethechoice,OK?运用了条件主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。8．（贵州省六校联盟2022-2023学年高三下学期适应性考试英语试题）假如你是李华，你的来自美国的留学生朋友Mike跟你约好去参观茶文化博物馆，但你因故将不能赴约，请用英语给Mike写一封电子邮件，说明情况。内容如下：1．表示歉意并说明原因;2．邀请他参加你校下周六茶艺社团的活动。注意：1．词数100左右;2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：茶艺teaceremonyDearMike,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考答案】DearMike,Duetoachangeinmyschoolarrangement,I’mverysorrythatIwon’tbeabletokeepmyappointmenttovisittheTeaMuseumwithyouasscheduled．Isincerelyapologizeforanyinconveniencecausedbytheunexpectedchange.Isuggestweputoffourmeetingfrom3pmthisSaturdaytothesametimenextSunday．Willthatbesuitableforyou?ThegoodnewsisthatsomeactivitiesaboutteaculturearetobeheldinourschoolnextSaturday．Alectureandateaceremonyshowwillbeincluded,whichwilldefinitelyattractteacultureloverslikeyou．Isincerelyinviteyoutotheevent,whichwillhelpyoubetterunderstandChineseteaculture．Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply．Yourssincerely,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的来自美国的留学生朋友Mike跟你约好去参观茶文化博物馆，但你因故将不能赴约，请用英语给Mike写一封电子邮件，说明情况。【详情解析】1.词汇积累因为：dueto→becauseof建议：suggest→advise举行：hold→host诚挚地：sincerely→heartfeltly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Isincerelyapologizeforanyinconveniencecausedbytheunexpectedchange.拓展句：Isincerelyapologizeforanyinconvenience,whichwascausedbytheunexpectedchange.【点睛】[高分句型1]Alectureandateaceremonyshowwillbeincluded,whichwilldefinitelyattractteacultureloverslikeyou.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]ThegoodnewsisthatsomeactivitiesaboutteaculturearetobeheldinourschoolnextSaturday.(运用了that引导表语从句)9．（2018·全国·高考真题）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片GrowingTogether，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Boysandgirls,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudentsUnionJune8,2018【参考答案】Boysandgirls,Ihavegoodnewsforyou.TheEnglishfilmGrowingTogethermadebyourteachersandsomeseniorstudentswillbedisplayedthisweekend.Itshowsusthewholehistoryofschool’sdevelopment,whichisIthinktheattractiontous.Ifyouarecuriousaboutthehistoryofourschoolorconcernedaboutitsfuture,youmustn’tmissthisexcellentopportunity!Besides,allyoursuggestionsandcommentsaboutthisfilmwillbewelcome.ItwillbedisplayedintheSchoolFilmHall,from9:00amto10:00am,June9th,Saturday.That’sall.Thankyou.TheStudentsUnionJune8,2018【详情解析】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。10．（山东省济南市2022-2023学年高三上学期期末统考英语试题）你校外教Frank受邀本周末在学校报告厅做报告。因特殊原因，学校将报告调整为线上举行。假如你是李华，请你给他写一封邮件，通知相关内容，要点如下:1.变更原因;2.变更后的时间和方式;3.表达歉意。注意:1.词数为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearFrank,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考答案】DearFrank,I’msorrytoinformyouthereportscheduledinthelecturehallthisweekendwillhavetobemadeonline.Giventhattheequipmentinthehallbrokedownanditneedsrepairing,wehavenochoicebuttorearrangeyourlecture.IwonderifitispossibleforyoutoconductaTencentconferenceorTintinconferencethisSaturdayevening.Shouldyouhaveanyproblemorsuggestion,dofeelfreetocontactmeforfurtherinformation.Ideeplyapologizeforanyinconveniencewemayhavecaused.Yourearlyreplyiswhatweareexpecting.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给受邀本周末在学校报告厅做报告的外教Frank写一封邮件，告知他因特殊原因学校将报告调整为线上举行并说明相关内容。【详情解析】词汇积累告诉：inform→tell别无选择：havenochoicebutto→havenooptionbutto/havenoalternativebutto会议：conference→meeting/session联系：contact→incontactwith/contactwith句式拓展同义句转化原句：Giventhattheequipmentinthehallbrokedownanditneedsrepairing,wehavenochoicebuttorearrangeyourlecture.拓展句：Wehavenochoicebuttorearrangeyourlecturebecausetheequipmentinthehallbrokedownanditneedsrepairing.【点睛】[高分句型1]IwonderifitispossibleforyoutoconductaTencentconferenceorTintinconferencethisSaturdayevening.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ideeplyapologizeforanyinconveniencewemayhavecau