Unit7单元话题写作（复习课件）-九年级英语全一册课件（人教版）()

单元话题写作Unit7

Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.话题分析本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家庭的各种规章制度进行了论述。在本单元话题作文的命题过程中，命题人通常会让你就学校或家庭的某些规章制度谈一谈自己的看法。写作时多用第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时，表达观点时要有理有据，不能偏激。

本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“做人与做事”和“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这两个主题群，涉及子主题“自我认识，自我管理，自我提升”和“良好的人际关系与人际交往”。常见的写作任务是根据实际情况或文字提示，写出谈论家规、校规等规章制度的短文，并能适当发表自己的见解，体裁多为记叙文或议论文。◆开头句①In

order

to

make

families

better,a

lot

of

families

have

their

own

rules.②Life

is

always

full

of

all

kinds

of

rules.

So

is

our

school.◆中间句①

First

of

all,it’s

necessary

for

us

to

realize

the

importance

of

traffic

safety.②Teenagers

are

too

young

to

make

their

own

decisions.◆结尾句①

In

short,if

we

obey

the

rules

and

take

care

of

ourselves,we

will

grow

up

safely

and

healthily.②Although

these

rules

are

strict,they

are

good

for

my

growth.【名言积累】①Nothing

can

be

accomplished

without

norms

or

standards.无规矩不成方圆。②A

nation

has

its

rule

and

a

family

also

has

one！国有国法，家有家规!

俗话说：“无规矩不成方圆”。为了营造良好的家庭氛围，使子女养成良好的生活习惯，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家规。请根据以下内容提示，先简要介绍Mary和Tom的家规，然后说说你家的家规（2-3条）并谈谈自己的感受。

要求：

1.100词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。▶▶审题指导1.文体：议论文2.人称：第一人称和第三人称3.时态：一般现在时4.写作要点：①Mary的家规；②Tom的家规；③我的家规及对这些家规的看法▶▶思路点拨▶▶范文赏析_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

①she

is

not

allowed

to

talk

while

eating.

Her

parents

think

it’s

a

bad

behavior.For

Tom,he

can’t

watch

TV

or

play

the

mobile

phone

at

home.

If

he

does

so,his

parents

will

be

angry

with

him.

And

going

to

bed

before

ten

is

a

must.②His

parents

think

it’s

good

for

his

health.Nothing

Can

Be

Accomplished

Without

Rules

In

order

to

make

families

better,a

lot

of

families

have

their

own

rules.In

Mary’s

family,

Every

family

has

its

own

rules.③There

are

also

some

rules

in

my

family.④First,⑤my

parents

care

much

about

my

exam

results.I’m

not

allowed

to

make

mistakes

because

of

carelessness.⑥Second,going

out

at

night

is

not

allowed.

If

I

do

want

to

hang

out

with

my

friends

at

night,I

must

⑦let

my

parents

know.

You

may

think

my

parents

put

too

much

pressure

on

me

by

making

such

strict

rules.

But

I

can

understand

them

because

they

really

want

me

to

have

a

bright

future.

Nothing

Can

Be

Accomplished

Without

Rules

In

order

to

make

families

better,a

lot

of

families

have

their

own

rules.

In

Mary’s

family,talking

while

eating

is

a

bad

behavior,①

____

she

is

not

allowed

to

do

that.

For

Tom,he

can’t

watch

TV

or

play

the

mobile

phone

at

home.

升格技巧技巧一：巧用逻辑连词升格①soIf

he

does

so,his

parents

will

be

angry

with

him.

And

going

to

bed

before

ten

is

a

must.

In

his

parents’

eyes,②____________________________________________（早睡早起身体好）.技巧二：巧用谚语升格②early

to

bed

and

early

to

rise

is

good

for

health续表

Every

family

has

its

own

rules.③

______________（我家也是）

④

______________（一方面）,my

parents

⑤

________________________（非常关注）

my

exam

results.

I’m

not

allowed

to

make

mistakes

because

of

carelessness.⑥

_________________（另一方面）,going

out

at

night

is

not

allowed.

If

I

do

want

to

hang

out

with

my

friends

at

night,I

must

⑦

__________________（和……保持联系）

my

parents

all

the

time.

You

may

think

my

parents

put

too

much

pressure

on

me

by

making

such

strict

rules.

But

I

can

understand

them

because

they

really

want

me

to

have

a

bright

future.技巧三：巧用倒装句升格③技巧四：巧用衔接词升格④⑥技巧五：巧用短语升格⑤⑦So

does

mine.For

one

thingpay

too

much

attention

toFor

another

thingkeep

in

touch

with续表Withapartner,discusssomerulesathome

thatyouagreeordisagreewith.Makesome

notesinthechart.RuleWhyyouagreeordisagreewithitHowyouthinktheruleshouldbechangedcan’tplaycomputergamescan’twatchTV3aAgree-playingcomputergamesmaygetinthewayofourschoolwork.PlayasfewgamesaspossibleDisagree-Sometimesweneedtorelaxsothatwecanstudybetter.ShouldbeallowedtowatchTVprogramsonweekendsWriteadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3bUsethefollowingexpressionstohelpyou:Idonotagreewith…IthinkIshouldbeallowedto...Iwouldliketo...Icould…ifI...思路点拨内容：你认为哪一条家规不合理、理由及应该如何修改文体：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文

人称：以第一人称为主

时态：以一般现在时为主话题引出→

（Beginning）↓↓↓↗1.不赞成的原因→2.

（MainBody）↘3.↓↓

总结观点→（Ending）FamilyrulesyoudisagreeWhyyoudisagreeHowitshouldbechangedTherearemanyrulesinmyhouse.Idonotagreewith...Thisisbecause...IthinkIshould...Ihopemyparentswillallowmeto…OutlineWriting

tips

Payattentiontothestructure.

Beginning—FamilyrulesyoudisagreeBody—Whyyoudisagree

Ending--HowitshouldbechangedTrytomakesentencesdifferently.IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…Iwouldliketo…Icould…if…Idonotagreewiththeideathat…TrytousesomelinkingwordsFirst;next;however;what’smore;inaword;allinall…4thApril,Sunday

Therearemanyrulesinmyhouse.IdonotagreewiththerulethatImustbehomefordinnereveryday.Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife.Ittakesawayopportunitiesformetospendtimewithmyfriends.Asaresult,mylifeisquiteboringsometimes.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtohavedinnerwithmyfriendsonceinawhile.Forexample,IwouldliketohangoutwithmyclassmatesafterdinneronsomeFridays.IhopemyparentswillallowmetodothisifIpromisenottostayouttoolateandifthereisnoimportantfamilyactivityonthosedays.Sample

假如你叫李华,是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“Myfamilyrules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。提示：1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；2.先写作业再看电视;3.早睡早起，不准熬夜；4.不和父母顶嘴,关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。要求：1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。2.书写规范。3.词数：80左右Howmanysteps(步骤)ofwriting:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________51.Analysethetopic.“审”2.Listanoutline.“列”3.Connectsentencesintoanarticle.“连”4.Correctthearticle.“改”5.Copyitintothepaper.“誊”It’stimetowrite.

假如你叫李华,是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“Myfamilyrules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。提示：1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；2.先写作业再看电视;3.早睡早起，不准熬夜；4.不和父母顶嘴,关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。要求：1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。2.书写规范。3.词数：80左右1.Analysethetopic.“审”styleofwriting(体裁):__________tense(时态)：___________person(人称):______keypoints(要点):__________________I一般现在时说明文familyrules

假如你叫李华,是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“Myfamilyrules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。提示：1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；2.先写作业再看电视;3.早睡早起，不准熬夜；4.不和父母顶嘴,关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。要求：1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。2.书写规范。3.词数：80左右2.Makeanoutline.“列”

Myfamilyruleshowmanyparagraphs(段落):____para.1:______________________________para.2:____________________________________________________________para.3:______________________________3Mynameis___.I’ma___.Ihave___.myfamilyrulesopinions(Ithink/agreethat...)(First...second...third...finally...)Linkingwords(连接词):表并列：and,both...and...表转折：but,however...表因果：because,so,asaresult...表递进：notonly...butalso...,what’smore表结果：so...that...,such...that...表先后：first,second,third,next,finally...表时间：when,while,after,before...3.Connectsentencesintoanarticle.“连”TimeforwritingPossibleVersion:

MynameisLiHua.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetellyouaboutthem.

First,Ican’tgetearspiercedorwearearrings.Iamnotallowedtosmokeordrink,either.Second,IhavetofinishmyhomeworkbeforewatchingTV.What’smore,Imustgotobedandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisnotallowedforme.Last,Imustnottalkbacktomyparents.Ineedtocareaboutmyfamilyandfriends,andIamrequiredtohelpwithhouseworkathome. Ithinksomeofmyfamilyrulesarestrict.However,Iknowthattheyaremadetomakemebecomebetterandbetter.MyFamilyRules

Enjoyavideo.Whatcanyoulearnfromthisvideo?1.Ourgrowthneedsrules.我们的成长需要规则。

2.Nothingcanbedonewithoutrules.无规矩不成方圆。3.Anationhasitsruleandafamilyalsohasone!国有国法，家有家规！4.Correctthearticle.“改”Peer-evaluationchecklistYesNo1.Canyoupicturetheexperiencethewriterwroteabout?2.Doesithaveacorrectstructure?3.Arethereanyspellingmistakesandpunctuationerrors?4.Aretheverbsinpropertenses?5.Doesitincludea