2025届高考英语精准冲刺复习 读后续写高分句式

2025届高考英语精准冲刺复习

读后续写高分句式题型分析01“读后续写”第一要真正读懂原文，第二写出恰当又正确的句子，第三才是写作技巧。读懂原文之后写出恰当而正确的句子很重要，否则你的“读懂”只是在做无用功。只有写出符合故事情节恰当、正确的句子才说明你真正读懂了。作文的高分关键是“规范的书写+整洁的卷面+正确流畅的语言+丰富的句式”，其中读后续写还要注重情节的逻辑性、衔接性、合理性。写作中，有好句，才有亮点，有亮点，就容易拿高分。一、情绪描写常用句式（一）表示“感到……情绪与情感”场景【句式1】aflushof＋表情绪的名词＝awave/feeling/senseof...一阵……【句式2】表情绪的名词＋floodedoversb/sweptoversb/seizedsb……涌上心头【句式3】aburst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feelingof＋表情感状态的名词＋有灵动词＋sb.表示"某人感到……"或"一阵/一种……向某人袭来"。【句式4】Awaveofjoywashedover/seized/enveloped/struckhimwhenheheardthenews当他听到消息，他非常高兴。（happiness/sadness/sorrow/delight/panic/fear/horror/depression/guilt/embarrassment/hate/regret/panic/jealousy/envy/pride/shame/anxiety/boredom/relief/satisfaction/humiliation/insecurity/irritation/isolation/loneliness/misery/outrage/rage/resentment/torture）1.Aflushofpridesweptoverhimashewatchedhischildren.＝Hefeltaflushofprideashewatchedhischildren.当他看着自己孩子的时候，一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头。2.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Andmuchsoonerthancouldbeexpected，Bernardreturnedwithanemptybasket.Neverbeforehadheearnedsomuchmoneyinhislife.Awaveofhappinessfloodedoverhim.一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。伯纳德带着一个空篮子回来，比预期的要快得多。他一生中从未挣过这么多钱。他感到高兴极了。1.Tomysurprise,Ilearnedthatmyessayhadrankedfirstinthecontest.Amixofexcitementanddoubtwashedoverme.令我吃惊的是，我得知我的作品在比赛中排名第一。兴奋和怀疑涌上心头2.Sufferinganddespairdefeatedme,andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.(《简·爱》)痛苦和绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。3.Motherfeltawaveofprideandwarmthsweepoverher.妈妈感到一阵自豪和温暖。4.Thepolarbearcamenear.Horrorslowlycrepton/floodedover/rushedover/sweptoverus.北极熊走近了。恐惧慢慢向我们袭来。（二）表示“(因为紧张、害怕)心跳”场景【句式1】sbcouldfeelone'sheartpoundingwildlyinone'schest感到心在胸中怦怦直跳【句式2】one'sheartthumped/raced/beatwildly/loudly/hard某人心怦怦直跳1．IcouldfeelmyheartpoundingwildlyasIwentonstagetocollecttheprize.上台领奖时我感到心怦怦直跳。2．Heunfoldedtheletter,hisheartracing.他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。3．Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Theirheartsbegantothumpwildlyastheywereafraidofbeingscoldedbytheirfather.天哪！锅里的那块面包也变黑了。当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他们害怕被父亲责骂，心开始怦怦直跳。（三）表示“流泪”场景【句式1】One'seyesgotmisty./One'seyesmistedwithtears.泪眼模糊【句式2】beclosetotears几乎要哭了【句式3】tearsrolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face泪水从眼睛/脸颊/面部落下1．MymotherwasclosetotearswhensheheardIwasadmittedtoakeyuniversity.当得知我被重点大学录取时，我母亲差点儿就哭了。2．Withtearsofgratituderolling/streamingdownhischeeks,PeterhuggedGreentightly,saying“You'vesavedmetoday.Icouldn'tthankyouenough.”感激的泪水顺着他的脸颊流下，彼得紧紧地拥抱着格林，说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”1．Thedayhelefthospital,hehuggedme,hiseyesmistingwithtears,saying，“Youareatrulygoodnurse,thankyou.”出院那天，他泪眼模糊地拥抱着我说，“你是个真正的好护士，谢谢你。”（四）常用句型归纳【句式1】So情绪adj.wassbthat+从句【句式2】What情绪v.sbwasthat+从句【句式3】Much/Greatlytoone’s情绪n.,sbdidsth1.SosadwasTomthattearswelledupinhiseyes.汤姆伤心得眼泪夺眶而出。2.Soguiltywasmymomthatsheloweredherheadandmurmured,“Sorry.”我妈妈非常内疚，她低下头喃喃地说：“对不起。3.Whatsurpriseduswasthathemadegreatprogressinsuchashorttime.令我们惊讶的是，他在这么短的时间内取得了长足的进步4.Whatfrightenedhimwasthathesuddenlyrealizedthatmaybetheyoungmanwasthebankrobber.令他害怕的是，他突然意识到，也许这个年轻人就是那个银行劫匪。5.Beingthecoachofthenewteam,IwasexcitedbecauseIknewweweregoingtowin,buttomydisappointmentweweredefeated.作为新球队的教练，我很兴奋，因为我知道我们会赢，但令我失望的是，我们被击败了。6.Muchtothefamily’ssurprise,Dennisstucktohispromise!令家人惊讶的是，丹尼斯信守诺言！二、动作描写常用句式（一）表示“一……，就……”场景【句式1】upon/on＋n./doing...“一……就……”，相当于assoonas引导的时间状语从句。【句式2】immediately/directly/instantly＋从句【句式3】themoment/minute/instant＋从句【句式4】nosooner...than.../hardly...when...【句式5】atthesight/thoughtof…1.TheinstantIsawhim,Iknewhewasthepolicemanwhohadhelpedmecarrythebox.我一看见他，就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。2.“IgnorewhattheplayersfromotherteamswouldsayandIbelieveyoucouldmakeit！”Uponhearingmywords，Davidbeamedabigsmile，stoodupandmovedtowardsthestartingline.“不管其他队的队员怎么说，我相信你能做到！”听到我的话，大卫笑了笑，站起来朝起跑线走去。3.Uponhearingthis,IcouldfeelmyheartpoundingwildlyandmymindgoingunconsciouslybacktothedaysIrackedmybrainforstories.一听到这些话，我感到心跳加快，大脑不由自主回到那些绞尽脑汁编故事的日子。4.NosoonerhadIsteppedintothisfamiliarroomthanIsawmyteachersittingamongpilesofpapers.我刚一走进这个熟悉的房间就看到历史坐在一堆试卷前。5.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthisgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.一看到这个感恩的蜂鸟我感到一阵宽慰和敬畏，当我爬进车里开走时我知道我会珍惜这些一起分担的记忆。（二）表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫”场景【句式1】sbcouldhardlywaittodosth【句式2】withoutasecondthought...不假思索；毫不犹豫地【句式3】withouteventhinking...连考虑都不考虑【句式4】withoutdelay...立即；毫不迟延地.【句式5】withouthesitation...毫不犹豫1．Thewaterwasfreezingcold,butwithoutasecondthoughttheyoungmanjumpedin.水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。2．Withoutdelay,heclimbedupthetreequicklytoreachfortheleaf.他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。3．OnChristmasmorning,Icouldnotwaittoopenthepackage.Tomyexcitement,itwasabrand­newpairoficeskateswhichIwaseagerfor.圣诞节早晨，我迫不及待地打开包裹。令我兴奋的是，这是一双我一直想要的崭新的溜冰鞋。4.Mydevotionandperseverancereallymattered,butwithouthisencouragement,IcouldneverbewhatIwastoday.我的付出和坚持固然重要，但是没有他的鼓励我就不会有今天的成就。（三）表示“因……颤抖”场景【句式1】tremble/shakewithfear,panic,excitement,rage...1．Herlipstrembledwithrageandbigtearsrolleddownhercheeks.她气得嘴唇发抖，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。2．Helaythereforalongtime,shakingwithfear.他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。3．FarmerMike'shousehadbeenagreatplaceforthelittlemouseuntilthefarmermarriedawifewhohadacat.Zigfriedshookwithfearwhenhethoughtofit.农夫迈克的房子对小老鼠来说一直是一个好地方，直到农夫娶了一个养猫的妻子。Zigfried一想到这件事就吓得直哆嗦。常用句型归纳【句式1】Sbdidsth,onlytofind…【句式2】地点状语(inthebox...)lay/was/were+主语【句式3】outof+地点/out/into+地点/in/away/off+walked(rushed/stormed...)+主语【句式4】Atthethought/sight/soundofsth,sbdidsth【句式5】On/Upondoingsth,sbdidsthon/upon后面的动名词多为：go,arrive,leave,reach,return,step,enter等。1.Iturnedbacktothetractor,onlytofinditmovesuddenlyawayfromme.我转身走向拖拉机，却发现它突然从我身边移开了。2.Istoppedteachingandopenitup.IntheboxwereashirtandanotefromFreddy’smother.停止了教学，打开了它。盒子里有一件衬衫和一张弗雷迪母亲的纸条。3.Insidethebottlewasapieceofpaper.瓶子里有一张纸。4.Outofthehouserushedadog,followedbyapuppy.从屋子里冲出一只狗，后面跟着一只小狗。5.OutdashedMary,cryingalltheway.玛丽冲了出来，一路哭泣。6.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorwithmypalmssweating.一看到凶猛的狼，我被一股强烈的恐惧感抓住，手心出汗。7.Atthesoundofthealarm,thewolffledintothethickwoods警报声响起，狼逃进了茂密的树林中.8.Onarrivingatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.到达村子后，我们受到了村民的热烈欢迎。9.Upongoingoutoftheroom,Jackheardthetelephoneringing.走出房间后，杰克听到电话铃声。模拟练习02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnChristmasEve,IcalledmymomfromthebakerywhereIworkedpart-time,tellingherthatIwasworkingwithacoupleofco-workers.Thestorewasabouttoclose.Thepersonfromalocalcharitywhowasscheduledtopickuptheleftover（剩下的）breadhadnotshownup.Iwasworriedaboutwhattodowiththefood,soIcalledmymomandshesuggestedIcallthemanagertoaskforadvice.Themanagertoldmetothrowtheleftoversintothegar-bage.Theywereapproximately1,500dollars'worthoffreshbakedgoods.Itseemedcompletelywrongforallthisgoodfoodtogotowaste,soIcalledMomagainandtalkedaboutwherewecouldtakeit.Shetoldmethatanewhomelessshelterhadjustopenedinourcity,soMomcalledandaskedifthehomelessshelterneededthefreebakedgoods.Anexcitedstaffmembersaid,“Yes,please!”Momdrovetothebakery.Weloadedupthevan（小型货车）withmyco-workersandMomdrovetothehomelessshelter.Aswewalkedtowardtheentrance,awomanopenedthedoorforus.Shethankedusforwhatweweredoingandsaidshewasreallygratefulforhernewtemporaryhome.SheintroducedherselfandtoldusherfriendscalledherStar.Wechat-tedforawhileonthesidewalkwithlightsnowfallingaroundus.Starsaidthatmovingoffthestreetsintotheshelterhadsavedherlife.Startoldusthatshehaddecidedherjobinlifewastohelpandprotectpeople.Shespentherdayslookingoutforthosewhoneededhelp.Shetriedtodokindthingsforotherswhen-evershecould.Thensheaskedmeforafavor.Sheshowedmeabookthatafriendhadgivenherwhenshe'dbeenlivingonthestreets.Shewantedtotellhimshewasokay,butshecouldn'taffordthelong-distancecall.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ItoldStarIwouldbehappytopasshermessageontoherfriend.Afewmonthslater,whenIwaswalkingtothebakery,Isawawomanstandinginthemiddleofthecrosswalk.I