高中英语必修2Unit4InformationTechnology单元写作梳理学案

2020-2021学年新北师大版高中英语必修2：Unit4InformationTechnology单元写作梳理SectionⅥWriting——个人简介本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用文体类别中的个人简介。个人简介一般用来在参加某个俱乐部或某项活动时简要介绍自己。个人简介一般包括用户名、年龄、地址、自我简介、参加该俱乐部原因等。Ⅰ.Pre－writing(Ⅰ)LearntowriteafterthemodelUsername HappyHermioneAge 17Mylocation(optional) WuhanAboutme I’maseniorsecondaryschoolstudentandmyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.Ialsoenjoyhistoryandgeography,andIloveexploringnewplaceswithmyfamily.Inmyfreetime,I’musuallyinthelibraryorattheparkwithagoodbook.I’vealwayslovedtoread!Ithinkreadingisjustanotherwayofexploringtheunknownworld.It’sanexcitingexperienceforme.That’swhyIbelievethatbooksaboutforeignculturesorimaginaryworldsarethebest！Favoritetypesofbooks FantasyandtravelFavoritebooks IlikeallthebooksintheHarryPotterseries.However,Ibelievethefirstoneisthebest.Inmyopinion,theauthordidanamazingjobofcreatingawholenewworldthroughthisbook.Afterreadingit,Iwantedtofindoutwhathappenedtoeachofthecharacters.IlikeHermionemost,becausewehavealotincommon.Arethereotherreaderswhoalsolikeher？Reasonforjoiningthereadingclub Ithinkit’sfuntohearaboutnewbooksthatotherpeopleenjoy.Isthereafantasybookthatyoureallylike?Let’sshareideas.(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①advantagen．优势；有利条件②graduationn.毕业③applicationn.申请④confidencen.自信⑤choosev.选择⑥favoriteadj.最喜爱的⑦explorev.探索⑧enjoyv.享受；喜欢⑨beinterestedin对……感兴趣⑩wouldliketodo...想要做……⑪prefertodo...更喜欢，宁愿⑫inone’sopinion依某人看来⑬findout找出；查找；发现⑭inone’ssparetime在某人的业余时间Ⅱ.While－writing假定你是李华，17岁，就读于济南某中学。你校成立了青年志愿者协会，你想报名参加，于是向协会提出申请，简要介绍你自己并陈述你加入这个组织的理由。理由包括：1.在现代社会里帮助别人是礼貌行为，且我们处于困境时也需要他人帮助；2.通过帮助别人，自己获得体验，增强信心；3.志愿者活动使生活更有意义，使世界更美好。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Username:LiHuaAge：17Mylocation(optional)：Jinan,ChinaAboutme：简要自我介绍ReasonforjoiningtheYoungVolunteersAssociation：礼貌行为；获得体验，增强信心；使生活更有意义，使世界更美好Step2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1．Wordsandphrases①excellentadj.优秀的；卓越的②mannersn.礼貌③experiencen.体验；经历④rewardingadj.有益的；值得的⑤begoodat擅长于⑥getalongwellwith与……相处融洽⑦lastbutnotleast最后但并非最不重要的是⑧incase以防万一⑨buildupone’sconfidence建立自信心⑩makeadifference有影响；起(重要)作用2．Sentences①我们能够通过帮助他人来提高自己，因为我们可以在服务他人的时候获得有价值的体验，增强信心。(beabletodo；while)Weareabletoimproveourselvesbyhelpingothersbecausewecangainvaluableexperienceandbuildupourconfidencewhileservingothers．②志愿者活动使我们自我感觉更好，从而使我们的生活更有意义。(make复合结构)Volunteeringmakesusfeelbetteraboutourselves，thusmakingourlifemoremeaningful．Step3Draftaprofilebyusingthefollowingwords.besides,lastbutnotleast,firstofall,second,what’smore,moreimportantly，inawordUsername LiHuaAge 17Mylocation(optional)： Jinan,ChinaAboutme I’manexcellentstudent,amongthetop3inmyclass.MyfavoritecourseisEnglishandI’mgoodatEnglish,especiallyspokenEnglish.Inmysparetime,IlikereadingChinesenovelsandancientpoems.Beinganactiveyoungperson,Ilikesportsandoutdooractivities.Besides,I’measytogetalongwellwithandIliketomakefriends.Lastbutnotleast,Iliketohelpothers.ReasonforjoiningtheYoungVolunteersAssociation Firstofall，itisgoodmannerstohelpothers，especiallyinmodernsociety.Weneedothers’helpincasewegetintotrouble.Second，wecangainvaluableexperienceandbuildupourconfidencewhileservingothers.What’smore，volunteeringmakesusfeelbetteraboutourselves，thusmakingourlifemoremeaningful.Moreimportantly，wecanmaketheworldabetterplacetoliveinbyvolunteering.Inaword，volunteeringcanmakeadifferencetoourlife，andIthinkitisveryrewardingtobeavolunteer.Ⅲ.Post－writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner,andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Istheformatofthepersonalprofileappropriate?□2.Arethereanyspellingmistakes?□3.Arethereanygrammaticalmistakeslikethetenses(时态)?□4.Doesthepersonalprofileincludeallthemaincontents?□5.IssimpleandinformalEnglishcorrectlyused?2．长短句交替使用长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。在具体语言活动中，最好长短句交替使用。这既体现了节奏上的要求，也是意义上的需要。3．巧用连接词要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要正确使用连接词。例如：first,second,third,lastbutnotleast。亮点表达1．Itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunity/chancetointroducemyself.今天有机会进行自我介绍深感荣幸。2．Iam...yearsold,bornin...Province,northeast/southeast/southwest...ofChina,andIamnowastudentin...我今年……岁，出生在……省，它位于中国的东北/东南/西南……部。我目前是……的学生。3．Ienjoybasketball/volleyball/football/badminton/pingpong.我喜欢篮球/排球/足球/羽毛球/乒乓球。4．Ilookforwardtobecomingpartof...我希望成为……的一员。5．Ihavelotsofinterests,suchassinging,dancing,drawingandsoon.我有很多兴趣爱好，如唱歌、跳舞、画画等。6．Tosumup,IbelieveIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteer.IwillvalueitanddoallIcanifIcouldbeacceptedtobeone.总而言之，我相信我能成为一名合格的志愿者。如果我被接受作为一名志愿者，我会珍惜它，尽我所能来做好。7．Inaword，volunteeringhasbroughtmanybenefitstooursociety，thosewhoareinneedaswellasthevolunteersthemselves.Therefore,letusenjoythetimewhenservingasavolunteer.总之，志愿服务为我们社会带来了许多好处，也给那些有需要的人以及志愿者自己带来了好处。因此，让我们好好享受作为一个志愿者的时光吧。8．Inaword,I’dliketohelppeoplewhoneedhelp.Ifeveryonehelpsoutabit,theworldwillbemorecolorful.总之，我想帮助那些需要帮助的人。如果每个人都能帮上一点忙，世界就会变得更加多彩。写作技巧1．注意篇章结构，合理布局开始部分——说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分——围绕主题展开叙述。结尾部分——对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出，段落之间必须是有机的联系，内容完整、连贯。语言知识积累关于网上购物的常用口语1．Doyouoftenshoponline?你经常网上购物吗？2．SometimesIsurfonlineshopstocheckoutwhattheyhaveandthengotoaphysicalstoretodotheactualshopping.有时候，我会逛逛网店，看看店里有什么，然后到实体店去买。3．Canthequalityofgoodsonlinebeguaranteed?网上商品的质量能有保证吗？4．Pricesareoftenrelativelyloweronline.通常，网上的价格相对比较低。5．EventhoughIshoponline,Idon’tthinkit’sthebestwaytoshop.虽然我在网上购物，但我认为这并不是最好的购物途径。6．Youcanapplyfora