高中英语作文模拟训练20题(含例文解析)

高中英语作文模拟训练20题（含例文解析）

学校:姓名：班级：考号：

一、读后续写

1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

TheActofLove

Ihatepullingweeds!Ithought.It'shot.It*ssticky.Andit*sSaturday!

Still,Imadesuretopulleverystinking（臭的）weedoutofthatflowergarden.Mydad

wasMr.PerfectoLawnman.Hecoulddetectasingleweedamileaway.Andifhespottedas

muchasoneweed,Edbebackpullingweedsfbrtherestoftheday.

“Dad.I'mdone."Ishoutedfromthegarden,feelingsurethatIhaddoneagoodjob.He

stormedoutofthehouse."Don'tbeyellingoutside,Kathy,'1hegrumbled（抱怨）."Use

thosetwofeetofyoursandcomegetme."

Suddenly,asickfeelingcameoverme.ItwasthekindoffeelingIhadwhenmydadwas

goingtofindastinkingweed."Geez,"Dadsaid,wavinganirritated（恼怒的）finger,"you

missedaspot.'1Isighed,wenttothespotandpulledtheweeds.Afterward,Ilookedbackat

Dad,stillstandingtherewithascowl（怒容）onhisface,whichmademewonderifheeven

likedme.

Justthen,awettonguewashedovermyface,breakingmefrommythoughts.Sugar,our

dog,lookedatmegently.Ismiled."Atleastyoulikeme.”

Twoweekslater,onthemorningofanotherweedpickingweekend,Iwassick,sweaty

andfeverish,andachingallover."Let'sgo,"Dadsaid,liftingmefromthebed,"Youneedto

seeadoctor."nPlease,no,“Isaid,inashallow,sicklyvoice,"Fdratherpullweeds."Hetook

meanyway,andthedoctorsaidIhadpneumonia（肺炎）.Theonlynicethingaboutitwas

thatIdidn'thavetopullweeds.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thatnight,asIrested,anoisesuddenlywokemeupfrommysleep.

Whenhewasgone,Ireachedovertothenightstand（床头柜）andpickedupthenecklace.

［答案］Thatnight,asIrested,anoisesuddenlywokemeupfrommysleep.Iopenedmy

eyesjustasliver,fromwhichIsawatall,slenderform.Enoughmoonlightshinedthroughmy

windowsothatIcouldseeitwasmydad."Whyishehere?^^Iwondered,butstillpretended

tobesleeping.Surprisingly,hecameuptome,puttinghishandagainstmyforehead.Afterall

these,helaidanecklaceonmynightstand,lookingatmeagainquietlyforawhile,andthen

left.

Whenhewasgone,1reachedovertothenightstand（床头柜）andpickedupthenecklace.It

wasn9tlikeanyI'deverseenbefore.Danglingfromagoldenchainwasadadbendinghis

armaroundagirl'sshoulder,andthegirllookedjustlikeme!Theyseemedtoloveeachother

deeply.Withshakinghands,Iheldthatnecklacetomyheartandcried.Mydad,whonever

gavehugsandneversaid,"Ilove...^^hadjustsaiditall.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者非常讨厌除草，却总是被父亲要求去除草并

做到最好，作者怀疑父亲是否喜欢自己。一天早晨，作者生病了，父亲带作者去看医

生，医生建议作者休息。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，当我休息时，一声巨响突然把我从睡梦中惊醒。’'可

知，第一段可描写作者看到父亲来到在自己的卧室，仍然假装睡觉时看到父亲在床头

柜上放了一条项链。

②由第二段首句内容“他走后，我伸手到床头柜前拿起项链。”可知，第二段可描写作

者看到项链是什么样子的，感受到父亲是爱自己的。

2.续写线索：惊醒——看到父亲——假装睡觉——父亲留下项链——观察项链——父

亲的爱

3.词汇激活

行为类

①走近我：comeuptome/comeclosetome

②放下：lay/put/place

③握住：hold/catchholdof

情绪类

①令人惊讶的是：surprisingly/toone'ssurprise

②深爱对方：loveeachotherdeeply/deeplyinlovewitheachother

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Iopenedmyeyesjustasliver,fromwhichIsawatall,slenderform.（由“介

词+which”引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Mydad,whonevergavehugsandneversaid,t4Ilove...,,hadjustsaiditall.

（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）

2.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

AnAdventureontheBeach

It'saperfectfamilysummerseasideholiday.Occasionallysomewhitecloudsfloated

acrossthebluesky.Thesandybeachwassoftandcomfortable.Thewaterwasglisteringin

themorningsunlightandthesurfwascoolontheirfeetasKrinandPaulaleisurelywalked

alongthewateredge.Thebrotherandsisterbegantomakesomesandcastles.Notfaraway,

mothersatunderabigumbrella,readingabookwithabottleoflemonadeinherhand.Father

wasbusyexchangingafewwordsofgreetingswiththestrangershemetonthebeach.

Suddenly,Krinspottedsomepiecesofseashellslyingscatteredonthepicturesquebeach

andsmallholesstretchingalongitwherethecrabshadhidden.HeimmediatelyinvitedPaula

tocollectshellsandsearchtheholestogetherwithhim.Theywerehavingaballexploring

whatappearedtobeanever-endingbeach.

Afterawhile,theystoppedandlookedback.Theirparentsandtheumbrellas,beach

chairs,andcrowdswerealongwayoff.Butjustahead,hiddenamongstseagrapetreesstood

arun-downhousethatseemedtobeoutofrepairforyears.Itappearedtobeunoccupied.

Curious,theywenttoinvestigate.

Thefrontstepstothedoorwayofthehousecreaked（嘎吱作响）astheycarefully

climbedupthem,sodidtheporchwhentheysteppedontoit.Thedustywindowsandporch

railing（门廊栏杆）werebadlyweatheredandbroken.Thefrontdoorwashalfopensothey

squeezedthroughandcautiouslyentered.Theplacewasinatotalmess,coveredwithdust,

sand,deadleaves,andoverturnedfurniture.They'dtakenbutafewstepswhenthedoor

unexpectedlyslammedshutbehindthem.

Scared,KrinandPaulawerefrozentothespot.Butbeforetheycouldevenutter

somethinglike“Oh-oh,“thewindowsabruptlyclosed,too.Andifthiswasn'tscaryenough,

thestairstothesecondfloorcreakedloudly.Whenalightinthebackbedroomflickered（摇

曳），thatwasabsolutelythefinalstraw.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph1:

“Let'sgetoutofhere,Paula!”screamedKrin.

Paragraph2:

Outtheyran,allthewaybacktothosewonderfulumbrellas,beachchairs,andcrowds.

【答案】"Letsgetoutofhere,Paula!”screamedKrin.ButitseemedthatPauladidn'thear

anything,andmuchtohishorror,Krinspottedhissisterstandingthere,withherfrightened

eyesstaringattheswinginglightandthecreakingstairs.Foramoment,adesperateand

terriblesilencespreadthroughthehouse.Krinalmostfelthisbloodfrozeninhischestashe

sawwhatwashappeningaround.Afterseeminglyalongtime,hismindbegantoraceagain,

tryingtothinkhowtheycouldbreakdownthecloseddoorandescape.Immediately,he

grabbedholdofhissister'shand,dashedtothefrontdoor,andinthemeanwhileletoutacry,

“Comeon,Paula”

Outtheyran,allthewaybacktothosewonderfulumbrellas,beachchairs,andcrowds."Did

youseewhatitwas?"PaulasaidtoKrin."Whateveritis,Idon'twanttogoback."Krinsaid.

Thentheycalmeddownfbrawhile,wentbacktotheirparents,andtoldthemabouttheir

experience.Buttheparentsjustblamedthemfortheirrunningaroundwithoutpermissionand

didn'tbelievewhattheysaid.Butinanycase,theycametotheconclusionthatchildren

shouldnotwanderintooldrun-downhouses.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了Krin和Paula在海边捡贝壳时发现了一座废弃的

房子，处于好奇他们进去查看，但没想到门窗都突然关上，令人毛骨悚然。

【详解】

1.段落续写

①根据第一段首句“'我们走吧，Paula!'Krin尖叫道。”可知，接下来可描写他们在废

弃屋子里的可怕经历，以及如何跑出来。

②根据第二段首句“他们跑了出去，一路回到那些漂亮的雨伞、沙滩椅和人群中''可

知，接下来可描写他们告诉父母他们的经历，以及经历此事的感悟。

2.续写线索：Krin大叫——Paula吓呆——Krin回过神来——带宝拉跑出去——回到海

滩——告诉父母经历——父母责备——感悟

3.词类激活

行为类

①看见：spot/see/notice/witness

②开始：begin/start

③抓住：grab/seize/getholdof

④返回：goback/return

情感类

①恐惧：horror/fear/fright

②绝望的：desperate/despaired

【点睛】

［高分句型l］Krinalmostfelthisbloodfrozeninhischestashesawwhatwashappening

around.（运用了as引导时间状语从句和what引导宾语从句）

［高分句型2JAfterseeminglyalongtime,hismindbegantoraceagain,tryingtothinkhow

theycouldbreakdownthecloseddoorandescape.（运用了how引导宾语从句）

［高分句型3］Whateveritis,Idon'twanttogoback.（运用了whatever引导让步状语从

句）

3.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

Mylifeasakidwasasweetlife.Ilivedinabeautifulhousewiththebeautiful

surroundingsinPeru.TherewasoneparticularthingIlovedanditwasahugetreethatwasin

mybackyard.Asachild,Iusedtoclimbthetreeeveryday.EverytimeIwent,Iclimbed

higherandhigher,reachingnewbranches,obstacles（障碍物）,andpathwaysonmywayup.

Oneday,IfinallyreachedthetopandIcouldseemyisland.IfeltIwasontopoftheworld,

andnothingcouldstopme.Itwasthespecialtreethattaughtmenevertogiveupandreach

higher.

Then,therewasthedaythatseemedliketheendofmylife.Thisspecificdaychanged

mylifeforever.

Itwasanicesummerday.Afterbreakfast,myfamilyheadedtotheparktoseemy

baseballgame.Intheeveningwewenttoacarnival（嘉年华）inmytown.Mygrandmawas

sellingblanketsunderatent.Suddenly,themoodofthedaychangedwhenmyparentstook

metomygrandma?stent.Stilltothisday,1remembertheexactwordsmydadsaidtome,

“Son,howwouldyouliketomovetotheUnitedStates?”Icouldn'tbelievewhathesaid.I

thenranawayfromhimasthetearsrolleddownmycheeks.Myperfectlifewasbeingtaken

awayfromme.

Twoweekslater,wearrivedatNewYorkinlateJuly,andmyauntanduncledroveusto

Springfield,Massachusettswherewelivedforsevenyears.Asa9-year-oldkidwhogrewup

inPerl,Iknewlittleaboutlocallanguageandculture.Whafsworse,Septembercamesoon

andschoolstarted.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thefirstfewmonthstherewerenotfunoreasy.

Despiteallthoseproblems,Isillrememberedthatspecialtree.

【答案】参考范文

Thefirstfewmonthstherewerenotfunoreasy.Iwasafraidtogotothenewschooland

makenewfriends.Astimepassedby,teachersfinallyknewalloftheirstudentsandeveryone

begantoadapttothelife,exceptforme.Mostkidsignoredmeandsometriedtotalktome,

butIcouldn'tunderstandthemorsayanything.Itseemedthatfear,lonelinessandsadnessall

cameoverme.

Paragraph2

Despiteallthoseproblems,Istillrememberedthatspecialtree.Thattreeoncetaught

menevertogiveupandreachhigher.Therefore,Imadegreateffortstoovercomethe

difficultiesandbegantospeakEnglishinpublic.Gradually,someclassmatescametome

afterclassandplayedwithme.Muchtomyjoy,Imadesomefriendsandevenwasinvitedto

theirparty.NowIhavebeateneverydifficultythatIhavemetinlife,andkeepmoving

forward.Irealizethatmyperfectlifewasnevertakenawayfromme;ithasjuststarted.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者生活在秘鲁时，天天去爬后院的大树，爬树教会

了他永不放弃，追求更高。9岁那年的一个夏日，父亲说要举家搬迁到纽约时，他觉

得完美生活被夺走了。在一个陌生的国度，最初的几个月里，他无法适应新的学校生

活。但是秘鲁的那棵特殊的树激励他克服了种种困难。最终在适应了新的环境后，他

的美好的生活真正开始了。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“在最初的几个月里，那里并不有趣，也并不容易。”可知，第一

段可描写作者因为语言不通，无法和同学老师交流，学习跟不上而心生烦恼。

②由第二段首句内容“尽管有这些问题，我仍然记得那棵特殊的树。”可知，第二段可

描写作者回忆自己如何一步步攀爬到树顶，决心永不放弃，努力进步，最终成功适应

新学校。

2.续写线索：觉得无趣不易——听不懂而害怕上学——无法沟通被同学忽视--心生

恐惧孤独——回忆爬树往事——暗下决心努力学习——想方设法克服困难——成功融

入新的生活——展望未来

3.词汇激活

行为类

①适应：adaptto/fitin/accommodateto/adjustto

②努力：makegreateffortstodosth/sparenoefforttodo/strivetodosth

③克月艮：overcome/conquer/getover

情绪类

①害怕的：afraid/scared/terrified/fearful

②伤心的：sadness/heart-broken/feelblue

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Astimepassedby,teachersfinallyknewalloftheirstudentsandeveryone

begantoadapttothelife,exceptforme.（由as引导的时间状语从句，动词不定式作宾

语）

[高分句型2]NowIhavebeateneverydifficultythatIhavemetinlife,andkeepmoving

forward.（由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句）

[.高分句型3JIrealizethatmyperfectlifewasnevertakenawayfromme;ithasjuststarted.

（由连词that引导的宾语从句）

4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

SavingtheGalaxy

Ipressedmyfacetotheschool-buswindowaswepassedthebigmoviescreen.Galaxy

Drive-In（银河汽车影院）onesignsaid.CLOSEDsaidanother.

IgotoffthebusatmystopandwavedtoMom.Iaskedheraboutthatdrive-indownthe

streetaswewalkedintothehouse.Momtoldmethatithadclosedacoupleyearsbefore.

Butthatnight,Iheardmusiccomingthroughmywindow.WhenIlookedout,Icould

seelightsflashingonthedrive-in'sscreen.Thethoughtoffearcrossedmymind.

Thenextday,afterbreakfastMomandIwalkedovertocheckthingsout.Theplacewas

likeabigparkinglotwithweedscomingoutthroughcracks.Wewerelookingatanold

movieposterwhenanoldmangotoutofacar.

HeintroducedhimselfasNick."Whenmydadopenedthisplacein1957,we'dget300

carsonagoodnight,butnowIhavetocloseitbecauseIcan'taffordadigitalprojector（放映

机）,whichisveryexpensive.^^Nickexplainedthatallmoviecompaniesjustprovidedigital

moviesinsteadoffilm（胶片）movies.ThenNickallowedustolookaroundandinvitedusto

comebybeforedusk.

Thatnight,Nickmadeanoldmoviecometolife.AsIsatnexttoMom,Ikeptthinking

abouttheexcitementofseeingthatbigscreenlightup.Nickhadlookedsohappytalking

abouttheolddays.Ifonlyhecouldgetthatprojector.

注意：1.续写词数应为100左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Itwasthenthatabigideacametome.

Withthecollectedmoney,Nickboughtadigitalprojector.

【答案】参考范文一

Itwasthenthatabigideacametome.Whataboutcrowdfundingonline?Iputapost

withoutanydelay.Inthepost,ItalkedaboutNick'sdreamandhispresentfinancialdifficulty,

especiallytheexcitementandsweetmemoriesthatthedrive-inoncebrought.Gradually,the

postwasfollowedbyanincreasingnumberofpeople.Theydonatedgenerouslyandinless

thanaweekenoughmoneywasraised.

Withthecollectedmoney,Nickboughtadigitalprojector.Hewassogladthathe

couldn'twaittoplayamovie.TveneverseenNickhappier.fctSeewhatyoustarted,Nick

saidtome."Ican'tthankyouenough.Itisyouandthosewarm-heartedsupportersthathave

madeGalaxyDrive-Inbegintobreatheagain."Today,theGalaxyisbackinbusinessand

Nickhasrealizedhisdream:Hegets300carsonagoodnight.

参考范文二

Itwasthenthatabigideacametome.Havinggatheredtogetherseveralschoolmates

willingtohelpNick,Itoldthemmyplantoraisemoneyfromlocalresidents.Withoutdelay,

wedesignedourownbrochures,tellingNick'sdesiretosaveGalaxyDrive-Inandhis

financialdifficulty.Wemadeitaroutinetohandthemoutfromdoortodoorafterschool.

Owingtothefactthatmostfamiliesdonatedmoneyenthusiastically,wemanagedtoraise

enoughmoneyeventually.

Withthecollectedmoney,Nickboughtadigitalprojector.IneverforgotNick'seyes

shininglikediamondswhenhesawtheprojector.Hegavemeawarmhugandsaid“Thank

you“repeatedly.Inreturnforsupporters,kindnessandgenerosity,Nickrewardedthemwith

freepasses,snacks,orreservedparking.Slowly,moreandmorepeoplecametothedrive-in

anditcametolifeagain.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者在回家的路上偶然发现了一个已经关闭的汽车影

院，而晚上却发现汽车影院的屏幕亮起，由此感到恐惧，于是第二天和母亲一起前去

查看具体情况。在那里，作者和母亲见到了影院主人Nick,并了解了影院关闭的原

因：买不起数字放映机。看到Nick谈及过去时的快乐神情以及想到自己看到影院放映

时的激动，作者不禁想如果Nick可以买到数字放映机就好了。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“就在那时，我想到了一个好主意。”可知，第一段可描写作者利

用网络呼吁大家一起通过募捐的方式帮助Nicko

②由第二段首句内容“用募集到的钱，Nick买了一台数字放映机。”可知，第二段可描

Nick实现梦想后对作者和广大支持者的感激，以及作为回馈，重开汽车影院的情况。

2.续写线索：传播Nick的信息——筹钱——买放映机——感激——重开影院

3.词汇激活

行为类

①传播信息：talkabout/informsbofsth

②筹钱：raisemoney/collectmoney

情绪类

感激：thanksb/begratefultosb/showgratitudetosb

【点睛】

【高分句型1]Inthepost,ItalkedaboutNick'sdreamandhispresentfinancialdifficulty,

especiallytheexcitementandsweetmemoriesthatthedrive-inoncebrought.（由关系代词

that引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2]Itisyouandthosewarm-heartedsupportersthathavemadeGalaxyDrive-In

begintobreatheagain.（强调句型）

5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

OncetherewasayoungboynamedPeterwhousedtoliveincountrysidewithhisfather

andmother.Thoughlackingmoney,hisparentswantedhimtostudywellinhighschool,so

hewouldn'thavetostruggleonfieldsasafarmer.However,Peterhatedgoingtoschooland

startedskippingclasses.

Uponlearningthis,hisparentsfeltfrustratedandsad.NotonlybecausePeterwasted

hisentireyearbutalsobecauseheliedtohisparents.Theywenttoaskhimforanexplanation

andPeterrudelyrepliedthathedidn'twanttostudy.

Hisfatherlosthispatienceandscoldedhim,“Whatdoyouwanttodoifnotstudy?Do

youwanttowalkaroundontheroadsandbegforfood?MWithouthearinganymore,Peter

rushedoutofthehouse.

Heenjoyedbeingoutsidewithoutanyrestrictionbutsoonhespentallhismoneyhehad

withhim.Hehadnoshelter,nomoneytobuyfoodandnoworktodo.Nobodyhadenough

trusttogiveworktoapoorschoolboy.Hegotsickduetohungerandcold.Peoplewho

passedbythrewcoinsathimassuminghewasabeggar.Atthattimeherememberedhow

lovinglyhisparentstookcareofhimandstartedtomissthemalot.

Oneday,aboynamedMintunoticedhim.HegavePeterfoodandmedicineandeven

foundhimajobatastore.Soon,bothbecamegoodfriends.PetertoldMintuwherehecame

from.Hesaidhefeltguiltyaboutwhathehaddoneanddidn'tknowhowtofacehisparents

again.

HearingPeter'sstory,Mintuadvisedhimtogobackhome,butPeterhesitated.

注意：

L续写词数应为100左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.

MintuvisitedPeter'sparentsandtoldthemwhathadhappenedtoPeter.

［答案］MintuvisitedPeter'sparentsandtoldthemwhathadhappenedtoPeter.

WhenMintucameback,MintutoldPeterthathisparentsdiedwhenhewasveryyoung.Then

Mintusaid,"Peter,youdon*thavetoloseourparentstorealizehowimportanttheyare.

Aren'tyouluckytohavelovingparentswhoworkhardandwanttosendyoutoschool?IfI

wereinyourplace,Iwouldneverbreaktheirheartsbyleavingthcm.^^

Thenextmorning,MintutoldPeterthatsomeonewaswaitingfbrhimoutside.Peter

wentoutandsawhisparents.Peterrushedtothemandhuggedthem.Heapologizedtohis

parents,buthisparentsdidn'thaveanycomplaintagainsthim.Peterandhisparentsheartily

thankedMintuforhishelpandhappilyleftfortheirhometogether.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩彼得和父母住在乡下，虽然缺钱，但父母仍然

希望他高中好好学习。但彼得不爱学习，与父亲大吵之后离家出走。最终身无分文，

流落街头，就在这时一位名叫明图男孩帮助了他并劝他回家的故事。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“明图拜访了彼得的父母，告诉他们彼得的遭遇。''可知，第一段

可描写明图想方设法让彼得回家。

2.续写线索：离家出走——身无分文——得到帮助——明图帮忙——再次团聚

3.词汇激活

行为类

①回来：comeback/return

②.意识到：realize/beawareof

③•道歉：apologize/makeanapology

情绪类

①.幸运：lucky/fortunate

②.后悔的：regretful/sorry

【点睛】

[高分句型1].WhenMintucameback,MintutoldPeterthathisparentsdiedwhenhewas

veryyoung.（这句话运用了宾语从句）

[高分句型2].IfIwereinyourplace,Iwouldneverbreaktheirheartsbyleavingthem.（这

句话运用了虚拟语气）

6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

Itwas1954whenayoungtravelernamedRobertBeachwashitchingrides（搭便车）on

hiswayfromTampa,FLtoLosAngeles,CA.Hisridesbrokedownatonechillynightin

Deming,NM.Beachwas24whenhewasdroppedoffinDeming.Beachwastired,hungry,

andcold.Withnomoneyinhispocket,hewonderedwherehemightspendthenight.

PoliceofficersapproachedBeachstandingdowntownandhebeggedthemtotakehimto

jailsothathecouldbewarm.Theofficersofcourserefusedhisrequestashehadnot

committedacrime.Beachfoundabusinessdoorwayandsettledinforthenight.When

morningcame,BeachrecalledanAsianmanwalkedoutofthebuildingandaskedhimhow

hemighthelpandthenwalkedtohandhimabagofcookies.Thesewerelikelythebest

cookiesRoberhadevertasted.

Sixty-sevenyearslater,BeachcontactedtheDeming-LunaChamberofCommerce（商

会）andtoldhisstoryabouthisbriefstayinDemingtothenewExecutiveDirectorDebbie

Troyer.BeachtoldTroyerhephonedthechambertosaythathehadneverforgottenthis

man'skindness.After50yearsservingasajudgeandenteringretirement,Beachwantedto

say“thanks'tothiskindmanandsendhima$1,000check.BeachtoldTroyerthathe

believedtheroadwherethisbakerystoodwasonDeming'smainstreet."Whatmightthat

looklikebackin1954,“Troyerwondered.'Tilaskourcommunity."

注意：

L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

First,shepostedBeach'sstoryontheChamberofCommerceandCommunityFacebook

page.

Finally,theydecidedtheyhadcometoadeadend,butBeachthoughtthatpayingit

forwardwasthebestwaytothankthebaker.

【答案】参考范文：

First,shepostedBeach'sstoryontheChamberofCommerceandCommunityFacebook

page.Althoughtheyreceivedseveralcallsfromthelocals,theyendedupthewrong

information.However,TroyerwasnotdisappointedanddeterminedtohelpBeachtofindthe

man.Then,thecommunitycontinueditssearchandTroyerwenttothelibrarytolookthrough

oldphonedirectoriesandcrossreferencefamiliesofAsianswhomighthaveownedabakery.

However,alltheireffortwasinvainbecausenoonerememberedsuchamanhere,especially

anAsianlivinghalfacenturyago.Troyer,togetherwithsomewarm-heartedresidents,even

visitedsomeelderlypeoplelivingaroundinperson,butfoundnothinguseful.

Finally,theydecidedtheyhadcometoadeadend,butBeachthoughtthatpayingit

forwardwasthebestwaytothankthebaker.Hedecidedtodonatethechecktothelocal

sheltertohelpmorehomelesspeople.HetoldTroyerabouthisideaandaskedherfbrhelp

again,hopingshecouldcontactashelter.Troyersoonfoundashelter.Thecheckwas

deliveredtotheshelteratonce.TroyersaidpeopleintheshelterthankedBeachaswellasthe

mysteriousbaker.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位叫做比奇的年轻旅行者，在旅行中又饿又冷时，

一位亚裔男子给了他一袋饼干。67年后，比奇联系新任的商会执行董事特罗耶，希望

找到那位好心人，向其表示感谢，特罗耶准备提供帮助。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“首先，她在商会和社区Facebook页面上发布了比奇的故事。”可

知，第一段可描写特罗耶努力寻找好心人，但却一无所获。

②由第二段首句内容“最后，他们认为他们已经走到了死胡同，但比奇认为提前付款是

感谢面包师的最好方式。”可知，第二段可描写比奇捐赠支票给收容所，以帮助更多无

家可归的人，收容所的人感谢比奇以及神秘的面包师。

2.续写线索：发布信息——继续寻找——寻找无果——捐赠支票——联系收容所一

感激

3.词汇激活

行为类

①接到电话：receiveseveralcalls/getafewcalls

②决心做：detenninetodo/makeupone'smindtodo

③拜访：visit/payavisitto

情绪类

①失望：bedisappointed/losehope

②感激：thank/appreciate

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Althoughtheyreceivedseveralcallsfromthelocals,theyendedupthe

wronginformation.（由连接词although引导让步状语从句）

[高分句型2]Then,thecommunitycontinueditssearchandTroyerwenttothelibraryto

lookthrougholdphonedirectoriesandcrossreferencefamiliesofAsianswhomighthave

ownedabakery.（由关系代词who引导定语从句）

7.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。续写的词数应为150左右。

ItwasapleasantSundayasJohnwanderedthegardenofhisuncle'shouse.Hisparents

hadgonetoDelhi.

“Yourfinalexaminationisjustafewmonthsaway.^^John'sfatherhadsaid."Wewant

youtostaywithUncleTim,completeyourexamsandjoinusinDelhi."UncleTimwas

John'sfather\cousin.HehadalittledogcalledOliver.

FromthefirstdayJohnrealizedthatOliverwasunhappyinthehouse.Hewasnotgiven

hismealsontime,norwashetakenforawalk.Oliverwasshoutedatandabusedallday.

“YouruncleboughtOliversothatthedogcouldprotecthishousefromthievesbutactuallyhe

doesn'tlovehim”,thegardenertoldJohnoneday.

Johnfeltsad.AtnighthecouldhearOliverwhimperinginthecold."Whydon'tyou

makeacoatforyourpet?”JohnpausedandsaidJ'Hefeelscold”.Hisuncleanswered,<4I

havemuchbetterthingstodo”.

OnedayJohnwentoutforawalkwithOliver,whenafiercestormstarted.Johnranto

takeshelterinasweetshop.ItwasonlyafterafewminutesthatherealizedthatOliverwas

notwithhim."Thestormseparatedus”,Johnwassad,tellinghisuncle."Isearchedtheentire

placewiththehelpofthesweetshopownerbutIcouldn'tfindJohn'sunclepostedan

advertisementinthepaper.AfterallhehadspentalotofmoneybuyingOliveranddidnot

wanttolosehim.

Itwasahalf-hourridebybus.ThemiddleagedladywhogreetedOliverwasamotherly

sortofawoman.SheandherhusbandhadansweredJohn'suncle'sadvertisementinthe

paper.SinceJohn'sunclewasoutonanofficialtour,Johnhadbeensenttocheckonthedog.

“HeisasleepJtheladysaid."Comeandhavealook,welovehimsomuchthatheisjustlike

ourdeaddog,Sheela.^^

注意：

I.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Johnlookedatthedog.YesitwasOliver.

Paragraph2:

“Iamsorrytohavebotheredyou,butthisisnotourOliver.^^

【答案】Paragraph1:

Johnlookedatihedog.YesitwasOliver.Hebentdownandgentlypartedthefuronthe

neck.Theidentifyingwhitespotwasthere.Theladywasspeakingwhenherhusbandcame

in."Inafewdayshehasbecomeapartofthefamily.EversinceSheela,ourdogdied,we

decidednottokeepanypetsandthensuddenly.…”hervoicequivered."Whenyouruncleput

intheadvertisement,foramomentwethoughtofnotreplying",thegentlemansaid."My

wifehasbecomeattachedtothedoginthesefewdays.”

Paragraph2:

“Iamsorrytohavebotheredyou,butthisisnotourOliver."Therewasacryofrelief

fromthelady.JohnwouldhavetolietohisunclethatthedogwasnotOliverbutinreturn

Oliverwouldgetalifeoflove,careandcompanionship.Hewouldbesafefromalifeof

miseryinhisuncle'shouse.Johnknewhehadtakentherightdecision.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了约翰的叔叔有一只名为奥利弗的狗，但是叔叔并不爱

奥利弗，某天约翰和奥利弗出去散步时，奥利弗走丢了，一位中年妇女捡到了，约翰

出于好心，谎称那只狗不是奥利弗，女士就可以收留它了。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“约翰看着那只狗。是的，是奥利弗。”可知，第一段可描写约翰

改变主意的原因以及这家人对于这只狗的看法。

②由第二段首句内容“很抱歉打扰你，但这不是我们的奥利弗。“可知，第二段可描写

约翰说不是他家的狗后，女士的反应以及约翰的内心感受。

2.续写线索：约翰认出奥利弗——奥利弗成为女士家的一员——约翰否认这是奥利弗

——女士如释重负——约翰感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

饲养：keep/raise

决定：decideto/determineto

打扰：bother/disturb

情绪类

照顾：care/tendance

正确：right/correct

【点睛】

［高分句型1］Whenyouruncleputintheadvertisement,foramomentwethoughtofnot

replying（运用了when引导时间状语从句）

［高分句型2JJohnwouldhavetolietohisunclethatthedogwasnotOliverbutinreturn

Oliverwouldgetalifeoflove,careandcompanionship,（isffl了that引导宾语从句）

8.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

PaulandIwereonourschoolbasketballteam,TheLions.Welovedbasketballandwere

bothhugefansoftheNBA.Whenweweren'tplayingonthecourtwhichwasnexttoour

building,wewerewatchingagameonTV.MyfavoriteplayerwasLeBronJames.Paul's