高考总复习优化设计二轮用书英语A 第2讲　研真题学规范,四步打造佳作

第2讲研真题学规范,四步打造佳作高考总复习优化设计GAOKAOZONGFUXIYOUHUASHEJI2025(2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)

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what假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Yours,LiHua写作示范第一步:审题谋篇

结构分明

第二步:核心要点

陈述规范Para.1写信目的I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Para.2描述自己的美术作品(1)我们被要求画一些给我们留下深刻印象的东西。Wewereaskedtodraworpaintsomething__________________________.

(2)受这美妙景色的启发,我决定创作一幅水彩画,画的是公园里的池塘。I___________________thefantasticscenery.Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthepondinthepark.

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by(3)池水清澈,倒映着树木,非常迷人。Trees____________________theclearwater.Itwasreallyattractive.

(4)画完之后,我的美术老师认为这幅画非常逼真,对它评价很高。AfterIfinishedit,myartteacherthoughthighlyofitbecauseit______________life.

Para.3收尾点题,谈及感受(5)接触大自然不仅激发了我的创造力,也让我欣赏到了风景。___________________naturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsomademeadmirescenery.

(6)总之,这节特别的艺术课让我爱上了大自然和艺术。Inaword,thisspecialartclass____________________natureaswellasart.

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love第三步:润色升级

营造亮点1.请用过去分词作状语改写句(2),并升级加黑词汇。Inspired

by

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fantastic

scenery,I

determined

to

create

a

watercolor

painting

of

the

pond

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the

park.

2.将句(3)改为with的复合结构,并升级加黑词汇。With

trees

reflected

in

the

clear

water,it

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fascinating.

第四步:认真誊写

卷面整洁DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.____

Yours,LiHuaDearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.We

were

asked

to

draw

or

paint

something

that

impressed

us

most.Inspired

by

the

fantastic

scenery,I

determined

to

create

a

watercolor

painting

of

the

pond

in

the

park.With

trees

reflected

in

the

clear

water,it

was

really

fascinating.After

I

finished

it,my

art

teacher

thought

highly

of

it

because

it

was

true

to

life.

The

experience

was

meaningful.Being

exposed

to

nature

not

only

sparked

my

creativity

but

also

made

me

admire

scenery.In

a

word,this

special

art

class

got

me

to

love

nature

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well

as

art.

Yours,LiHua技法点拨如何打造高分作文写一篇好的作文,必须按照一定的写作步骤进行。一般包括五个步骤:审题、列纲、成文、修改、誊写与检查。一、审题四确定审题是写作中最重要的一个环节,要做到“四确定”。1.确定体裁和格式。先确定文章是应用文、记叙文、说明文还是议论文,再按照该体裁的写作要求和格式进行布局谋篇。2.确定主体时态。依据体裁确定时态,一篇应用文写作中一般只有一种主体时态。3.确定中心人称。

4.确定写作要点。高考应用文写作一般有5至8个要点,审题时要逐一列出。二、列纲三步走1.选好开头句和结尾句。开头句如果是主题句,要做到内容完整、概括性强、表达清楚;如果开头句不是主题句,要做到开门见山、直奔主题。2.安排好结构。根据表达内容合理分段。3.选好句型和词汇。在写作时,除了要熟练运用常用的句型和词汇外,还要尽量用教材上重点学过的句型,如强调句、定语从句、倒装句、同位语从句等和相对高级的词汇来表达,可以给作文增色不少,提升文章的等级,提高阅卷老师心中的印象分。三、成文依逻辑根据要求把材料按照一定的逻辑顺序组织成一篇文章。恰当使用关联词,使上下文连贯。可以运用想象适度发挥,但不可随意乱写,要紧扣要点适当描述。四、修改要十看1.看体裁和格式是否正确。2.看要点是否齐全。3.看主谓是否一致。4.看人称是否一致。5.看时态是否一致。6.看句子结构是否完整。7.看关联词是否准确。8.看拼写是否正确。

9.看标点是否正确。10.看词数是否符合要求。五、誊写四注意1.注意文体格式。例如: