七年级上册英语Unit 1 Let'Be Friends 满分范文必背（仁爱版2024）

试卷第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页试卷第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页Unit1WeareFriends单元话题满分范文必背1．根据表格内容，写一篇短文，介绍你的朋友Jack。姓名Jack年龄12电话号码478-6543房间概况整洁干净，桌子，椅子，床要求：（1）语句通顺，行文流畅。（2）60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Jackismygoodfriend.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Jackismygoodfriend.Heisa12-year-oldboy.Therearefourpeopleinhisfamily.Histelephonenumberis478-6543.Hehasasmallroombutitisverytidy.Thereisadesk,achair,andabedinhisroom.Thedeskisblackandthechairiswhite.Thereisaphotoofhisfamilyonthewall.Doyouwanttomakefriendswithhim?【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；②时态：采用“一般现在时”③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。[写作步骤]第一步：引出话题，介绍Jack；第二步：介绍Jack的基本信息和房间概况；[亮点词汇]①aphotoof……的照片[高分句型]①Hehasasmallroombutitisverytidy.（but引导转折句）2．同桌（deskmate）是你学习的好伙伴，假如你的同桌叫李明，请根据表格提示，描写你的同桌。要求书写工整规范，卷面整洁，内容可适当发挥，不少于60个词。NameLiMingAge12FromHuangchuanLook矮胖(shortandfat)，短黑头发，圆脸，大眼睛，小鼻子Clothes黑黄夹克，蓝裤子，白鞋Telephonenumber：65334628______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MydeskmateisLiMing.Heisaniceboy.Heis12yearsold.HeisfromHuangchuan.Heisshortandfat.Hishairisshortandblack.Hehasaroundface,bigeyesandasmallnose.Hisjacketisblackandyellow.Heisinbluepantsandwhiteshoes.Helikesblackandhistelephonenumberis65334628.HeoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Wearegoodfriends.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，先介绍自己的同桌是谁；第二步，具体介绍同桌的个人情况，例如可从他的年龄、家乡、外貌、衣服、电话号码、喜好等方面来介绍；第三步，书写结束语，点明我们是好朋友。[亮点词汇]①befrom来自②inbluepants穿蓝色的裤子③telephonenumber电话号码④helpsb.withsth.在某方面帮助某人[高分句型]Helikesblackandhistelephonenumberis65334628.（and连接的并列句）3．进入MoonlightMiddleSchool，你开始了新的学习和生活，认识了很多新朋友，在你的班上，一位名叫Lily的女生成为了你最好的朋友。请结合所给图示，用英语写一篇题为“Mybestfriend”的短文向大家介绍你最好的朋友。注意：1.词数80左右；2.短文须包括图示中所有要点，不要逐词翻译，需适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3.短文中不得出现真实的人名，校名等相关信息。Mybestfriend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MybestfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisLily.Sheis13yearsold.ShestudiesinMoonlightMiddleSchool.SheisinClass3,Grade7.Lilyistallandthin.Shealwayshasherlonghairinaponytail.Shelikesplayingthepianoandlisteningtomusic.Sheisamemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Shealsolikesreadingbooksbecauseshecanlearnmoreabouttheworld.Shehopestobeamusicteacherinthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的好朋友Lily的情况。2.写作指导：本文用第三人称，一般现在时来介绍。分为两段式：第一段介绍她的学校信息；第二段介绍她的外貌，爱好以及长大后想做什么工作。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。4．假设Tom是你的好朋友，请你根据下列表格中所提供的信息介绍一下他(可适当发挥)。FirstName:TomLastName:GreenAge:12Telephonenumber:356-0637Class:5Grade:7Favoritecolor:blueRoom:cleanandtidySportscollections:TwobasketballsandasoccerballLikes:readbooksandplaysports________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Ihaveagoodfriend.HisfirstnameisTomandhislastnameisGreen.Heis12yearsold.Wearethesameage.Histelephonenumberis356-0637.HeisinClass5,Grade7.Weareinthesameclass,soweareclassmates.Hisfavoritecolorisblue.Hehasaniceroom.Hisroomiscleanandtidy.Helikesplayingsports.Hehastwobasketballsandasoccerball.Healsolikesreadingbooks.Ilikehimverymuch.【详解】题干解读：题目要求根据表格中所提供的信息介绍一下Tom，可适当发挥。写作指导：此作文时态宜用一般现在时，采用第一人称和第三人称口吻。作文直接采用一段落格式，主要从姓名、年龄、班级、爱好等方面去介绍好朋友。5．假如你是李华，你的同学Kitty随父母来芜湖，两个月来你们已经成为好友。请你根据下列表格中的信息用英文写一篇关于Kitty的介绍。NameKittyNationality(国籍)英国Age12Looks高且苗条，……SchoolWoodlandSchool,London,...Hobby各种运动，……Hope……注意：1.短文中应包含所要求的信息，可以适当发挥；2.词数70词左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；3.短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名；MyNewFriendHello,everyone!I’dliketointroducemynewfriendtoyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyNewFriendHello,everyone!I’dliketointroducemynewfriendtoyou.SheisKitty.Sheisatwelve-year-oldgirlwhocomesfromEngland.Sheistallandslim.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.SheoncestudiedatWoodlandSchoolinLondon.Itisabeautifulschool.Herfavoritesubjectsaremathandart,becauseshethinkstheyareusefulandinteresting.Asforherhobby,sheenjoysdoingdifferentkindsofsports.Sheisespeciallygoodatplayingvolleyball.NowshecomestoWuhuwithherparents.Teachersandstudentsherearekindtoher.ShehopestolearnChinesewellsothatshecancommunicatewithherclassmatesfluently.【详解】[总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章应该包括表格中的所有要点，不要遗漏，适当补充，使文章更合理、更充实；行文要使用第三人称，注意谓语动词的变化。［写作步骤］第一步，引入话题：介绍新朋友；第二步，依据表格要点逐一介绍新朋友Kitty；第三步，介绍Kitty来芜湖后的情况以及她的希望。［亮点词汇］①begoodat擅长②asfor对于［高分句型］①ShehopestolearnChinesewellsothatshecancommunicatewithherclassmatesfluently.(sothat引导目的状语从句)②Sheisatwelve-year-oldgirlwhocomesfromEngland.(定语从句)6．写一篇短文，介绍你的新朋友David，David的情况如下所示：1.男孩，13岁，来自英国；2.高个，圆脸，大鼻子，小嘴巴，大眼睛，短发；3.最喜欢蓝色，穿蓝色上衣和黑色裤子；4.在同一年级，但不同班级，是好朋友。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.词数60左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Ihaveanewfriend.HisnameisDavid.Heisthirteen.HeisfromEngland.Heistallwithshorthair.Hehasaroundface,abignoseandasmallmouth.Hiseyesarebig.Hisfavoritecolorisblue.Heisinabluecoatandblacktrousers.Weareinthesamegrade,butindifferentclasses.Wearegoodfriends.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，介绍了我的新朋友David；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍我的新朋友：姓名，年龄，来自哪里；第二步，介绍我的新朋友的外貌；第三步，介绍我的新朋友的喜好，我们在同一年级，但是在不同的班级。[亮点词汇]①befrom来自②thesame相同的③favorite最喜欢的[高分句型]①Weareinthesamegrade,butindifferentclasses.（but表转折）7．请根据以下信息，用英文介绍一下你的好朋友Nancy，可以适当发挥一到两条。60至80个词。参考词汇：introduce介绍；favorite最喜欢的；parents父母______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ihaveagoodfriend.Letmeintroduceher.HernameisNancy.Sheis12yearsold.SheisinClassFive,GradeSeven.HertelephonenumberiHerfavoritecolorsarewhite,blueandpurple.Therearefourpeopleinherfamily.Theyareherparents,herbrotherandher.Shelikesplayingfootballverymuchbecauseshethinksitcanmakeherrelax.Sheisveryhelpful.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Iamsoluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的朋友Nancy，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，详细介绍朋友的相关信息；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①playfootball踢足球②helpsb.withsth.帮助某人做某事[高分句型]Shelikesplayingfootballverymuchbecauseshethinksitcanmakeherrelax.(because引导的原因状语从句)8．假如你是李明，Jack是你新认识的朋友。请根据表中信息，向大家介绍你的新朋友。姓名JackSmith年龄13学校No.1MiddleSchool电话号码557-7996家庭成员祖父母（Linda,Bob），父母（teachers），妹妹（Jenny）学习用品书包很整洁。书包里有三本书，一本字典和一个铅笔盒……注意：1.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；3.词数：50个左右。（已给出开头，不计入总词数）Ihaveafriend.HisnameisJackSmith._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ihaveafriend.HisnameisJackSmith.Thisyear,heis13yearsold.HestudiesinNo.1MiddleSchoolnow.Histelephonenumberis557-7996.Therearesixpeopleinhisfamily.LindaandBobarehisgrandparents.Hisparentsareteachers.AndhissisteriscalledJenny.Hehasacleanschoolbag.Threebooks,adictionaryandapencilboxareinit.Heusuallytidiesuphisdesk.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Jack的姓名、年龄、学校和电话号码；第二步，介绍他的家庭成员；第三步，最后介绍他的学习用品。[亮点词汇]①telephonenumber电话号码②tidyup整理[高分句型]Therearesixpeopleinhisfamily.（Therebe句型）9．你结识了一位新朋友SamSmith。请根据下面表格内容，写一篇不少于40词（不包括提示词语）的英语小短文，把他介绍给你的同学们。NameSamSmithNationality（国籍）AmericanAge12Grade7Class7FavouritesportBasketballFavouritecolourWhiteIhaveanewfriendSamSmith.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

IhaveanewfriendSamSmith.HeisfromAmerica.Heis12yearsold.HeisinClass7,Grade7.Hisfavoritesportisbasketball.Heoftenplaysitwithhisfriendsafterschool.Ilovebasketball,too.Ihopewewillhaveachancetoplaytogether.Hisfavoritecoloriswhite.Thisismynewfriend,SamSmith.Ihopeourfriendshipwillbeforever.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格内的信息，可以适当添加内容，使文章内容更加丰富。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。认真阅读题目已给出的首句，介绍自己的新朋友，统领全文；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从国籍、年龄、年级和班级、最喜欢的运动和颜色等方面来介绍山姆；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望和山姆成为永远的朋友”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①befrom来自②playwithsb.和某人玩耍③chance机会④friendship友谊[高分句型]①Ihopewewillhaveachancetoplaytogether.(haveachancetodosth.能有机会做某事)②Ihopeourfriendshipwillbeforever.(宾语从句)10．同学们，进入初中以来，你是不是又结交了许多好朋友呢？请以“Mybestfriend”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你最好的朋友。要点：1.个人信息：姓名，年龄，生日，班级年级（7年级12班）等；2.喜欢的颜色是白色；3.体育爱好及原因；4.父母及其职业。要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；2.语法