安徽省2024八年级英语上册Unit4Doityourself写作能力提升练课件牛津译林版

Unit4DoityourselfUnit4写作能力提升练目

录CONTENTS01写作实践02话题写作常见错误呈现03实战演练你的生日快要到了，你的妈妈决定自己为你做蛋糕，你

花了两个小时的时间帮助妈妈做蛋糕。请你写一篇日记，记

录你们如何做蛋糕，不少于80词。

3.时态：以一般过去时为主［审题指导］1.体裁：记叙文

2.人称：以第三人称为主［思路构建］［精彩范文］Saturday，29OctoberMybirthdayiscoming，somymother

decidedto

makea

cakeformebyherself.Ittookmetwohourstohelpmymother

finishthework.FirstIhelpedmymotherputthreecupsofflourintoabowl.

Nextmymotheraddedonecupofbuttertotheflour.Thenshe

mixedthebutterandtheflourtogetherandaddedaglassofmilk.

Finally，shebroketwoeggsintothebowlandaddedonecupof

sugar.Whenwecompletedthework，therewasflouron

everything：thetable，ourclothes，ourhandsandourfaces！Ibelievewecanmakeabettercakenexttime，because

practicemakesperfect.下面句子均有1～2处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。1.Ittookmefivehourtogetschool.

⁠2.Hethenspentfivehoursputuptheshelfonthewall.

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⁠Ittookmefivehourstogettoschool.

Hethenspentfivehoursputtinguptheshelfonthe

wall.

3.WhenIcompletedthecard，thereispaintoneverything.

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⁠4.NowIknowmanymoreaboutDIYthanmycousin.

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WhenIcompletedthecard，therewaspainton

everything.

NowIknowmuchmoreaboutDIYthanmycousin.

5.Keeptry，andyouwillfindyoucanrememberthings

better.

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Keeptrying，andyouwillfindyoucanremember

thingsbetter.

请阅读下面的内容，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍怎样做西

瓜冷饮。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Whatyouneed：somewatermelon，1cupoforange

juice，3spoonsofsugar，icecreamHowtomakeit：1.Cutthewatermelon.2.Putthe

watermeloninthefridgefor20to30minutes.3.Mixandadd

otherthings.4.Putitinaglass.Manyofyoumustwantsomethingcoldandtastytodrinkin

summer.Nowyoucanmakesomebyyourself，forexample，a

watermeloncooler.

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Tomakeawatermeloncooler，youneedsome

watermelon，acupoforangejuice，3spoonsofsugarand

someicecream.Firstofall，cutthewatermelonintosmall

pieces.Thenputthemintoafridgeandtakethemout20to3