高考英语读后续写误会故事类+粗鲁男孩

高考英语读后续写语篇练习误会故事——粗鲁男孩1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文TheRudeBoyJamesSeltonwasoneoftherudestboysinthevillagewherehelived.Ifapersoninthestreetwaswelldressed,hewouldcryout,“Dandy(花花公子)!”Ifaperson’sclothesweredirtyortorn,hewouldthrowstonesathim,andannoyhimineveryway.Oneafternoon,justastheschoolwasdismissed,astrangerpassedthroughthevillage.Hisdresswasplainandsomewhatold,butneatandclean.Hecarriedacane(手杖)inhishand,ontheendofwhichwasabagandheworeabroad-brimmed(宽边的)hat.NosoonerhadJamesseenthestrangerthanhewinkedtohisplaymates,andsaid,“Nowforsomefun!”Hethensilentlywenttowardthestrangerfrombehind,and,knockingoffhishat,ranaway.4续写原文Themanturnedandsawhim,butJameswasoutofhearingbeforehecouldspeak.Thestrangerputonhishat,andwentonhisway.AgaindidJamesapproach,butthistime,themancaughthimbythearm,andheldhimtightly.However,hecontentedhimselfwithlookingatJamesamomentintheface,andthenpushedhimfromhim.Nosoonerhadthenaughtyboyfoundhimselffreeagainthanhebegantopelt(连读投掷)thestrangerwithdirtandstones.ButJameswasveryfrightenedwhenthemanwasstruckontheheadbyabrick,andbadlyhurt.Alltheboysranaway,andJamesskulked(偷偷摸摸走动)acrossthefieldstohishome.Ashedrewnearhishouse,hissisterCarolinecameouttomeethim,holdingupabeautifulgoldchainandsomenewbooksforhimtosee.ShetoldJames,asfastasshecouldtalk,thattheiruncle,whohadbeenawayseveralyears,hadcomehome,andwasnowinthehouse;thathehadbroughtbeautifulpresentsforthewholefamily;thathehadlefthiscarriageatthetavern(客栈),amileortwooff,andwalkedonfoot,soastosurprisehisbrother,theirfather.5段首句Paragraph1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.Paragraph2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了JamesSelton是他住的村子里最粗鲁的男孩之一，他经常捉弄他人。一天下午，放学时，一个陌生人经过村子，James开始捉弄这个陌生人，用砖块击中陌生人的头部并受重伤。James吓坏了赶紧回家，妹妹告诉他，他们的叔叔离开这里多年，现在回到家里，并给他们全家买了漂亮的礼物。9续写思路分析Para1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.由第一段首句内容“她说，当他穿过村子时，一些坏男孩向他扔石头。”可知，第一段可描写叔叔受伤的情况和James的担心和害怕，不敢回家。10续写思路分析Para2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.由第二段首句内容“他的叔叔走到他跟前，但当他看到他的脸时突然停住了。”可知，第二段可描写James的叔叔认出来他。James向叔叔坦白了自己的一切，如释重负，决定改掉自己低贱无理的举止。11续写思路分析续写线索意识到——害怕——羞愧——坦白——改正12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.意识到：realize/beawareof/becomeawareof②.交谈：talkwith/chatwith/haveachatwith③.坦白：confess/acknowledge/admit情绪类①.愉快地：happily/merrily/cheerfully②.羞愧：shame/disgrace13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Hearingthis,Jamesimmediatelyrealizedthatitwashethathurthisuncle.(运用了现在分词作状语和宾语从句)[高分句型2].Insidetheroomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,talkinghappilywithhisfather.(运用了倒装结构，with的复合结构，现在分词作状语)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.Hewasbadly/severelyhurtandthewoundwasjustovertheeye.Hearingthis,Jamesimmediatelyrealizedthatitwashethathurthisuncle.Shamefulandfrightened,hedarednotstepintothehouse.Atthattime,heheardhisfathercallinghimtocomein.“Whatmakesyoulooksopale?”askedCaroline,changinghertone.Withpalmssweating,hehadnochoicebuttoobey.Insidetheroomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,talkinghappilywithhisfather.WhatasenseofshamedidJamesnowfeel!Hangingdownhishead,hewalkedtoward/approachedhisuncle.16范文呈现Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.Thenhecried,“Oh!It’syou!”Butwhenhisunclesawthepuzzledfather,heimmediatelyexplainedthathejustmetJamesinthestreet.Inaflash,Jameslearntthathisunclewasreadytoforgivehim.Butfacingsuchakinduncle,hecouldn’tconcealhisguilt.Havingconfessedwhathehaddonetohisuncle,Jamesfeltrelieved.Heneverforgotthislessonsolongashelived.Itcuredhimentirelyofhislowandinsolent/rudemanners.17范文译文她说，当他穿过村庄时，一些邪恶的男孩向他扔石头。他受了重伤，伤口刚好在眼睛上方。听到这些，詹姆斯立刻意识到是他伤害了他的叔叔。他既羞愧又害怕，不敢进屋。这时，他听到父亲叫他进来。“是什么让你脸色这么苍白？”卡罗琳改变了语气问道。手掌冒汗，他别无选择，只好服从。房间里坐着一个陌生人，或者更确切地说是他的叔叔，他的前额被捆起来，和他的父亲愉快地交谈着。詹姆斯现在感到多么羞愧啊！他低着头朝叔叔走去。18范文译文他的叔叔走到他面前，但看到他的脸时突然停了下来。然后他喊道：