2024届高考英语二轮读后续写专题复习高级句子结构模型例析 练习

高级句子结构模型例析(读后续写篇)四种高级句子结构的基本模型：1.状语+简单句2.简单句+状语3.状语+简单句+状语4.简单句,+定从当然,实际运用中,可以在这四种基本模型的基础上进行灵活的组合。●句型1：Doing/Done...(状语),+简单句doing作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；有时可以在doing前加before,after,while等;但如果是被动关系,使用过去分词done作状语。例如：1._____________________inhereyes,Ms.Johnsonencouragedhertotakejustonestep.看到她眼中的恐惧,约翰逊女士鼓励她只往前走一步.Seeingtheterror2._____________________________,Iwasinstantlyseizedbydisappointment.听到她说的话,我立刻感到失望。Hearingwhatshesaid3.______________thekidnapper’scar__________,thekidscoulddonothingbutkeepstampingtheirfeetwildly.看着绑匪的车消失了,孩子们什么也做不了,只能不停地使劲跺脚。Watching;vanished4.___________________________,shehadnoideahowtocopewiththeterriblesituation.Feelingunbearablycoldandexhausted感到难以忍受的寒冷和疲惫,她不知道如何应付这种可怕的局面。5._____________________,hesaid,"That'swonderful!I'mgoingtodesignprogramsmyself!"Clappinghishands他拍着手说,太棒了!我要自己设计项目.6.___________________________,themanwalkedawayquickly.那人无视她的话,很快走开了。Ignoringherwords7.________________________________________,shecouldnotsayaword.她沉浸在强烈的恐惧感中,一句话也说不出来。Immersedinastrongsenseoffear8.____________________________,Johndidn'tnoticeeveningapproaching.约翰全神贯注地画画,没有注意到晚上快到了。Absorbedinpainting9.___________________________onthefarm,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.沐浴在农场的阳光下,我们高兴地跳起来欢呼。Bathedinthesunshine10.__________________,shecandonothingbutburstintotears,helplessanddisappointed.被困在雾中,她什么也做不了,只能放声大哭,感到无助和失望。Trappedinthefog●句型2:简单句...,doing/done...(状语)doing作伴随状语,与句子的谓语动词同时发生,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致,构成主动关系;该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现，转换为：主+谓...and谓...;如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词done作伴随状语。例如：1.Beforethepolice,hedroopedhishead,__________________________.在警察面前,他低下头,无助地叹了口气.sighinghelplessly2“There!There!”thefathersprangtohisfeetanddashedtowardstheboy,_________________. “好啦,好啦!”父亲跳起身来,向男孩冲去,把他紧紧抱在怀里。Holdinghimintohisarmstightly3.However,anothervoice__________,_________himtogiveitbacktoFahad,_________madehimtorn.然而,另一个声音突然出现,催促他把它还给法哈德,这让他左右为难.poppedup;urging;which4.Mildredchewedonherbottomlip,___________________,andthennodded.MIldred咬着下唇,一直眨着眼睛,然后点了点头.blinkingallthetime5.Herfatherwaslyingonhisback,_________________thetruck.trappedunder她父亲仰面躺着，被困在卡车下面。6.Bittermemoriesoftheman'sharshwordscame_______________toher.她又痛苦地想起了那个男人刺耳的话。floodingback7.ItwasRoughLock,_____________________.是RoughLock,全身湿透了。soakedallover●句型3:简单句,+主语+doing/done(独立主格结构作状语)...或主语+doing/done(独立主格结构作状语),+简单句...1.________________and________________,nervousnessnibbled(啃)ather.膝盖摇晃,手掌出汗,紧张使她感到不安。Kneeswobbling;palmssweating2.Lilifteduphereyesandnoddedherheadinrapture,eyes_______________________李抬起眼神,高兴地点了点头,两个眼睛像相惜闪烁的星星闪闪发亮。glisteningliketwinklingstars3.____________________________throughher,momkissedthetwosistersgently.妈妈身上洋溢着幸福和温暖,她温柔地亲了两姐妹.Asurgeofhappinessandwarmthrunning4.__________________________,visitinghourswouldend.时钟滴答作响,探视时间即将结束。Theclockticking5._____________________________intheroom,thetwosistersimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusic.欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里,两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美妙中。Cheerfulsingingfloating6.Momsilentlywatchedus,______________________inhereyes.妈妈默默地看着我们,眼里闪烁着喜悦。joyglittering7.Harmonypervaded弥漫/filledthewholeroom,___________________________.整个房间充满了和谐,我们脸上充满喜悦。joywrittenonourfaces8.“Don'tstandinmyway,”Timyelledout,hisvoice______________________________.=“Don'tstandinmyway,”Timyelledout,andhisvoice___________________________.“别挡我的道,”蒂姆喊道,他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。quiveringwithrage;wasquiveringwithrage9.Myheart(being)coldwithfear,Ifelt_____________________.我的心因恐惧而冰冷,我感到很绝望。hopelessanddesperate10.Theyturnedtome,_______________________ontheirfaces.他们转向我,一脸困惑。confusionmapped/written●句型4:简单句+with的复合结构(状语）或with的复合结构(状语)，+简单句1.”Wemadeit!”,theyexclaimed________________________thesoccerfield.”“我们成功了!”他们大声喊道,笑声在足球场上回荡.Withlaughterslingeringaround2._______________________thetreesturnyellowandsomebirdsflysouth.(with结构)，=_______________________thetreesturnyellowandsomebirdsflysouth.(独立主格)随着冬天到来,树叶变黄了,小鸟们飞去南方。Withwinterapproaching;Winterapproaching3.Thegirlsitstherewithhereyes___________________onthewall.女孩坐在那里,眼睛盯着墙上。withhereyesfixed4.Hewasshocked_______________________.他睁大了眼睛,惊呆了。withhiseyeswideopen5.Theboyissmiling___________________________.男孩手里拿着一本书和一支铅笔,面带着微笑。withabookandapencilinhishand6.Thechildiscryingwithtears________________________________.withtearsstreamingdownhisface这孩子哭得泪流满面。7.Herushedtotheroomwithhisheart_____________________andhisfaceflushing.他冲进房间,心砰砰跳,脸发红。withhisheartbeating/thumping/thuddingwildly8.Hiswifewasindeepsorrow,__________________________________.他的妻子悲痛万分,她的眼里充满了泪水。withhereyesfilled/brimmingwithtears●句型5:表情感类的形容词(状语),+简单句...或简单句+,表情感类的形容词(状语）情感类的形容词在句中作状语,说明主语的情感状态,可以转化为Feeling+adj,主+谓...。有时可以放在句后:主+谓...，+表情感类的形容词。例如：1.__________________________,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamily.简又累又怕,躺在一块石头旁边,想念着她的家人。Exhaustedandscared2.Andthentheyjumped,laughedandscreamed,totally________________thepeoplepassingby.然后他们跳着，笑着，叫着，全然不觉过往的行人。unawareof3.______________________,shewavedherhands,tryingtoattractothers'attention.她既热切又兴奋,挥动双手,想引起别人的注意。Eagerandexcited4.ToAnnie'sdelight,surroundedbyhisclassmates,Markseemedlikearockstar,________________________.令安妮高兴的是,在同学们的簇拥下,马克看起来像一个摇滚明星,开心又自豪。cheerfulandproud●句型6:方式副词(状语)，+简单句...方式副词在句中作状语，修饰谓语动词，一般放在宾语后，但有时根据需要可以放在句首，有时放在实义动词前。例如：1._______________,Iwashedthedish,__________________.我不情愿地洗了盘子,感到不耐烦。Reluctantly;feelingimpatient2.Helen

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excitedly4,And_______________(amaze),theboysrecoveredsoon.令人惊讶的是,这些男孩不久就康复了。amazingly5.________________(fortune),thecatwasstillalive,___________________.幸运的是,这只猫虽然受了重伤,但还活着。Fortunately;thoughbadlyinjured6.______________,I_________thesmallpackageandwhatcameintomyviewwasthedreampresentIhadwantedforages-----acamera!我小心翼翼地打开了小包裹,我看到的是我多年来一直想要的梦想礼物-----一台照相机.Gingerly;unwrapped7.______________,I_________________,makingupmymindtogiveheranewdollasatoy.立刻我就深受感动了,下定决心给她一个新娃娃。Immediately;wasdeeplymoved●句型7:介词短语(状语),+简单句1.____________________,Davidbuiltuphisconfidenceanddecidedtorunwithotherrunners.在我的鼓励下,大卫建立了信心,决定与其他跑步者一起跑步。Withmyencouragement2.____________________,Chelseawasnolongerwhatsheusedtobe.经历过这段经历后,切尔西不再是她曾经的样子。Afterthisexperience3.___________________,___________________,Ialsoearnedsomethingmorevaluable:...通过这段经历,除了服务时间,我还我还赢得了一些更有价值的东西:...Throughtheexperience;apartfromtheservicehours(两个状语+简单句的组合）4._______________________________,Iwouldneverhaveturnedmyimaginationintoreality.没有她的慷慨帮助和我的坚持,我永远不会把我的想象变成现实。Withouthergeneroushelpandmyperseverance5.__________________,Carrie______________________________,“I’msorryformypreviouswords.Youaretalentedenoughtojointhechoir.”令我吃惊的是,嘉莉走上前,红着脸向我道歉:“我为我之前说的话道歉。你很有才华,可以加入合唱团。”Muchtomysurprise;steppedforwardandapologizedtomewithatomatoredface6.______________________fromherillness,sheneverceasedshowingherlovetome.尽管她受到疾病的极大折磨,但她从未停止对我的爱。Despiteimmensesufferings7.____________________________,theshopkeepernoddedandwrappedthedollforthelittlegirl,whichmadethemextremelyexcited.

看到所发生的事,店主点了点头,把玩具娃娃为这个小女孩包了起来,这让他们非常兴奋.Atthesightofwhathadhappened8._________________,Ihandedhimthecoat,tellinghimtheChristmaswasaroundthecorner;asaresult,wewouldliketogivehimthecoatasagift.我毫不犹豫地把外套递给他,告诉他圣诞节快到了;因此,我们想把这件外套作为礼物送给他。Withouthesitation●句型8:时间状语,+简单句...时间状语一般放在句末,但有些时间状语放在句首,能使行文连贯,逻辑合理,结构紧凑。如：shortlyafterwards,hourslater,forthefirsttime,beforelong,atthatmoment,afterthat,severalminutesafterthat,afterseeminglyalongtime,afterwhatseemedalongtime,inthemeanwhile,beforeIknewit,Itwasn'tlongbefore...等。例如：1.________________________,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.几分钟后,另一架直升机飞过头顶。Afewminuteslater2.______________________inherlife,Mariafeltfrightenedandlonely.玛丽亚有生以来第一次感到害怕和孤独。Forthefirsttime3.__________________,thisboxwitnessedeachsweetmomentinmylife.在接下来的几年里,这个盒子见证了我生命中的每一个甜蜜时刻。Inthefollowingyears4.__________________,themealwasdone,whichgavethemagreatsenseofachievement.过了一会儿,饭就做好了,这让他们有了一种强烈的责任感。Afterashortwhile5.____________herecalledthewarmanyyearsago,sayinghewouldneverliketobeasoldieragain,___________________hecouldnotfacethebloodanddeathanymore.之后,他回忆起多年前的战争,说他再也不想当兵了,考虑到他不可以再面对血腥和死亡了。Afterthat;consideringthat6._________,Imadeupmymindto_____________myskillstomatchtheviolinIplayedthatday.从那时起,为了配得上我那天演奏的小提琴,我下定决心要打磨和提高自己的技能。Fromthenon;polishandimprove●句型9:状语+,简单句,+状语1.___________________,Isaid“Thankyou”tobothofthem__________________.逐渐恢复了体力,我热泪盈眶向他们两人说了声“谢谢！”Graduallyregainingmystrength;witheyesfulloftears2.________________,theyweredeeplyattractedbythelivelygardenfulloffragrantblooms,________________________andbirdssingingcheerfully.一进门,他们就被充满充满芬芳的花朵的生气勃勃的花园深深吸引了,蜜蜂嗡嗡作响,鸟儿欢快地歌唱.Onenteringthedoor;withhoneybeesbuzzingbusily3._______________________thegardenwork,mydaughtershuggedmetightly,________________intheireyes.意识到园艺工作的治愈效果,我的几个女儿紧紧拥抱着我,他们热泪盈眶。Realizingthehealingpowerof;tearswellingup4._____________________,IknewIwasreadytothriveagain,___________________.深深地呼吸着青草的芳香,我知道我已经准备好再次茁壮成长;就像花园一样。Breathingdeeplythegrassyscent;justlikethegarden5.____________,shereachedthelasttower,___________.最终,她到达了最后一座塔,筋疲力尽的。Ultimately;exhausted6._____________________showhimmywarmestcongratulations,heembracedmetightly,_____________butformytimelyencouragementhecouldneverhavewonthechampionship.当我走近他向他表示最热烈的祝贺时,他紧紧拥抱我,他说,要不是我及时的鼓励,他永远不会赢得冠军。WhenIapproachedhimto;sayingthat7.___________,theinstructorencouragedChelseainstantly,_________shecouldmakeitaslongasshedidn’tgiveup.发现这个情况,教练立即鼓励切尔西,说只要她不放弃,她就能成功。Spottingthis;sayingthat8._____________________,ImadeadeterminationthatImustjoinintheschoolChoir_________________________.一眨眼的功夫,我就下定决心要毫不犹豫地加入学校合唱团。Inablinkofaneye;withouttheslightesthesitation9.______________thewholestoryandmythoughts,she_____________,_______________,“Justbelieveinyourself.AndI’malwaysherehelpingyou.”她知道了整个事情和我的想法,抚摸着我的头,安慰我:“只要相信你自己。我会在这里一直帮助你。”Havingknown;strokedmyhead;soothingme●句型10：V1...,(V2...,)andV3...(连动的表达)描述一系列的动作,构成并列谓语。两个动作的结构：主+谓1...and(then)谓2...。例如：1.Theadultsputonperformances,________,andthen_________goodbye.大人们表演,聊天,然后道别。chatted;said2.Shestoppedthetrucksafelyoutsidethegarageandthen___________backtothebasement.她把卡车安全地停在车库外面,然后冲回地下室。rushed/dashed/raced/darted/galloped3.She________and_________tolookbackatherhouseacrossthestreet.她打了个哈欠,转过身来,回头看看街对面的房子。yawned;turned4.He___________and__________thedoorshut.他怒气冲冲地跑了出去,把门重重地关上。stormedout;slammed5.ElliandI_________atthetopofourlungs,and_______ourfistsathiminanattempttointimidateandscarehimaway.Elli和我声嘶力竭地大叫着,并向它挥舞着拳头,试图吓走它。screamed;waved6.______________,we______theropeandeventually_______onthehelicoptersafeandsound.我激动不已,抓住绳索,最终安全降落在直升机上,松了口气。Thrilledyetrelieved;grabbed;landed●句型11:简单句,+定从1._______________,shewassuccessfulinreachingthelasttowereventually,________madethosewatchinghergreatlyrelieved.尽管她很累,但最终还是成功地到达了最后一座塔,这让那些看着她的人松了一口气。Tiredasshewas;which2.Butshortlyafter,_________,hewasleftfarbehind,______________somejeersfromthecrowdbythetrack.但不久之后,像往常一样,他被远远甩在了后面,这招致了赛道旁人群的嘲笑。asusual;whichinvited3.AsElliandIcookeddinner,wenoticedoursister,______wasplayinginanearbylake,___________________herfriends.我和艾莉做饭时,我们注意到我们的妹妹在附近的湖里玩,高兴地和她的朋友聊天。who;delightedlychattingwith4._________________,Iwasalmostexhausted,________mademefarawayfrommyboat.在水中挣扎,我几乎筋疲力尽,这使我远离了我的小船.Strugglinginthewater;which5.Suddenly,shehurriedtotheshop,_____________sheboughtthebeautifulpearl.突然,她匆忙来到商店,从那里买了这颗美丽的珍珠fromwhich6.Duringholidayseasons,Iwillliveinthecountryside,_______airisfreshandpeoplearefriendly.假日期间,我会住在农村,那儿空气清新,人们友好。Where7._______________,shewenttothelunchtableandstartedtoenjoythefreshfruitsandvegetables,__________wasjuicyandtasty.她热泪盈眶,走到餐桌前,开始享受新鲜的多汁可口的水果和蔬菜。Tearsinhereyes;which8.Itturnedoutthathewasanoldfriendofmyfather’s,________hadknowneachothersincemanyyearsago,_________hwaswhyheknewmyname.原来他是我父亲的老朋友,多年前就互相认识了,这就是为什么他知道我名字的原因。who;which●各种加分语法结构的综合训练:1.SeeingwhatIdid______________,Ifeltadeeppleasure_____________inside.看到我所做的让他们快乐,我感到一种深深的快乐涌上心头。状语+简单句maketheirday;wellingup2.Workingintheyardkeptmyhandsbusyandmymindfocusedonthetaskinfrontofme,gradually________meabeautifulgardenaswellas_________________.简单句+状语在院子里工作使我的双手忙碌着,我的注意力集中在面前的任务上，慢慢地给我带来了一个美丽的花园也给我带来了成就感。offering;asenseofachievement3.___________________hestill_______behindothersbut_________________hegraduallycaughtupwithothersonebyone.状语+简单句+状语+简单句组合一开始他仍然落后于其他人,但随着时间的推移他逐渐一个接一个地赶上了其他人。Intheverybeginning;lagged;withtimetickingby4.He________hishandsconstantly,eyes_________thestartingline______stoodtheotherrunners,________arereadytoshinethemselves.简单句+独立主格结构+定从组合他不停地搓着双手,眼睛紧盯着起跑线,其他跑者站在哪里,他们随时准备大显身手。rubbed;lockedto/gluedto/focusedon;where;who5.__________itagoodchancetogethimbackontrack,Idecidedto_________courageintothispoorboy.状语+简单句考虑到这是一个让他重回跑道的好机会,我决定要鼓起他的勇气。Thinking;infuse6.__________________________,Iturnedhimaround,lookedstraightintohisred-rimmedeyesandencouraged,“David,don’tcareaboutothersandjustdowhatyouwant.Peoplewillnotlaughatthosewhowork__________________________.”状语+连动组合我轻轻拍了拍他的肩膀,我让他转过身来,看着他布满血丝的双眼并且鼓励他,“大卫,不要在乎别人,做你想做的事.人们不会嘲笑那些尽力工作的人。Withagentlepatonhisshoulder;tothebestoftheirability7.Asif____________bymywords,David____________,bowedtome,turnedand_____forward,slowlybutfirmly.状语+连动+状语组合大卫仿佛受到了我的话的极大鼓舞,他站起身来,向我鞠躬,转身大步向前,缓慢而坚定。greatlyinspired;rosetohisfeet;strode8.However,_______________________,Davidinsistedonrunningatasteadyspeedtowardthefinishingline,______________________________________.状语+简单句+状语然而,有了坚定的决心.大卫坚持以稳定的速度跑向终点线,尽管他的衬衫湿透了,他的呼吸很沉重。withastrongdetermination;despitehisdrenchedshirtandheavybreaths9.___________thebikewouldprobablyknockintothegirls,_______________________andthathehimselfandthebikewouldendupinthestream,Farh