高三英语读后续写专项复习-倒霉的周一海滩遇险记导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I’mnotknowntobeaparticularlyluckyperson.Raffles(抽奖),tshirtcannons,radiocalls,randomroommateselections—noneoftheseeverseemtoworkoutinmyfavor.ButmyfortuneseemedtohitanalltimelowlastMonday.Thedaystartedniceenough.Iwenttowork,gotoffatfiveanddecidedtoheadtothebeach.Itwasswelteringhot,andIknewthecoolwatersofLakeMichiganwouldhelpwashawaymysweat.Thefirstsignoftroublewaswhenmycellphonenavigationstoppedworkingproperlyandshowedthewrongdirections.Iwasnewtotheareaanddidn’tquiteknowmywayaroundyet,soIendeduptakingawrongturnanddrivingthroughawebofneighborhoods,turninga10minutedriveintoa40minuteone.Butfine,Igetlostoften.Imadeittothebeacheventually.Tookaquickdipinthewater,hadabiteofthebutterpaneerIhadpickedupearlier.Imadeitbacktomycar,pullingsomeclothesouttochangeinto.AsIheadedtotherestroom,IrealizedIhadforgottenashirt.SoIwalkedback,tuggedonthehandleandrealizedwithhorrorthatmykeysweresittinginthepassengerseatofmycar.IcalledAAA(AmericanAutomobileAssociation).Asitturnsout,Idon’thaveanAAAmembership.Icalledmyparentsandtheyanxiouslytriedtofigureouthowtoaddmetotheircard,whilemyphonebatterywasat21%anddropping.IcalledAAAagain,andtheyinformedmethattheywouldbethereinaboutanhourandahalf,whichseemedlikealongtimeasIsatontopofthetrunkofmycar.Thesunwasloweringintheskyandtheparkinglotwasemptyingout.Iheardthunder,andIsawpeopleexitingthebeachatanincreasingrate.WhenIcheckedmyweatherapp,Isawanalarmingupdate:aheatadvisory(预警),a100%chanceofalightningstorm,andatornadowarning.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Fearfulandalone,Istoodfrozenasthunderrolledcloser.________________________________________________________________________________ThekindladydrovemethroughthepoundingraintowardanearbyStarbucks.________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1．角色：_____________________________2．视角：第________人称3．时空线：fromwork______________thebeachparkinglot4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。What'sthenarrator'susuallucklike?：______________________________________________Whydidthenarratorgotothebeach?：____________________________________________Whattroublesdidthenarratormeetonthewaytothebeach?：_______________________Whatwastheterriblethingthathappenedafterthenarratorwenttothebeach?：___________________________________WhatproblemdidthenarratorfacewhencallingAAAforthefirsttime?：_______________________HowlongwouldAAAtaketoarriveafterthesecondcall?：__________________________________________________Whatweatherconditionswereingaccordingtotheweatherapp?：___________________Whatwasthenarrator'ssituationwhenthunderrolledcloser?：_______________________________________情节线：我向来运气不好，上周一再陷低谷。→____________→______________→___________________→（续写）雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。一位善良的女士开车带我穿过瓢泼大雨去附近的星巴克。6．情感线：I：frustrated→___________→___________→___________（续写）→___________（续写）7.综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）中文：______________________________________________________________英文：______________________________________________________________8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________本文属于人与自我、人与环境：_______________________________________情节构造第一段提示句：Fearfulandalone,Istoodfrozenasthunderrolledcloser.衔接句1———对前面的"weatherappwarning"提问“现场环境如何？”：What'stheonsiteenvironmentlike?现场环境：乌云迅速笼罩天空，阳光完全消失，天地间一片昏暗。狂风呼啸着卷起沙滩上的沙粒和杂物，雨点密集地砸下来，瞬间打湿衣物。过渡句推演：衔接1→______？______←衔接2衔接句2———对"Thekindlady"提问“谁会出现帮助我？”：Whowillappeartohelpme?出现的帮助者：一位看起来约四十岁的陌生女士，她刚从海滩收拾东西准备离开。她注意到我独自站在车旁，被暴雨困住，且神情慌乱，于是主动停车询问情况，伸出援手。第二段提示句：ThekindladydrovemethroughthepoundingraintowardanearbyStarbucks.衔接3———对"drovemetoStarbucks"提问“到星巴克后发生了什么？”：WhathappenedafterarrivingatStarbucks?到星巴克后发生的事：女士先给我递了纸巾擦去身上的雨水，然后帮我点了热饮暖身，还拿出手机充电器让我给即将关机的手机充电。我们聊起了我被困的缘由，她耐心安慰我，告诉我这种天气下等待救援是最安全的。期间，我联系上AAA确认了救援时间，女士一直陪着我，没有急于离开。过渡句推演：衔接3→_____？_____←主题主题：_________________________________段落构思第一段：雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；英文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段：一位善良的女士开车带我穿过瓢泼大雨去附近的星巴克。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文：_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案文本分析角色：Thenarrator（主角）、thenarrator’sparents、thekindlady（续写出现）、AAAstaff视角：第一人称3．时空线：fromworkonthewaytothebeach

thebeachparkinglot4．线索答案：What'sthenarrator'susuallucklike?：Notgood.Raffles,tshirtcannons,radiocallsandrandomroommateselectionsneverworkoutinhis/herfavor.Whydidthenarratorgotothebeach?：Itwasswelteringhot,andhe/shewantedtocooldowninthewatersofLakeMichiganandwashawaysweat.Whattroublesdidthenarratormeetonthewaytothebeach?：Cellphonenavigationdidn’tworkproperly,showedwrongdirections,leadingtoawrongturnanda40minutedriveinsteadof10minutes.Whatwastheterriblethingthathappenedafterthenarratorwenttothebeach?：He/sheforgotkeysinthepassengerseatandlockedthecar.WhatproblemdidthenarratorfacewhencallingAAAforthefirsttime?：He/shedidn’thaveanAAAmembership.HowlongwouldAAAtaketoarriveafterthesecondcall?：Aboutanhourandahalf.Whatweatherconditionswereingaccordingtotheweatherapp?：Aheatadvisory,a100%chanceofalightningstorm,andatornadowarning.Whatwasthenarrator'ssituationwhenthunderrolledcloser?：Fearful,alone,stuckintheemptyingparkinglotwithadyingphonebattery.5．情节线：我向来运气不好，上周一再陷低谷。→下班决定去海滩避暑，导航出错绕路→到达海滩后不慎将钥匙锁在车内→联系AAA无果，手机没电，还收到恶劣天气预警→（续写）雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。一位善良的女士开车带我穿过瓢泼大雨去附近的星巴克。6．情感线：I：frustrated→anxious→fearful→desperate（续写）→grateful（续写）7．文章大意：中文：向来运气不佳的“我”，上周一下班后想去密歇根湖海滩避暑。途中导航出错绕了远路，到达后又不慎将钥匙锁在车内。“我”没有AAA会员，联系救援需等一个半小时，手机电量告急，此时还收到高温、雷暴和龙卷风预警，陷入困境。英文：Thenarrator,whoisusuallyunlucky,decidedtogotoLakeMichiganbeachtocooldownafterworklastMonday.Ontheway,thenavigationfailed,makinghim/hertakeadetour.Afterarriving,he/sheaccidentallylockedthekeysinthecar.WithoutanAAAmembership,thenarratorhadtowaitanhourandahalfforrescue,withadyingphonebattery.Meanwhile,aheatadvisory,lightningstormandtornadowarningwereissued,leavinghim/herintrouble.8．句式示例：宾语从句：IknewthecoolwatersofLakeMichiganwouldhelpwashawaymysweat.非谓语：Turninga10minutedriveintoa40minuteone.感叹句：WhatterribleluckIhadthatday!同位语：Raffles,tshirtcannons,radiocalls,randomroommateselections—noneoftheseeverseemtoworkoutinmyfavor.完全倒装：Therecameasuddenthunderclapthatmademejump.比喻：Theparkinglotwaslikeadesertedislandaspeopleleftinahurry.夸张：Myphonebatterywasdroppingsofastthatitfeltlikeitwoulddieinaminute.9．本文属于人与自我、人与环境：面对困境时的意外温暖与自我救赎情节构造主题：困境中的善意能驱散无助，运气虽差但人间有爱段落构思第一段：雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。→①雨点开始砸落，手机仅