方法与策略 热点07-中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点07方法与策略一、话题作文1．某英语网站开展关于“HowtoImproveMyself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。要求：1.词数80~100；2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。HowtoImproveMyselfLifeisreallyalonglesson,soIhavetoimprovemyself._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowtoImproveMyselfLifeisreallyalonglesson,soIhavetoimprovemyself.First,Ineedtoexerciseonehoureveryday.Itisbadtostayathomeandplaygamesforalongtime.Second,Ishouldberesponsibleformyselfandmyfamily.Ishouldbeindependentinsteadofdependingonmyparentstoooften.Third,infaceoftheproblems,Ihavetotakeupthechallengesandworkthemoutratherthanrunawayfromthem.Next,Iwilldevelopmyinterestinmanythings,suchasplayingbasketball,andknitting,insteadofbeinginterestedinnothing.Lastbutnotleast,Iwillcommunicatewithothersandbeagoodteamplayer.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。2．你校英语社团面向毕业生举行以“成为更好的自己”为主题的征文活动，请你结合自身经历，从“makefriends”,“haveahealthylifestyle”,“developgoodstudyhabits”,“takeupanewhobby”,“beindependent”五个方面任选一至两项，写一篇英语短文投稿。要求：1.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。Atthebeginningofanewlife,I’mgoingtomakemyselfbetter._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Atthebeginningofanewlife,I’mgoingtomakemyselfbetter.Firstly,developinggoodstudyhabitsisofgreatimportance.Icanasknotonlymyteacher,butalsomyclassmates.AndIshouldlearnfrommistakesinsteadofbeingafraidofmakingmistakes.Secondly,Ishouldmakefriendswithpeoplearoundmyself.Asthesayinggoes,“Friendsarethefamilieswechoose”.Wearehappierwhenwearewithfriends.Allinall,aslongasIworkhardatanything,Iwillmakemyselfbetter.【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“成为更好的自己”为主题写一篇英语短文；要求包含一至两项提示内容，字数80-100左右。写作指导：此作文时态宜用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：点明主题，想要成为更好的自己；第二段：从学习习惯、结交朋友两方面说明如何成为更好的自己；第三段：总结全文，只要努力，就能使自己变得更好。二、材料作文3．2022年4月21日，国家发布《义务教育课程方案（2022年版）》，将劳动课程列入国家课程，让学生要学会家务劳动，参与社会实践劳动，志愿服务劳动等。作为一名中学生，请你结合实际，以“HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit?”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。参考词汇：workingclass

livingskill

socialactivity要求：1.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校等个人信息。2.词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit?It’sprettyimportantforteenagerstodevelopworkingspirit.Asamiddleschoolstudent,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit?It’sprettyimportantforteenagerstodevelopworkingspirit.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Iwelcomeitwarmly.First,weshouldhaveworkingclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschooleveryweek.Secondly,wecantakepartinout-of-classactivitiessuchasplantingtressorgrowingvegetablestoenrichourreal-worldworkexperience.Also,weneedtrytodosomechoresathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesordoingsomedishes.Aboveall,wecouldformgoodworkinghabitsandvaluetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.Inaword,thehardworkingspiriteducationsisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：以“HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit”为题介绍如何培养劳动精神的方法。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，并表达自己的看法。第二步，介绍培养劳动精神的方法。第三步，总结概括。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②suchas例如③inaword总之[高分句型]①It’sprettyimportantforteenagerstodevelopworkingspirit（“it’s+形容词+forsb+todosth”的句型）②Also,weneedtrytodosomechoresathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesordoingsomedishes.（动词不定式作宾语）4．在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以“Learningtolearn”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。写作要点：1.一个科目名称；2.此科目的学习方法（至少两个）；3.此科目的学习感受或期望。写作要求：1.将标题和首句补充完整；2.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得透露个人信息；4.词数80左右。Methodsoflearning________Herearemymethodsoflearning________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MethodsoflearningEnglishHerearemymethodsoflearningEnglish.First,IusuallywatchEnglishmoviesandlistentoEnglishsongs.Ithinkit’sarelaxingwaytolearnthecorrectpronunciationandproperexpressions.Second,readingpassagesonthesametopichelpsalotinlearningnewwords.Inthisway,thenewwordscanberepeatedandIcanunderstandtheirmeaningsbetter.What’smore,it’sagoodhabittokeepadiaryinEnglish.ThathelpsmethinkinEnglishandimprovemywritingskillsaswell.Englishisabridgewhichconnectstheworldandus.It’sinterestingtolearnit.IhopeIcanmakegreaterprogressinthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学会学习”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先介绍自己学习英语的方法；第二段表达学习英语的感受或期望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。5．2022年令世人瞩目，在过去的半年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“MyDream”为题，写一篇短文。要点：1.你的梦想是什么？2.原因是什么？3.为此你会怎么做？注意：1.词数90左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。MyDream___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyDreamEveryonehashisdream.Mydreamistobeadoctor.WhenIwasinGradeSeven,Iwassickandoftenwenttoseedoctors.Thedoctorswereveryfriendlytomeandtheyoftencheeredmeup.Withthehelpofthem,Iwasgettingbetter.NowIamveryhealthy.SincethenIhavehopedtobecomeadoctor.Inordertoachievemydream,Iwillstudyhard.I’llgivemylovetothepatientsasmuchaspossibleandhelpthemoutofdanger.Tobeadoctorisreallygood.Ithinkmydreamwillcometrueoneday.【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求以“MyDream”为题，介绍自己的梦想，以及拥有这个梦想的原因，和为此会做些什么。写作时按说明文的格式来写。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写。写作时，说明“梦想是什么”这一部分应用一般现在时；讲述拥有这个梦想的事件时，应用一般过去时；而在讲述为了实现梦想，“会做什么事”这一部分应用一般将来时。按照题目要求，先介绍“我”的梦想，再讲述拥有这一梦想的事件过程，最后列举为了实现梦想会做的事情并结尾。写作时注意三种时态的正确使用方法。6．中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；3.词数：80-100词。HowtoMakeMyselfBetter______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowtoMakeMyselfBetterAsateenager,IthinkIshouldworkhardertomakemyselfbetter.Firstofall,itisimportanttolivehealthily.Iwilleatmorefruitandvegetables.Iwillalsotakeexerciseeverydayandgetenoughsleep.What’smore,Ishouldworkhardatallmysubjects.I’llnotbeafraidtofacechallengesanymoreandtrymybesttosolvetheproblems.Besides,itisnecessarytohaveagoodrelationshipwithfamilyandfriends.Lastbutnotleast,it’sourresponsibilitytotakecareofourparents.I’llalsodowhatIcantohelpotherpeople.Bydoingthese,Iwillmakemyselfbetterandbetter.【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”并结合思维导图中的提示词写一篇文章，介绍如何成为更好的自己。2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从不同的方面介绍如何成为更好的自己；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。7．随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？请你以“HowtoBeaHappyStudent”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；(4)词数不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowtoBeaHappyStudentEveryonewantstobehappy.Asastudent,whatcanwedotobehappy?Hereismyadvice.It’snecessaryforustohavelearninggoals.Thegoalscanmakeusbeclearaboutwhattodoeverydayandliveabusyandmeaningfullife.Tobehealthyistobehappy.Soremembertohavegoodlifehabitsanddomoreexercise.Wecandosomesports,suchasrunningorplayingbasketball.Also,weshouldbereadytohelpothers.Whenwehelpthoseintrouble,wecangetmuchhappiness.Besides,themostimportantforusistostayinagoodmood.Ifweareingoodspirits,wecanstudybetter.Weshouldhaveapositiveattitudeandbereadytohelpothers.Ibelieveifwedoso,wecanhaveahappylife.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“HowtoBeaHappyStudent”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。8．最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。Whyyoumadeithelpenjoyreadingyourfavouritebook（name,typeofbook,whatyoulikemost）HowyoumadeitMaterials&Tools●card●scissors,glue…Steps●cutthecardinto…●drawapictureof…●write（yourfavouritesentencefromthebookorafamoussayingor…）●…Howyoufelt…要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmark-makingactivity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmark-makingactivity.Itspurposewastohelpusenjoyreadingourfavouritebook.MyfavoritebookistheclassicnovelJourneytotheWest,oneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovels.IlikeMonkeyKingbestbecausehehelpstheweakandnevergivesup.Inordertomakeabookmark,Ipreparedacard,scissors,glueandsoon.First,Icutthecardintolongstrips.AndthenIdrewapictureofamonkeyontheleftandwroteafamoussaying“Nothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.”ontherighttoencouragemenottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Atlast,Igluedittoathinpieceofwood.AlthoughImetsomedifficultiesinthisprocess,InevergaveupandIamproudofmyself.【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。三、讲稿9．假定你是李华，来自光明学校，将代表你校参加全市中学生“学会学习”主题分享会。请以“LearningtoLearn”为题，根据提示问题和写作要求，写一篇英语发言稿。提示问题：1.Whatsubjectareyouinterestedin?2.Howdoyoudealwiththedifficultiesinlearning?3.Doyouoftenmakeanyplansforyourstudy?4.Whatmethodsdoyouusuallyusetolearn?5.Doyouuseothergoodlearningmaterials?写作要求：1.请作简要的自我介绍；2.至少选择三个提示问题展开写作；3.词数不少于80词；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。LearningtoLearnDearteachersandstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LearningtoLearnDearteachersandstudents,

MynameisLiHua.IcomefromGuangmingSchool.Todaymytopicis“Learntolearn”.

Firstofall,myfavoritesubjectisEnglish.Infact,atthebeginning,myEnglishwasnotgood,butIwasstillveryinterestedinit.InordertoimprovemyEnglish,Ioftenaskmyteacherforhelpandrecitewordsathomebymyselfeveryday.Slowly,myEnglishimproved.Besides,Ialsomakeplansformystudy.Forexample,IhavetomemorizeEnglishwordswhenIhavebreakfastinthemorning.AndIreviewwhatIlearneverydaybeforeIgotobedatnight.

That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给英文提示以“LearningtoLearn”为题写一篇作文，介绍“学会学习”。[写作步骤]第一步，可以从所给提示问题选出两个来叙述；第二步，再从剩下的问题中选择一个展开描述。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣②inorderto为了③forexample比如[高分句型]①IhavetomemorizeEnglishwordswhenIhavebreakfast