浙江绍兴市2024学年高考压轴卷英语试卷(含解析)

浙江绍兴市2024学年高考压轴卷英语试卷

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第一部分（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）

1.Aftersevenhours5drive,theyreachedtheythoughtwastheplacetheyhadbeendreamingof.

A.thatB.what

C.whereD.which

2.Jackdecidedtochooseadifferentandteachhistorythroughstorytelling.

A.analysisB.angleC.attitudeD.approach

3.Whyyouchoosetoworkinaremotevillageschoolwhenyoucanownarespectablejobinacity?

A.needB.should

C.mustD.will

4.AmericansingerTaylorSwift,21,bigatthe2011AcademyofCountryMusicAwardsintheUSonApril3rd.

A.stoodB.gaveC.scoredD.made

5.Pllhaveallofthereadingsbytheendofthistermifmyplangoeswell.

A.completingB.tocomplete

C.completedD.beingcompleted

6.BillyCrystalhostedtheAcademyAwardsagainthisyear,andhisperformancesalwaystheexpectationsof

mostaudience.

A.signupforB.dropoutof

C.bebentonD.liveupto

7.Thereaslightdecreaseinhisweightbutheeatstoomuch.

A.wasB.couldhavebeen

C.hadbeenD.couldbe

8.ThismorningIpickedupwalletinsurpriseonmywaytoschool.

A.A;aB.the;aC.D.

9.Sometimesproperanswersarenotfartoseekfoodsafetyproblems.

A.inB.to

C.onD.after

10.Ifweusethenewrecyclingmethod,alargenumberoftrees.

A.aresavedB.willsaveC.willbesavedD.havesaved

11.AfterasandstormwarningonSundayevening,meteorologistsforecastthatdustyweatherwill

continueinpartsofthecountryonMonday.

A.breakingoffB.callingoffC.leavingoffD.puttingoff

12.isoftenthecase,wehaveworkedouttheproductionplan.

A.WhichB.WhenC.WhatD.As

13.一Smokingshouldbebannedinpublic.

一.Itisharmfultoboththesmokersandnon-smokers.

A.rdlovetoB.It'smypleasure

C.I'mwithyouonthatD.Ifsuptoyou

14.Withoutmyparents'encouragementandsupportIdefinitelywhereIamtoday.

A.wasn'tB.hadn'tbeen

C.wouldn,tbeD.wouldn'thavebeen

15.Thetwobrotherslooksomuchalikethatitisdifficultto.

A.tellthemfromB.tellfromthem

C.tellapartthemD.tellthemapart

16.ItisreportedthattheinLibyaishottingup.

A.strengthB.violenceC.powerD.activity

17.Itisthroughyearsofresearchscientistshavediscoveredtherelationshipbetweensocialmediaaddiction

anddepression.

A.sinceB.beforeC.thatD.when

18.一HowcanIwakeupsoearly?

一Setthealarmat5:00am.,youwillmakeit.

A.andB.but

C.orD.so

19.Hefinishedwritinghisfirstnovellastyear,andweallthinkthatishiscareerreallytookoff.

A.whereB.when

C.howD.why

20.makesmestressedistheentranceexaminationiscomingnearerandnearer.

A.It;whatB.What;thatC.What;whatD.That;that

第二部分阅读理解（满分40分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。

21.（6分）Somepeoplearesorude!

Whosendsane-mailoratextmessagethatjustsays"Thankyou"?Wholeavesavoicemailmessageratherthan

textsyou?WhoasksforafacteasilyfoundonGoogle?Don'tthesepeoplerealizethatthey'rewastingyourtime?

MaybeTmtherudeonefornotappreciatinglife'slittlepoliteness.Butmanysocialagreedstandardsjustdon't

makesensetopeopledrowningindigitalcommunication.

Intexts,youdon'thavetodeclarewhoyouareorevensayhello.E-mail,too,isslowerthanatext.Voicemailisa

nowimpolitewayoftryingtoconnect.

Myfatherlearnedthislessonafterleavingmeadozenvoicemailmessages,noneofwhichIlistenedto.Exasperated,

hecalledmysistertoexpresshisdissatisfactionthatIneverreturnedhisphonecalls."Whyareyouleavinghimvoice

mail?”mysisterasked.4（Justtext

Intheageofthesmartphone,thereisnoreasontoaskonce-acceptablequestionsabout:theweatherforecast,a

business'sphonenumber,ordirectionstoahouse,arestaurant,whichcanbeeasilyfoundonGoogleMaps.Butpeople

stillaskthesethings.Andwhenyouanswer,theyrespondwithathank-youe-mail.

Howtohandlethesedifferingstandards?Easy.Consideryouraudience.Somepeople,especiallyolderones,

appreciateathank-youmessage.Others,likeme,wantnoreply.

Theanthropologist（人类学家）MargaretMeadoncesaidthatintraditionalsocieties,theyounglearnfromtheold.

Butinmodemsocieties,theoldcanalsolearnfromtheyoung.Here'shopingthatpolitenessnevergoesoutoffashion

butthattime-wastingformsofcommunicationdo.

1、Whatdoestheunderlinedword“Exasperated“meaninthefifthparagraph?

A.Worried.B.Surprised.

C.Annoyed.D.Tired.

2、Whydidn'tthewriterreplytohisfather?

A.Helikedtextmessagesbetter.

B.Heenjoyedcheckinghisvoicemail.

C.Hedidn'treceiveanyvoicemailmessages.

D.Hedidn'twanttotalkwithhisfather.

3、Whichofthefollowingdoesthewriteragreeto?

A.Peopleneedn'tlearnfromoneanotherintraditionalsocieties.

B.Dealingwithvoicemailshouldvarywitheachindividual.

C.Peopleneedn'tturntoGoogleforhelpwhenintrouble.

D.Declaringwhoyouareorsayinghellointextsisnecessary.

4、Whafsthebesttitleforthispassage?

A.Nowadays:whatshouldwedowithtextmessages?

B.Nowadays:doyoulikeleavingothersavoicemessage?

C.Nowadays:whatmeansshouldweuseincommunication?

D.Nowadays:doyouneedathank-youmessage?

22.（8分）Ifyoucouldtravelbackintimefivecenturies,you'dencounterafreshlypainted“MonaLisa”in

RenaissanceEuropeandcoolertemperaturesacrosstheNorthernHemisphere.Thiswasaworldinthemidstofthe

LittleIceAgeandaperiodofvastEuropeanexplorationnowknownastheAgeofDiscovery.

Butwhatifwecouldlook500yearsintothefutureandglimpsetheEarthofthe26thcentury?Wouldtheworld

seemasdifferenttousasthe21stcenturywouldhaveseemedtoresidentsofthe16century?Forstarters,whatwillthe

weatherbelike?

Dependingonwhomyouask,the26thcenturywilleitherbealittlechillyorextremelyhot.Somesolaroutput

modelssuggestthatbythe2500s,Earth?sclimatewillhavecooledbackdowntonearLittleIceAgeconditions.Other

studiespredictthatongoingclimatechangeandfossilfuelusewillleavemuchoftheplanettoohotforhumanlifeby

2300.SomeexpertsdatethebeginningofhumanclimatechangebacktotheIndustrialRevolutioninthe1800s,othersto

slash-and-burnagriculturalpracticesinprehistorictimes.Eitherway,tool-wieldinghumansaltertheirenvironment

andour26thcenturytoolsmightbequiteimpressiveindeed.

TheoreticalphysicistandfuturistMichioKakupredictsthatinamere100years,humanitywillmaketheleapfrom

atypezerocivilizationtoatypeIcivilizationontheKardashevScale.Inotherwords,we'llbecomeaspeciesthatcan

usetheentiresumofaplanet?senergy,masteringcleanenergytechnologiessuchasfusionandsolarpower.

Furthermore,they'llbeabletohandleplanetaryenergyinordertocontrolglobalclimate.

Technologyhasimprovedsignificantlysincethe1500s,andthispacewilllikelycontinueinthecenturiestocome.

PhysicistStephenHawkingproposesthatbytheyear2600,thisgrowthwouldsee10newtheoreticalphysicspapers

publishedevery10seconds.IfMoore'sLawholdstrueandbothcomputerspeedandcomplexitydoubleevery18

months,thensomeofthesestudiesmaybetheworkofhighlyintelligentmachines.

Whatothertechnologieswillshapetheworldofthe26thcentury?FuturistandauthorAdrianBerrybelievesthe

averagehumanlifespanwillreach140yearsandthatthedigitalstorageofhumanpersonalitieswillenablea

computerizedstateoflivingforever.Humanswillfarmtheoceans,travelinstarshipsandresideinbothlunarand

Martiancolonieswhilerobotsexploretheoutercosmos.

1、WhydoestheauthormentiontheLittleIceAgeinthefirstparagraph?

A.Toshowtheseverityofthecurrentglobalwarming.

B.Tostressthecloseconnectionwiththecurrentclimate.

C.Toprovidecontrasttothepredictionoffutureclimate.

D.Toillustratetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.

2、ThepredictionthatEarthwillcooldownisbasedon.

A.changesinsolaractivityB.ongoingclimatechange

C.previousgeneralassumptionsD.currentconsumptionoffossilfuel

3、Whateffectwillthe26thcenturytechnologieshaveonhumanbeings?

A.Humanswillsufferfromsevereglobalwarming.

B.Cybertechnologyhelpshumanpersonalitiessurvive.

C.Humansneedn'tworkwiththeapplicationofrobots.

D.Highlyintelligentmachineswillreplacehumans.

23.（8分）HappyBirthdaytoMe（andMyMom）

Forty-threeyearsagomymotherwentintolabourforthesecondtime.ItwaseitherverylateNewYear'sDayor

veryearlyontheseconddayof1969dependingonhowyoulookedatitbuteitherway,itwasafullweekpastherdue

datewhenmymomwokeupknowingitwastimetowakemydadup,getdressed,packupthecarandheadtothe

hospital.Herregulardoctorwasonvacationandwhentheyreachedthehospitaltheyplannedtodeliverinweretold

thatthedoctorwasonhiswaytoanotherhospitalsotheyshouldheadthere,inaneighbouringcity.Mostsurprisingto

menowisthatshefeltwellenoughtoattendaNewYear'spartythepreviousnightandstayedlongenoughtotoastin

thenewyear!

MymomandherfamilyhadimmigratedtotheUnitedStatesjusttwentyyearsearlierfromElSalvador.Andthat

wasaluckythingforme.NotonlydidmymomgainaccesstoabettereducationandcareeroptionshereintheUSfor

herselfeachofherthreedaughterswouldalsoenjoyheraccesstoqualitymaternity（孕产妇的）care.WhiletheUSis

hardlytheworldleaderinmaternalhealthorbirthoutcomes,thesedaysawomanfacesa1in2,100riskofdyingduring

herlifeandinElSalvador,it's1in350-6timesworse.In1969,thatdifferencewasevengreater.

However,IwaspregnantwithmysecondchildinElSalvadorsixyearsagowhenIrealizedhowverydifferentmy

lifemighthaveturnedoutifI'dlivedtherewhenIdeliveredmyfirstchild.ItravelleddowntherewithCARE,the

humanitarianrelieforganization,whoseeffortsmymomhadlongsupported,toseesomeoftheirprincipalprogrammes

inaction.Amongthemwasoneinparticularthatremainswithmetoday.Itwasawaterprojectwherepregnantwomen,

manyofwhomhadwalkedmilestoaccessthiscleanwater,receivesomebasiccarebeforeorafterchildbirth.Herethese

womenwere,facingtheexactsamephysicalchallengesasmebutstillcarryingthefallworkloadofthefamilyandwith

littletonoresourcesforinformation,care,transportationorcomfortduringoraftertheirpregnancies.

Bythistime,Iwasalltooawareofwhatachallengechildbirthcouldbe.Afterdeliveringmydaughterin2003,1

survivedahemorrhage（大出血）,theleadingchildbirth-relatedcomplicationthattakesthelivesofthousandsofother

mothersallovertheworld.Onegirlorwomandiesevery90secondsinpregnancyorchildbirthfromwhatisinmost

casesapreventabledeath.IwasasshockedasyouarewhenIdiscoveredthisfactbutIwasalsograteful.Grateful

becauseIhadbeeninthecareofateamofhealthworkerswhenIneededthemmost.

Ithoughtofmymother'slife.WhileshehadbeenbominagoodhospitalinSanSalvadorinthe1930?s,atthattime

pregnancy-relateddeathswerecommonevenintheUS.Mygreatgrandmotheralsohemorrhaged,onlyafterdelivering

herfifthchildandshedied.Herhusband,mymom'sgrandfatherwasaphysicianatthetime.Hewouldgiveup

practisingmedicineforeverwhenhecouldn'tsaveher.

Butitwasn'tonlymymomandherfamilythatIthoughtofasIconsideredmyownfateandgoodfortune,itwas

allthosewomenI'dspentthedaywithintheruralcommunityI'dvisitedwithCARE.We'dmadeaconnectionthatday,

wemothers,aswomen.Thesewomendidnothaveaccesstothesimpleinterventions（介入）thatcouldinsuretheir

survivalandthat'swhatconcernedme.Itdidmorethanconcernme,itwokemeupandbeggedthisquestion,why

shouldanyonelifebeofdifferentvaluethananyother?

Andso,ImadethecommitmentrightthereandthentodoallIcouldtoimprovematernalhealthandreducethe

numberofmaternaldeathsaroundtheglobe.

1、Theunderlinedphrase“wentintolabour^^inParagraph1means"

A.sufferedfromadiseaseB.gavebirthtoababy

C.tookupanofferofworkD.tidiedupthehouse

2、Accordingtothepassage,thewriterfeltfortunateenough.

A.toenjoythebestmaternitycareintheworld

B.toattendbetterschoolsintheUnitedStates

C.toliveinadevelopedcountrypermanently

D.tohaveabettersenseofmaternalsecurity

3、Whenshereturnedtohermotherlandsixyearsago,thewriter.

A.regrettednotdeliveringherfirstchildthere

B.wasverysurprisedatthegreatchangesthere

C.offeredspecialcaretowomeninneedthere

D.researchedintothemedicalconditionsthere

4、Thewriterrealizedthevitalimportanceofmaternitycare

A.throughherownexperience

B.withthehelpofhealthworkers

C.duringherstayinElSalvador

D.uponthedeathofsomewomen

5、Thewriterisobviouslydeterminedto.

A.beaphysiciandifferentfromhergreatgrandfather

B.changethesituationinthefieldofmaternalhealth

C.requestmorepeopletocareaboutmaternitycare

D.volunteercareduringorafterwomen'spregnancies

6、Whatconclusiondoesthepassageleadyouto?

A.Pregnancy-relateddeathscanhardlybekeptfromhappening.

B.Birthanddeathwenthandinhandwitheachotherveryoften.

C.Physiciansfailedtosavepatientsfromvariouscurablediseases.

D.Womenwouldratherhavenochildrenfortearofahemorrhage.

24.（8分）Openwaterswimming

Ihadonlyswuminopenwaterafewtimes,andalwaysingentlelakes,soIwasn'tpreparedforhowroughLake

Windermereappearedonacoldday.Aswimmertoldmethewaterfeltcolderthanithadbeenmeasured,andthatthe

waterwasabitrough.ButI,alongwith10,000others,wasabouttocompletethechallenge.

Mostofthepeopletakingpartweredoingaone-milerace,and10raceswereplannedovertheweekend.There

seemedtobeamixofopen-waterenthusiastsalongsidecompletebeginners—whichispreciselytheaimoftheswims,to

getasmanypeopleaspossiblecompletingtheirownchallenge.Theoldestwomancompetingwas77,takingpartinthe

two-milerace,alongsideamanwholastyearhadswumineveryone-milerace.

Ihadchosenthethirdone-mileraceoftheday.Therewereover600peopleinmyrace.Weweretakenthroughan

acclimatizationarea,achildren'spaddlingpool-sizedpartofthelakewherewemovedintofeelhowcoldthewaterwas.

“Nottoobad“waseveryone'sthought!Thenweheadedouttowardsthemiddleofthelake.

We'dbeenwarnedthatthefirst100metreswouldbereallyrough.However,somewherenearthe750mmarkIwas

stillwaitingforthecalm;itfeltmorelikeswimmingintheseathanalake.Itriedtofocusonmybreathingand

technique,andjustkeepgoing.AsIapproachedthe400m-to-gomarkmylowerrightlegbecamepainful.Irecalled

overhearingpeopletalkingabouthowtheykeptswimmingthroughthepain,soItried.Butitdidn'twork.Ibeganto

feeltheentirelegtightandpainful.Ididn'twanttostop,soIbentmyrightkneeandjustkickedwiththeleftleg.

FinallyIsawthefinishingpost,andIjustconcentratedongettingthere一stillone-legged.Myfinishingtimewas38

minutes25secondsbutthatdidn,tmattertheatmospherewasfantasticandeveryonefeltasenseofachievement,

whatevertheirtime.I'mhooked,andwanttogiveitanothergo.I'vealreadysignedupformynextopen-waterswim.

1、Howdidtheauthorfeelbeforetherace?

A.Scaredofthemostchallengingrace.

B.Disappointedbythedifficultconditions.

C.Concernedabouttheotherswimmersintherace.

D.Determinedtobeastoughasthepeoplearoundher.

2、WhydoestheauthormentionthetwopeopleinParagraph2?

A.Tostresstheimportanceoftherace.

B.Topraisetheexperiencedswimmers.

C.Toshowthewiderangeoftheparticipants.

D.Tointroducethevariouseventsoftherace.

3、TheauthorsuggestsinParagraph4that.

A.theracewouldcausebreathingproblems

B.theracebecameharderthanshehadexpected

C.itwasreallynecessarytopreparefortoughswims

D.itwouldhavebeeneasierifshehadtakenothers5advice

4、Whatdoestheauthortalkaboutinthelastparagraph?

A.Herconfidenceinherownability.

B.Herprideinhavingswumsoquickly.

C.Hereagernesstorepeattheexperience.

D.Hersurpriseathavingmanagedtofinish.

25.（10分）Howterribleitwouldbeiftherewasfire!TodayisNovember9.Ifstimeforustolearnalotmore

aboutfire,especiallywhattodoifwearecaughtinafire:

1.Shoutout

Ifyousmellsmokeorseefire,shoutout"Fire"!Shoutasloudlyasyoucan,becausepeoplemaybeasleep.

2.Call119

Nevertrytoputoutthefireyourself,evenifitisaverysmallone!Gethelpfromyourparentsorcall119.

3.Keepdownclosetothefloor

Ifthereisalotofsmokeinyourroom,keepdownclosetothefloor.

4.Testthedoor

Testthedoorbeforeyouopenit.Ifthedooriscool,openitcarefully.Ifthedoorishot,donotopenit!Trytofinda

differentwayout.

5.Getout

Ifyoucan,getoutofyourhomeassoonaspossible.

6.Don'tusethelift

Neverusetheliftduringthefire.Itmayalsogowrong.

7.Don'tgoback

Nevergobackintoaburningbuilding!

1、Thepassageismainlyabout

A.howtolookafteryourselfwhenonfire

B.whattodowhenyouarecaughtinafire

C.whentoleavetheburningplace

D.whytocall119whenitisonfire

2、Whenpeopleareasleep,whatwillyoudowhenfirebreaksout?

A.Callforhelpasquicklyasyoucan.B.Wakeyourparentsupfast.

C.Shoutout"Fire!”asloudlyasyoucan.D.Runasfastasyoucan.

3、Whenafireisburning,youtestthedoorto.

A.findabetterwayoutB.noticethefireclearly

C.callforamuchquickerhelpD.seeifitisclosed

4、Ifyouarecaughtinafire,youshouldnot.

A.shoutoutB.keepdownclosetothefloor

C.call119D.usethelift

第三部分语言知识运用（共两节）第一节（每小题1.5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、

C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项.

26.（30分）Oneofthequalitiesthatmostpeopleadmireinothersisthewillingnesstoadmitone'smistakes.ltis

extremelyhardsometimestosaya（n）1thinglike']waswrongaboutthat”,anditisevenhardertosayJIwas

wrong,andyouwererightaboutthat”.

AndIhadanexperiencerecentlywithsomeoneadmittingtomethathehadmade2fifteenyearsago.Hetold

mehehadbeenthe3ofacertainstoreintheneighborhoodwhereIgrewup,andheaskedme4I

rememberedtheeggboxes.Thenhetoldme5andIbegantoremembervaguelywhathewasdescribing.

Iwasabouteightyearsoldatthetime,andIhadwanderedinto6withmymothertodotheweekly

shopping.Onthat7day.Imusthavefoundmywaytothedairyfooddepartment8theincidenttook

place.Theremusthavebeenaspecialsaleoneggsthatdaybecausetherewasanimpressive9ofeggsindozenand

half-dozenboxes.Theboxeswerepiledthreeorfourfeethigh.Imuststoppedinfromofthemtoadmirethe

10.justthen11cameby,pushinghergrocerycart,12theboxescarelesslyandleft.Forsomereason,113

toputthedisplaybacktogethereventhoughitwasnotmy14soIbegantowork.

Themanagerheardthe15andcamerushingovertoseewhathadhappened.Whenheappeared,!wasonmy

knees16someoftheboxestoseeifanyoftheeggswere17,buttohimitlookedasifIwasthewrongdoer.He

severelyscoldedmeandwantedme18anybrokeneggstomakeuptotheloss.ItriedtoexplainthatIwaslooking

attheboxes,butit19nogood.EventhoughIdidn'tregretformydecisionandquicklyforgotallabouttheincident,

20themanagerdidnot.

1、A.pleasantB.enjoyableC.simpleD.difficult

2、A.andiscoveryB.afriendC.anincidentD.amistake

3、A.bossB.cleanerC.cashierD.manager

A.ifB.howC.whyD.when

5、A.astoryB.thedepartmentC.anaccidentD.anincident

6、A.theshopB.thestoreC.thesupermarketD.thegrocery

7、A.usualB.luckyC.wonderfulD.particular

8、A.whereB.afterC.untilD.though

9、A.exhibitsB.storageC.displayD.boxes

10、A.eggsB.boxesC.storageD.sale

11、A.awomanB.acustomerC.amanagerD.astranger

12、A.knockedonB.knockedoverC.knockedoffD.knockedat

13、A.declaredB.beganC.decidedD.started

14、A.faultB.taskC.eggsD.boxes

15、A.screamB.alarmC.noiseD.call

16、A.tocheckB.checkingC.checkedD.havingchecked

17、A.badB.goodC.lostD.broken

18、A.topayoffB.topaybackC.topayforD.topayout

19、A.wasB.didC.workedD.had

20、A.obviouslyB.frequentlyC.unfortunatelyD.unnecessarily

第二节（每小题1.5分，满分15分）阅读下面材料，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

27.(15分)Carryisafellowstudentofmine.Hesuffersfromcerebralpalsy(大脑性麻痹)，whichmakesitalmost

impossibleforhimtocontrolhismovements.Asaresult,hespendshislifeinawheelchairandcannotwrite1meansof

apenorpencil.Andhespeakssoslowlyandstrangely2.ittakespatiencetounderstandwhatheissaying.This,together

withhisthin,twistedbodyandawkward3.(face)expressions,canoftencausepeopletotreathimasifhewerea

backwardchild.

However,behindhisphysical4.(appear),Carryisawarm,fun-loving,intelligentperson.Hismuscles5(affect),

nothismindorpersonality.Heenjoysthesamethinganystudentdoes--6.(listen)tomusic,meetingfriendsandso

on—andhenotisthebeststudentinourclass,butalsohas7.excellentsenseofhumourandagenuineinterestinother

people.Unabletoexpresshimself8.(easy)inconversation,heusesaspecialtypewritertowriteletterstohisfriends,

andbeautiful9.(poem).Helivesaveryregularlife,studyingeverydayandneverallowing10_(he)tofallbehindin

hisschoolwork.

第四部分写作(共两节)第一节短文改错(满分10分)

28.(10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。文中共有10处语言错误,

每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Challengesoflifeareofgreatimportanceinourgrow.ItremindsmemydayswhenIjoinedinthemilitarytraining

afterIenteredseniorhighschool.ItwasthefirsttimeIhavelivedawayfrommyhome,soIfounditdifficultlytofitin.

trialsmadeiteasyformetoadapttomyfuturelife,butthedifficultiesIcameacrosshavenowbecometheprecious

memoryinmylife.

Inshort,learningtoregardthechallengesoflifeasasteppingstonetofuturesuccessandmakethebestofthem.

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

29.（25分）根据下面的提示，简要介绍杰出科学家爱因斯坦。

1.爱因斯坦（1879年3月14日一1955年4月18日）出生于德国；

2.其相对论（TheoryofRelativity）闻名于世，1921年获得诺贝尔物理学奖；

3.年少时害羞，不喜欢上学，不喜欢与人交往，一生中多数时间喜欢独处，喜欢音乐；

4.不看重金钱，热爱和平，致力于人权和社会进步。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

AlbertEinsteinisoneofthe20thcentury'sgreatest