读后续写英文写作比赛(2023.6全国新高考1卷)讲义高三英语一轮复习

真题再现

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,my

socialstudiesteacher(社会学科老师)

askedmeto

enterawritingcontest(参加写作比赛),Isaidno

withoutthinking(未经思考).Ididnotlovewriting.

MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonly

mysecondlanguage（我的第二语言）.Writingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperon

the

sinkingoftheTitanic（泰坦尼克号的沉没）

by

actingoutaplay（表演剧本）,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.

Ifyou’rewillingto

applyyourself（努力工作）,Ithinkyou

haveagoodshot（有很大机会）

atthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedto

giveitatry（试一试）.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775to

Lexington（莱克星顿）

to

warn（警告）

peoplethatBritishsoldierswereing.Mystorywould

estraightfromthehorse’smouth（此处意味着从马的角度讲述故事）.

Nota

brilliantidea（不是一个高明的想法）,but

funny,andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashe

spedthroughthenight(夜间狂飙，speedspedsped)?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?I

sympathized(同情）

immediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedto

quit（放弃）.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.I

checkedmyspelling（检查拼写）.Iaskedmyoldersisterto

correctmygrammar（纠正我的语法）.I

checkedout（借出）

ahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,

laughedoutloud（大声笑了）

andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,

thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.（获胜的念头已经变成了写作的乐趣。如果我没有获胜，我也不在意）情节概述：本文讲述了主人公在学校社会学科老师的要求下参与写作比赛的故事。虽然主人公并不喜欢写作，但通过老师的鼓励和自己的努力，最终完成了有关雷弗尔骑马的题目。在这个过程中，主人公面临着语言难关和写作的烦恼，曾想放弃，但通过不断地尝试和坚持，最终取得了成功。本文强调了努力和持之以恒的重要性，在成功之前，克服困难和持之以恒的精神是必不可少的。写作指导

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Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,

thereethenews."Congratulations!youwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontest."mydeskmaterushedtomudeskwitheyesglisteningexcitement.Uponhearingthisamazingnews,Iwasstuckdumbwithsurprise.ThethunderousapplauseandheartfeltblessingsfrommyfellowstudentsconfirmedwhatIheard

tobetrue.Finallycamethebigday!

Withprizecupinonehandandawardandcertificateinotherhand,awaveofgratitudetomyteacherrosefromthebottomofmyheart.

Intheabsenceof

without

myteacher'sinspiration,Icantmakesucharemarkableachievement.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation."Unbelievable!Imadeit！

Iexclaimed，pleasedbeyonddescription.

HegrinnedfromeartoearasIshowedhimthetrophy.

“AswhatIsaidifyouarewillingtoapplyyourselfintowritingyou'lleventuallymake

it!"Wheneverlooking

backonthisincident.Ifeelextremelygratefultohim.

JustlikeRevere'shorse,nomatter

howdifficultthechallengesIfaced

were,Ialways

keptgoingandnevergiveup!02.

A

fewweekslater.whenIalmostforgetthe

contest,

thereethenews.AssoonasI

walkedintotheclassroom.IwasinformedthatIhadwonthefirstprizeandanawardpresentationwouldbeheldinthreedays.Hearingthis

greatnews,Iwasstuckdumbwithsurpriseandthenwildwithjoy.Finallyethebigday

!whenIwasreallyonthestageandawardedthefirstprize,my

eyesshinedwithpuredelightandpride.Myclassmatesandsocialteachersatunderthestageandcheeredwarmly.

I

wenttomy

teacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

ThenIwentuptohimandsaidsincerely"IneverthoughtIcouldactuallydoitand

nowIseemtofallinlovewithwriting.""Congratulations!

"herepliedseriously"I

Knowhowtalentedyouareandhowhardyou'veworkedtomanageit.Youareboundtobesuccessfulsoonerandlaterinmyeyes.

Sincethen,

hiswordsjustlikealighthouseinthemist,wouldalways

lightinmysky.03.

Afewweekslater,whenIalmost

forgetthecontest,therecamethenews.ItwasexhilaratedtolearnthatIhadgainedthefirstprizeandanawardceremonywouldbeheldinthreedays.Immediately,thunderousapplauseresoundedfromtheclassmates,

Istunnedbythenews.

While

gavingmyacceptancespeech,Iwas

seemlyontheninecloud.

Isteppedontothepodiumwithatroubledheartanddeliveredmymostsincerewords.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.AssoonasIwalkedintotheteacher'soffice,thevoiceofcongratulationsfrommy

teacherrangout.Hardworks

alwayspayoff,I'mgladtoseethefruitsofyourhardwork.Iboweddeeplytotheteacherwithgratitude"Ifitweren'tforyourtrust,IbelieveIwouldn'thavehadsuchasuccessfuloute!”Wordsfailedto

conveymygratitudetohim.

Itwashewhomademerealizenothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.04.

Afewweekslater,whenIolmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenewsMy

classmatescongratulatedmethatIwonthesecondprizeatthewritingcontest,mydeskmaterushedtomydeskwitheyesglistening

excitementandMyjawdroppedtotheflooratthattime.Finallycamethebigday!Whenmy

headmasterannouncedthatIwonthesecondprize,myheartpounding

widelyinmy

chest.TherewasastormofapplausewhenIwentontheplatform.Ilookedatmyprise

andsmiledwithrelief.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeafterawardpresentation.Withouthesitation，Iexclaimed,"Unbelievable!Imadeit!Myteachersaid:"Youdidagoodjob!AswhatIsaid,ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourselfintowriting,you'lleventuallydoit!Ithinkyoulikethehorsethatinyourstory!Anditleadyoutowontheprize.Keepgoingandyouwillwonthefirstprizenexttime!”

OnlythendidIrealizedthatitwaspersistencethatcanconquerwhateverdifficultiescameintheway!05.

Afewweekslater,

whenIalmostforgetthecontest,therecamethenews.ItwasexhilaratedtolearnthatIhadgainedthefirstprize.Ifeltmyheartracingandmy

bloodrushing.Attheawardceremony，Imountedthestageagainstwidecheersandthunderousapplausewhenmynamewasannounced.Joywaswellingupandsurgingthroughmyheart.Iheldtrophyandcanhardlywaittosharethedelightwithmyteacher.

Iwenttomyteachers'officeaftertheawardpresentation.“Iwonthefirstprize!”Ishowedmycertificatetohim.

Helookedatthetrophy,withhislips

curvinga

smile."Congratulations!"hesaid,"

Itisyoureffortsthatcountmost.”

Fromthenon，IbegantoburymyselfinEnglishaswellasEnglishwriting,forever

gratefultomyteacher

whoalwaysheldroseswitheverlastingfragrance.06Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Thenewsjoltedmefrommydailyroutine.Ihadwonthecontest.anoutethatseemedasunlikelyasahorsepenningahistoricaltale.Thewasmadeduring，radiobroadcastonmorningannouncementcampus,andawaveofapplausewashedovermelikeawarmembrace.Iwasstunned,heartracingwithandentedprideanddisbelief.Thevictorywasitservedfarbeyondasproofofmyteacher'sfaithinmyabilitiesandtheuntappedpotentialthatIhaddiscoveredwithinmyself.几周后，当我几乎忘记了那次比赛时，一个消息打破了我的日常生活，让我震惊不已.我赢得了那场比赛，这个结果就像马撰写历史故事一样不可思议。公告是在早晨的校园广播中宣布的，一阵声像温暖的拥抱一样涌向我。我感到震惊，心跳加速，充满了前所未有的自豪感和怀疑不相信。这次胜利远不仅仅只是收到认可，它是对那位信任我的老师，以及我在自己内心发现的未开发潜能的证明。

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