Module 1 Wonders of the world 满分范文必背-九年级英语上册（外研版）

Module1Wondersoftheworld模块话题满分范文必背1．假设你是李辉。英语周报“旅游”栏目正在征集稿件，请你根据以下提示，以“OneofMyTravelExperiences”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。提示：1.旅游方式、时间和地点；2.旅游经历；3.你的感受。要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）OneofMyTravelExperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OneofMyTravelExperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone.Lastsummerholiday,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Wetravelledtherebyplane.Aftergettingofftheplane,wetookataxitothehotel.Duringthefollowingdays,wevisitedmanyplacesofinterest.TheGreatWallmadeadeepimpressiononme.Itisanancientwallwithalonghistory.WewalkedalongtheGreatWallandenjoyedtheview.ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.Ithinktravellingisrelaxingandeducational.Icannotonlyenjoymyself,butalsolearnalot.ItmakesmerealizeChinaisreallygreat.【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；

第二步，介绍去北京的旅游经历。

[亮点词汇]

①getoff下车②placesofinterest名胜古迹③makeadeepimpressiononsb给某人留下了深刻的印象[高分句型]

①ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.（though引导让步状语从句）②Ithinktravellingisrelaxingandeducational.（宾语从句）2．某英文报社正在举办以“AnUnforgettableTrip”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍一次难忘的旅游经历，向该报社投稿。提示：1.Whereandwhendidyougo?2.Howdidyougothere?3.Whatdidyouseeanddothere?4.Whatdoyouthinkofthetrip?参考词汇：scenery(风景),localfood,takephotos,happyandrelaxed,…要求：1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于70词。AnUnforgettableTrip____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableTripIhavebeentomanyplacesandamongthem,Hainanismyfavouriteplace.Lastsummerholiday,myfatherandIwentthere.Wewenttherebyplane.Theseatherewaswonderful.Theskywasblueandtheseawasblue,too.First,wewenttoswiminthesea.Then,welayonthebeachandenjoyedthesun.Next,wetriedsomeseafood.Itwasdelicious.Wealsotooklotsofphotosthere.Itwasanicetrip.Ifeltveryrelaxed.Iwillneverforgetthisexperience.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。③提示：写作要点已经给出，考查注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]

第一步，明确旅行的地点。

第二步，介绍旅行的时间、和谁去的、怎么去的、看了什么和做了什么。第三步，谈谈自己对这次旅行的感受，和题目呼应。

[亮点词汇]

①havebeento曾经去过某地②byplane坐飞机③takephotos拍照

[高分句型]Theskywasblueandtheseawasblue,too.（and连接并列句）3．假设你是李辉。英语周报“旅游”栏目征集稿件，请你以“Oneofmytravelexperiences”为题写一篇短文。要点如下：(1)旅游方式、时间和地点；(2)旅游经历；(3)你的感受。注意:(1)词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。OneofmytravelexperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OneofmytravelexperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone.Lastsummerholiday,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Wetravelledtherebyplane.Aftergettingofftheplane,wetookataxitothehotel.Duringthefollowingdays,wevisitedmanyplacesofinterest.TheGreatWallmadeadeepimpressiononme.Itisanancientwallwithalonghistory.WewalkedalongtheGreatWallandenjoyedtheview.ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.Ithinktravellingisrelaxingandeducational.Icannotonlyenjoymyself,butlearnalotaswell.ItmakesmerealizeChinaisreallygreat.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般过去时及一般现在时；③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己难忘的经历，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出旅游方式、时间和地点；第二步，描述自己的经历；第三步，讲述这次经历对自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①placesofinterest名胜古迹②madeadeepimpressionon留下深刻印象③educational有教育意义的[高分句型]①ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.（though引导的让步状语从句）②Icannotonlyenjoymyself,butlearnalotaswell.（notonly…but句型）4．假如你是王洁，你在美国的笔友John想到中国旅行，请根据以下提示给他发一封email。词数100左右，并注意格式。提示：1.北京是中国的首都，它历史悠久，名胜古迹不胜枚举。这里有万里长城、故宫(theForbiddenCity)、颐和园(theSummerPalace)等。夏季和秋季是来北京的最佳时节；2.夏季到大连、青岛的海滨冲浪(gosurfing)是一件乐事；3.还可以到海南，那里四季如春，可以旅游潜水，你一定会玩得很开心。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearJohn,I’veheardfromyou.IknowyouwanttovisitChina.That’sagoodidea.Asyouknow,BeijingisthecapitalofChina.Ithasalonghistoryandtherearemanyplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCity,theSummerPalaceandsoon.Summerandautumnisthebesttimetocomehere.Insummer,youcangosurfinginDalianorQingdao,andthewavesthereareterrific.YoucanalsovisitHainan,andtheweatherisalwayswarm.Nomatterwhetherinsummerorinwinter,youcangoscubadivingthere.Ithinkyou’llhaveagoodtime.Ihopeyou’llcomesoonandwishyoualotoffun.Yours,WangJie【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍写电子邮件的缘由；第二步，具体阐述中国一些旅游的著名城市及景点；第三步，最后表达对John表示祝愿。[亮点词汇]①hearfrom收到……来信②wanttodosth想要做某事③haveagoodtime玩得开心[高分句型]①Summerandautumnisthebesttimetocomehere.（动词不定式作后置定语）②Ihopeyou’llcomesoonandwishyoualotoffun.（省略that的宾语从句）5．你校英语论坛正在开展“MyFavoriteTrip”的分享与交流活动。请根据以下要求写一篇短文，介绍一次你最喜欢的旅行及收获。内容：1.此次旅行的时间及目的地；2.你的所见所闻；3.你的收获。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.需涵盖所有内容，并做适当拓展；3.词数80左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）Hello,everyone,I’mverygladtosharemyfavoritetripwithallofyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hello,everyone,I’mverygladtosharemyfavoritetripwithallofyou.Lastsummerholiday,IhadawonderfultriptoGuilinwithmyfamilybyplane.GuilinisfamousforLiRiver,sowewentthereforboatingfirst.Wecouldseefishswimminghappilybecauseoftheclearwater.Youcan’timaginewhatagreattimewewerehavingontheriver,enjoyingthebeautifulmountainsalong.OntheseconddaywewenttoShilinwhichhasmanystrangestones.TheyweresospecialthatItookalotofpictures.AndIalsocan’tforgetthelocalfoodlikeGuilinricenoodles.Theysmeltstrongbuttasteddelicious.Travelbroadensthemind!InthistripInotonlygetrelaxedbutalsolearntalotaboutthelocalculture.It’stheinterestingtripIlikemost.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；③提示：根据所给内容完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题；第二步，介绍一次你最喜欢的旅行及收获。[亮点词汇]①befamousfor因……而出名②becauseof因为③notonly…butalso不但……而且[高分句型]OntheseconddaywewenttoShilinwhichhasmanystrangestones.（which引导定语从句）6．进入初中以来，你的学校一定组织过很多有意义的外出研学活动，让你和同学们开阔了眼界，体验了快乐，增进了友谊。新学期你的学校现正举办“MyStudyTour”征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题，向大家介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动，说一说你去了哪，做了什么，以及你的收获。提示词语：historicalsites,museums,experience,fantastic,exciting提示问题：1.Wheredidyougoonthestudytour?2.Whatdidyoudoonthetour?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromthestudytour?MyStudyTour_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyStudyTour

Lastterm,ItookpartinastudytourwithmyclassmatestoXi’an.WefirstwenttovisitEmperorQinshihuang’sMausoleumSiteMuseum,wherewesawthewisdomofancientChinesepeople.Intheafternoon,wewenttowatchsomeshadowplays,anancientformofChinesestorytelling.Thefollowingday,weclimbedthefamousGreatWildGoosePagoda.Standingonthetopofit,wehadagreatviewofthecity.Afterthat,wetastedsomedeliciouslocalfood.Wealsohadlotsofactivities,suchasclimbingthemountainsandsharingthestudytourreport.Thetripwasbothpleasantandeducational.

IfeelluckytohavesuchalovelytourinXian.ItwasanexcellentopportunitytoexperiencethelocalcultureandgainadeeperappreciationofChinesehistory.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动；第二步，具体阐述要点提示内容。重点写你去了哪，做了什么；第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己参加了此次外出研学活动的收获。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加，加入②hadagreatviewof对……看得很清楚③suchas例如④lotsof许多[高分句型]①WefirstwenttovisitEmperorQinshihuang’sMausoleumSiteMuseum,wherewesawthewisdomofancientChinesepeople.（where引导的时间状语从句）②ItwasanexcellentopportunitytoexperiencethelocalcultureandgainadeeperappreciationofChinesehistory.（it作形式主语的强调句）7．假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结束五一小长假旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“ATriptoBeijing”为题写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。(1)天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。(2)早上7:30我们出发，车程大约半小时。(3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识和传统文化。(4)第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午乘地铁去王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。(5)我的旅游感受……参考词汇：王府井大街：WangfujingStreet故宫：thePalaceMuseum

北京烤鸭：PekingRoastDuckDuringtheMayDayholiday,Iwentto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DuringtheMayDayholiday,IwenttoBeijingforavisitwithmyparents.WeleftTianjinat7:30onthemorningofMay1st,andwetooktheBeijing-TianjinIntercityRailwaytogetthere.Ittookusabouthalfanhourtoarrivethere.Toourjoy,theweatherwaspleasant.Andwebeganourtwo-daytripinBeijing.Firstofall,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegottoBeijing.Welistenedtothetourguide,andknewmoreknowledgeaboutourChinesehistoryandtraditionalculture.What’smore,Iboughtmygoodfriendsmanylovelypresents.Onearlymorningofthesecondday,wewenttowalkuptheGreatWall.Itwasoneofthemostfamouswondersintheworld.Afterthat,wetooktheundergroundtothecitycenter,WangfujingStreet.Atthatmoment,weallfeltveryhungry,sowedecidedtotryPekingRoastDuck.ThoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasameaningfulexperienceandIwillneverforgetit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“ATriptoBeijing”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出对北京之行的介绍；第二步，具体介绍在北京做了什么；第三步，表达自己的旅游感受。[亮点词汇]①Firstofall首先②assoonas一……就……③Atthatmoment在那一刻④decidetodo决定做[高分句型]①Firstofall,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegottoBeijing.（时间状语从句）②ThoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasameaningfulexperienceandIwillneverforgetit.（让步状语从句）8．假如你是李华，你正在英国牛津大学参加短期语言培训，计划下周末去伦敦旅游。某旅行社在网上发布的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确。请你根据以下要点提示，给这个旅行社的工作人员发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。

询问要点包括：（1）费用是否包括参观景点的门票、午餐；（2）返程的准确时间；（3）是否有购物的时间。要求：（1）可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（2）90词左右；电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：费用feeDearSirorMadam,

I’mLiHua.I’mfromChina,butI’mstudyingatUniversityofOxfordnow.I’mwritingformoreinformationaboutthetwodays’tourofLondon._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

ThankyouforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearSirorMadam,

I’mLiHua.I’mfromChina,butI’mstudyingatUniversityofOxfordnow.I’mwritingformoreinformationaboutthetwodays’tourofLondon.Firstly,I’dliketoknowmoreaboutthefee.Doesitincludetheentrancefeesfortheplaceswewillvisit?Whataboutlunch?Isitincluded?OrdoIneedtobringmyownfood?Secondly,couldyoupleasetellmetheexacttimewhenIcanexpecttobeback?IhavesomethingimportanttodoonthatdaysoI’dliketoknowit.Thirdly,Iwonderiftherewillbetimeforshopping.IreallywanttohavealookatthebigstoresinLondon.ThankyouforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”、“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中给这个旅行社的工作人员咨询下周末去伦敦旅游的介绍。咨询内容包括费用是否包括参观景点的门票、午餐，返程的准确时间以及是否有购物的时间等。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己在英国牛津大学参加短期语言培训，计划下周末去伦敦旅游；第二步，咨询下周末去伦敦旅游的相关情况，咨询内容包括费用是否包括参观景点的门票、午餐，返程的准确时间以及是否有购物的时间等；第三步，书写结束语。表达“期待得到回复”的想法。[亮点词汇]①twodays’tourofLondon两天的伦敦之旅②knowmoreabout更多地了解③somethingimportant重要的事情④lookingforwardto盼望[高分句型]①Secondly,couldyoupleasetellmetheexacttimewhenIcanexpecttobeback?（when引导时间状语从句）②Thirdly,Iwonderiftherewillbetimeforshopping.（Iwonder+if引导的宾语从句）9．旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力、历史的积淀和文化的传承。每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。同学们，在这个暑假里，你和家人或朋友去过哪里旅行呢？请以“AnUnforgettablePlaceIHaveBeento”为题，谈一谈你去过的一个难忘的地方，你在那里做了什么，以及它令人难忘的原因。要求：1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整；2.字数不少于80词。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Ihavebeentomanyplacestheseyears.AnunforgettableplaceIhavebeentoisQingdao.Lastsummer,myfriendsandIwenttoQingdao.Wehadagreattimethere.Qingdaoisabeautifulcity.Wedidalotofthingsthere,suchasswimming,boatingandclimbingmountains.Wealsovisitedthetrestle.AsalandmarklandscapeofQingdao,ithasitsuniquecharm.Qingdaoisalsofamousforitsfood.Theseafoodthereisreallydelicious.Qingdaohasaveryuniquefestival—QingdaoBeerFestival.Themostexcitingthingistoseethesunrise.Whenthesunrosefromtheeast,wecheered.Forthefirstrayofsunshineinthemorning,peoplealwayshavedifferentemotions.Theseemotionsaretheexpectationofanewdayandthefinalfarewelltoyesterday.Itookmanyphotosaswell.Theycanbemybestmemories.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出“最难忘的地方”这一话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，在那里做了哪些事以及它令人难忘的原因；第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①haveagreattime玩得开心②befamousfor以……而著名③aswell也[高分句型]①Whenthesunrosefromtheeast,wecheered.（when引导的时间状语从句）②AnunforgettableplaceIhavebeentoisQingdao.（定语从句）10．假如你是李晨，你的美国笔友Linda打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封电子邮件，简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。词数：80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考要点：1.赴宴要准时，见面