读后续写-从嫌弃到理解他在母亲的劳作中读懂母爱讲义-湖南省邵阳市2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Catherinehadstayedathomeallherlifetolookafterherthreechildren,butnow,she,wholostherhusbandinacaraccident,hadtostepoutandearnmoneytomakeendsmeet.Withzeroworkexperienceandnoprofessionaldegree,herchancesofgettinghiredforawellpaidjobwerenexttozero.Oneday,afterdroppingherchildrenatschool,Catherinespottedaconstructionsite(工地).“IthinkIcanworkhere,”shethoughtandwalkedclosetothemanager.“Hi,areyouhiring(雇佣)?”sheasked.“Yes,weare,”themanagerlookedatCatherinefromheadtotoe.“Areyousureyoucanworkhere?Thisjobrequiresalotofhardwork.”“I’mreadyforit,”shetoldthemanagerandsignedacontract(合同)toworka12hourshift(轮班).However,Catherinekepthernewjobasecretfromherchildren.Shethoughttheywouldfeelembarrassedafterlearningtheirmotherworkedataconstructionsite.Everymorning,afterdroppingherchildrentoschool,shewouldgototheconstructionsiteandworkuntilhershiftended.Shewouldpickupheavybricks(砖块)onhershouldertotransportthemfromonepartofthesitetotheother.Oneevening,Catherine’sson,Peter,toldheraboutanupingpetitioninschoolthatrequiredmotherstojoin.Inthepetition,studentswouldwearblindfolds(眼罩)andhavetorecognizetheirmotherswithoutlookingatthem.“Thatsoundslikesuchacoolevent,Peter!”Catherinesaidexcitedly.“Ican’twaitforit!”“Iwon’tgotherewithyou,mom,”Peterreplied.“Butwhy?”WhathersonsaidnextwassomethingCatherinewasn’tpreparedtohear.“Mom,Iwouldhavetotouchyourhandstorecognizeyou,andeveryonewouldlookatthem,”Peterexplained.“Yourhandsaresougly.They’resohardandrough,”headded.“Iwillfeelsoembarrassedwhenmyclassmateslookatyourhands,”theboysaid.“Iwon’tattendtheevent.”Catherinefeltterriblebutcouldn’tsayanythinginherdefense.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。para.1Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomethingunexpectedcaughthisattention._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2Onhiswaybackhome,hekeptthinkingabouthowhewouldapologizeto

hismother._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意凯瑟琳一生都在家照顾三个孩子，丈夫因车祸去世后，她不得不外出赚钱维持生计。由于没有工作经验和专业学位，她很难找到高薪工作。一天，她看到建筑工地招聘，尽管经理质疑，她还是签下12小时轮班的合同，并对孩子们隐瞒了这份工作。一天晚上，儿子彼得告诉她学校有个亲子活动，要求母亲参加，通过蒙眼触摸手来辨认自己的母亲，但彼得因嫌弃母亲粗糙难看的手，怕在同学面前尴尬，拒绝让母亲参加，凯瑟琳听后十分难过。故事山分析开端：凯瑟琳丈夫去世后，为维持生计去建筑工地工作，并瞒着孩子。发展：学校举办亲子活动，彼得因嫌弃母亲粗糙的手，拒绝让母亲参加。高潮（待续写）：彼得发现母亲工作的真相，内心受到触动，开始反思自己的行为。结局（待续写）：彼得向母亲道歉，理解母亲的辛苦，母子关系得到改善。伏笔以及在续写中的回应凯瑟琳隐瞒工作：在续写中，彼得会意外发现母亲的工作，打破凯瑟琳的隐瞒，成为他理解母亲的契机。彼得嫌弃母亲的手：后续彼得发现母亲工作后，会意识到母亲的手是因辛苦工作才变得粗糙，从而为自己之前的言行感到愧疚。建筑工地工作辛苦：彼得看到母亲工作场景时，会深切体会到母亲的艰辛，理解母亲为家庭的付出。亲子活动：原本拒绝母亲参加的彼得，在认识到母亲的辛苦后，可能会重新邀请母亲参加，体现他态度的转变。凯瑟琳的难过：当彼得道歉并理解母亲后，凯瑟琳的难过会被欣慰替代，家庭关系也会因此改善。续写要点（两段）第一段：描述彼得在回家路上看到母亲在建筑工地工作的场景，详细描写他看到母亲扛着沉重砖块时的震惊、心疼等复杂情绪，以及周围环境的艰苦，突出母亲工作的不易。第二段：描写彼得回家路上的心理活动，他深刻反思自己对母亲的态度，思考如何向母亲道歉。回家后，他真诚地向母亲道歉，表达自己的理解和爱，母亲欣慰地接受，母子关系更加亲密。情感线彼得一开始嫌弃母亲的手，对母亲态度冷漠，拒绝母亲参加亲子活动。看到母亲在建筑工地辛苦工作后，他内心充满震惊、心疼和愧疚。回家路上，他满心懊悔，思考如何道歉。向母亲道歉后，他心中的愧疚得以缓解，母子之间的爱更加深厚，他也学会了理解和感恩母亲。故事线彼得回家路上看到母亲在建筑工地扛着沉重的砖块工作。彼得震惊又心疼，意识到母亲工作的艰辛和为家庭的付出。彼得反思自己对母亲的态度，后悔当初嫌弃母亲的手。彼得思考向母亲道歉的方式，内心十分煎熬。彼得回到家，真诚地向母亲道歉。母亲欣慰地接受道歉，母子关系得到改善，更加亲密。主旨升华句Trueloveandunderstandingarebornwhenweseethesacrificesourparentsmakeforus,anditisthesepreciousemotionsthatstrengthenthefamilybond.当我们看到父母为我们所做的牺牲时，真正的爱与理解便应运而生，正是这些珍贵的情感巩固了家庭纽带。Familyloveisnotabouttheappearanceorthefortoflife,butabouttheselflessdedicationandmutualunderstandingwithinthefamily.家庭之爱不在于外表或生活的舒适，而在于家庭成员之间的无私奉献和相互理解。Weshouldalwayscherishandrespectthehardworkofourparents,foritistheireffortsthatbuildawarmandlovinghomeforus.我们应该始终珍惜和尊重父母的辛勤付出，因为是他们的努力为我们营造了一个温暖有爱的家。Themomentwetrulyunderstandthehardshipsourparentsendureforourwellbeingisthemomentwegrowupandlearnthetruemeaningofgratitude.当我们真正理解父母为我们的幸福所承受的艰辛时，便是我们成长并领悟感恩真谛的时刻。Afamilythrivesonthefoundationofempathyandappreciation,whereeachmember'ssacrificesarerecognizedandcherished.一个家庭在同理心和感恩的基础上蓬勃发展，在这里每个成员的牺牲都能被认可和珍视。写作示范一Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomethingunexpectedcaughthisattention.Itwashismother,Catherine,ontheconstructionsite.Shewasstrugglingtocarryalargepileofbricksonhershoulder,herfaceredwitheffort.Thenoiseoftheconstructionsitewasdeafening,andthedustwaseverywhere.Peterfrozeinhistracks,hiseyeswideopeninshock.Hehadneverimaginedthathismotherwasworkinginsuchatoughenvironment.Ashewatchedhismother'sthinfigurebendingundertheheavyload,hisheartachedwithguilt.Onhiswaybackhome,hekeptthinkingabouthowhewouldapologizetohismother.Herealizedhowselfishandthoughtlesshehadbeen.Whenhegothome,herushedtohismotherandhuggedhertightly.“Mom,I'msosorry.Ididn'tknowyouwereworkingsohardforus.Yourhandsarethemostbeautifulhandsintheworldbecausetheyarefilledwithyourloveforus,”hesaid,tearsstreamingdownhisface.Catherinewastakenabackatfirst,butthenshesmiledwarmly,hereyesfilledwithreliefandlove.Fromthatdayon,Peterandhismotherbecamecloserthanever.写作示范二Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomethingunexpectedcaughthisattention.Outofthecornerofhiseye,hesawafigurethatlookedextremelyfamiliar.Itwashismother,Catherine,attheconstructionsite.Shewaswearingahardhatandcarryingheavybuildingmaterials.Thesunwasbeatingdownonher,andsweatwaspouringdownherface.Peter'sheartsank.Hewatchedashismotherstruggledtokeepupwiththeheavyworkload.Herememberedhiswordsaboutherhandsandfeltadeepsenseofshame.Onhiswaybackhome,hekeptthinkingabouthowhewouldapologizetohismother.Hethoughtaboutallthetimesshehadtakencareofhimandhissiblings,sacrificingherownfortfortheirwellbeing.Whenhearrivedhome,hewaitedpatientlyforhismothertoreturn.Assoonasshewalkedthroughthedoor,hesteppedforward.“Mom,Isawyouattheconstructionsitetoday.I'msosorryforwhatIsaidaboutyourhands.Iknownowhowmuchyou'vebeenthroughforus,”hesaidwithatremblingvoice.Catherinewastouched.ShehuggedPetertightly,andtheybothknewthattheirrelationshiphadchangedforthebetter.【答案】范文Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomethingunexpectedcaughthisattention.Inthedistance,he

sawafamiliarfigureinwornoutclothes,coveredindustandsweat,liftedheavybrickswithherweatheredhands

attheconstructionsite.Ashedrewcloser,herealizeditwashismother,Catherine.Catherinetirelesslymovedheavybrickswithheruglyandroughhandsunderthescorchingsun.Herfacewascoveredinsweat,andshedidn'tevenhavetimetowipeitoffassherushedbackandforth,workingtirelessly.Peterstoodthereinshock,unabletoutterasingleword.Meanwhile,awaveofguiltandregretf