期中作文专题Unit2writealetterabouthealthylifestyle高中英语堂（人教版2019）（选择性）

Unit2HealthyLifestyleReadingforWritingWriteALetterToTheEditorAboutYourLifestyle期中作文复习Nowyouaregoingtojointhecamp.Writealettertotheeditortotellhimyourownlifestylethatyouwanttochange.WritingWhatisthebasicstructureofaletter?DearEditor,

Yourstruly,/Sincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyComplimentaryclose信尾敬语Salutation称呼TowhomwhoReadingforwritingPreparationsforthewriting.Writealettertotheeditoraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestylethatyouwouldliketochange.structureProblemDecisionActionResultWhatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochangeWhyyouwanttochangeHowyouplantochangeWhatresultyouhopetosee

pasttensepresenttense本单元的写作任务是写一封关于健康生活方式的信。这类文章属于说明文，正文部分主要包括problem,decision,actions,results等。基本框架第一段：写信的目的第二段：介绍自己的问题，决定，行动和结果第三段：收获和期望时态：一般现在时，一般过去时人称：第一人称参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后意识到问题，需要改变具体的身心健康问题关于原文Problem:的分析：参加完夏令营后，你努力摆脱digitaladdiction，请写信给编辑，描述你的问题，决定，行动，结果。实战演练参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后After

Iattendedyoursummercampabouthealthandlifestylechoices,...AsItookpartinthesummercampaboutpersonallifechoices,...关于原文Problem:的分析：具体的身心健康问题Ioftenfeltsleepyand

dizzy,andlackedpassion.Mostworrying,though,Igotthe

flu

easilyandexperiencedmanytoothaches,too.Playingwasfun,butIfelteven

morewornoutafterwards!审视自己，意识到严重Istartedtoanalysemychoices,especiallywhatIdidtorelaxandhowitwasaffectingmywholelife.Soafterthecamp,Irealisedthatitwasvery,veryimportantto

adjustmylifestyleIrealisedIhardlyeverfeltwell,eitherphysicallyormentally参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后，我意识到我沉迷于电子设备，在玩的时候让我娱乐，但是之后更精疲力尽。仿写：problemAfter

Iattendedyoursummercampabouthealthandlifestylechoices,...AsItookpartinthesummercampaboutpersonallifechoices,...beaddictedto/becrazyabout/bemadfor/belostin/beabsorbedinPlayingwasfun,butIfelteven

morewornoutafterwards!Ioftenfeltsleepyand

dizzy,andlackedpassionMostworrying,Isufferedfromphysicalhealthproblems身心健康问题：AfterIattendedyoursummercampabouthealthandlifestylechoices,IrealizedIwasaddictedtodigitaldevices,whichentertainedmewhenIwasplaying,butworemeoutafterwards.参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后，我意识到我沉迷于电子设备，在玩的时候让我娱乐，但是之后更精疲力尽。关于原文Decision的分析：Idecidedtotakecontrolofmylifeandfindotherways

torelax.AttheendofthecampIheard,“Changetheworldbychangingyourself.”This

stimulated

mymotivation.ImadeupmymindtochangetwothingsinmylifeMymotivationstimulated,Imadeupmymindtogetridofbadhabitsandtakecontrolofmylife.我的动力被激发，我下定决心摆脱坏习惯，掌控自己的生活。correct/break/getridof/fix/quit/giveupbadhabitsTofacilitatepositivechangesinmylife,仿写Decision:Irealisedthattosucceedinquitting,Ihadtoreplaceitwithsomethingelse.SoIthoughtaboutwhattotryThis

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mymotivationMyexercisewasverysimple:Iwentoutsideeverydayforatleast30minutesanddidsomethingactive.SometimesIplayedtabletennisorbadmintonwithmycousins.OthertimesIjumpedonmy

skateboard

androdearoundmyneighbourhood,orjusttookalongwalk.关于原文Action的分析：AfterthatIstoppedbuyingallthesweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksthatIusedtohaveeveryday.WheneverIwentoutwithfriends.Ibroughtsnacksfromhome,thingsthatdidn’thaveanyaddedsugar:fruit,

nuts,driedmeat,etc.仿写：每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候，我就出去慢跑。这不仅提高了我的生活质量，也改善了我的身体状况。仿写：ActionIwentoutsideeverydayforatleast30minutesanddidsomethingactiveIplayedtabletennisorbadmintonwithmycousins.Ijumpedonmy

skateboard

androdearoundmyneighbourhoodIjusttookalongwalk.Ithasenhancedthequalityoflife,improvingmyhealthandincreasingmyhappiness.Igetrefreshedthroughclimbing,spendmoretimewithmydad,andgettomeetnewfriends.Aftersixmonthsoftryingoutnewwaysofrelaxing,Ifeelmuchmoreenergetic.

IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetter.Andifthat’strueforme,thenitmighttrulybepossibletochangetheworldforthebetter.AsGandhisaid,

“Bethechangeyouwanttoseeintheworld.”Theresultshavebeenfantastic.Ifeelmore

dynamic

andstrongerthanever,inbothbody

andmind.

Isleepsoundlyatnightnow.Inolongersufferfroma

fluvirusortoothacheseither.Bestofall,inmyopinion,ishowIfeelaboutmyself.IfeellikeI’mincontrolofmyownlife.Tomakechoicesaboutmyselfiswithinmyownpower.ICANchangemyself.Ijustneedtotry.关于原文Result的分析：仿写：结果是极好的。我在身体和精神上精力充沛。更好的是，我感觉我可以让自己变得更好。仿写：Resultperfect/superb/remarkble/awesome/excellentIfeelmore

dynamicandstrongerthanever,inbothbody

andmindIfeelmuchmoreenergetic.IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetterIfeellikeI’mincontrolofmyownlifebetteryet/evenbetter/besides/what’smore/furthermore/inaddition/BestofallInolongersufferfroma

fluvirusortoothacheseitherIgetrefreshedandgettomeetnewfriends.Theresultshavebeenfantastic.Igetmoredynamic,refreshedandenergeticbothphysicallyandmentally.Betteryet,IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetter.仿写：结果是极好的。我在身体和精神上精力充沛。更好的是，我感觉我可以让自己变得更好。连接词的使用：首先：Firstly,Firstofall,Tobeginwith,...其次：Secondly,What’smore,Inaddition,Moreover,Furthermore,Besides,...最后：Lastly,Finally,Lastbutnotleast,...连句成篇problemdecisionresultactionsummaryusefulexpressionsAlcoholordrugabuseCigarettesmokingDigitaladdictionStayinguplateIrregulareatingovereatandoverdrinkNotkeepingneatandtidyBeingdistractedorinattentiveTellingliesCheating(inexams)BADHABITSCORRECTChangeyournegativeinnerbeliefsandadoptpositiveones;Replaceyourbadhabitswithpositiveones;Keepconfidentandoptimistic;Bedetermined,self-disciplined;Learnabouthowhabitsworkandfindscientificways;Followothers’examplesKeepyourselfhighlymotivated;DearEditor，

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Yourssincerely，LiHua明确体裁、话题书信；健康的生活方式确定时态、人称一般过去时和现在时为主；第一人称布局文章架构第一段：表明写信的目的；第二段：说明自己生活方式的变化；第三段：表达祝愿列出核心要点1.过去吃垃圾食品，体重超重；2.对身体健康的追求使自己作出改变；3.措施：改变饮食习惯和进行体育锻炼；4.表达自己的感受【写作架构】Go

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Writing审题构思：第一段：简单自我介绍+根据自己的经历分享自己关于健康生活的看法第二段：1.问题：曾因身体肥胖感到烦恼,影响了正常的学习和生活2.决定：决定减肥，做些改变3.行动：（1）戒掉垃圾食品和含糖饮料，多喝开水，多吃蔬菜水果

（2）多做运动，如和朋友踢足球或打篮球

（3）保持良好的情绪4.结果：成功减肥，感觉更加精力充沛，感觉自己掌控了自己的生活，觉得自己可以变得更好第三段：表达对对方的期望和祝愿(1)Ihopethatyoucanhaveahealthybody.希望你拥有健康的身体。(2)Ihopethatmyexperiencewillbeofgreathelptoyou.希望我的经历对你能有帮助。【遣词造句】1.使用一般过去时介绍自己以前的不良生活习惯。①过去我喜欢垃圾食品。InthepastIlikedjunkfood.⁠

②我过去超重。InthepastIwasoverweight.2.使用恰当的修饰语表达针对个人问题作出的决定。③我对完美身材的热情驱使我改变我的生活方式。Mygreatpassionforawell-shapedbodydrovemetochangemylifestyle.⁠

④我的计划是改变不合理的饮食和定期锻炼。Myplanistochangemyimproperdietandexerciseregularly.3.根据提示介绍针对个人问题采取的行动。⑤在健身房锻炼是我的惯常做法。（动词-ing短语作主语）Workingoutinthegymismyroutine.⁠

⑥保持均衡的饮食对我来说是必须做的事情。（it作形式主语；amust）Itisamustformetokeepabalanceddiet.Go

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Writing【段落衔接】恰当衔接，自然过渡1.用and，therefore连接句①和句②InthepastIlikedjunkfoodandthereforeIwasoverweight.

2.用while连接句⑤和句⑥Workingoutinthegymismyroutinewhileitisamustformetokeepabalanceddiet.⁠

3.用but连接句⑦和句⑧Ihaveonlybeencarryingoutmyplanforseveralmonths，butI’mnowstartingtofeelbetter.⁠

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Writing【遣词造句】4.使用不同的时态介绍现在的状况。⑦我的计划仅仅进行了几个月。（现在完成进行时）Ihaveonlybeencarryingoutmyplanforseveralmonths.⁠

⑧现在我开始感觉好多了。（现在进行时）I’mnowstartingtofeelbetter.⁠

⑨我有信心达到我的目标。（一般现在时；一般将来时）IfeelconfidentthatIwillreachmygoal.

DearEditor,IwaswalkingpastashopwindowtheotherdaywhenIsawmyreflection.Atfirst,Ididn'trealiseitwasme.WhenIsawitwasme,IfeltsadasIwaso