译林版高中英语选择性必修第四册UNIT1表达作文巧升格学案

写一篇善意谎言的短文本单元要求写一篇关于善意谎言的短文，属于议论文的写作范畴。[基本框架]开头(thebeginning)——陈述观点主体(thebody)——列举原因和证据结尾(theending)——简要总结[常用词块]1．arousepeople'sconcerns引起人们的关注2．bringalotofbenefitstous给我们带来很多益处3．cannotresistthetemptation不能抵制诱惑4．arriveat/drawaconclusion得出结论5．copewiththeproblems处理这些问题6．cherishthewildanimals珍惜野生动物[常用语句]★精彩开头1．Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat...butIthink...2．We'vehadadiscussionaboutwhether...★正文佳句1．Somepeoplethinkthat...whileothersarguethat...2．Ifwecanmakegooduseoftime，thereisnodoubtthat...★余味结尾1．Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove，wecanconcludethat...2．Therefore，Ifirmlybelievethat...假定你是李华，本月是你校的读书月。作为校报的记者，你做了一项调查，发现很多学生忙于作业，没有时间进行课外阅读。请你就此用英文写一篇文章，阐述自己的看法，内容包括：1．阅读的好处；2．呼吁大家多读好书。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：课外阅读extra­curricularreading[学生习作]Lastweek，Icarriedoutasurveyonextra­curricularreadinginourschool.Inmyopinion，readingplaysanimportantpartinyourstudyandlife.First，readingcanbroadenyourvision.Youcangainknowledgefromthebooksyouread.Youcanalsobeinspiredandencouragedbybooks.Themoreyouread，themoreattractiveyoumayfindreadingis.Inshort，readingisveryuseful.Readsomegoodbookseveryday，andyou'llfindreadingmakesadifferencetoyourlife.点评：1．本篇习作符合写作要求，能够提出观点，分析原因，简要总结，结构合理，内容充实。2．能够使用动词­ing形式作主语、themore...themore...句型，以及“祈使句＋and＋陈述句”结构，使得文章表达流畅，语言丰富，更有层次感。3．第一段两句话之间不衔接，缺少过渡语句。[升格作文]Lastweek，Icarriedoutasurveyonextra­curricularreadinginourschoolandfoundmanystudentsdidn'tdothereadingbecauseoftheirheavyhomework.AsfarasI'mconcerned，westudentsshouldpayattentiontothereading.Extra­curricularreadingcanbroadenourhorizons.Notonlycanwegainknowledgefromthebooksweread，butalsowecangetinspirationandencouragement.Themoreweread，themoreattractivewemayfindreadingis.Inconclusion，readingisofgreatuse.Readsomegoodbookseveryday，andyou'llfindreadingmakesadifferencetoyourlife.在许多校园内，浪费现象普遍，造成很多不良影响。请你根据下列要点用英语写一篇短文，建议同学们从自身做起，减少浪费。1．很多同学养成浪费的习惯；2．浪费容易形成坏的饮食习惯，对健康成长不利；3．浪费会增加父母的经济负担；4．浪费会使有限的资源得不到充分利用。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可适当添加细节；3．开头已写好。参考词汇：经济负担financialburden；资源resourcesNowadaysit'scommontoseestudentswastingthingsinschool.【参考范文】Nowadaysit'scommontoseestudentswastingthingsinschool.Manystudentshaveformedthehabitofwastingthings.Forexample，someleavethelightsoninthedaytime，orletwaterrunningafterwashingtheirhands.Asweallknow，thesebadhabitswillhaveabadinfluenceonourcharacterandbehavior.Theynotonlyincreaseourcostatschoolandaddfinancialburdentoourp