2021高考一轮复习英语通用考点十四短文改错练习题含答案解析

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一、短文改错（共56题）

1、改错：Doyoubelieveloveisthemostimportant?Intheearlytwentycentury,

homelesspeoplewereoftenbroughtupinorphanages,inthattheyreceivedlittle

love.Atonetime,DrSkeelstooktwelvechildrenfromanorphanageorhadayoung

girllookthemeachday.Healsostudiedanothertwelvechildrenwhoareleftinthe

orphanagealldaylong.Hefollowedthesechildrennotuntiltheygrewup,andthe

resultswereshocked.Thechildrenstayingalldayintheorphanagewereeitherdead

orsufferingfromseriousillnesses.However,thetwelvechildrenlovedbythegirl

wereallhealthyandindependently.Theonlydifferencebetweenthelifeofthese

children一thelove,madeagreatdifferencetous.

2、改错：YesterdaymorningIwasonmywaytowork.SuddenlyIstoppedbyawoman

onthesidewalk.SheaskedmeifIknewhowtogettoCASS,thatisalocalshelter

forthehomeless.Icouldtellshewasextremeupset,soItoldherI'dlookitup

forheronmysmartphones.Whilewaiting,shetoldmeshewaslosinganddidn，thave

moneyforthebus.Itookoutofa20dollarbillfrommypursebuthandedittoher.

ThenIaccompanyhertothenearestbusstop.Seethehappysmileonherfacebrightened

upmyday,either.

3、改错：ThemomentIsteppedinhighschool,Ihavemadeupmymindtostudyhard

forthepurposeofenteringthegooduniversity.Inthefirstyear,Imadealotof

newfriends,allofwhoweresoexcellent.Ifeltgreatpressureduringthesecond

year.MyscoreswentupordownandIfeltsoworrying.ItoldmethatIneeded

relaxation.Listentomusicwasagoodway.Besides,Iwouldliketalkwithmyfriends,

becausetheyunderstoodme.Wewouldhavesometeaintheshopandthensharesecret.

Whenwelaughedouthappy,alltheannoyancewoulddisappear.

4、改错：RecentlywehadaclassmeetingonthetopicofMyChineseDream.Some

mentionedtheinspiredChineseDreamthatwasputforwardbyPresidentXi.Andothers

talkedenthusiasticallyabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weareall

believethatthisdreamwillcometrueinthefuture.Ialsotalkedaboutmyowndream.

Ihadalwayswantedtobeadoctor.Notonlycandoctorssavepeople，slifebutthey

alsoaredoingarespectablyjob.Doctorscanalsohelppeopletoliveabetterlife

withouttheirprofessionalknowledge.Torealizemydream,Ishouldtrytoworkhardly

fromnowon.ImustlearnasmuchasIcangetintoagoodmedicalcollege,which

Icanpreparemyselffullyforthejobofadoctor.

5、Theenvironmentpollutionismoreandmoreseriouslytoday.Wehavenocleanwater

todrinkitbecauseofwaterpollution.Andwhentreescutdown,someanimalsdisappear.

Therewasmoreandmoredirtysmokeintheair.People，shealthhasbeengreatly

affectingbyair,noiseandwaterpollution.Manypeoplehavediedofdiseasecaused

bypollution.Inordertolivethebetterlife,it'stimeforustoprotectourworld.

Firstly,weshouldn，tthrowawayrubbisheverywhere.Andweshouldrecycle,reduce

andreusethings,whatsavesmoneyandreducespollution.Usethingssolongas

possible.Don，tuseplasticbags.Besides,wemustplantmoretreesandstoppeople

cutthemdown.Wehopeourworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.

6、改错：Danielwasbornwithabraindisorder.Becauseofit,hewasdifferently

fromotherchildren.Asaboy,helikestoplayaloneandactedstrangely.Tomany

ofhisclassmate,Danielseemedunusualandwelaughedathim.ThishurtDanieldeeply,

buthebecameveryshy.Asateenager,thingswerechanged.Danielfoundhecould

solvedifficultmathsproblemsalmostinstantly.Healsodiscoveredothertalent:

hecouldlearntospeakalanguageveryquickly.Today,heisfluentintwelfth

languages.Asadult,Danielhasovercomehisshyness.Hehaswrittentwobooksand

nowhetravelsconstantlytotalktopeoplewithhislife.

7、Peopleusedtocommunicatewitheachotherthroughlettersandpublicphones.

SonowadaystheyusemobilephonesandtheInternetinsteadof.Thischangein

communicationhavegoodeffectsonourworksandlife.Comparingwithlettersand

publicphones,mobilephonesandtheInternetarefastandmuchmoreconvenient.

Ifyoumissedyourgrandmother,youjusttakeoutyourphoneandsay“hello”to

him.Andshewillbehappytohearyourvoice.Ifyouwanttoplaceorderwitha

foreigncompany,youcanemailthemessage.It'11beminutesafteryougettheirreply.

8、改错：Tenyearsago,myhometownisasmallandpoorcitywithfewfactories.

Andthecitizenshadfewchoiceontransportation.However,nowadaysmyhometownhas

takenonbrandnewlookwithrapiddevelopmentofcultureandeconomy.Thecitizens'

livingconditionshavebeengreatlyimproveandtheirlifestylesaredifferentfrom

inthepast.Shoponlinehasbecomepopular.Whentheycomestotransportation,

privatecarshavebecomeacommonwayoftravelingbesidepublictransportation.The

bestchangeiswhichallthepeoplearelivingahopefullifewithconfident.

9、改错：Whenitcametocityandcountrylife,Ithinktheyallhavetheirown

advantagesanddisadvantages.Forcitylife,youknow,thetrafficistooconvenient

thatyoucanarrangeyourlifeflexibleandeasily.Atsametime,therearemanygreat

opportunityforyouwhenlookingforjobs.Also,thereisnodoubtthatthequality

oflifeisfantastic.Unfortunately,livedincities,youwillsuffermuchstress

andheavyairpollution.

Forcountrylife,asweallknowit,thelifeispeacefulandtheenvironmentis

beautiful,whichisbothgoodforyourhealth.Therefore,itisinconvenientfor

peopletogoout.Besides,thecommunicationisn，teasy.

10、改错：MaoZhaomudropoutofhighschoolseveralyearsago.Nowtheselftaught

EnglishlearnerhasbeenadmittedtooneofChina，stopforeignlanguageuniversity,

SichuanInternationalStudiesUniversity,thatheusedtodeliverfoodtostudents.

Maoonceworkedadeliverymanforarestaurant.AndhechattedhappywithEnglish

learnersonlineinhersparetime.Thereweremuchgrammaticalmistakes,butthat

didn，tpreventhimfromchatting.ToseizeeverychancetostudyEnglish,hewould

memorizewordswhilewaitforcustomers.Maosaidthathowhehopedverymuchtobecome

aninterpreter.Whoeverhaveadreamanddarestoseekitisaloveliestperson.

11>改错：DearPeter,

I5mverygladtoreceiveyouremailaskingforinformationaboutthehostfamilywe

havearrangedyoutostaywith.

Locatinginabeautifulandquietneighborhood,thehousewasbigenoughtoenable

youtohavearoomofyourown.Apartfromtheconvenientpublictransportation,our

privatecarwillmakeyourvisitsdifficult.Becauseallthefamilymemberscanspeak

fluentlyEnglishandhaveoutgoingpersonalities,I'msureyouwillhavenotrouble

tocommunicatingwiththem.Aboveall,theyhostedtheAmericanstudentlastyear,

throughthattheygainedlotsofexperience.Inaddition,thehostesscookingwill

guaranteeyouawonderfulchanceoftastingdeliciousChinesefood.

Hopeyouenjoyyourstayhere.

Yours,

LiHua

12、改错：Agroupofexchangestudentsvisitedourschoolinlastweek.Tohelpthem

betterunderstandourteadrinkingculture,Ileadthemtothetearoominourschool

andintroducedthehistoryofteaculturetothem.Tomydelightful,theyallfound

myintroductioninteresting.ThenIshowedthemwhattomaketea.Isatatatable,

slowlyexplaineverystepoftheprocesswhilemakingtea.Allofthemweretooamazed

thattheycouldn，twaithaveatrythemselves.Soontheatmosphereinthetearoom

becamecheerfullyandlivelyandwehadalotoffunspracticingmakingtea.Inan

end,wetookagroupphototomemorizethisunforgettablemoment.

13、改错：Onemonthbefore,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,

Iwasnervousandinlowspiritbecauseofmypoorperformance.WhenIwasatthe

lossandonthepointofgivingup,myheadteachercomfortedmeanddiscusswith

methereasonsformyfailureintheexam.Moreunforgettable,hemanagedtohelp

mewithmystudyandinspiredus.Determinedtoliveuptheexpectationsofmyteachers

andmyparents,Idevotedmyselftosolvealltheproblemsinmystudyandthenmade

progress.I'mmorethangratefulforthathehasdoneforme.I'vegottoknowit

isnevertoomuchlatetogetbackwhenthereisstillhope.

14、改错：Lastweekyouvisitedmyschool,andonthelastdayofyourtourafarewell

partyheldattheStudentsCentre.DuringthepartyIsatthenexttoyou.Whenwe

left,wetookeachother，snotebookonmistake.InoticedthiswhenIopenitand

foundyournameoryourphonenumberinit.Iamsendingyournotebooksbypostto

you.Willyoupleasesendingminetomeattheaddresswhereisgiveninmyletter?

Thankyouverymuch.Iextremeexpectyoucanvisitmyschoolagainifitisconvenient

forme.

15>改错：IstillrememberhowIbecomeagoodtabletennisplayer.Thefirstday

Iwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingthetabletennis.Amazed

athowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateon,Ioftenwatched

themcarefullylearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpracticeduntilIbecameconfident

enoughtochallengehim.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayerin

myclass.

Iamreallyproudinthisexperience.Ithelpsmerealizewhatweallcanfulfill

ourpotentialandhaveourgoalsachievethroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetter

understandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”

16、改错：DearJinJing,

Yourproblemiscommononeamongmiddleschoolstudents.Maybethefollowing

advicescanhelpyou.Firstinall,believeinyourself.Yourgreatestproblem

isthatyoulackselfconfidence.Thefirstthingyoumustdoitistosmileatyour

classmates.Onesmilespeaksloudaboutyourwishtomakefriendsthanany

word.Yoursmilewillshowthatyouarefriendlytohim.Next,tryingtalking

withastudentwhoisasshyasyouorwhosharethesameinterestasyou.Youcan

discussyourstudieswithaclassmateandyoucanalsotalkaboutyour

hobbies.Unlesssomeoneisintrouble,youshouldbereadytohelphimor

her.Onceyouhaveconfidence,youcanmakeasmanyfriendsaspossibly.

Yours,

Lily

17、（2018,全国卷I）Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmy

fathertovisitmygrandparents.

18、（2018,全国卷I）LastwinterwhenIwentthereagain,theyhadabigseparate

housetoraisedozensofchicken.

19^（2018,全国卷II）Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.

20、（2018•全国卷III）Everyonewassilent,waitingtoseewhowouldbecalledupon

toreadhisandherparagraphaloud.

21、（2018•全国卷I）Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturn

foreverytwoyears,andheagreed.

22、改错：（2019•全国卷1）1becameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmall

accident.OneafternoonwhereIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschool

playground.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.Istopped

theballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryone，ssurprising,the

ballwentintothenet.Allthefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,

saythatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromnowon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwith

classmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.

23>改错：（2019•全国卷H）SinceIwasakid,I'veconsidereddifferentjobIwould

liketodo.First,Iwantedtobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.Then,

whenIwasinthefivegrade,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglish

teachertoomuch.WhenIstudiedchemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmygoalor

decidedtobeadoctor.Theyweretworeasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwas

amazingatthefactthatasickpersoncouldfeelmuchmorebetterafterseeinga

doctor.AndtheotheristhatIwantedtohelppeopleinneed.

24、改错：（2019•全国卷HI）I'vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydream

istoopensacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.

WhatIwantisnotjustanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafe

haveaspecialthemesuchaslike“TangDynasty”.Inthecafe,customerswillenjoy

yourselvesinthehistoricalenvironmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedin

manageone,Iwillopenmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.

Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.

25>改错：（2020•河北衡水中学高三第一次联考）ItwasraininglightwhenIgotup

yesterday.Afteraquickbreakfast,Itookaumbrellawithmeandwenttoschoolin

ahurry.Itwasfifteenminutesafterschoolbegan.IwasrunningquicklywhenIsee

anoldmanwalkingslowlyintherain.Istopped,wonderedwhethertohelphimor

not,asImightbelateforschool.ThenImadeadecisionwalkhimhome.Aboutten

minuteslate,wearrivedathishouse.Hethankedformeagainandagain.Ismiled

andsaiditwasnothing.IwaslatewhenIgottoschool.Hearingmystory,thehead

teacher,thatwasgivinghislecture,praisedmebeforeallthestudent.

26、改错：（2020•黄冈市高三质量检测）Inthebeginningofthenewterm,ourschool

organizedmilitarytraining.Inthefirstthreeday,ourinstructortaughtushow

towalkandstoodlikearealsoldier.Onthelastdayofmilitarytraining,wewere

honoringforourachievements.Throughourefforts,theywonthefirstprize.After

thefourdaymilitarytraining,myclassmatesandIwasexpressedourthanksforour

instructor，shardlywork.Henotonlytaughtushowtobehavelikeasoldierbutalso

showedusmeaningofhonororteamwork.NeverwillIforgetthathetaughtme.

27、改错：（2020•安徽省合肥市八校高三第一次联考）RecentlyI'vedoneasurveyinour

classonmyclassmatesthinkofads.Themajorityofmyclassmatetakeapositive

attitudetoadsinthatadsdobringusconvenient.Otherstudentsarguethatbeing

largelyexposingtoadsmayleadtothesamenessrangingfromclothes,sheltersto

transportation.

Frommypointoftheview,Iprefertheformeropiniontothelatterforthefollowing

reasons.Thefirstreasonisrootedinthefactthattherewasvariousadssothat

peoplehavevariouschoices.Secondly,withads,thatwouldbedifficulttogetacross

aproduct'sbasicmessage.However,ads,insteadofmakingpeopleseemtobethesame,

contributesgreatlytopeople，sbetterlife.

28、改错：（2020•安徽省六安市毛坦厂中学东城校区高三模拟）

Sunny31st,July

ItwassunnytodayandIwasinagoodmood.Tiredofstudyingorthenoiseofcity

life,Icometotheecologyparktoenjoysceneryandgetrelaxingintheafternoon.

Whi1eIarrivedatthepark,whatcameintoitssightwerethethickgreentrees.

Theairwasfresh.Inaddition,Icouldclearlyseeapatharoundthepond.Lying

onthegrassesdecoratedwithvariousflowers,IfeltwitheasebecauseallthatI

wantedwaspeaceinside.

Therefore,withtimegoingbyquickly,thesunwassettinginthewest.SoIhadto

returnbackhome.Iwouldneverforgetsuchromanticexperience,whichwasreally

beyonddescription.

29、改错:（2017,全国卷I）Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,I

tookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettinginto

thecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor'sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,

mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkept

repeatingtheword,uSpeedup!”“Slowdown!”"Turningleft!”Iwassomuch

nervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,the

instructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystop

justinthemiddleontheroad.

30、改错：（2017•全国卷II）MrandMrsZhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefar

fromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.

Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,

thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthe

vegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,they

oftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywill

invitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!

31、改错:（2017•全国卷IIDWhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhow

fasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfew

years.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhigh

schoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpictureare

thethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime：carmagazinesandmusical

instruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,

andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappy

memoriesofyourhighschooldays.

32、改错：（2020•贵州省安顺市高三联考）Today,Isawthefunnyincidenthappening

outsideagroceryshop.Twolittlekidswereplayingtogetherhappy.Onewasvery

fatwithalargestomach,whichwaseatingjunkfood.Theotherkidreachedoutor

felthisstomach,joking,“Seehowbigyourstomachitis,butyouarestilleating

much!”Iamusedandlookedattheotherkid.Icouldn'thelplaughoutashewas

muchfatterwithanevenlargestomach!

Inyouropinion,itisnogoodhavingtoomuchjunkfood,whichmightbetoblame

onthefatnessofchildren.

33、改错：（2020•河南省高三阶段性考试（三））Today,anincidentimpressedmedeep.Mom

askedmetobuyabagofflourinashoprunningbyanelderlycouple.Ontheway,

itoccurredtothemthatIhadnocashwithme.

ThenIthoughtIcouldpayonitwithmyphone,soIwasafraidthattheycouldn，t

receivemoneybyphone.Afterall,theywerenearly70yearold.Theymightbeso

mucholdthattheyweren"tfamiliarwithonlineservice.Tomysurprise,whenIasked

anelderlywifeifIcouldpaybyphone,shepointstothesignonthewall.Shesaid

proudly,“Ofcourse,youcanscanit!”Ifelthappyseeouradvancedsociety!

34、改错：（2020•长沙市一中高三月考试卷（二））

Deareditor,

IconsidermeafaithfulreaderofAdvancedmagazinebecauseIhavereaditforabout

tenyears.Therefore,itisthefirsttimethatIhavesentmyfeedbacktoyou.

Havingreadthearticleaboutambition,Istartedtoreflectofmyownlife.Lost

inwhichIampursuing,IoftenforgettheprocessIshouldhavebeenenjoyed.Your

articleremindsmeofthesignificantofgratitude,agoodstateofmindandseize

theday.Fortunately,IrealizedIfocusedthatmuchonachievements,theresults

mightevenbackfire.

Thankyoufortheusefulandpracticaltipsofferingattheendofthearticle.This

experiencewillbecomeanuniquepartofmylife,eventuallyhelpingmethroughthe

unexpectedbutappealinglifejourney.

Bestregards,

Claire

35、改错：（2020•吉林省辉南县一中高三上学期第二次月考）1takepartintheCultural

ExchangeWeekinLondonlastmonth.Honestspeaking,Ienjoyedmyselfinacity.I

paidavisittoacitymuseumandsomeplacesinterest.Theymademehaveabetter

understandingoftheBritishsociety,cultureorhistory.Ofcourse,Ialsomade

severalnewfriendthere,whohobbiesaresimilartomine.What'smore,Iwaslucky

tocallonapenfriend,Johnson,whohadbeenintouchwithmyselfforalongtime.

Iwillneverforgetthemosthappiestdaysthatwespenttogether.Whenreturning

toChinasafely,Ifeltverysatisfying.

36、改错：（2018,全国卷I）Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewith

myfathertovisitmygrandparents.Ifindachangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,

theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.Lastwinter

whenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.

Theyalsohadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummerthey

earnedquitealotbysellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.

Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,

butheagreed.

37>改错:（2018•全国卷H）WhenIwaslittle,Friday，snightwasourfamilygamenight.

Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,

Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,

myparentswouldnottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswould

helpmybrain.StillIunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn'trealize

howrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.Thegamesmyparentstaught

mewhereIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.

38、改错：（2018•全国卷HI）ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.

Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraph

aloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity,others

werenervousandanxious.IhaddonemyselfhomeworkbutIwasshy.Iwasafraidthat

tospeakinfrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmy

fatheroncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearning

fromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell."Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.

39、改错：（2020•河南省焦作市高三定位考试）LastSunday,whileeatinarestaurant,

Inoticedabowlfullofdumplingsonthetablenexttomine.Theymusthaveleft

bysomeone.Justthen,anoldmancamein.Judgingfromherclothes,Ibelievedhe

werepoor.Hesawthedumplingsleftonthetable.Beingshyly,hesatdownandstarted

eating.Theothersaroundlookathim,puzzled,butsomeevenlaughedathim.Therefore,

afterfinishingthedumplings,hewentuptothedonationboxonthecounter,put

onehundredyuaninitandleft,leavingusallshockedandashamedabout.

Weshouldn，tjudgeapersonjustfromhisorherappearance.Apersonwhichhasa

lovingheartistherichestintheworld.

40、改错：（2020•黑龙江省牡丹江一中高三学年上学期检测）Waterisveryimportantto

us,withoutthattherewouldbenolife.Wecouldn'tliveifwedidn，thavewater.

Therefore,somepeopledon，tturnthetapoffatonceafterusingit.Somepeople

don，trealizetheywashthemintheshowertoolong.Someeventhrowawaybottles

fullinwater.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldmakegreateffortstosavewater.

Ononehand,everysingleperson，ssavewaterissignificance.Onotherhand,wecan

usesomewaterwejustusedtowateringplants.Weshouldn，tleavethetaprunning

forwhilewebrushourtooth.

41、改错：（2020,山西省祁县中学高三月考）Lastwinter,thesmogoccurredalotoftime.

Itbroughtmuchinconveniencetoourdailylifeordidgreatharmtoourhealth.Many

trafficaccidentshadhappenedjustbecauseoftheheavysmogweather.Inaddition,

quitealotofflightshadtoputoffandagreatnumberofpeoplestayedathome

tokeepthemawayfromtheharmfulair.Somepeoplesufferedofbadcoughs,sore

throatsandotherseriousdiseasescausebythesmog.Ithinkwhomeverlivesonthe

earthshouldtrytoplaythepartintheenvironmentalprotection.Isupporttheidea

thatwecantrytodrivemoreandbuyenvironmentallyfriendlyproductstoimprove

theairquality.

42、改错：（2019,甘肃省静宁一中高三一模）Thereistoomanypeopleandtoomany

pollutionontheearth.Ifwemovedtothemoononeday,howwouldlifebelikethere?

Inmyopinion,lifewouldbemuchmorecomfortonthemoonthanontheearth.There

wouldn，tbepollutionortrafficjam.Wecouldgowhereverwelikeinoneminuteby

thespaceship,whichwouldbemuchfastthanatrainoranairplane.Wewouldeat

whateveryoulikewithoutbeingconcernedunhealthyingredients.Thisisaplacewhere

Iamalwaysdreamingabout.

43＞改错：（2019•广东省惠州市高三第一次调研考试）Withonlyoneyeartogobefore

graduation,ourclassdecidedtoplanttreenotonlytoimprovethesurroundingsof

theschool,butalsotomakeamemoryofourschoollife.

Afterpurchaseseedlings,wechoseaplacethattheseedlingscouldgetproperwater

andsunshine.Wedidn，trealizehowhardlyitwasuntilwebeganourwork.Noneof

uswerefamiliartoplanting,andnordidweknewhowtousegardeningtools.After

manyattempts,wedugholesandputseedlingsintoit.Thenwegrabbedsoilfillup

theholes.Itwasnotsoeasyasimagined,andwesuccessfullyfinishedthetaskat

thelast.

44、改错：（2019,陕西省部分学校摸底检测）Mostpeopleexpecttheirbirthdaysbecause

ofthepresentstheyreceivethem.Ihavebeengettingmybirthdaypresentsbutnone

ofwhichhavebeenremarkablesofar.Myparentsalwaysgivemebookswhichisfine

butordinary.Then,onmyseventeenbirthday,Igotthebestpresentever.Therewas

awhiteenvelope.Iopeneditandfindakeyandanote."Happybirthday,my

dearnephew!”waswrittenonhand.ItwasfromhisAuntJess.Ilookedat