2021-2022学年广东省高三上学期联考英语基础写作讲评课件

11月26日高三英语考试基础写作日期：2021年11月30日Afterclass:1.Youcanclearlyknowtheformsofletter.2.Youcananalysewhatchallengeswewouldfaceifweareanassistanteditor.3.Youcanknowhowtoaskothersforadvice.LearningaimsContents01Enjoysomewritings04Reviseyourwriting02Detaillearning03Summary01EnjoysomewritingsEnjoysomewritings01格式！01格式+书写！Enjoysomewritings01正确的修改示范！Enjoysomewritings01注意分段啊！Enjoysomewritings01老师也学过拼音滴，休想蒙混过关！EnjoysomewritingsIbecameaworkerinourschollEnglishnewspaper.Mydutyistohelptheeditor.01Enjoysomewritings01Enjoysomewritings01EnjoysomewritingsHowiseverythinggoing?开头不够吸引人！01内容！Enjoysomewritings02DetaillearningDetaillearning02评分标准1.告知他此消息；3分2.分析你面临的挑战；6分3.征询他的建议；3分4.其他（书写；高级词汇句型；连接等）3分02写作三部曲：1、审体裁（类型、人称、时态、要点信息）2、连词成句（将所需要的信息用句式、短语翻译成句）3、连句成篇（将句子用恰当的衔接词、衔接句链接成篇）Detaillearning分析题目011、审体裁类型：人称：时态：要点信息：求助信第一人称一般现在时1.告知他此消息2.分析你面临的挑战3.征询他的建议1.告知

2.被录用3.助理编辑4.校英文报5.一则消息要点信息一：tell;share;informsbthatapieceofgoodnewsbecome;beadmittedto;beselected/chosenas;work;joinassitanteditorschoolEnglishnewspaper分析面临的挑战1.会占用自己太多课余时间2.没有相关经验3.不熟悉电脑，打字不快4.内向，怕与人打交道要点信息二：？英语能力不足；语法不过关；口语不好；occupy;sapretime;balancesth.withsth.relevantexperiencebefamiliarwithbeafraidof要点信息三：征询他的意见1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermesomesuggestions.2.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldhelpmetodealwiththeseproblems.衔接词：适用于三点1）首先:tobeginwith,firstandforemost,mostimportantofall2）

而且、此外：then,next,furthermore,inaddition,besides,moreover,what’smore3）最后:

finally,eventually,lastly,atlast,lastbutnotleast

2.适用于两点的情况(1)ontheonehand,….ontheotherhand,….

(2)foronething,….foranotherthing,….衔接句：Thereisnodoubtthatitisagoodchanceformetoimprovemyself,butIamfacingsomechalengesnow.Excitedbutnervous,Ireallydon'tknowwhatIcandotofacethechallenges.03SummarySummar