专题18 意见和建议-【妙笔生花】2024年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍原卷版

2024年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍18意见和建议解题方法：针对某一主题提出建议。这类文章，可以按总分总的思路进行写作，注意第一部分要开篇点题，即开门见山地表明本篇文章的主题是针对某问题提出建议；第二部分要条理清晰地阐述建议；第三部分要简洁准确地进行总结提出建议类文章内容经典句式第一段针对某一主题提出建议HerearesomesuggestionsonhowtolearnEnglish.Howcanwekeephealthy?Whatshouldwedotokeepfit?Thefollowingaremysuggestions(on……)第二段阐述具体的建议Youshould/oughtto……Youhadbetterdo/notdo……Whynot……/Whydon’tyou……Itisgood/wiseto……Youmustn't……/Don’t……第三段号召按建议采取行动Let’stakeactionsfromnowonto……Ifyoufollowingthesuggestionsabove,youwill……Onlyinthisway,canwe……Ifyoudoso/keepondoingthat,youwill……Thus,Isuggestsb(should)dosth.B针对某一现象，分析原因，提出你的建针对现象，分析原因，提出建议类文章内容经典句式第一段描述现象Nowadays,thecomputerisplayinganimportantroleinourdailylife.Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,moreandmorestudentsareusingsmartphones.Asweallknow,mostmiddleschoolstudentsspendlittletimedoingsports.Itisknowntoallthatmanystudentshavetotakevariousclassesintheirsparetime.第二段分析原因Firstofall,Secondly,Thirdly,What’smore,Besides,FinallyForonething,Foranotherthing,BesidesOntheonehand,Ontheotherhand第三段提出建议Youshould/oughtto……Youhadbetterdo/notdo……Whynot……/Whydon’tyou……Itisgood/wiseto……Youmustn't……/Don’t……必背高分表达必背高分表达陈述个人意见、看法的句型:(1)I'mafraid...恐怕······例句①I'mafraidwecan'tfinishitontime.恐怕我们不能按时完成.②I'mafraidIhavetoleavenow.我恐怕现在得走了.③I'mafraidyouarewrong.恐怕你错了.④There'slittletimeleft.I'mafraidwehavetomakeadecisionassoonaspossible.时间所剩无几,恐怕我们得尽快作出决定了.(2)Ithink(that)...我认为······①Ithinkthevolunteerswhosavedpeopleintroubleshouldberegardedasheroesaswell.我认为那些拯救受困人员的志愿者也应该被视为英雄.②Ithink(that)Tomishonest.我认为汤姆很诚实.③Ithinkhewillcometoseeussoon.我认为他不久就会来看我们.④Ithinkthatisagoodidea.我认为那是一个不错的主意.⑤Idon'tthinkmyparentswillagree.我认为我的父母不会同意.⑥Idon'tthinkhewilljoinus.我认为他不会加入我们.⑦-Areyousureyoucandowellintoday'stest,Lucy?露西,你确信你今天考试能考得不错吗?-Ithinkso.I'vegoteverythingready.我认为如此,我已经做好准备了.(3)Ithink/find/feelit+形容词＋todosth我认为／发现／感觉做某事······这一结构中,it为形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式.例句①Ithinkitimpolitetocutinline.我认为插队是不礼貌的.②IthinkiteasytomakefriendswithMr.White.我认为和怀特先生交朋友很容易.③Ithinkitgreattojoinintheirpartytonight.我认为今晚参加他们的聚会是非常棒的.④IfinditeasytolearnEnglishwell.我发现学好英语是很容易的.⑤Ifindithardtoteachmyyoungerbrothertopaint.我发现教我弟弟画画不容易.⑥Ifeelitnecessarytohelptheold.我感到帮助老人是必要的.⑦Ifeelitpossibletofinishmyhomeworkbeforenineo'clock.我觉得九点前完成作业是可能的.(4)Iwonder...我想知道······例句①Iwonderif/whetherhewillcome.我想知道他是否会来.②Iwonderif/whetherthehouseisbigenough.我想知道这房子是不是足够大.③Iwonderwhotoldhimtheseeret.我想知道谁把秘密告诉了他.④IwonderhowJamesisgettingon.我想知道詹姆斯的近况.⑤Iwonderwherehespenthischildhood.我想知道他的童年是在哪里度过的.⑥Iwonderwhichhechoseatlast.我想知道他最后选了哪个.(5)Ihope...我希望······例句①Ihopeyouhaveagoodtrip.我希望你旅途愉快.②Ihopetolivebesidetheriver.我希望能住在河边.③Ihopeonedayourdreamswillcometrue.我希望有一天我们的梦想能够成真.④Ihopeyouwilllikeit.我希望你会喜欢它.(6)Ifeellike(doing)sth....我想(做)某事······例句①Ifeellikeacupofcoffee.我想要一杯咖啡.②Whenyoufeellikegivingup,thinkofyourgoal.当你想要放弃的时候,想想你的目标.③Ifeellikegoingtobed.Iamtired.我想要去睡了.我累了.④Idon'tfeellikegoingtothecinematonightwithyou.我今天晚上不太想和你一起去看电影.高分美句：1.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引导的定语从句)我想你可能用电子产品时间长了，这对你的视力有害。2.Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.（祈使句）远离高脂肪的食物，相反，多吃水果和蔬菜。3.Althoughitwashard,Imadegreatprogressinmygrades.(although引导的让步状语从句)尽管很难，但是我的成绩取得了很大进步。4.Ithankmyninthgradelife,whichhelpsmegrowup.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)我感谢我九年级的生活，它帮助我成长。5.However,somestudentsthinkWeChatwillaffecttheirstudyiftheyspendtoomuchtimeusingit.（if引导条件状语从句）然而，一些学生认为如果他们花太多时间使用微信，会影响他们的学习。6.Inmyopinion,weshoulduseWeChatproperlybynotusingitmorethantwohoursaday,andmakesurethatwedon’tuseitwhenwearestudying.（that引导宾语从句）在我看来，我们应该适度使用微信，每天不要超过两个小时，并确保学习的时候不适用。7.First,morepublicserviceadvertisementsshouldbeputuptoletpeopleknowtheimportanceofwater.（动词不定式todo作目的状语）首先，应该张贴更多的公益广告，使人们意识到水的重要性。8.Notonlycanithelpusincreaseourknowledge,italsoallowsustostepoutofourcomfortzoneandchallengeourselves.（Notonly引导的倒装句）它不仅可以帮助我们增长知识，还使我们走出舒适圈并挑战自我。必背满分范文必背满分范文（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。近视原因长时间使用电子产品；读书时间过长。建议控制使用电子产品时间；养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）……希望……参考词汇：视力eyesight；近视myopia；电子产品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing（2023·辽宁盘锦·统考中考真题）根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。提示：(1)建议买什么；(2)介绍这个礼物；(3)给出推荐理由。要求：(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。DearPeter,Gladtohearfromyou.It’seasytochooseagiftwhichstandsforChineseculture.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadviceishelpful.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua（2023·辽宁沈阳·统考中考真题）为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：1.尊重的对象和原因；2.具体做法；3.发出号召。【注意】1.词数80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。ShowrespectforeldersShowingrespectforeldersisoneofthefamilytraditionsthatChinesepeoplehavekeptforthousandsofyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·四川内江·统考中考真题）你校英语俱乐部将以“五育并举，全面发展”为主题举办中学生英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。1.德：诚信友善，乐于助人；2.智：勤奋努力，乐学善学；3.体：热爱运动，积极锻炼；4.美：学习绘画，爱好音乐；5.劳：清洁校园，分担家务。注意：1.所写内容应包括以上要点，并结合自身情况，选择一至两点重点阐述，合理拓展；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello,everyone!Mytopictodayisonhowstudentsbehavewellinourdailylife.Firstofall,weshouldbehonestandfriendly.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!（2023·甘肃兰州·统考中考真题）现如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文报旅游专栏正以“TravelinginGoodManners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。假设你是李华，请结合表格内的信息，用英文写一篇短文去投稿。ImpolitebehaviorsOpinionsAdvicethrowrubbisheverywhereimpolite...put...intodustbins...pickflowersinapark...putupsigns...speakloudlyinpublicplaces...makerules...内容包括：1.简述表格中的不文明行为（任选其中两个）；2.提出个人观点及建议；3.倡导文明旅游。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息；4.文章标题和开头已给出，请抄写在答题卡的相应位置（不计入总词数）。提示词：touristattractions（景区）TravelinginGoodMannersNowadaystravelingisgettingmoreandmorepopular.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·四川乐山·统考中考真题）2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促进法》规定：未成年人的父母或其他监护人应该重视家庭教育，关心孩子身心健康。对于此规定，作为学生的你有话想说。请你给校英语专栏写一篇短文，对父母提出建议并表明观点。内容包括：1.多花时间陪我们，如教做家务、一起玩耍等；2.帮助我们养成好的习惯；3.常与我们沟通谈心；4.信任我们并保护我们的隐私。注意：1.词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。参考词汇：physicalandmentalhealth身心健康；privacyn.隐私Accordingtothelaw“FamilyEducationPromotion”,parentsorotherguardiansofminorsshouldberesponsibleforfamilyeducation.Itasksparentstopayattentiontochildren’sphysicalandmentalhealth.Herearemysuggestionsforparents.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·山东泰安·统考中考真题）强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以“Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代（era）的好学生。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。参考词汇:diet(v.节食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(内在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·浙江杭州·统考中考真题）假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。TO

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CUsoon!HiLiPingNextweekI’llbewithyouinHangzhou.Ican’twait!It’sgoingtobesocool!Wecandolotsofexcitingthingstogether!Ineedtopackformytrip.WhatshouldIbringwithme?Isthereaswimmingpoolortenniscenternearby?I’dliketogetyouagiftfromwhereIlive.Whatwouldyoulikemetogetyou?I’msoexcitedaboutthetrip!Seeyousoon.JackHiJack,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing（2023·四川广安·统考中考真题）漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据以下图示完成一篇英语演讲稿。要求：1.字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。参考词汇：value

(v.珍惜)

respect

(v.尊敬)relatives

(n.家人)

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(n.安全)ValueImportantThingsAroundUsGoodmorning,everyone!IamLiHua.Lifeiscolourful.Therearemanyimportantthingsweshouldvalueinourdailylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.考前模拟预测考前模拟预测1．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Takeiteasy”accordingtothegivensituation(根据以下情境，以“放轻松”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)你的好朋友Sandy正在准备一场关于传统文化的演讲比赛，尽管她每天练习至少半小时，但仍然无法记住整份演讲稿。此外，Sandy因为太紧张，晚上无法入睡。请你写一封信给Sandy，鼓励她，让她放轻松。信中至少给她二个建议，并给出合适理由，同时注意信件格式。（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)玫瑰花园学校校报“知心信箱”专栏收到了一封来自李明同学的求助信。信中提及上周末他未经哥哥同意使用他的电脑，导致电脑出故障，耽误了哥哥的工作。李明没有告知实情，也不知道该怎么办。假设你是该报专栏编辑张华，请写封回信给李明，指出他行为上的不当之处，并提出可行的解决办法。注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．WritealettertoRebeccainatleast60wordsaccordingtothefollowingsituation.

(根据以下情境给Rebecca写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)生活中，总有一些人在我们遇到困难、困惑的时候给我们提供帮助或者建议。Rebecca也遇到了成长的烦恼，她父母希望她把更多的时间和精力放在学习上，让她放弃弹钢琴的兴趣爱好。她不知道该怎么办？假设你是她的朋友David，请你针对她的烦恼，给她写一封不少于60词的信，帮助她。注意：1.写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothesituationgiven.(请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)最近你学校的英语老师Johnson准备开设初三英语拓展课程。该课程有以下三个板块组成：“实境英语听说”、“英语报刊阅读”和“英语国家文化与风俗”。现在他正在征求同学们对英语拓展课程的意见。假如你是初三学生李华，请你阅读以下课程方案后给Johnson老师写一份邮件。邮件须包含以下内容：你是否愿意参加该课程，简述你的理由；针对课程方案中的学习主题、活动安排或课时数量提出1—2条改进建议，并说明理由。注意：1.信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。Johnson老师的英语拓展课程学习主题LearningTheme活动安排ActivitySchedule课时数量NumberofLessons实境英语听说Real-lifeEnglishListeningandSpeaking听写句子，口头交际5英语报刊阅读NewspaperandMagazineReadinginEnglish阅读报刊，完成练习3英语国家文化与风俗CultureandCustomsofEnglish-speakingCountries观看视频，书面介绍1DearJohnson,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua5．假设你是李华，是沭阳某中学九年级的学生。你们班正在选举新的班长，你想推荐方玲。请根据以下所给要点，给班主任兼英语老师孙老师写一封推荐信。推荐理由喜欢阅读书籍帮助她了解许多中国文化，为她开启一个新世界。吃苦耐劳从不介意花很多时间组织各项班级活动，将中国文化介绍给外国友人。能歌善舞有音乐天赋，歌声优美，能边演奏边创作音乐，擅长跳舞。擅长绘画善于用颜色调节情绪，由于不懈的努力，曾在绘画竞赛中获奖。乐于助人当过志愿者，曾帮慈善机构募集资金；（另举一例…）。1.包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.省略号部分需作适当发挥；3.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearMr.Sun,I’mwritingtorecommendFangLingasournewmonitor.Shehasmanystrongqualitiesforthisposition.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SoIthinkFangLingisthemostsuitablepersontobeourmonitor.Ihopeyoucanagreewithme.Yourssincerely,LiHua6．初三的生活是具有挑战性的，我们可能面临各种困难。如：沟通问题，学业压力、健康问题等。假如你是李华，值此毕业之际，你校英语社团公众号计划做一期主题为“学长学姐有话说”的推送。请你根据下列要点用英语给八年级的学弟学妹们写一则寄语。不少于40词。要点：1.看法；2.建议；3.寄语。要求：要点齐全；表达通顺；简洁得体。Dear8th-graders,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua7．今年五一期间，大量人们乘坐动车出行，很多站点出现一票难求的情况。人们在享受动车带来的便利时，也应该注意一些乘车细节，只有人人自觉遵规守纪，才能营造良好的乘车环境。请你根据以下思维导图，给旅客朋友们写一些动车搭乘建议。字数80词左右。行李架:luggagerack

过道:corridorNowadays,moreandmorepeoplechoosetotravelbyhigh-speedtrain.Whilethey’reenjoyingtheconvenience,theyshouldalsopayattentiontosomerulesoftraintaking.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。Hi,NextweekI’llbewithyouinBeijing.Ican’twait!Wecoulddolotsofexcitingthingstogether.AndnowIneedtopackformytrip.WhatshouldIbringwithme?SinceIaminterestedinhistorya