高中英语人教版一轮学案一打动阅卷老师的6个高分亮点

温馨提示：此套题为Word版，请按住Ctrl,滑动鼠标滚轴，调节合适的观看比例，答案解析附后。关闭Word文档返回原板块。一打动阅卷老师的6个高分亮点——营造亮点夺人眼目1.写好简单句式,奠定语言基础1.主谓(SV):主语+谓语(不及物动词)此句式用来表达主语的动作或状态。其特点是句子的谓语动词为不及物动词,本身能表达完整的意思,可以根据意思表达的需要添加副词、介词短语、状语从句等。【输入经典】①Thebigdayhasfinallyarrived.大日子终于到来了。②Withbutterfliesinmystomach,Ibreatheddeeply.由于紧张,我深呼了一口气。【输出佳句】①上午七点钟,我们从学校大门口出发。At7a.m.westartedattheschoolgate.

②几分钟后,那只黑熊回来了。Afewminuteslater,theblackbearcameback.

2.主系表(SVP):主语+系动词+表语此句式侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样,其中谓语动词需用系动词,表语多是形容词,也可以是名词、介词短语、不定式或动名词等。【输入经典】①ThecampuswasstillveryquietwhenIarrived.当我到达时,校园还很安静。②Thinkingismoreimportantthannotetakingandmemorizing.思考比记笔记和记忆更重要。【输出佳句】①这次比赛的目的是鼓励我们学生多关注身体锻炼。Thepurposeofthisracewastoinspireusstudentstopaymoreattentiontophysicalexercise.

②我的英语老师对我们既严格又有爱心。MyEnglishteacherisbothstrictwithusandfullofloveforus.

3.主谓宾(SVO):主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语此句式的特点为谓语动词均为及物动词,其后必须接一个宾语,即动作的承受者,才能表达完整的意思。宾语可以是名词、代词、动名词或不定式、宾语从句等。【输入经典】①Youwillhavetwooptionsforyourfuture.你的未来可以有两种选择。②Ihavedecidednottogotouniversity.我已经决定不去上大学。【输出佳句】①我们的表演需要您的指导。Weneedyourguidanceonourperformance.

②中国拥有悠久的历史和丰富的文化。Chinaenjoysalonghistoryandrichculture.

4.主谓宾宾(SVOO):主语+谓语+间宾+直宾此句式中的谓语动词必须接两个宾语才能表达完整意思,其中一个是表示人的间接宾语,另一个是表示物的直接宾语。一般情况下间接宾语在前,直接宾语在后。【输入经典】①Giveyourfriendsahandwhentheyneedit.当朋友需要帮助时,就伸出你的援手。②Whydidshesendmeawrongmessage?为什么她给我发错误的信息呢?【输出佳句】①她表扬了约翰的提议并给他提供了一些建议。ShepraisedJohnforhisproposal,andofferedhimsomeadvice.

②自从我们上高中以来,他一直教我们英语。HehasbeenteachingusEnglishsinceweenteredseniorhighschool.

5.主谓宾补(SVOC):主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语此句式中的谓语动词虽然是及物动词,但只接一个宾语还不能表达完整的意思,必须再加一个成分对宾语进行补充说明才能使句子意思完整。宾语补足语可以由名词、动词、形容词、副词、动词ing、动词不定式或动词的过去分词等充当。【输入经典】①AlthoughIwasembarrassed,hiswordsmademealotmorerelaxed.尽管我很尴尬,但是他的话让我放松多了。②Challengeslikethismightsometimesputyouunderpressure.像这样的挑战有时可能会给你带来压力。【输出佳句】①我们决定以优秀同学为榜样,让我们自己对整个社会更有用。Wearedeterminedtofollowtheexamplesofourexcellentschoolmatesandmakeourselvesusefultothewholesociety.

②最后,那头熊在篱笆上撕了个洞,把头伸了进来。Atlast,thebeartoreaholeinthefenceandputhisheadin.

6.Therebe句型Therebe句型用来表达某处存在某人或某物,其基本结构是“Therebe+主语”,动词be的人称和数要和后面的主语保持一致。【输入经典】①TherearemanysimilarcitiesandtownsinChina.在中国有许多类似的城镇。②Isthereanythingelseinparticularthatyouwouldliketosharewithus?还有其他特别的你愿意和我们分享的吗?【输出佳句】①在我们周围有许多值得尊重的人。Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.

②有一条小河流经这家农场。Thereisasmallriverflowingthroughthefarm.

根据所给信息补全短文,注意句式结构的使用。ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.(我们周围有许多值得尊重的人)Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch(我的父亲是一位非常热爱他的工作和学生的老师).Heworksveryhardeveryday(他每天努力工作)buthewillalsosparesometimetoacpanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.

WhenIeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetooverethedifficultiesbravely(并鼓励我勇敢地克服困难).Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply(我深深地爱着他).

2.锤炼高级词汇,力求语言生动1.词汇华丽变身:替换常用简单词(1)名词变身机会chance→opportunity选择choice→alternative课程course→curriculum影响effect→influence/impact后果result→consequence缺点shorting→drawback方法way→approach职业job→career/profession建议advice→guidance问题problem→issue老人oldpeople→theelderly/theaged/seniorcitizens青少年youngpeople→youngsters/youths/adolescents几天前afewdaysago→theotherday(2)动词变身看见see→catchsightof遇见meet→eacross喜欢like→haveapassionfor/befondof/haveanaffectionfor引起cause→leadto/resultin/giveriseto拥有have→possess提高develop/improve→promote替代replace→substitute注意到notice→spot完成finish→acplish面对face→befacedwith容忍bear→tolerate/putupwith处理dealwith→copewith使某人意识到makesb.realize→raisesb.’sawarenessof决定decide→determine/makeupone’smind考虑consider→takeintoconsideration/account应该should→besupposedto理解understand→makesenseof/figureout使用use→employ/makeuseof/takeadvantageof道歉apologize→makeanapology记住remember→keepinmind发生happen→occur/eabout想起thinkof→occurto/eupwith感谢thank→appreciate帮助某人helpsb.→dosb.afavor节省save→setaside参观visit→payavisitto分发handout→distribute站起来standup→risetoone’sfeet由……组成bemadeupof→consistof习惯于beusedto→beaccustomedto一定besuretodo→beboundtodo反对beagainst→objectto厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith忙于bebusywith→beoccupiedwith/beengagedin闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor感到舒服feelfortable→feelatease美化校园maketheschoolbeautiful→beautifytheschool想做某事wanttodosth.→intend/desiretodosth.照看lookafter→attendto尽力做某事tryone’sbesttodosth.→sparenoefforttodosth.向某人寻求帮助asksb.forhelp→turntosb.forhelp(3)形容词变身令人惊奇的surprising→amazing/astonishing/shocking贫穷的poor→needy/poverty/stricken优秀的excellent→outstanding明显的obvious→apparent/evident常见的mon→universal充足的enough→adequate勤奋的hardworking→diligent可用的useable→available困难的difficult→challenging坚强的strong→tough重要的important→significant/vital不可能的impossible→outofthequestion有趣的interesting→absorbing→striking/appealing小心谨慎的careful→cautious幸运的lucky→fortunate巨大的large→enormous合适的proper→appropriate丰富的rich→abundant古老的old→ancient唯一的only→unique全部的whole→entire富裕的rich→wealthy许多的many→alargequantityof有空的free→available有益处的beuseful→beofbenefit高兴的glad→delighted激动的excited→thrilled坏的bad→disgusting/awful著名的famous→distinguished(4)其他词类变身突然suddenly→allofasudden立即immediately→inaflash有时sometimes→occasionally/onceinawhile/fromtimetotime另外;况且besides→inaddition/what’smore/moreover因此so→therefore第一;首先first→tobeginwith/startwith第二;其次second→inaddition/what’smore最终finally→eventually关于about→concerning也too→aswell否则or→otherwise事实上infact→asamatteroffact故意地onpurpose→bydesign/deliberately总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary因为becauseof→onaccountof/dueto/owingto/thanksto【输入经典】①Ontheonehand,toomuchpraisemightleadtochildren’slackofenthusiasmtoexplorenewthings,fortheyareafraidtheywon’tmeetparents’expectations.②Consideringtheenormousbenefits,whichwecanearnsteadilyfromtennispractice,includingpreventingusfromgettingshortsightedandhelpinguskeepphysicallyhealthy,wearelostintrainingcourse.【输出佳句】①Thespecialdayallowspeopletoshowtheirloveandaffectionfor(对……表达爱和情感)theirfathers.

②It’sadvisable/wise(是明智的)forpeopletousetheircellphonesmoreappropriately/properly(更恰当地).

③Withoutsufficientpreparation(没有充分准备),youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectlyandobtainsatisfactorymarks,letalonebeadmittedintoadesirableuniversity(梦想的大学).

④TracysaidshehadalreadyinformedSusanof(通知苏珊)thechangeoftheappointment.

⑤PeoplegenerallythoughtitimpossiblefortheChineseteamtowinthechampionshipintheRioOlympicGames,buttheyovercamemanyhurdles(克服许多障碍)andeventuallyworkedmiracles/wonders(最终创造了奇迹).

⑥DramaNightisscheduledto(预定)beheldontheeveningofnextFridayinthetheatrehall.

⑦Additionally(此外),havingbeenawardedscholarshiptwiceinourschool,Ihaveexcellentacademicperformance(极好的学术成就).

⑧Thisphenomenonhasbeeaconcern/focus(成为焦点)wemustfacetodaybecauseofmanyseriousconsequences(许多严重后果)causedbyimproperuseofcellphones.

2.变化所用词的词性在作文中,可以通过改变一个词的词性,使文章富有变化,让阅卷者感受到考生对词汇各种用法的掌握水平和灵活运用的程度。常见的变化词性的策略有名词变动词、动词变名词、形容词变名词等。(1)名词变动词Peopleareconcernedaboutthegradualdisappearanceofthetraditionalvalues.→Peopleareconcernedbecausethetraditionalvaluesaregraduallydisappearing.传统价值观正在渐渐地消亡,这让人们很担忧。(2)动词变名词Afterwatchinghisperformance,Ifoundhecouldreallydanceverywell.→Afterwatchinghisperformance,Ifoundhimareallygooddancer.看了他的表演之后,我发现他跳舞跳得很棒。(3)形容词变名词IwrotealettertoTomtothankhimforhisbeingsokind.→IwrotealettertoTomtothankhimforhiskindness.我写信给汤姆对他的善良表示感谢。3.善用短语:富有变化,引人入胜汉语高级短语努力strugglefor=strivefor=sparenoeffortsfor从事embarkon=setabout=goinfor在当代incontemporarysociety=inpresentdaysociety=inthisdayandage大量的ahostof=agreatnumberof=alargeamountof更糟糕的是what’sworse=worsestill=tomakemattersworse遇见;偶遇meet=runinto=eacross=meetwith依我看inmyopinion=asfarasI’mconcerned=frommypointofview除了……之外(还有)besides=inadditionto=apartfrom=aswellas=alongwith一方面,另一方面ononehand,ontheotherhand=foronething,foranotherthing高度评价thinkhighlyof=singhighpraisefor=thinkwellof把……考虑在内take...intoconsideration=take...intoaccount有资格的;有能力的;胜任的befitfor=beequalto=bequalifiedfor=bepetentin参加takepartin/participatein一些如何……的建议someadvice/tips/suggestionsonhowto...对……感到紧张feelnervous/anxiousabout克服紧张;缓解焦虑ease/overe/getovernervousness/relieveanxiety树立信心;对自己有信心buildupconfidence/haveconfidenceinyourself/beconfidentaboutyourself对……有益的beofgreatbenefit=bebeneficialto对……有害的;对……有损害的doharmto/dodamageto=beharmfulto接触到;有机会使用gain/haveaccessto=beaccessibleto对……(不)方便的beconvenient/inconvenientforsb.todo=bringconvenience/inconveniencetosb.对……有影响/作用haveaneffect/influence/impacton.../makeadifferencetosb.【输入经典】①Forexample,papercuttingandChineseknotsareallfeasiblemethodsofintroducingourculture,whicharealsomoreconvenienttoorganize.②ThereasonswhyIamqualifiedforthejobareasfollows.【输出佳句】①Frommypointofview(我认为),it’struethatcellphonesbringuslotsofbenefitsandconvenience,butonlywhenthey’reusedmoreappropriately(恰当地)cantheyserveusbetter.

②Allmyteachersandclassmatessinghighpraiseformyproficiency(高度赞扬我的熟练)inbothChineseandEnglish.

③Takingallyourrequirementsintoaccount/consideration(考虑到你的全部要求),IfirmlybelieveI’mtherightpersonyou’relookingfor.

④Asforacmodation,IprefertolivewithalocalfamilybecauseIwanttoimprovemyEnglishandexperienceauthenticAmericanculturecloseup(近距离体验真实的美国文化).

⑤Youareoptimisticaboutlifeandalwayshaveconfidence,whateverdifficultyyoumayencounter(遇见),whichhelpsyoustandoutamongtheclassmates.⑥Withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards(随着人们生活水平的提高),cellphonesarefloodingintoourlife.

⑦Wearesorryforanyinconveniencethatwe’llbringtoyou(给您带来的不便).Thanksforyourunderstanding.

⑧Nowadays,thesmartphoneshavefoundtheirwaytoeveryfamilyandareplayingaveryimportantroleinourlife.Theyarebeneficialtousinmanyways.However,theyalsodoharmtousmentallyandphysically(有害于我们的身心健康).

⑨Inaddition,seldomdoIhavetimetokeepmyparentspany,soIdecidetohelpmyparentswithsomehouseworktorelease/ease/lessen/reducetheirpressure(缓解他们的压力),whichIthinkisofbenefittoenhancingtherelationship(加强关系)betweenmyfamilymembers.

根据所给信息补全短文,并注意高级词汇的使用。DearPeter,Iamexceedinglydelighted(我非常高兴)tohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch(给你一个粗略的理解).

Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup(一座很大的新体育馆已落成),whichhasbeethenewlandmark(已成为新的地标)inourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportsevents(各种体育项目)areabletobeheld,ofwhichpingpong,footballaswellas(以及)runningpetitionsenjoygreatpopularity(很受欢迎).Asforme,I’mintoxicatedwithbasketball(我热爱篮球)sinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife(去迎接生活中的挑战).

Allinall,Isincerelyinvite(诚挚邀请)youtoetoourschoolandseeforyourself.

Yours,LiHua3.运用复杂句式,增添语言内涵1.句子形式多样化:根据表达的需求,可以采用多种句式,这样既能恰当表达,又能避免形式单一【输入经典】①Theyweresoheavythatwecouldn’tliftthematfirst.(so...that...句型)②Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependpletelyontheratingsinconsumption.(同位语从句)【输出佳句】①Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeoplestarttoprotectourenvironment,whichmakesourenvironmentmoreandmorecolorful.→Inrecentyears,withmoreandmorepeoplestartingtoprotectourenvironment,ourenvironmentisbeingmoreandmorecolorful.(with复合结构)

→Inrecentyears,therearesomanypeoplewhostarttoprotectourenvironmentthatourenvironmentisbeingmoreandmorecolorful.(therebe句式)

②Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.→Studyhardandyouwillmakerapidprogress.(并列句)

2.使用非谓语动词形式,句子凝练高端【输入经典】①Afterlearningit,I’msureI’llhaveabetterunderstandingofthedifferencesandsimilaritiesbetweenChinesecultureandWesternculture.②Onarrivingattheteahouse,theforeignstudentswereimpressedbytheuniqueteapotsandteacups.【输出佳句】①Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(非谓语动词)→Shewalkedoutofthelab,followedbymanystudents.

②Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(非谓语动词)→Theywentbacktoschool,singingandlaughing.

3.运用定语从句,增加细节,填补内容【输入经典】①Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.②Iameagertoinviteyoutojoinourteamfortheupingevent,inwhichyouwilldemonstrateyourabilityandmakeacquaintancewithmorefriendswiththesameinterest.【输出佳句】①You’dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassandhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty,whichmakesiteasyforyoutogothroughtheclass(使你容易通过这门课).

②Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).

③IhavefoundaflatforyouonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseschool.Itisonthethirdfloorwiththreerooms,oneofwhichisbedroom(其中一个是卧室),andtheothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.

4.巧用倒装,增强句子的表现力【输入经典】①Notonlywillourclub’sworksbedisplayed,butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpapercuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.②NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butyoualsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.③NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.【输出佳句】①ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(倒装)→Weakas/thoughIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

②HehadnosoonerebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(倒装)→NosoonerhadheebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.

5.恰当使用强调句,增强说服力【输入经典】①ItisyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglishwell.②ItwasonFridaythatouractivitybegan.【输出佳句】①Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(强调句)→Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

②Itisworkinginteamsinsteadofonmyownthathasfreedmeoftroubleandmademyworkmoreefficient.(强调句)

6.自如应用各种名词性从句,精彩纷呈【输入经典】①IfyouareinterestedinwhatIhavestatedabove,signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeSeptember1st.②That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.【输出佳句】①Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(主语从句)→Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.

②IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).

7.withorwithout精彩点缀,妙不可言【输入经典】①Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichpingpong,footballaswellasrunningpetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.②Withoutanyhesitation,webegantowork.【输出佳句】①Asanoldsayinggoes,livingwithoutaclearandachievableaim(没有清晰可达到的目标)islikesailingwithoutapass.

②Ican’tthankyouenoughforyourgeneroushelp,withoutwhichIcouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).

8.巧用副词,充分表情达意【输入经典】①Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.②Igenuinelyhopethatyoucansqueezesometimeforourfestivalandhavefunwithus.【输出佳句】①Shepatiently(耐心地)explainedalltherulestothestudentsandrequiredeveryonetofollowthem.②Wewereperfectly(完全地)satisfiedwiththeresultoftheexperiment.9.变主动为被动,凸显英语思维【输入经典】①Myfathergavemeanewbookonmybirthday.→Iwasgivenanewbook(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(间接宾语作主语)→Anewbookwasgiventome(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(直接宾语作主语)②Andsomeworldfamousplayerswillbeinvitedtogivelessons.【输出佳句】①Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowed(可以被借用)atatimeandtheycanbekept(可以保存)fortendays.

②Youareallowed(被允许)abouttenminutestoprepareforthework.

10.语气委婉而中肯,易于接受【输入经典】①Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.②Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.【输出佳句】①Iwonderifyoucouldtellme(你能否告诉我)whatbooksIneedtoreadandtherequirementsofmyhomework.

②Whatdoyouthinkofit?Areyousatisfiedwithit?Ifnot,pleasetellmeasquicklyaspossible(请尽快告诉我).

根据所给信息补全短文,并注意高级句式的应用。假定你是李华,你校的交换生Tom对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣,本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”,请你写一封电子邮件,邀请Tom去体验编织艺术。DearTom,Hereesapieceofgoodnews(来好消息了).TheCampusCultureFestivalwillbehostedthisFriday.SinceyouhaveastrongpassionforChinesefolkart,it’sagreatpleasureformetoinviteyoutojoinus.

Theactivityisscheduledtolastabouttwohours,from3:30pmto5:30pmintheschoolhall.Itcoversawidevarietyofcontent.Notonlycanweappreciatenumerousappealingweavingworksrangingfromchairsandtablestovariousdecorations(我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品,从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足),butalsowe’llwatchthedocumentaryconcerning(有关的)thehistoryoftheweavingart.

Inaddition,somedistinguishedprofessors(一些著名教授)willbeinvitedtodeliverlecturesabouthowtopromotethedevelopmentoftheweavingart(如何促进编织艺术的发展),duringwhichtimeyouwilldefinitelygainabetterunderstandingofit(在这期间你一定会对它有更好的了解).Bytheway,ifyouareavailable,we’llmeetatthreeoutsidetheschoolgate.

HowIhopeyoucantakemyinvitationintoconsideration(我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)!I’mexpectingyourreply.

Yours,LiHua4.精准审题谋篇,笔下运筹帷幄(2020·全国Ⅲ卷改编)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧,给外教MissEvans写一封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间和地点。注意:1.词数80左右;2.结束语已为你写好。审题立意·确定中心体裁求助信时态一般现在时和一般将来时人称Iandyou结构三段或四段要点1.故事梗概2.求助内容行云流水·斐然成章I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelpwithourEnglishshortplayadaptedfromourEnglishtextbook.ThestorystartswithaboynamedHuckleberryFinn,whoranawayfromhomeandlivedwithhisfriendJim,aformerslave,onaraftontheMississippiRiver.ThenFinnwascheatedbytwomen,withhisraftstolenandJimsoldtoafarm.FinnandhisfriendTomSawyermadeaplantosaveJimfromthefarm.AtlasttheymanagedtofreeJim.Iwonderifyouwouldliketogiveussomeadvice.Thevocabularyandgrammaroftheplotneedtobeadjusted,andwealsoneedyourguidanceonourperformance.Ifpossible,shallwemeetyouinyourofficeat10a.m.tomorrow?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHuaⅠ(2021·杭州模拟)假定你是班长李华,你班来自美国的交换生Tony在学习和生活方面不太适应,向你求助。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示关心;2.帮他分析原因;3.提供建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作提示】1.文章可以分为三段:第一段对Tony表示关心;第二段分析原因并提出建议;第三段表示祝愿。2.文章是建议类邮件,因此时态应以一般现在时为主。【参考范文】DearTony,Yousayyouhavedifficultyadaptingtothenewstudyandlife,here.Iknowexactlyhowyoufeel.Facingthenewsituation,itisnaturalthatyouwillbeveryanxious,andit’squitenormalforyoungpeoplelikeyouwhoetostudyinaforeigncountryforthefirsttime.Butitdoesn’tmatter.Justrelaxandtakeafewsteps.First,breakbiglearninggoalsintosmallsteps.Thengetinvolvedinschoolactivitieswhereyoucanmakemorefriends.Hopefullymysuggestionswouldbehelpful.Yours,LiHua【出彩语句】1.出彩词汇adaptto 适应getinvolvedin 参与counton 指望;依靠2.出彩结构Facingthenewsituation,itisnaturalthatyouwillbeveryanxious,andit’squitenormalforyoungpeoplelikeyouwhoetostudyinaforeigncountryforthefirsttime.(其中Facingthenewsituation是现在分词短语作状语,同时使用了itis+adj.+that...结构,it为形式主语。还使用了who引导的定语从句)Ⅱ(2021·沈阳模拟)假定你是李华。北京2022年冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者。请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括:1.你的优势;2.相关经历。注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijing2022WinterOlympicGamesareneeded.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作提示】1.本文为提纲式应用文,人称以第一人称为主。2.写作要点:①自身的优势;②介绍自己的相关经历。【参考范文】DearSir/Madam,IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijing2022WinterOlympicGamesareneeded.I’mwritingtoapplyforthisposition.IbelieveIamqualifiedforthejob.IhaveagoodmandofEnglishandI’mconfidentingivingplayersguidanceandhelpasrequired.What’smore,Ihaveanextensiveknowledgeofwintersports,whichwillprovehelpfulinmunicatingwithplayers.Inaddition,Ihavebeeninvolvedinseveralinternationalexchangeprograms,andenjoyspreadingourculturetoforeigners.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Yourssincerely,LiHua【出彩语句】1.出彩词汇bequalifiedfor 有……的资格haveagoodmandof 精通haveanextensiveknowledgeof 非常了解2.出彩结构①What’smore,Ihaveanextensiveknowledgeofwintersports,whichwillprovehelpfulinmunicatingwithplayers.(非限制性定语从句)②Inaddition,Ihavebeeninvolvedinseveralinternationalexchangeprograms,andenjoyspreadingourculturetoforeigners.(被动语态)③Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.(委婉语气)5.做好起承转合,行文美不胜收完成了审题的过程,有了具体要点和整体布局后,就要整合信息点,让庞杂的内容变得富有逻辑性和层次感。在句与句内在衔接的基础上,做到段落间的起承转合,使文章有整体性、连贯性。学会正确使用连接词、衔接句,能为写作助一臂之力。Ⅰ.用好连接词在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词语是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。连接性词语归纳如下:1.起始关系:tobeginwith,firstofall,asweallknow,asisknown,asisshownin...,accordingto等。Asweallknow,goodlearninghabitscontributetoefficientstudy.2.时间顺序:atthebeginning,then,later,finally,atlast,intheend,afterwards,sincethen,afterthat,immediately,meanwhile等。Atthebeginning,Icollectedallthethingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Imoppedthefloor.3.条件关系:if,unless,incase(of),as/solongas,onconditionthat,provided(that)等。Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldmeetmyuncleattheairport.4.转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,nevertheless等。However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwelostit.5.因果关系:because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult/consequence等。Therefore,thereisnoreasonforustolookdownuponordinaryjobs.6.并列关系:and,or,aswellas,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not...but...,neither...nor...等。WewillhaveagoodtimethereandIwillsendyousomephotostakenthere.7.递进关系:besides,what’smore,moreover,furthermore,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,moreimportantly等。Manyofthemcanhardlylookafterthemselves,stilllessmanagetheirownlives.8.列举事实:suchas,forexample/instance,take...forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...,foronething...foranother...等。Ontheonehand,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents;ontheotherhand,Icangainsomeexperiencefromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.9.表示观点:inmyopinion,inmyview,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforme,personally等。AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.10.总结:inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral,generallyspeaking等。Allinall,travelingisthebestchoiceforustoenrichourlivesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.Ⅱ.写好衔接句1.引出开头Itiswellknowntousthat...我们都知道……Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned...据我所知……Recentlytheproblemof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus.=Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernovertheproblemof...最近……问题引起了关注2.表达不同观点People’sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat...However,othersbelievethat...Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson...人们对……可能会持有不同见解3.表示结尾Inshort,itcanbesaidthat...总之,……意思是……Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecanetotheconclusionthat...从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论……4.提出建议Itishightimethatweputanendtothetrend.该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。Onlyinthiswaycanwe...只有这样,我们才能……。5.预示后果Obviously,ifwedon’tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat...willleadusindanger.6.表示观点AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion...就我来说……7.给出原因或顺序Foronething,...foranotherthing,...=Ontheonehand,...ontheotherhand...一方面……另一方面……请根据上下文填写适当的连接词,并体会其用法。DearLucy,I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingdifficultyinlearningmath.Asiswellknowntous,mathisplayingamoreandmoreimportantroleinthedevelopmentofscience.You’dbetterhavebothfeetonthegroundinseveralaspects.Firstly,interestisthebestteacher,sotrytogetinterestedinit.Secondly,it’sreallyimportanttoformagoodhabitoflearningmath.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldmakeeveryefforttodevelopallkindsofabilitiesconcerninglearningmath.

Pleaserememberthathardworkpaysoff.Yours,LiHua6.恰当增加细节,语言魅力动人根据高考英语作文的评分标准,作文被分成了五个档次。其中分数较高的档次对于考生作文的要求都涉及了覆盖所有内容要点、使用较多语法结构和词汇、有效使用语句间的连接成分。其中,一个重要的方面就是在作文中要注意细节的体现。具体方法如下:1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明(1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingleuseproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.(2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.(3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。Iwouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→Iwouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjust