Unit4SectionB3aselfcheck写作突破龟兔赛跑英语八年级上册

故事、写作突破SectionB3a3b写作目标本单元的写作话题是“描述传说故事”。重点是用含有由assoonas,so...that...,unless等连词引导的状语从句的复合句来表达。在书写时，要注意这些连词引导的从句的时态。可用的短语短句积累1.代替;反而insteadofonceuponatime3.爱上;喜欢上fallinlovewith……的路上_onone'sway...……就……assoonas……以至于……so...that...[句型]1.从前有一位农民。Onceuponatime,therewasafarmer.2.尽管你可能会遇到很多困难,但你不能放弃。Although/Thoughyoumay meet many difficulties.youcan'tgiveup.3.你们一醒来就必须和爸爸去森林里。(教材P30)Assoonasyouwakeup,youmustgototheforestwithyourfather.4.如果你不努力学习的话,你将不会取得好成绩。Youwon'tbeabletogetgoodgradesunlessyoustudyhard./Youwon'tbeabletogetgoodgradesifyoudon'tstudyhard.写作指导[经典例题]同学们,你们一定听过《守株待兔》这则故事吧。请根据下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍一下这则故事。提示:1.一位农夫在田里干活的时候看到一只野兔撞在了树桩上;2.农夫把野兔拿回家,做了一顿美食;3.之后,农夫每天都守在树桩旁,希望能再次碰到撞死的野兔。提示词:hare野兔 treestump树桩by accident偶然runinto遇到;撞到[思路点拨]1.体裁:记叙文。2.人称:以第三人称为主。3.时态:以一般过去时为主。4.思路:首先点明故事发生的时间;然后陈述具体内容;最后进行概括总结。[写作提纲] 发生的时间 farmer... Onceuponatime,therewasa 具体的内容Oneday,whilehewas...hesaw...Sofromthenon,he...讲述的道理Thisstorytellsuswewillgetnothingunlessweworkhard...[高分范文]Onceuponatime,therewasafarmer.Oneday,whilehewasworkingonthefarm,hesawaharerunintoatreestumpbyaccidentanddied.Thefarmertooktheharehomeandcookedadeliciousmealforhimself.Thatnight,hethought,“Idon'thavetoworksohard.AllIhavetodoiswaitforahareeverydaybythetreestump."Sofromthenon,hegaveupfarming,andwaitedbythetreestump.Butjustfromthenon,heneversawanotherharerunintothetreestump.Thisstorytellsuswewillgetnothingunlessweworkhard.Remember:nopain,nogain.写作练兵根据图画提示,用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，描述《龟兔赛跑》这则故事。Onceuponatime,therewasarabbit.Itlikedrunning.Onedayatortoisedecidedtopetewiththerabbit.Alltheanimalswenttowatchthegame.Atfirst,therabbitranveryfastandthetortoisewalkedveryslowly.Therabbitthoughtitransofastthatthetortoisewasn'tabletocatchupwithit.Soitfellasleepunderatree.However,thetortoisekeptonwalkingwithouttakingabreak.Finally,thetortoisewonthegameandalltheanimal