备战2025年中考英语真题分类汇编专题29书面表达考点1观点看法类(第01期)(学生版+解析)

专题29书面表达考点1观点看法类（第01期）（2024·湖北武汉·中考真题）本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’sLife”展开。请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面，写一篇英语作文，描绘25年后你的生活。Wheredoyouwanttoliveandwork?Whatwillyourfamilybelike?Howareyougoingtospendyourfreetime?Somethingmoreaboutyourfuturelife.注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。Mylifewillbeverydifferentin25years.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2024·四川南充·中考真题）假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友Eric发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.给出建议；3.表达希望。From:EricTo:LiMingSubject:Givemeahand!DearLiMing,YouknowI’mstudyinginanewschoolnowandIdon’tknowanyonehere.Ifindithardtogetonwellwithmyclassmates.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Eric注意：1.词数100左右；2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。To:EricFrom:LiMingSubject:Re:Givemeahand!DearEric,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing3.（2024·四川宜宾·中考真题）假如你是光明中学的李华，准备参加学校举办的以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“ASpecialBirthdayGift”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，讲述你在父（母）亲或其他长辈生日那天，送上的一份特殊生日礼物：家务劳动。内容包括：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程（扫地、擦家具、收拾房间等）；3.你的感受。注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.不能出现真实姓名和校名；3.词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。4.参考词汇：wipethefurniture擦家具ASpecialBirthdayGiftHello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Today,I’mverygladtohavethechancetotakepartinthisEnglishspeechcontest.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening!（2024·河南·中考真题）在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。StudyingaloneStudyingwithagroupsolveproblemsonmyowngethelpfromotherskeepmymindonschoolworkshareideaswithgroupmembers写作要求：1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?Somestudentsliketostudyalone.Othersenjoystudyingwithagroup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·江西·中考真题）我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来，学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间，增强时间管理意识，学校英语社团以“MakingBetterUseofTime”为题向学生征文，请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。写作要点：1．Whendoyouhavefreetime?2．Whatdoyouoftendoinyourfreetime?（Give3examples）3．Doyouthinkyourfreetimeisbetterused?Whyorwhynot?要求：1．短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2．短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；3．词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。MakingBetterUseofTimeAsajuniorhighschoolstudent,Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·河北·中考真题）假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(ClassRecord)，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。ClassRecordName:ZhangJunQuestionsYesNoDidyoulistentotheteachercarefully?√Didyouanswerquestionsactively?√Didyouaskanyquestions?√Didyouworkwellinyourgroup?√Didyoutakenotes?√注意：(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Welldone,ZhangJun!Youlistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclassand________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）话题作文：英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。请你以HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking为题，分享一下提高英语听说能力的方法。注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。提示词：improve,listentotheteacher,Englishcartoons,conversation,communicate注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeakingAsweknow,EnglishlisteningandspeakingarereallyimportantinlearningEnglish.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·云南·中考真题）你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“GettingClosetoNature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟（如郊游、研学、劳动实践等），或谈谈接近自然的好处。要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）时光飞逝，难忘的初中生活即将结束，你们将迎来一个轻松、愉快的假期。如何能让你的假期更加丰富多彩？请根据下面的思维导图，以“Howtospendameaningfulsummervacation”为题目写一篇短文，合理规划一下你的假期生活。HowtospendameaningfulsummervacationRelaxyourselfImproveyourselfPlanyournewtermTravelExercise…ReadLearn……要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；2.要点必须包含所有相关信息，并适当发挥；3.首段已给出，不计入总词数；4.词数：80—100词。HowtospendameaningfulsummervacationIwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Duringthevacation,I’lldosomethingmeaningfulandpreparewellforthefuture.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·四川雅安·中考真题）安全对于我们每个人都很重要。为进一步增强学生的安全意识，提高学生的自我保护能力，你校正在开展以“HowtoKeepSafeinOurLife”为主题的英语演讲比赛，现面向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示内容，写一份英文演讲稿。内容要点：1.校园安全：不在走廊奔跑，不打架……2.交通安全：遵守交通规则，骑自行车时不听音乐……3.食品安全：吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品……4.其他……（至少补充一点）。注意：1.词数80—100，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。Dearteachersandstudents,Today,I’mgladtogiveaspeechabouthowtokeepsafeinourlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.（2024·四川成都·中考真题）你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“BeaGoodTeamMember”为题投稿。BeaGoodTeamMember注意：1.词数80左右；2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·山东东营·中考真题）假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Takecareofyourself(照顺好自己)”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。内容要点：1.我们应从哪些方面做起，比如：身体健康（饮食、锻炼等）、生活技能（洗衣，做饭等）、心理健康（心态，抗挫等）……Wordbankphysicalhealth身体健康lifeskills生活技能mentalhealth心理健康2.具体应该怎么做；3.这样做的好处是什么。要求：1.至少从两个方面给出自己的看法；2文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；3.照抄试卷内容不得分。Takecareofyourself________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________专题29书面表达考点1观点看法类（第01期）（2024·湖北武汉·中考真题）本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’sLife”展开。请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面，写一篇英语作文，描绘25年后你的生活。Wheredoyouwanttoliveandwork?Whatwillyourfamilybelike?Howareyougoingtospendyourfreetime?Somethingmoreaboutyourfuturelife.注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。Mylifewillbeverydifferentin25years.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Mylifewillbeverydifferentin25years.IthinkI’llbeareporterinBeijing.IwillliveinanapartmentwithmysisterbecauseIdon’tlikelivingalone.AndIcanplaywithherinmyapartment.Myparentswilltravelaroundtheworldandenjoythemselves.IwillmeetalotofinterestingandfamouspeopleandIwillgotoanotherplaceonbusiness.Iwillhavemanydifferentpets.MaybeIwillkeepapetturtle.IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteranddosomereadingaslongasIhavetime.AndIwillgotoLondononmyvacation.I’llworkhardtoachievemydream.I’msuremylifein25yearswillbebetterandbetter!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体描述写作内容，介绍未来的工作、生活等；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①livein住在②playwith和……玩③aslongas只要④betterandbetter越来越好[高分句型]①IwillliveinanapartmentwithmysisterbecauseIdon’tlikelivingalone.

（原因状语从句）②IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteranddosomereadingaslongasIhavetime.（宾语从句和条件状语从句）2．（2024·四川南充·中考真题）假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友Eric发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.给出建议；3.表达希望。From:EricTo:LiMingSubject:Givemeahand!DearLiMing,YouknowI’mstudyinginanewschoolnowandIdon’tknowanyonehere.Ifindithardtogetonwellwithmyclassmates.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Eric注意：1.词数100左右；2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。To:EricFrom:LiMingSubject:Re:Givemeahand!DearEric,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing【答案】参考范文DearEric,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleingettingonwithyourclassmates.ItisunderstandablefornewstudentstohavesuchproblemsIhavesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly,Istronglyadviseyoutokeepsmiling.It’sawaytoshowyou’refriendly.What’smore,youaresupposedtobehelpful.Everybodywantstomakefriendswithpeoplewhoalwayshelpothers.Finally,trytofindsomeonewhohasthesameinterest.Ifyouhavethesamehobbies,youwillhavemoretotalkabout.Thenyouwillbefriendssoon.Abovearemysuggestionsforyou.Ireallyhopeyouwillgetonwellwithyourclassmatesandliveahappyschoollife.LiMing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给邮件内容完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表达自己很抱歉听到这个消息；第二步，具体给出自己的建议；第三步，最后书写小结。[亮点词汇]①advisesbtodosth建议某人做某事②what’smore而且③trytodosth尝试做某事[高分句型]①Everybodywantstomakefriendswithpeoplewhoalwayshelpothers.（定语从句）②Ifyouhavethesamehobbies,youwillhavemoretotalkabout.（条件状语从句）3.（2024·四川宜宾·中考真题）假如你是光明中学的李华，准备参加学校举办的以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“ASpecialBirthdayGift”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，讲述你在父（母）亲或其他长辈生日那天，送上的一份特殊生日礼物：家务劳动。内容包括：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程（扫地、擦家具、收拾房间等）；3.你的感受。注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.不能出现真实姓名和校名；3.词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。4.参考词汇：wipethefurniture擦家具ASpecialBirthdayGiftHello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Today,I’mverygladtohavethechancetotakepartinthisEnglishspeechcontest.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening!【答案】例文：ASpecialBirthdayGiftHello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Today,I’mverygladtohavethechancetotakepartinthisEnglishspeechcontest.Myspecialbirthdaygiftformyparentsisdoinghousework.Ihavebeenbusywithmystudyandseldomhelpedmyparentswiththehousework.Feelingsorryforthem,Ibegantothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.LastSaturdaywasmymother’sbirthdayandmyparentswentouttoseeafilm.ItoccurredtomethatIcouldgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning.Firstly,Icollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.Then,Iwipedthefurniture.Afterthat,Isweptandmoppedthefloor.Atthatmoment,myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprisedtoseealltheroomstidy.MymothergavemeahugandIcouldseehertearsinhereyes.TiredasIwas,Ifeltsohappy!Thankyouforyourlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：要求以“ASpecialBirthdayGift”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍做家务的理由；第二步，具体介绍做家务的过程；第三步，介绍父母的反应和自己的感受；第四步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①bebusywith忙于②thinkabout考虑③put...inplace放好[高分句型]①ItoccurredtomethatIcouldgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning.（It固定句型）②TiredasIwas,Ifeltsohappy!（倒装句）（2024·河南·中考真题）在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。StudyingaloneStudyingwithagroupsolveproblemsonmyowngethelpfromotherskeepmymindonschoolworkshareideaswithgroupmembers写作要求：1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?Somestudentsliketostudyalone.Othersenjoystudyingwithagroup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversion1:Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?Somestudentsliketostudyalone.Othersenjoystudyingwithagroup.Asforme,Ilikestudyingalonebetter.Firstly,studyingalonehelpsmelearntosolveproblemsonmyown.Mostofthetime,Ineedtothinkhardaboutthemallbymyself.Somythinkingabilityisimprovedatthesametime.Secondly,whenIstudyalone,IcankeepmymindonwhatI’mdoing.Withaclearhead,Iamabletofinishmyhomeworkquickly.Inthisway,Iwillgraduallydevelopagoodlearninghabit.Ithinkstudyingaloneisreallyagoodwayanditwillbenefitmealotinmylife.Possibleversion2:Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?Somestudentsliketostudyalone.Othersenjoystudyingwithagroup.Asforme,Iprefertostudywithagroup.Asthesayinggoes,“Twoheadsarebetterthanone.”Withagroup,Icanlearnalotfromothers.WheneverIhavesomequestions,theyarealwaysreadytohelp.Withtheirhelp,Ibecomemoreandmoreconfidentinmystudy.Also,whenIstudywithmyclassmates,wecandiscusswhateverpuzzlesmefacetoface.Throughdiscussion,wecansharedifferentideasandgettoknowmoreabouteachother.Allinall,Ithinkstudyingwithagroupprovidesmanychancestoimprovemyselfandhelpsmetobeabetterperson.【详解】以Possibleversion1为例[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式；第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①solveproblemsonmyown自己解决问题②atthesametime同时③keepmymindon...集中注意力在……④developagoodlearninghabit养成良好的学习习惯[高分句型]①Secondly,whenIstudyalone,IcankeepmymindonwhatI’mdoing.（when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句）②Ithinkstudyingaloneisreallyagoodwayanditwillbenefitmealotinmylife.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句）（2024·江西·中考真题）我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来，学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间，增强时间管理意识，学校英语社团以“MakingBetterUseofTime”为题向学生征文，请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。写作要点：1．Whendoyouhavefreetime?2．Whatdoyouoftendoinyourfreetime?（Give3examples）3．Doyouthinkyourfreetimeisbetterused?Whyorwhynot?要求：1．短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2．短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；3．词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。MakingBetterUseofTimeAsajuniorhighschoolstudent,Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakingBetterUseofTimeAsajuniorhighschoolstudent,Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.Iamalwaysfreeonweekends.WhenIamfree,Ihavemanyactivities.Iusuallyplaythepianoandfootball.Ilikeplayingfootballverymuch.IfIhavetime,Ioftengototheparkwithmyfriendstoplayfootballonweekends.Ihavepianolessonstwiceaweek.Ialsohaveplentyoftimetoexerciseintheevening.Sometimes,myparentsandIlookatthestarsoutside.IthinkmyfreetimeisbetterusedbecauseIdowhatIwanttodoandIbalancestudyandentertainment.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的课余时间活动，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己什么时候有空闲时间；第二步，介绍自己空闲时间的活动；第三步，介绍自己是否利用好自己的空闲时间以及原因。[亮点词汇]①onweekends在周末②plentyof大量的③lookat看[高分句型]①WhenIamfree,Ihavemanyactivities.(when引导的时间状语从句)②IthinkmyfreetimeisbetterusedbecauseIdowhatIwanttodoandIbalancestudyandentertainment.(because引导的原因状语从句，what引导的宾语从句)（2024·河北·中考真题）假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(ClassRecord)，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。ClassRecordName:ZhangJunQuestionsYesNoDidyoulistentotheteachercarefully?√Didyouanswerquestionsactively?√Didyouaskanyquestions?√Didyouworkwellinyourgroup?√Didyoutakenotes?√注意：(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Welldone,ZhangJun!Youlistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclassand________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Welldone,ZhangJun!Youlistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclassandansweredquestionsactively.Soyougothighmarksinmostofyoursubjects.Youworkedwellinyourgroupandyoushowedyourabilitytous.However,youdidn’taskanyquestionsandyoudidn’ttakenotes.Sowecouldn’tknowifyouneededhelp.Inmyopinion,youshouldaskquestionsifyouhaveanysothatyoucansolveproblemsintime.What’smore,youshouldtakenotessothatyoucanreviewanddigestwhatyoudon’tunderstand.Ihopemyadviceisofhelp.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，简单评价张军的课堂表现；第二步，就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。[亮点词汇]①gothighmarks得高分②takenotes做笔记③Inmyopinion在我看来④sothat以便[高分句型]①Sowecouldn’tknowifyouneededhelp.（宾语从句）②What’smore,youshouldtakenotessothatyoucanreviewanddigestwhatyoudon’tunderstand.（目的状语从句和宾语从句）（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）话题作文：英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。请你以HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking为题，分享一下提高英语听说能力的方法。注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。提示词：improve,lis