2024-2025学年新教材高中英语Unit6AtonewithnatureSectionⅣWritingasummary学案外研版必修第一册

SectionⅣWritingasummaryStepⅠ文本研读Ⅰ.ReadforWritingStyleWhatisthewritingstyleofthepassage?A．Argumentation.B．Narration.C．Exposition.Ⅱ.ReadforStructureParagraph1：Britishpeople'slovefor1.________．Paragraph2：Various2.________Paragraph3：Health3.________Ⅲ.ReadforKeyPointsParagraph1：Britishpeople________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Paragraph2：However,recentyearshaveseen________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Paragraph3：Herbalteahasvarioushealthbenefits.Ⅳ.RewritethekeypointsParagraph1：________________________________________________________________________，Britishpeopleevenplantsomeherbsintheirowngardens.Paragraph2：However,people________________________________________________________________________someunusualflavoursinrecentyears.Paragraph3：Theherbalteacannotonlymakepeoplefeelrelaxed,butalsoimprovetheimmunesystemanddigestionsystem.Ⅴ.PolishthesummarywiththelinkingwordsAddictedtomakingteawithfruitandherbs,Britishpeopleevenplantherbsthatareeasytogrowintheirowngardens.________thecommonflavours,peopleareinsearchofsomeunusualflavours,suchasmango,strawberry,apple,andsoon.________thevarietyofflavours,herbalteaalsohasvarioushealthbenefits.Somecanhelppeoplerelax,andsomearegoodfortheimmunesystemanddigestionsystem.识登记列短语①avarietyof各种各样②comeontothemarket投放市场③haveapositiveeffecton对……有主动的影响④givesb.ahelpinghand帮某人一把⑤begoodfordigestion对消化有益StepⅡWriting[探究技法]1．写作步骤(1)弄清要求。搞清晰是写全文概要，还是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点；(2)细读原文。此类文章多以说明文为主。首先要细致阅读全文，然后对文章进行整体分析，驾驭文章大意和结构，明确全文的主题(themaintheme)和各段的段落大意(themainidea)；(3)列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并留意在结构上的依次。在此基础上选出与文章主题亲密相关的部分，遵循原文的逻辑依次，对重要部分的主题、细微环节进行概括，全面清晰地概括原文信息；(4)如需拟标题，可以采纳文中的主题句。2．写作要点(1)尽量运用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子，词数限制在60左右；(2)必需涵盖文章中的全部观点以及少量事例，可以筛选1～2个例子；(3)避开重复，删除细微环节，只保留主要观点。3．写作技巧(1)把长段描述压缩变成短小精悍的句子。如“Hiscourageinbattlemightwithoutexaggerationbecalledlion­like.”可以概括为“Hewasverybraveinbattle.”(2)运用词组代替整句或者从句。(3)运用概括性的名词代替详细的词，如“ShebroughthomeseveralChineseandEnglishnovels,afewcopiesofTimeandNewsweekandsometextbooks.Sheintendedtoreadallofthemduringthewintervocation.”可以概括为“Shebroughthomealotofbookstoreadduringthevocation.”(4)运用最短的连接词。比如可以运用but，then，thus，yet，though；尽量不运用atthesametime，inthefirstplace，becauseof，ontheotherhand等较长的连接词。(5)把文章中的第一人称转换成第三人称，把对白简化。(6)最终，最好用一句话进行总结。[实践应用]阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Herbalmedicine(草药),whichhasbeenusedformedicinalpurposes,istheuseofplantstotreatdiseases.Manyherbalistsusetheentireplant,fromtheflowers,stems,leaves,androots,intheformofeverythingfromteastopills.Theseplantscontainnatural,chemicalthingsthatcantreatthebodyforavarietyofdiseases—suchasallergies,asthma,rheumatoidarthritis,migraine,chronicfatigue,andcancer,amongothers.Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofpeopleprefertoadopttheseplantstotreattheirdiseasesbecausecomparedwithchemicalmedicine,herbalmedicinehasitsownadvantages.Herbalmedicineandremedies(治疗)aremoreeffectivethanchemicalmedicineforcertaindiseases.Thechemicalmedicinegivenbyachemistcouldhavecertainnegativesideeffects.However,manyoftheherbalmedicineandremediesdonothavenegativesideeffects.Ifany,theyaresofterthanchemicalmedicine.Obesityisthecauseofmanyofthehealthproblems.Herbalmedicinecanhelpweight­lossmoreeffectivelyandimproveoverallhealth.However,thecureusingherbalmedicineandsupplements(养分品)wouldtakesometime,andthereforepeoplearesupposedtopossessenoughpatience.Worsestill,herbalmedicinecontainsavarietyofingredients(成分)andpeoplehavetobesurethattheirbodyagreeswiththeingredientsandthatitisnotallergic(过敏的).Whenusedcorrectlyanddirectedbydoctors,herbscanhelptreatavarietyofdiseases.Butkeepinmindthattheherbalmedicineindustryisnotregulated,soherbalproductsareoftenmisleadingandmaycontainadditives(添加剂)andthatarenotlistedonthelabel(标签).Someherbsmaycauseallergicreactionsorinteractwithotherdrugs,andsomearepoisonousifusedimproperlyorathighdoses(剂量).Takingherbsonyourownincreasesyourrisk.第一步谋篇布局Introduction→Paragraph1:DefinitionBody→eq\b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(Paragraph2：Advantages,Paragraph3：Disadvantages))Conclusion→Paragraph4:Advice其次步要点提炼Paragraph1：Herbalmedicineistheuseoftheentireplantstotreatavarietyofdiseases.Paragraph2：Unlikechemicalmedicine,herbalmedicineismoreeffectiveandhasnoorfewernegativesideeffects.Paragraph3：However,herbalmedicinealsohasdisadvantages,suchastime­consumingandpossibleallergy.Paragraph4：Peopleshoulduseherbalmedicinecautiously.第三步要点升级Paragraph1:Herbalmedicineisawayoftreatingsomediseases______________________________containingpowerfulthingsinvariousforms.Paragraph2:____________________chemicalmedicine,herbalmedicineisbetterinseveralwayssuchasitsmoreeffectivenessandfewernegativesideeffects.Paragraph3:Herbalmedicinerequires________forrecoveryandtendsto____________aswell.Paragraph4:Peopleshoulduseherbmedicine________．第四步完备成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SectionⅣWritingasummary写作精析·技能提升StepⅠ文本研读Ⅰ.CⅡ.1.tea2.flavours3.benefitsⅢ.Paragraph1.lovetomaketeawithfruitandherbsParagraph2.moreandmoreunusualflavourscomeontothemarketⅣ.Paragraph1.Addict