一模英语读后续写-给与的快乐 讲义 高三上学期英语作文复习专项

读后续写原材料会有一些续写提示：1.突然出现的新人物，但是全文只提这1-2次2.突然提到的某个东西，和续写首句的某个东西相似3.剩下的我之前都讲过（人物给的建议、名言、情绪的突然转变、新地点、回忆）等来看这篇文章Sistaracedahead,theseabreezestreamingagainstherface.Rafifinallycaughtupandthentheyrestedintheshade.I’mhungry.Iknowwherethere’sagreatappletree.”Sistasaid,“ItbelongstoanoldladycalledSusanwholivesinthelittlehousebythehill.Iheardshe’s

stubborn（只要原材料说某个人怎么怎么不好，后边一定有反转）,butthatsometimesshegivesfruitinreturnforanerrand(跑腿).”“Let’sgo,”Rafisaid.Theycrossedastreambyhoppingfromrocktorock.Finally,uponahilltop,theysawasplendidappletreewithbrightredfruits.Asmallfarmhousestoodatthebottomofthehill.Rafi’sheartpoundedasSistaknockedonthedoor.Anelderlywomananswered.“Yes?”theladyasked,staringatthegirls.“Weheard...“saidSista,hervoiceshaky,“thatwecouldrunanerrandforyouinexchangeforapples.”Susanraisedoneeyebrow.“Ah,yes.”Sheclickedhertongue.“Nothingisfree,eh?”Sheledthegirlsintothekitchen.Whenpassingthelivingroom,Sistafoundthatthewallwasdecoratedwith

colourfulcrayondrawings,whichseemtobechildren’s【突然提到新人物和新事物，应该续写要用上】.

ShewonderedwhodrewthesesinceSusanwasalone,withnograndchildren,evennofamiliesorrelatives.

Theladygrabbedtwobaskets,onelargeandonesmall,andpushedthemintothegirlshands.“Gofillthesewithapples.Comerightback.”【主线任务】Thegirlsracedupthehilltothetree,climbedthebranches,andpickedtheripestapples.Afterfillingthebaskets,theyreturnedtothehouse.Susanfilledabagwithriceanddriedbeans,andthenshehandedittoSista.“TakethisbagandthelargebasketofapplestotheGomezfamily.Doyouknowthem?”Thegirlsnodded.SistahadheardthatMr.GomezhasbeensickinbedforalongtimeandMrs.Gomezhastoraisethreelittlekids.“Good.Andaskthem

forthepayment,"【payment是什么？肯定不是钱，一般读后续写里的人物不会太看重钱——这和出题价值观有关】

Susanaddedwithatightsmile.注意：1.

续写词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thegirlshittheroad.

WhenSusanopenedtheenvelope,thegirlssawthepayment!

分析续写首句与设计情节1.先看第二段续写首句

openedtheenvelope

（1）揭露了：这个envelope里边是什么，一定要回扣原文提示的信息（2）原文只提示了“children’spainting”（3）所以这个信封里应该是Painting2.根据第二段续写首句确定第一段续写结尾：由这一段续写首句得知：第一段续写结尾一定是【他们完成任务回来了】3.确认全文主旨、结尾升华：突出Suan的善良4.回过来看第一段续写（1）上路（2）SistaandRafi抱怨篮子很重（3）两个人轮流拿着才勉勉强强撑过一段路（4）不过也只能通过这种方法来获得苹果（5）到达Mr.Gomez家里，MrsGomez出来迎接，因为MrGomez生病了（6）交流了一下（7）MrsGomez给了她们一个厚厚的信封（8）她们两个猜这里应该是钱，没想到值这么多钱，吐槽Susan黑心5.第二段续写（1）发现原来是一幅幅的画，就是屋子里挂的那些（2）这是Susan也露出笑容，说着这些画是多么美丽（3）这时候SistaandRafi才发现误会了Susan，没想到她是这么kindandgenerous的lady（4）然后Susan对她们说谢谢，说只能通过这种方式帮他们（5）两个女生也拿到了自己的payemnt-apples（6）升华续写部分第一段Thegirlshittheroad.Theygrumbledabouttheheavybaskets."Thesebasketsaresoheavy,"Sistacomplained,herarmsaching.Rafinodded."Let'staketurns,"shesuggested.Theyswitchedoff,eachgirltakingaturnwiththeheavierbasket.Afteratiringjourney,theyreachedtheGomezhouse.Mrs.Gomez,wholookedverytired,greetedthemwarmly."Hello,Mrs.Gomez,"Sistasaid."Susansentustobringyoutheseapplesandthisbagofriceandbeans.""Thankyousomuch,girls.Thismeansalottous.Mr.Gomezhasbeensickinbed,andit'sbeenhardtomanageeverything."

shesaid,givingthemathickenvelope.Theyexchangedlooksandthoughtitismoney,thinkingofSusanasgreedy.第二段WhenSusanopenedtheenvelope,thegirlssawthepayment!Initfilledthecolorfulcrayondrawingstheyhadseenearlier（完全倒装）."ThesearetheGomezchildren'sdrawings,"Susanexplainedwithasmile.ItwasnotuntilthenthatSistaandRafirealizedhowkindandgeneroustheoldladywas."Ithoughtshewasgreedy,butshe’skindandgenerous,"SistamurmuredtoRafi.ThenSusanthankedthemwarmly,saying,"Thisismysimplewayofhelping.Ortheywouldhaven’tacceptedmyhelp."Thegirls