应用文写作-高二英语上学期期末分项汇编（北京专用）解析版

专题08应用文写作

1.（2023上•北京西城•高二北京八中校考期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校英国留学生Jim最近

在学习汉语的过程中遇到了许多困难，希望你给他一些学习汉语的建议，请你给Jim回信，提出你的建议,

内容包括：

1.Jim遇到的困难；

2.你的建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

IfsgreattoknowthatyouhavebeguntolearnChinese!YousayyoufindChinesedifficulttolearn.Iquite

understandyourproblem.

Differentfromyourlanguage,mostChinesecharactersarefromimages.ForEnglish,mostoftime,you'llknow

howtopronounceawordwhenyouseeit.ButitisimpossibleinChinese.Inaddition,Chinesegrammaristotally

differentfromEnglishgrammar.Thatdefinitelybringsyoumoretrouble.

However,learningChinesetakestime.Don'tworry.IsuggestyoustartwithPinyin,whichwillhelpyouknow

howtoreadChinesecharacters.Besides,listeningtoChinesesongsorwatchingChinesemovieswillalsohelp.The

moreyouareexposedtothelanguage,themorefamiliaryouwillgetwithit.

Iwishyoueverysuccessinlearningthelanguage!Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,feelfreetoask.Good

luck!

Yours

LiHua

【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校英国留学生Jim最近在学习汉语的

过程中遇到了许多困难，希望你给他一些学习汉语的建议，请你给Jim回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

理解：understand一comprehend

确实：definitely^-indeed

建议：suggest一advise

另夕卜：besides^moreover

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inaddition,ChinesegrammaristotallydifferentfromEnglishgrammar.Thatdefinitelybringsyoumore

trouble.

拓展句：Inaddition,ChinesegrammaristotallydifferentfromEnglishgrammar,whichdefinitelybringsyoumore

trouble.

【点睛】[高分句型l]ForEnglish,mostoftime,you511knowhowtopronounceawordwhenyouseeit.（运用了

how+不定式作宾语，when引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型1]IsuggestyoustartwithPinyin,whichwillhelpyouknowhowtoreadChinesecharacters.（运用了虚

拟语气和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

2.（2023上•北京顺义•高二统考期末）假如你是红星中学高二学生李华，得知澳大利亚学生团体下个月将要

来你校进行文化交流，学校为此招募志愿者参加本次活动，你很感兴趣。请给学校外事办公室写一封申请

信，内容包括：

1.申请理由（包括英语能力、性格特征）；

2.参加意图（介绍中国文化、了解澳大利亚）；

3.表达期待。

注意：1.词数不少于60；

2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

DearSir/Madam,

IamLiHua,astudentfromSeniorGrade2.Learningthattherewillbean,exchangeactivity（交流活动）with

Australianstudentsinourschool,Ireallywanttoapplyforit.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

IamLiHua,astudentfromSeniorGrade2.Learningthattherewillbean,exchangeactivity（交流7舌动）with

Australianstudentsinourschool,Ireallywanttoapplyforit.

Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichwillsurelybeofgreathelpincommunicatingwith

foreigners.Besides,Ienjoycooperatingwithothersandameasytogetalongwith.Moreimportantly,Chinese

cultureiswhatI'minterestedinandIalsohaveagoodunderstandingofAustralia.I'dbegratefulifmyapplication

couldbetakenintoconsideration.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校外事办公室写一封申请信，申请文化交流志愿者。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：Tobeginwith一Firstofall

止匕夕卜：besides—whafsmore

友好相处：getalongwith-getonwith

感激：begrateful一appreciate

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：rdbegratefulifmyapplicationcouldbetakenintoconsideration.

拓展句：Ifmyapplicationcouldbetakenintoconsideration,Iwouldbemostgrateful.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichwillsurelybeofgreathelpin

communicatingwithforeigners.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Moreimportantly,ChinesecultureiswhatI'minterestedinandIalsohaveagoodunderstandingof

Australia.（运用了what引导的表语从句）

3.（2023上•北京昌平•高二统考期末）假设你是学生会主席李华，学生会打算召开一次主题为“成功的秘诀

的线上英文演讲活动，请你写信给你的英国外教Jim,邀请他来参加你们的活动并做主题发言。

内容包括：1.演讲活动举办的时间和内容；

2.建议发言的具体内容及其原因。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearJim,

Iamwritingonbehalfoftheschool'sStudentUniontoinviteyoutobeourguestintheonlinespeech

competitionthemed"ThesecretofSuccess",whichwillbeheldat9a.m.nextMondayviaTencentMeeting.

Inthecompetition,tencontestantswillgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,followedbythe

question-and-answersession.

Asweknow,youareanexpertinpublicspeakingandabelovedandwell-knownteacher.So,wouldyouhave

timetobeourguestandmakeakeynotespeechafterthecompetition?Wewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucan

makecommentsonthepositiveandnegativeaspectsofcontestantsprovidesometipsaboutpublicspeaking.

Isincerelyhopeyoucancome.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedoletmeknow.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

Anotherpossibleversion:

DearJim,

I'mwritingonbehalfoftheStudentUniontocordiallyinviteyoutoattendanonlineEnglishspeechcontest

andI'mwritingtoaskifyouwouldliketojoinus.

Tohelpstudentshaveadeeperunderstandingofsuccess,thestudentunionisgoingtoholdaspeech

competition.Asisscheduled,itisgoingtobeheldfrom2:00p.m.to5:00p.m.onJanuary5th.onTencentMeeting.

Allthecompetitorsarerequiredtoprepareanoriginalspeechthemed“ThesecretofSuccess“within5minutes.At

theendofthecontest,youareexpectedtosharesomerepresentativesuccessstories,offeringusanewdimension

inunderstandingofsuccess.

Ifyou'reavailable,pleaseconfirmitatearliestconvenienceandwewillsendyouthemeetingnumber.Your

presencewillbehighlyexpected.

Yours,

Lihua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生写信给你的英国外教Jim,邀请他来参加主题为“成功的秘诀”的

线上英文演讲活动并做主题发言。

【详解】1.词汇积累

比赛：competition一contest

竞争者：contestant-competitor

感激：appreciate—begrateful

提供：provide一offer

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inthecompetition,tencontestantswillgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,followedbythe

question-and-answersession.

拓展句：Inthecompetition,aftertencontestantsgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,the

question-and-answersessionwillbefollowed.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Iamwritingonbehalfoftheschool'sStudentUniontoinviteyoutobeourguestinthe

onlinespeechcompetitionthemed"ThesecretofSuccess”,whichwillbeheldat9a,m.nextMondayviaTencent

Meeting.（which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Wewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucanmakecommentsonthepositiveandnegativeaspectsof

contestantsprovidesometipsaboutpublicspeaking.（if弓|导条件状语从句）

4.（2023上•北京房山•高二统考期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校学生会要组织主题为“和谐地

球”的绘画作品展览。请你代表学生会用英文给外籍教师史密斯先生写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加此次展

览的开幕式。内容包括：

1.开幕式的时间、地点和流程；

2.展览的主题和展期；

3.展览的作品及其特点。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

词汇：展览exhibition和谐地球EarthinHarmony

DearMrSmith,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

StudentUnion

【答案】DearMr.Smith,

Itismyhonortoinviteyoutoparticipateintheopeningceremonyofanartexhibitionwiththethemeof

“EarthinHarmony^^,whichwillbeheldbyourschoolattheauditoriumnextSaturdayafternoon,from2pmto5

pm.

Ourceremonywillconsistofthreeprocedures-ourheadmaster'sannouncementofthebeginning,aspeechto

introducetheshowandstudents5performancestocelebrate.Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek.Youcan

enjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditionalChinesepainting.Theyareallrelatedtotheharmony

relationshipbetweenhumanandnature.

Hopeyouarewillingtojoin!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

StudentUnion

【导语】这是一篇邀请信。要求考生以学生会主席李华的身份给外籍教师史密斯先生写一封电子邮件，邀

请他来参加主题为“和谐地球''绘画作品展的开幕式。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参力口：participatein一takepartin

展览：exhibition-show

由...组成：consistoJbemadefrom

各种各样的：various—>avarietyof

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek.Youcanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditional

Chinesepainting.

拓展句：Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek,whenyoucanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditional

Chinesepainting.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Itismyhonortoinviteyoutoparticipateintheopeningceremonyofanartexhibitionwith

thethemeof"HarmonyEarth^^,whichwillbeheldbyourschoolattheauditoriumnextSaturdayafternoon,from2

pmto5pm.（运用了it作形式主语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]YoucanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditionalChinesepainting.（运用了介词短语

from...to作后置定语）

5.（2023上•北京怀柔•高二统考期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华，你所在的校篮球队正在招收新队员，

请给你班交换生Jim写一封电子邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：

1.邀请原因及球队简介；

2.报名方式及截止日期。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：recruitnewplayers

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Fmwritingtotellyouthatourschool'sbasketballteamisrecruitingnewmembers.Iknowyou'reverygood

atplayingbasketball.Whynottakethisopportunitytojoinourschoolteam?Somedetailsabouttheteamareas

follows.

Thecoachingteamisveryprofessionalandourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvariouscompetitions.

WehaveregulartrainingforabouttwohoursontheplaygroundafterschooleveryFriday.Ifyouwanttoapplyfor

themembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsubmitittoschoolsportsofficebythisFriday.

Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelpyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你班交换生Jim写一封电子邮件邀请他加入你校篮球队，

内容包括：邀请原因及球队简介；报名方式及截止日期。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：opportunity—>chance

各种各样的：various一avarietyof

比赛：competitions—contests

高兴的：glad-happy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thecoachingteamisveryprofessionalandourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvariouscompetitions.

拓展句：Notonlyisthecoachingteamveryprofessionalbutalsoourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvarious

competitions.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I'mwritingtotellyouthatourschool'sbasketballteamisrecruitingnewmembers.（运用了

that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Ifyouwanttoapplyforthemembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsubmitit

toschoolsportsofficebythisFriday.（运用了if引导的状语从句）

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6.(2023上•北京石景山•高二统考期末)假定你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信，告知他

最近顺利通过了汉语水平考试(HSK)四级。请回信，内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.赞赏其付出。

注意：1.词数100字左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

HearingthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincere

congratulationstoyou.Here'swhatIwanttosay.

First,Iknowasaforeigner,itisverydifficulttolearnChinese.Whenyoupassthisexam,Ibelieveyoumust

havepaidalot.Second,inthisprocess,notonlywillyougaintheChineselanguage,butalsoyouhavemore

opportunitiestoexperienceChinesetraditionalknowledgeandculture.Thirdly,thisexamisalsoachanceto

exerciseyourself,whichwillmakeyoumoretoughandconfident.

Congratulationsagain,andIhopeyoucanvisitChina.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写信祝贺他最近顺利通过了汉语水平四级考

试。向他表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

诚挚的：sincere一genuine

首先：first-firstofall

首先：besides—>whafsmore

比赛：competition一match

希望：hope—expect

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：HearingthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincere

congratulationstoyou.

拓展句：BecauseIhearthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmy

sincerecongratulationstoyou.

【点睛1（高分句型1JSecond,inthisprocess,notonlywillyougaintheChineselanguage,butalsoyouhavemore

opportunitiestoexperienceChinesetraditionalknowledgeandculture.（运用了倒装结构）

【高分句型2】Thirdly,thisexamisalsoachancetoexerciseyourself,whichwillmakeyoumoretoughand

confident.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

7.（2023上•北京通州•高二统考期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中

提到他对你校的学生社团活动非常感兴趣，希望你介绍一下这方面的情况。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包

括：

1.你校的学生社团及活动；

2.你喜欢参加的社团及原因。

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

I'mmorethandelightedtoknowyouarecuriousabouttheclubactivitiesofourschoolandwanttoknow

somethingaboutthem.HereI'dliketosharesomedetailswithyou.

Therearealtogether20orsoclubsinourschool,tonameafew,Pekingoperaclub,Swimmingclub,Calligraphy

club,andPaintingclub.Theyallhaveafixedtimetoarrangevariedactivities.Asforme,I'dliketojoinPeking

operaclub.First,PekingoperaislikeapearlinChinesetraditionalart.Joiningthisclubcangivemeatasteof

Chinesetraditionalartformsandevenhaveahands-onexperience.Besides,theclubwillregularlyorganize

variousactivities,suchasinvitingfamousactorstoperform,anddrawingPekingoperamake-ups.Ibelievegetting

closetoPekingoperawillbeagoodwayoflearningmoreaboutit.

Hopefullymyopinioncanbeofhelp.Ifyouwanttolearnanythingmore,don'thesitatetocontactme.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回一封邮件，向他介绍你们学校的学生社团活动以及

你喜欢参加的社团及原因。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted—■glad

安排，举办：arrange—organise

各种各样的：varied-various

方法：way—method

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Theyallhaveafixedtimetoarrangevariedactivities.

拓展句：Theyallhaveafixedtime,whentheyarrangevariedactivities.

【点睛】【高分句型1]JoiningthisclubcangivemeatasteofChinesetraditionalartformsandevenhavea

hands-onexperience.（运用了动名词作主语）

【高分句型2]IbelievegettingclosetoPekingoperawillbeagoodwayoflearningmoreaboutit.（运用了省略

that的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语）

8.（2023上•北京平谷•高二统考期末）假如你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim从社交媒体上看

到了你参观学校国画展览的照片，写信向你了解情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1.国画展相关信息（时间、地点、目的等）；

2.你的感受。

国画展：theexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintings

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJim,

Howareyoudoing?KnowingthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyou

somethingabouttheexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

Asscheduled,theeventtookplaceonApril20thinourschoolhall.Someexpertswerepresentandgave

lecturesonsomewell-knownartists,throughwhichwehadagoodunderstandingoftraditionalChinesepainting.

Somepaintingsmadebystudentswereondisplay,whichwasafeastfortheeyes.Everystudentpresentcouldfeel

thebeautyoftraditionalChinesepainting,benefitingalotfromtheactivity.

Hopefully,youcanjoinusnextyear.

Yours

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim从社交媒体上看

到了你参观学校国画展览的照片，写信向你了解情况。请给他回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举行：tookplace—*beheld

发表演讲：gavelectures—madespeeches

展出：ondisplay—onshow

收获，收益：benefit—*gain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：KnowingthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthe

exhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

拓展句：BecauseIknowthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyousomething

abouttheexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Somepaintingsmadebystudentswereondisplay,whichwasafeastfortheeyes.（运用了

过去分词作定语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]EverystudentpresentcouldfeelthebeautyoftraditionalChinesepainting,benefitingalotfromthe

activity.（运用了现在分词作状语。）

9.（2023上•北京西城・高二统考期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim在做主题为“节

约能源”的相关调研，发邮件询问你在日常生活中是如何节约能源的。请给Jim回复邮件，内容如下：

1.你在节约能源方面的做法；

2.你对节约能源的看法。

注意：1.词数：不少于100；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdoinmydaily

lifeandmyideasaboutit.

Tobeginwith,savingwaterisveryimportant.Thewaterthatwewashourfacescanbereused,whichisakind

ofgoodresourcetowaterflowers.Whafsmore,thatremembertokeepthelightoffwhenweleavetheroomisalso

amust.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsosaveourpockets.Aboveall,theawarenessofsavingenergyisvitalto

everyoneandtheearth.Soremindingpeoplearoundusofsavingenergyanddevelopingagoodhabitplayarolein

protectingourplanet.

Ihopemyideasareusefultoyoursurvey.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生给Jim回信并告诉他自己在生活中节约能源的做法和自己的

看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：tobeginwith一tostartwith/firstofall

其次：whafsmore一besides/moreover

最重要的：aboveall—>mostimportantly

起作用：playarolein一playapartin

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdoinmy

dailylifeandmyideasaboutit.

拓展句：BecauseIknowthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdo

inmydailylifeandmyideasaboutit.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomething

thatIdoinmydailylifeandmyideasaboutit.（运用了非谓语动词作原因状语）

【高分句型2]Thewaterthatwewashourfacescanbereused,whichisakindofgoodresourcetowaterflowers.

（运用了非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】Whafsmore,thatremembertokeepthelightoffwhenweleavetheroomisalsoamust.（运用了

主语从句）

10.（2023上•北京丰台•高二统考期末）假设你是李华，在英国WestMiddleSchool做交换生。学校网站正在

征集主题为“Conservation”的文章。请你在网站上投稿，介绍自己环保理念和具体做法。主要内容包括：

1.理念或观点；

2.做法及其原因；

3倡议。

注意：词数不少于60。

【答案】Deareditor,

IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.Iwouldliketosharemyenvironmentalprotectionideasand

specificpracticeswithyou.

Asweallknow,everyoneusesalotofpapereveryday,whichmeanscuttingdownalotoftreeseveryyear.

Therefore,Ithinkweshouldsavepaperatordinarytimes.Theeasiestwaytodothisistofoldapieceofpaper

whosebothsidesareusedup,packitup,andsendittoapapermillforrecycling.

ThafshowIsavepaper.Ihopeeveryonecanstartfromthelittlethingsaroundtoloveandprotectourhome.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校网站关于“Conservation”主题投稿，介绍自己环保理念

和具体做法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

我认为：Ithink一asfarasIamconcerned

很多：alotof—largequantitiesof

应该：should一oughtto

希望：hope一wish

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Iwouldliketosharemyenvironmentalprotectionideasandspecificpracticeswithyou.

拓展句：Iwouldliketosharesomethingthatisaboutmyenvironmentalprotectionideasandspecificpractices

withyou.

【点睛】［高分句型1】Asweallknow,everyoneusesalotofpapereveryday,whichmeanscuttingdownalotof

treeseveryyear.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Ihopeeveryonecanstartfromthelittlethingsaroundtoloveandprotectourhome.（运用了省略

that引导的宾语从句）

H.（2023上•北京东城•高二统考期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim来信说他最近

读了一些科学家的传记，认为科学家有很多优秀品质非常值得年轻人学习，并询问你对此观点的看法。请

你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:

1.赞同他的观点；

2.你从科学家身上学到的一种品质；

3.你践行这一品质的一个事例。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Fmmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourlettersayingyou'vereadsomebiographiesofscientists.Ican'tagree

morewithyouthatweteenagerscanbenefitfromtheirpersonalities.

TakeDoctorYuanLongpingasanexample,whoisapioneerinagriculturalarea.WeChineseshowgreat

respecttohim,withoutwhomsomemighthavediedofhunger.AsfarasI'mconcerned,henotonlydevoted

himselftotheresearchonrice,butalsocaredlittleaboutmoney.Inspiredbyhisstory,Fmreadingthelatestarticles

onAIinmysparetimeandevensubmittedmyownarticles.Unexpectedly,mysubmissionwaspublishedina

magazinelastmonth,whichencouragedmetosparenoefforttoworkhard,preparingformyfuturecareerasa

robotdesigner.Additionally,Iwillleadasimplebutmeaningfullife.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回信，赞同他“科学家的很多品质值得年轻人”

的观点，并举例一种从科学家身上学到的品质，以及如何践行这一品质的一个事例。

【详解】1.词汇积累

收到你的来信：receiveyourletter—hearfromyou

止匕夕卜：additionally一whafsmore/besides/furthermore

领域：area—field

献身于：devoteoneselfto一bedevotedto

就我所知：asfarasIamconcerned一frommypointofview/asfarasIknow

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：AsfarasI'mconcerned,henotonl