Unit1ReadingforWriting建议信讲评课件高中英语人教版

Unit1TeenageLife

Polishyourwriting假定你是李华，你收到一封来自朋友Lucy的电子邮件，她在邮件中说自己刚上高一，在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难，希望你给她一些建议。请你根据以下内容给她回封邮件：1.写信目的和表示安慰；2.给出建议和原因；3.表达希望。

注意：1.词数80词左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。lead-inbeginningmainbody

endingoutlinewishsuggestions

+reasons/benefits

showunderstanding+writingpurpose

(giveadvice)高考应用文给分标准第五档（很好）(13～15分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务。(1)覆盖所有内容要点，表达清楚、合理；(2)应用了较多复杂、高级的语法结构和词汇；(3)语法即使有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；表现了较强的语言运用能力；(4)自然流畅地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。注意：书写差，给分降档Usefulcohesivewords(衔接词)：*Firstly/forastart/firstofall*Secondly/moreover/furthermore/inaddition/what’smore/besides*Thirdly/thelastpoint/thelastbutnottheleastagoodcompositionstructurecontentslanguageCommonproblems（一）structure分段过多标点分段不清缺少衔接Commonproblems（二）contents要点不全内容不相关内容不具体Commonproblems（三）language语言累赘句型单一Howtopolish

yourwriting?Polishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourhandwriting（书写）Comparethesetwosentences.Whichsentencedoyouthinkcanattracttheteachers?Polishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourlanguage1.YoutellmethatEnglishisdiificulttolearn.2.I'minformedthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglish.PolishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourlanguageA.excellentwordsandphrases(词汇短语的选择灵活新颖)B.

avarietyofsentencepatterns(句型结构运用高级多变）excellentwordsandphrases1.IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavesometroubleinlearningEnglish.Polish:IunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterribleaboutlearningEnglish.

oushouldlistentotheteachercarefully.Polish:Youaresupposedtoconcentrateon/focusontheclass.excellentwordsandphrases3.YoushouldreadEnglishaloudinthemorning.

Polish:ReadingEnglishaloudinthemorning____________toyourEnglishlearning.4.

ItisbeneficialtoimproveyourEnglish.(改为beof+名词）Polish:It_____________toimproveyourEnglish.isofbenefitUseavarietyofsentencepatterns丰富句型5.ReadingEnglishbookshelpsalot.(改为强调句）Polish:____isreadingEnglishbooks_____helpsalot.6.Ihopemysuggetionswillbeofgreathelp.(改为强调句）Polish:

I____hopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelp.Itthat

do

Useavarietyofsentencepatterns丰富句型7.Inthisway,youcanmakegreatprogressinEnglish.(改为倒装句）Polish:____inthisway,____youmakegreatprogressinEnglish.8.Whenyouarehavingclass,youshouldlistencarefully.(改为省略句）Polish:

When______class,youshouldlistencarefully.OnlycanhavingUseavarietyofsentencepatterns丰富句型9.YourEnglishwillimprovebytalkingwithothersinEnglish.(改为状语从句）Polish:

___youtalkwithothersinEnglish,yourEnglishwillimprove.10.YoushouldhaveagoodattitudetowardslearningEnglish.Ithelpsalot.(改为定语从句）Polish:YoushouldhaveagoodattitudetowardslearningEnglish，______helpsalot.IfwhichUseavarietyofsentencepatterns11.YoucanreadmorebookswhichiswritteninEnglish，thenyoucanlearnmorewords.（the+比较级，the+比较级）Polish:__________

Englishoriginalsyouread,_______

you'lllearnEnglish.Themore

thebetterUseavarietyofsentencepatterns(saying)12.Formingagoodhabitisimportant.practicemakesperfectPolish:：AsAristotleputsit，goodhabitsformedatyouthmakeallthedifference.Sowhynotformgoodhabits,suchastakingnotesandlisteningtotheteachercarefully