Unit 1 单元话题写作检测（解析版）

第一节（满分15分）假定你是李华,你和你的外国朋友Caroline约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国航天展”,但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件,内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.你的期待。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,__________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,

LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,

①I'mwritingtotellyouIcannotattendtheChinaSpaceExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywithyou.Iamsosorryaboutmyabsenceofthevisit.Pleaseexcusemefortheinconveniencecausedbyme.

②IwasreallyexcitedwhenIgottwoticketsforthewonderfulexhibition.I'vealreadysearchedmuchinformationaboutthisshowtoequipmyselfasaguidetoyou.

Unfortunately,yesterdaymyEnglishteacherinvitedmetotakepartinaSpeechcontesttobeheldnextSaturday.

Tomakeyourtriptheremorefulfilled,IwillrecommendyouseveraldocumentariestohelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinaspaceindustry.Ihopeyouenjoythetripyourself.Apologizeformyabsenceagain!Yourssincerely,

​​​​​​​LiHua【解析】【思路点拨】

本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，话题为假定你是李华,你和你的外国朋友Caroline约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国航天展”,但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。

【结构布局】

引言：表示歉意

中心：解释原因

结尾：你的期待

【亮点词汇】

①recommend

sb.sth.向某人推荐某物

②apologizefor因为……道歉

【高分句型】

①I'mwritingtotellyouIcannotattendtheChinaSpaceExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywithyou.（省略that的宾语从句)

②IwasreallyexcitedwhenIgottwoticketsforthewonderfulexhibition.（when引导的时间状语从句)

【拓展词汇】

①express

one'sregret表达某人的遗憾

②put

sb.intomuchtrouble给某人添了很多麻烦

【拓展句型】

①Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.（我真心希望您能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。）

②Muchtomyregret,Iwasunabletokeepmyengagementtodosth.（很抱歉我没能遵守约定做某事。）

第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasinthe1930s,andthingsweretough.MumhadahardtimeraisingusonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC.MydadhaddrownedinPittLake,fiveyearsago.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldputanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becausethebottompartswerewornout.Whenwegothome,Mumwouldhave"Frenchtoast"

readyforus.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosetimes.Rentwas25dollarsamonth,butMumcouldn'tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeevictedrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary.Christmaswasapproaching,andwewereentitledtoatwenty-five-dollarChristmasfundfromsocialservices.Theinspectorcametoourhouse,andsearcheditfromtoptobottomtobesurewedidn'thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn'tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethe25dollarstopaybackrent,assuringallofusaroofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas.UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastree,cleaningsnow,anddoingpart-timejobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots.Bootsthatweren'tpatched,bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten-inchTopGenuinePierreParisandtheyhadapriceof23dollars.Well,thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtotheshoestore,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenIrealizedatourhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorations,noranymoneyforChristmasmeals.IknewthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas,andIfeltsad.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantoreconsidermyplan._________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________

Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtears,Iknockedonthedoorofourhouse._________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________【答案】

AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantoreconsidermyplan.Atonemoment,thebootsIhadbeenlongingforflashedthroughmyhead.AndthenmyMum'sfaceappeared,drownedinsorrow,tryinginvaintoexplaintousallwhyweshouldcelebrateChristmaswithnopresents,nodecorationsornoturkey.Atexactlythatmoment,itcametomyawarenesshowselfishIwas.Feelingthemoneyinmysweatyhand,Imadeabigdecisionandsteppedintothegrocerystore.Havingfinishedshopping,Imademywayhome,excitedandproudofmychoice.

Withgreatexcitementandtears,Iknockedonthedoorofourhouse.Icouldhardlywaittoseemymother'sface!NosoonerhadIopenedthedoorthansomeoftheChristmasgoodiesfellinsideontothefloor.Shejuststoodthere,dumbfounded.Holdingbackthetears,Isaid,"MerryChristmas!"Nextmoment,IwaswelcomedbythemostpassionatehugsandkissesfrommybelovedMum.【解析】一、文意梳理

【原文大意】

本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了在20世纪30年代末的新威斯敏斯特，作者一家生活拮据，靠社会救济交房租。圣诞将至，作者怀揣打工挣得的钱打算买双靴子，却意识到家里没有置办任何过节的物品，于是开始重新考虑自己的计划的故事。【段落续写】①由第一段首句内容“我继续走着，我开始重新考虑我的计划。”可知，第一段可描写作者改变计划的心理发展过程。②由第二段首句内容“怀着激动和泪水，我敲开了我们家的门。”可知，第二段可描写作者将钱花在更有价值的地方了，展示了主人公牺牲小我、奉献家庭的自我蜕变成长的过程，让读者感受到了浓浓的亲情。二、线索厘清

【续写线索】

重新考虑我的计划——联想到妈妈的话——做出决定，走向杂货店——激动地回家——回家后妈妈的反应和心理状态——感悟【词汇激活】行为类①重新考虑：reconsider/rethink②出现：appeared/comeout③走进，进入：steppedinto/walkedinto情绪类①渴望：longingfor/des