Unit5HumansandNature高考写作单元训练五课件-高三英语北师大版

高考写作单元训练五UNIT5

HUMANSANDNATURE一文本叙述Step1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)1.大约三年前，鲍勃遭遇了一次可怕的风暴，这使他的身心受到重创。Aboutthreeyearsago，Bobexperiencedaterriblestorm，which_______________________．2.一天，他冒险去那些岛屿捕了更多的鱼，然后遭遇了可怕的风暴。Oneday，whenhe____________totheislandsandgotmorefish，hemetwithahorriblestorm．brokehisbodyandsoulriskedgoing一文本叙述Step1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)3.他掉进海里，被推着朝漩涡的方向前进。Hefellintotheseaandwaspushed___________________thewhirlpool．4.鲍勃感觉恶心，但位于漩涡的边缘时，他感到更镇静。Bobfeltsickbutwhenhewas______________thewhirlpool，hefeltcalmer．inthedirectionofontheedgeof一文本叙述Step1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)5.他做了三个重要的观察。He_____________________________．6.基于他的观察，他把自己绑在一个木桶上帮助他幸存下来。Basedonwhathehadobserved，he_______________abarrel，

which_____________________．madethreeimportantobservationstiedhimselftohelpedhimtosurvive一文本叙述Step2．衔接成文(利用恰当的过渡衔接词语连句成篇)

Aboutthreeyearsago，Bobexperiencedaterriblestorm，whichbrokehisbodyandsoul．Oneday，whenheriskedgoingtotheislandsandgotmorefish，hemetwithahorriblestorm．Unfortunately，hefellintotheseaandwaspushedinthedirectionofthewhirlpool．Bobfeltsickbutwhenhewasontheedgeofthewhirlpool，hefeltcalmer．Afterawhile，hemadethreeimportantobservations．Basedonwhathehadobserved，hetiedhimselftoabarrel，whichhelpedhimtosurvive．二场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)应用文写作Step1．第一步

单句写作1.海洋污染正成为一个非常严重的问题。我们应该立即采取措施来解决它。每个人都应该努力在这场战斗中发挥自己的作用。(takeimmediatemeasures;attempttodo)Seapollutionisbecomingsoserious______________________________

.Everyoneshould_____________________

inthebattle.

thatweshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestosolveitattempttoplayhispart

二场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)应用文写作Step1．单句写作2.当然,我们很难靠自己的力量保护所有的海洋动物。(havedifficulty[in]doing)Ofcourse,

allthemarineanimalsonourown.

3.因此,在一定程度上,我们需要共同努力,首先应该做的是禁止人们向海洋扔垃圾。此外,制造环保船舶也同样重要。(toacertainextent;beequallyimportant)Therefore,

,weneedtomakejointeffortsandweshouldfirst

.Besides,

tomakeenvironmentally-friendlyships.

wehavedifficulty(in)protecting

toacertainextentbanpeoplefromthrowingrubbishintotheseait’sequallyimportant

二场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)应用文写作Step1．单句写作4.在保护海洋的过程中,世界各国都应该承担起责任。(intheprocessof)

,allthecountriesthroughouttheworldshouldtaketheresponsibility.

Intheprocessofseaprotection二场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)应用文写作Step2．句式升级1.用倒装句升级句12.用what引导的主语从句改写句3Soseriousisseapollutionbecomingthatweshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestosolveit.Everyoneshouldattempttoplayhispartinthebattle.

Therefore,toacertainextent,weneedtomakejointeffortsandwhatshouldbedonefirstistobanpeoplefromthrowingrubbishintothesea.Besides,it’sequallyimportanttomakeenvironmentally-friendlyships.二场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)应用文写作Step3．连句成篇(将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文)Soseriousisseapollutionbecomingthatweshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestosolveit.Everyoneshouldattempttoplayhispartinthebattle.Ofcourse,wehavedifficulty(in)protectingallthemarineanimalsonourown.Therefore,toacertainextent,weneedtomakejointeffortsandwhatshouldbedonefirstistobanpeoplefromthrowingrubbishintothesea.Besides,it’sequallyimportanttomakeenvironmentally-friendlyships.Intheprocessofseaprotection,allthecountriesthroughouttheworldshouldtaketheresponsibility.三续写能力--片段描述Step1．储备词汇(记牢本单元可用于描写的词汇)情感描写shocked；frightened；curious；anxiously；cheerful动作描写turnone'sback(onsb．/sth．)；escape；observe；rescue；trap；breathe；breakdown环境描写flood；eruption；wave；crowded；landscape；shelter三续写能力--片段描述Step2续写练笔(完成下面的续写片段并背诵)大雨倾盆，街道被洪水淹没。John正在公交站点躲雨，这时他看到一辆汽车在深水中抛锚了。一个孩子好奇地打开车窗观察外面拍打车门的波浪。司机和乘客被困在了车里。吓坏了的母亲想抱着孩子从车里逃出来。突然，她滑倒了，John震惊之余，立刻跑去救援。齐胸深的水让他呼吸困难，但他怎么能对这对溺水的母子置之不理呢？Marty_____________becausehehadn't_________________forthefinalexamination．Everydayhe______________________________________．Hisparents______________________________thecomputer，andthewholefamilywas_______________ratherthan________．Oneday，Marty_________________________．Thedoctoradvisedhimto_________________________________．Hisfathertookhimtoaremotevillage．Martyhadtoplaywithotherkidsontheplayground_________________________________________________．Allinall，Martywashaving____________________．

feltstressedrevisedhislessonswaseagertosurftheInternetandchatonlinesoughttodraghimawayfromfulloftensionlaughtersufferedapainintheneckremovehisaddictiontotheInternetwasdustyonsunnydaysandmuddyonrainydayswhichadynamiclifestyleItwaspouringand____________________．Johnwas________________________atthebusstopwhenhesawacar___________________________．Achild____________________________________________beatingthedooroutside．Thedriverandthepassengers_______________________