八年级英语上Unit6WritingMynewyear27sresolution

G8(A)Unit6OurNewYear’sresolutionsWritingTopic(主题):plans（计划）Unit6I’mgoingtostudycomputerscienceLearninggoals(学习目标):1.掌握以人物思想、情绪、行为为线索的记叙文的写作方法2.能用begoingto/planto/expectto/tryone’sbesttodo/cometrue/inaword谈论未来的生活计划与愿望

Task2MyNewYear’sresolutionsNewyeariscoming.Herearemyresolutionsforthenewyear.First,I’mgoingtolearnsinging,soIamgoingtotakesinginglessons.Then,I’mgoingtodomoresportsandeatmorehealthierfoodbecauseIexpecttokeepfit.Next,Iwanttoimprovemyrelationshipwithmyfamily,soI’mgoingtotalkwiththemmoreoften.Finally,Iplantoimprovemyteachingskills,soIamgoingtolearnmorefromothers.Inaword,Ihopemynewyear’sresolutionswillcometrue.1.审题——想一想，填一填。审题体裁：_______________________人称：_______________________时态：_______________________审题体裁：_______________________人称：_______________________时态：_______________________第一人称一般将来时记叙文OutlineBeginning

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Differentkindsofresolutions—Hopeandexpectation—AboutNewYearOutline文章结构Resolutionsaboutself-improvementimprovingphysicalhealthimprovingrelationshipwithfamilyandfriendsdoingbetteratschool/jobHow?

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What?Task4Discussingroup,andwriteresolutionsunderthefollowingheading.1.Resolutionsforself-improvement:____2.Resolutionsforimprovingphysicalhealth:_________3.Resolutionsforimprovingrelationshipwithfamily/friends:__________4.Resolutionsfordoingbetteratschool:_____________Task4Writing

在新年来临之际，为了提高和完善自我，制定新年计划是有意义的。请你以“OurNewYear’sresolutions”为题，写一篇80左右的短文来介绍你一家的新年决心。

1.内容合理，符合实际，可适当发挥

2.语句顺畅，行文连贯

3.不能出现真实姓名1.审题——想一想，填一填。审题体裁：_______________________人称：_______________________时态：_______________________审题体裁：_______________________人称：_______________________时态：_______________________第一人称一般将来时记叙文OutlineBeginning

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Iamgoingto/planto…..WhatHowWhy—Hopeandexpectation—AboutNewYear2.Outline文章结构……Whilewriting3.写一写:写初稿4.查一查:请根据以下提示，检查并修改自己的文章。1.篇章方面：布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点是否齐全/丰富？2.句子方面：主谓是否一致？时态语态是否正确？连词使用是否正确？句式是否多样化化？是否用到好词好句？3.词语方面：代词的主格，宾格等形式是否正确？动词搭配/形式是否正确？名词单复数是否正确？4.细节方面：单词拼写、标点符号、大小写是是正确？请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。

修改习作时可使用这些符号：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；删除／；语法错误G；

人称错误P；时态错误T；拼写错误Sp

项目标准自我评价同伴评价教师评价结构（3分）段落合理（2分）衔接自然（1分）内容（8分）你和家人的新年计划（2分）制定相应计划的目的（2分）如何实施计划（2分）拓展合理（2分）语言（3分）词汇丰富（1分）句法正确，语言优美（2分）卷面（1分）书写工整ShowTimeHello，everyone.HereareourplansforthecomingNewYear.Atfirst,I'mgoingtostudyhardertogetbettergrades.I'mgoingtohelpmymumdohouseworkbecauseIwanttoimprovemyrelationshipswithmyfamily.Then,mysisterexpectstokeephealthy，sosheisgoingtoeathealthierfoodanddomoreexercise.myparentshavetheirNew

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resolutions,too.Myfatherlikesplayingtheguitar，soheisgoingtotakeguitarlessonseveryweekend.Asformymum,sheisgoingtodomorereadingtoknowwhatishappeningaroundtheworld.Allinall,wewilltryourbesttomakeourNewYear'sresolutionscometrue.本文紧扣题目要求，开门见山，从家庭不同成员的新年计划入手。用了Atfirst,then,also,asfor,Allinall等词连接上下文。计划制定合理，阐述清晰，逻辑分明，首尾呼应。表达了他们制定相应计划的目的，并说明了将如何实施计划，内容充实，句式丰富。Homework: