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ReadingforWritingWriteapageinawellnessbookbeclearaboutKayla’schangeandexperience.
learnhow
to
make
comparisons
appropriately.
writeapageforaclasswellnessbook
following
Kayla’s
sample.LearningaimsWatchthecartoonandfindoutNed'sproblemandhowhesolvedit.1.WhatwasNed'sproblem?2.HowdidNedsolvetheproblem?Neddidn'talwaysfeelaswellashistwinbrotherandhewishedtofeel1.______(well).AfairyGodcoach(一个神仙教练)toldhimthatheshouldmakebetter2._______(choose).choicesbetterAgirlcalledkaylaalsohadthesameproblemsandalsomadebetterchoices.AccordingtothepictureandtheaboveinformationonPage42,Wherecanwereadherstory?Ahighschoolclasshasawellnessbook(健康簿)inwhichtheyexchangeideasabouthealthandfitness.Let'sreadthepassageandlearntowriteourownwellnessbook.Whatisthepassageabout??PredictionSportsorfitnessInwhatorderwasthepassagewritten?Intimeorder.Whatdoestheauthortellus?Whatistheresult?While-readingReadingfororganizationShewasworriedaboutherweightandtriedsomeways.Shealmostwentbananas.3.Whatdoesthesentence“Ialmostwentbananas”mean?gobananas:tobecomeangry;togocrazyeatnormallyfor5daysaweek;eatlittleornofoodontheothertwodays.worryactionmoodthepastproblemAnarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat?”peopleshouldbeasking“AmIfit?”Readthesecondparagraphandanswerthequestion.ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat?”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit?”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight,thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”,Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed,Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveaburgernowandthen,butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.2.Whatmadeherchangeherthinking?1.Whathappenedinthispara?aturningpointFinally,Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead,ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier..1.Canyoufindoutherchanges?2.HowabouttheresultbyKayla’schanges?A.Shebecameslimmer.B.Shebecamestricterwithherbody.C.Shebecamehappierandhealthier.D.Shebecameanactress.Shestoppedcomparingherselfwithactresses...Shemadealistofthethingsshelikedaboutherself.CactionmoodthepresentworryaboutmyweightReading:structuresThepastThepresentResultHerproblem:HerwayFeelings:Somechanges:(具体有哪些改变呢?)triedeverynewdiet,no-fatorlow-fat(thedifferencesbetweenthepastandnow)happierandhealthierWhatrhetoricaldevicesdoestheauthoruse?BycomparisonCirclethewordsandphrasestoshowsimilaritiesanddifferencesGOINGPOSITIVEIalwayswantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTVeventhoughIknewthatitwasimpossible.IworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdietIreadaboutonline.
Itriednofat,low-fat,
5:2,onlybananas,no
bananas—I
almostwentbananas,
too.ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“Amlfat?”Ishouldbeasking“Amfit?”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight,thingsbegantochange.
Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”,
Iwouldsay“lwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“lwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.
RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed,
Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.
lcouldstillhaveaburgernowandthen,butlwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally,Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead,
ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.ReadingforlanguageTips:Whendoingcomparison,remembertousetheexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences,suchaslike,ratherthan,insteadof,etc.表示“不同”和“相同”的提示词ExpressionstoshowsimilaritiesExpressionstoshowdifferences:moreexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferencesIalways…looklike…still;both…and…Insteadof…;…makeadifference;…ratherthan
…;but..…stoppedcomparing…with…
Instead,
though/although/yet/however;incontrastwith(与…对比之下);ontheotherhand;differentfrom…;thedifferenceis…
besimilarto…;thesameas…;have…incommonwith;Choosetheproperwordsorphrasestoexpressthesamemeaning.Iusedtodrivetowork.NowIstarttowalktowork.insteadratherthaninsteadof1.NowIstarttowalktowork_____________drivetowork.2.NowIdon’tdrivetowork._________,Istarttowalktowork.3.NowIstarttowalktowork___________drivingtowalk.ratherthanInsteadinsteadofBodyshame身材焦虑Thereisnoabsolutestandardforbeauty.美是没有绝对标准的。Post-readingpara.1:Problemsinthepastpara.2:Changesatpresentpara.3:Theresults1.Startwithageneralstatementaboutyourproblem.2.TellthereaderhowandwhyyouchangedorwanttochangeDescribethechanges3.Showtheresultafterchanging.Ialwaysdid.../Iusedtodo...Tip1:thepastsimple(过去时态)isamustThenIcameacross/readanarticlewhichsaid...Tip2:Theturningpointmaybeabook,amovie,antalkingwithateacherandsoon.Insteadof...,Iwoulddo.../Ratherthan...,Idid...Tip3:Whendoingcomparison,remembertousetheexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences,suchaslike,than,however,etc.Finally,,Bydoing...Ibecame...Tip4:usesomelinkingwordstoshowtime,suchas:first,then,again,after,finally,laterandsoon.WritingstructureWriteyourownwellnessbookwiththehelpofthefollowingchart.
Writing说明问题:Iworriedabout+n/doingIusedto+动词原形,butit’sunhealthy.Ialwayswantedto+动词原形,butIfailed.2.如何解决问题/做出改变+原因:After+doing(在看了什么书/听谁说了什么之后等),Ibegantochange.ThenIstarted+doinginsteadof+doingsth,because….Insteadof+doingsth,Iwould+动词原形,because….Ratherthan+doingsth,I+v-ed,because….Icouldstill+动词原形,butIwould+动词原形,because…3.总结结果,提出希望:Finally/Asaresult,IstoppeddoingsthandbegantodosthBybeingpositiveaboutmyself,Ibecamehappierandhealthier.AtfirstbutThenForexamplesBesides/Finally如何加上过渡词?Exercise:IneverdoanysportsandIalwaysstayupbecauseIhatesexercise.Pre-writingFood:IlovetoeatMcDonald’sfoodandhateeatinganyvegetablesandfruits.Stress:I’manxiousaboutmyscore,soIalwayssitsinclassroomandstudyallthetime.Self-confidence:IamalwaysunconfidentinmyselfanddonotthinkthatIhaveanystrengths,soI’mafraidofmakingfriendswithothers.Doyouhaveanyproblemintheseaspects?Whataretheresultsoftheseproblems?Icannotsleepwellandalwaysinlowspirits.Ibecomefatandcannotwalkorrunfast.Iamafraidtogotoanycompetitionandhavenofriends.IhavenotahealthybodyandIgetsickeasily.请根据下面的提示,写一篇关于自己的健康报告书。Para1两年前1.忙于学习,经常感到疲劳、焦虑、压力很大。2.无法平衡学习和休息。Para2转折点及行动
Para3现在1.感到精神焕发,精力充沛。2.可以平衡学习和休息。3.学习效率提高了。Brainstorm:Whatkindofturningpointandactionsdoyouthinkwillchangesuchasituation?Para1Beginning+Thepa
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