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中文Lastsummer,Hildaworkedasavolunteerwithdolphintrainersatasealifepark.Herjobwastomakesurethetankswerefreeofanyitemssothatthetrainerscouldtrainthedolphinstofetchspecificitems.However,onedayaftercleaning,oneofthedolphins,MayapresentedHildawithacandywrapperfromthetank.WhenKatherine,thetrainer,sawthis,sheblamedHildaforhercarelessness.去年夏天，Hilda作为志愿者在一个海洋生物公园与海豚训练师一起工作。她的工作是确保水箱内没有任何物品，以便训练师能训练海豚取特定的物品。然而，有一天清理完后，一只名叫Maya的海豚从水箱里给Hilda带来了一个糖果包装纸。当训练师Katherine看到这一幕时，她责怪Hilda太粗心大意了。Upsetbutnotdiscouragedbythisevent,HildadecidedtodosomespyingonMaya.Thenextmorning,Hildaarrivedattheparkearly.Sheputonherscubagearandjumpedintothetankforherusual,underwatersweep.Findingnothinginthetank,sheclimbedoutofthewaterjustintimetoseeKatherinejumpinginontheotherside.Afterwhathappenedyesterday,Hildaknewwhatshewasdoing.ShewatchedasKatherineperformedherunderwatersearch,butHildawasn'tsurprisedwhenshesurfacedemptyhanded.尽管感到不安，但并未因此气馁，Hilda决定对Maya进行侦查。第二天早上，Hilda早早来到公园。她穿上潜水装备跳入水箱进行她通常的水下搜查。在水箱中没找到任何东西，她正好爬出水面，看到训练师Katherine从另一边跳了进去。经过昨天发生的事情，Hilda知道她在做什么(对Hilda不放心，亲自搜寻有没有异物)。她观察训练师Katherine进行水下搜索，但当训练师Katherine空手浮出水面时，Hilda对此并不感到惊讶。Duringthetanksweeps,Mayahadbeenswimmingplayfully,butnowthedolphinstoppedsuddenlyandswamtothebackpartofthetank

wherethefilterboxwaslocated.

Shestuckhernosedownbehindtheboxandthenswamaway.

WhatwasMayadoingbackthere?Hildawondered.Shejumpedbackintothewaterandswamovertotakealookbehindthebox,

andherquestionwasanswered.在清扫水箱期间，Maya一直在游泳嬉戏，但现在这只海豚突然停下来，游到水箱后部的过滤箱那里。她把鼻子伸到箱子后面然后游走了。Maya在那里做什么？Hilda心怀疑惑。她跳回水中，游过去查看箱子后面，然后她得到了答案。HildathenswamacrossthetankfollowingMaya'spathandemergedfromthewatertofindKatherineremovingherscubagear.AsKatherineturnedaround,hermouthdroppedopen.TherewasMayaattheedgeofthetankwithabinhermouthwaitingforhertreat.Hilda随后跟随Maya的路线游过水箱，从水中出来，发现训练师Katherine正在脱掉她的潜水装备。当训练师Katherine转过身来，她惊讶地张大了嘴。Maya在水箱边缘，嘴里叼着一把梳子，等待着奖励。"Maya!Wheredidyougetthat?"demandedKatherine,takingthebandthrowingherafish."Iknowwhereshegotit,”declaredHildaclimbingoutofthetankwithahandfulofitemsstillwetfromtheirwateryrestingplace."What'sallthis?”Katherineasked,obviouslyconfused.“Maya！你是从哪里弄来的梳子？”训练师Katherine一边取过梳子，一边扔给玛雅一条鱼。“我知道她从哪里拿到的，”Hilda

一边说，一边爬出水箱，手里拿着几件还沾着水的物品。“这些是什么？”训练师Katherine显然感到非常困惑。续写第一句"ThisisMaya'ssecret,"Hildasaidwithabigsmile.

续写第二句NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.“这是Maya的秘密，”Hilda微笑着说。现在训练师Katherine意识到了发生了什么。语言分析：freeof没有……dosomespying监视surfacev.浮出水面emerge出现waitforhertreat等待奖赏

内容分析：

人物：Hilda志愿者，工作职责是清理海洋馆水箱Katherine海豚训练师Maya海豚事件：海豚叼了一块糖纸，训练员责备志愿者清理不干净，于是志愿者打算一探究竟。志愿者做日常的清理工作，在清理结束后，发现海豚的奇怪行为，明白了垃圾的来源。构思：给出的首句1：这是海豚的秘密。可以写的角度：1.志愿者解释海豚的秘密。2.一起去查看过滤盒子。3.真相大白。给出的首句2：训练员知道海豚的秘密了。可以写的角度：1.训练员为之前的责备行为道歉。2.决定定期对过滤盒子进行彻底清理。3.假期结束，海豚训练有素。4.升华：不要随意责备他人。

参考范文：“ThisisMaya'ssecret,”Hildasaidwithabigsmile.“Secret?”Katherinereplied,wideeyed.“ImeanMayaswamtothebackpartandfetchedtheunfiltereditems,”Hildaexplainedpatiently,pointingtothefilterbox.Outofcuriosity,Katherineplannedtofigureitout.Hildaacpaniedhertotheplacewheretheboxwaslocated.“Theintelligentanimalsfindahiddencorner.IguessIamtheonewhoarecareless.”Kathrinesaidwithanembarrassedsmile.Finally,

everythingbecameclear.

NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.

Katherineapologized

forherpreviouswordsandpraisedHilda’sspiritofexploration.

Toavoidsimilarsituations,Hildadecidedtodoathoroughcleaningonaregularbasis.Attheendofthesummer,thedolphinswerewelltrainedtofetchspecificitems.Nothingbadhadeverhappenedagain.HildaandKathrinespentapleasingandrewardingsummer.Sincethen,thelessonhasbeengreatlyvaluedthat

oneshouldbecautiousbeforeblamingothers.

试水作文"ThisisMaya'ssecret,"Hildasaidwithabigsmile.

Hildaclarified:"Thesehavebeenstored

behindthefilterbox,"assheunveiledacollectionofitems.

Thecollectioncontainedavarietyof

smallitems

thatMayahadseeminglygatheredlikeprecioustreasures.

"Isupposedthat

shemusthavebeenconcealingherfindings

to

surpriseyou

laterand

earntreats.

Drivenbycuriosity,Itrailedhersecretlybeneaththewater

tounravelthemystery:why

bothofuswouldeup

emptyhanded

duringoursearches,whileMayawouldmiraculouslyproduce出示

anitem!"

NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.

TheblameshehadhastilydirectedatHildawasmisplaced.

ItbecameevidentthatMayawasmorethanjust

atraineddolphin;shewasacuriouscollectorofsubmergedtreasures.

"Ioweyouanapology,Hilda."Katherineadmitted,hereyesshowingakindof

respect.

Theincidenthadtaughtbothofthemanim