必修第一册 Unit 1 写作教学设计：《建议信写作》

必修第一册Unit1写作教学设计：《建议信写作》一、写作任务概述核心信息具体内容写作体裁建议信（应用文重要体裁）写作目的就特定事宜向收信人（可为人、组织或机构）提出针对性建议或合理忠告正文结构1.开篇说明写信目的；<br>2.主体提出具体建议；<br>3.结尾表达美好祝愿二、常用核心表达With...mentionedwith...rletterthatyou’restuckinaconflictwith...Knowingyou’retroubledbythemisunderstandingwithyourfriend,I’mwritingtooffersuggestions.Youhaveaskedformyadviceonhowtoresolvetheconflictwithyourteammate.Isuggestthatyoumunicateopenlyandhonestlywith...Itwouldbewisetoputyourselfinothers’shoesbeforespeaking.Whynotapologisefirstandexplainyourtruefeelings?Trytoresolveconflictsthroughcalmdiscussioninsteadofblame.Mutualtrustandrespectarekeytorepairingyourrelationship.Ihopethesesuggestionswillhelpyougetalongwellwithothersagain.Remember:“Thinkfirst,speaklater”whenyou’reangry.三、高考链接与真题示例单元话题真题链接命题特点建议信2023年全国新高考I卷高考应用文热点话题，可针对个人问题、学校事务、机构工作等提出建议写作任务假定你收到笔友来信，对方因抱怨队友被好友泄密，既得罪了队友又失去信任，陷入尴尬。请你回一封邮件，内容包括：<br>1.表达理解；<br>2.提出具体建议；<br>3.表达祝愿。四、审题核心要点本单元写作需结合“理性沟通、换位思考”的核心素养，聚焦人际交往中的真实矛盾展开。审题时需精准把握问题本质（如信任破裂、沟通不畅、边界不清），结合单元核心策略（先思后言、主动道歉、公开沟通），提出具体可操作的建议，避免空泛表述。五、典型问题建议理由对应表群体核心问题具体建议建议依据17岁青少年向好友抱怨队友，好友泄密，导致自身尴尬且对双方感到愤怒1.公开向队友道歉；<br>2.冷静与好友沟通信任问题1.真诚道歉可化解误解，重建团队信任；<br>2.清晰沟通能让好友认识到泄密的危害16岁青少年好友频繁越界（如翻看日记），不知如何拒绝1.直接告知好友自身不适；<br>2.礼貌设定明确个人边界1.坦诚表达有助于好友理解你的需求；<br>2.相互尊重边界是友谊的基础17岁青少年因小组项目与组员发生争执，双方互相指责失败责任1.先耐心倾听对方观点；<br>2.聚焦问题解决而非相互指责1.主动倾听体现尊重，有助于找到问题根源；<br>2.无指责沟通能促进团队协作六、写作框架构建段落核心内容句式设计第一段共情对方困境，点明写信目的Youmentionedinyourletterthatyou’retroubledby...<br>Itotallyunderstandhowembarrassedandangryyoufeel.<br>I’mwritingtosharesomepracticalsuggestionstohelpyouresolvetheproblem.第二段提出具体建议，阐释核心依据First,you’dbetter...Thisisbecause...<br>Besides,itwouldbewiseto...Astheunittellsus,effectivemunicationiskeyto...<br>What’smore,tryto...Itcanhelpyou...第三段表达美好祝愿，强调核心原则Ihopethesesuggestionswillhelpyourebuildtrustandresolveconflicts.<br>Rememberthatmutualunderstandingandsinceremunicationarethemostimportantinrelationships.七、参考范文示例范文1DearFriend,I’mtrulysorrytohearyou’restuckinanawkwardsituation—yourfriendleakedyourplaintsabouttheteammate,leavingyouangryandembarrassed.Itotallygethowhurtfulitistobeletdownbysomeoneclose.First,apologisetoyourteammateopenly—honestwordscanclearupmisunderstandingsandrebuildteamtrust.Then,haveacalmtalkwithyourfriendabouttrust,lettinghimknowtheleakhurtyoubutyoustillvaluethefriendship.Sinceremunicationisthekeytomendingrelationships.Ibelieveyou’llsortthingsoutsoonandregainmutualtrust!Yourssincerely,范文2DearFriend,Knowingyourfriendalwayscrossesyourboundaries—likereadingyourdiary—andyoudon’tknowhowtorefuse,Ifeelforyourdisfort.It’stotallyunderstandabletowantrespectforyourpersonalspace.Trytellingheryourfeelingsdirectlyfirst—openexpressionhelpsherunderstandyourneeds.Also,setclearboundariespolitely,suchassaying“Ihopeyouaskbeforereadingmydiary.”Mutualrespectisthefoundationofahealthyfriendship.Ihopethesesuggestionshelpyoutwogetalongbetter.Wishyourfriendshipstayswarmandrespectful!Yourssincerely,范文3DearFriend,I’msorrytolearnyouhadabigfightwithyourgroupmemberovertheproject,withbothblamingeachotherforthefailure.Workingthroughconflictsinteamworkcanbereallystressful.First,listentoeachother’sopinionspatiently—activelisteningshowsrespectandhelpsfindtherootcause.Then,focusonsolvingproblemsinsteadofblaming,likedividingtasksbasedonyourstrengths.Ourunittellsus“blamefreemunication”boostscooperation.I’msurewiththeseefforts,you’llresolvetheconflictsoonandfinishtheprojectsuccessfully.Bestwishesforyourteamwork!Yourssincerely,八、写作素材积累（一）开篇：点明问题与共情表达I’msorrytohearyou’restuckinaconflictwithyourfriendafterthesecretwasleaked.Suchproblemsaremonininterpersonalrelationships.Youwrotethatyoufeelembarrassedandangrybecauseyourclosefriendleakedyourplaintsabouttheteammate.Itotallygetyourfeelings—trustisthefoundationoffriendship.Knowingyou’restrugglingwithhowtotalktobothyourteammateandyourfriend,I’mwritingtooffermysuggestions.It’sunderstandablethatyou’reupset—beingletdownbysomeonecloseisreallyhurtful.（二）主体：提出建议（结合单元核心）Isuggestthatyouapologisetoyourteammatefirst.Tellhimhonestlythatyouwerelettingoffsteamwithoutthinking,andyoudidn’tmeantohurthim.Whynothaveacalmtalkwithyourfriend?Youcantellhimyou’reangryabouttheleakbutstillvaluethefriendship.Itwouldbewisetomunicateopenlyinsteadofkeepingsilent.Astheunitsays,resolvingconflictsrequiresclearandsinceremunication.Trytoputyourselfintheirshoes—yourteammatemighthavehadhisowndifficulties,andyourfriendmightnothaverealisedtheharmofleakingwords.Ifyoufeelsomeonecrossesyourboundaries,don’thesitatetosaysopolitely.Mutualrespectforpersonalspacehelpsmaintainfriendship.（三）结尾：祝愿与核心总结Ihopethesesuggestionswillhelpyouresolvetheconflictsandrebuildmutualtrust.Remember:“Thinkfirst,speaklater”whenyou’reangry—thiswillavoidmanymisunderstandings.Sinceremunicationandmutualunderstandingarethekeystogoodrelationships.Ibelieveyou’llsortthingsoutsoon.Bestwishesforyourfriendshipandteamcooperation!Ifyouneedmorehelp,feelfreetowritetome.九、写作模板参考模板①DearFriend,Youmentionedinyourletterthatyou’retroubledbytheconflictwith________(对方的人际问题).Itotallyunderstandhowyoufeel—beingstuckinsuchasituationisreallyfrustrating.Toresolvetheproblem,I’dliketoofferthreepracticalsuggestions.First,(建议1).Thisisbecause(理由1，结合单元“理性沟通”核心).Second,(建议2).Astheunittellsus,(单元核心观点，如“mutualtrustisvital”).Third,(建议3).Itcanhelpyou(具体效果).Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeuseful.Rememberthatsinceremunicationandputtingyourselfinothers’shoesarethemostimportantininterpersonalrelationships.Wishyouallthebest!Yourssincerely,模板②DearFriend,I’msorrytohearyou’restrugglingwith________(对方的问题，如“themisunderstandingwithyourfriend”).It’stotallynormaltofeelupsetwhentrustisbroken.Herearemysuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,(建议1，如“apologisetoyourteammateopenly”).Honestapologycanhelpresolvemisunderstandingsquickly.Besides,(建议2，如“talktoyourfriendabouttheimportanceoftrust”).Thiswillmakehimrealisehismistakewithouthurtingyourfriendship.What’smore,________(建议3，如“thinktwicebeforespeakingwhenyou’reangry”).Astheoldsayinggoes,“Looselipssinkships”—carelesswordscancauseunnecessarytrouble.Ibelievewiththeseefforts,you’llsoongetalongwellwiththemagain.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,十、写作提升策略（一）核心注意事项观点贴合单元“理性沟通、换位思考”核心，避免脱离单元主题；建议具体可操作，结合单元相关案例，拒绝空泛表述；语气真诚、礼貌，既要表达理解共情，又要给出明确方向，避免指责性语言。（二）科学写作方法首段：先共情再点题，让收信人感受到被理解；主体：每条建议搭配1个核心理由，理由可融入单元核心词汇（如resolveconflicts,mutualtrust）或核心观点（如“thinkfirst,speaklater”）；尾段：回归单元核心原则，强调真诚沟通的重要性，简洁收尾不画蛇添足。十一、写作流程梳理精准把握对方人际问题真诚表达共情态度结合单元核心提出具体建议强调单元核心观点表达美好祝愿十二、写作典例解析题目要求假定你收到笔友来信，对方因球队输球抱怨队友，向好友倾诉后被泄密，既尴尬又生气，不知如何面对队友和好友，请求你给出建议。请你回一封邮件，内容包括：①表达理解；②提出具体建议；③表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80字左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题要点文体：应用文（邮件）；时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称：第一人称（提出建议）、第二人称（呼应对方问题）。谋篇布局第一段：明确对方问题，表明写信目的；第二段：提出23条具体建议；第三段：表达祝愿与问候。核心词汇forgive原谅apologise道歉resolve解决boundaries边界misunderstanding误解municateopenly坦诚沟通mutualtrust互信Troubledby...（过去分词作状语结构）Encouragedby...（过去分词作状语结构）putoneselfinothers’shoes换位思考连词成句Troubledbythemisunderstandingwithyourfriend,I’mwritingtoexpressmyconcernandsharemyadviceonresolvingit.Inmyopinion,municatingopenlyandputtingyourselfinothers’shoesisofgreatbenefittorepairingyourrelationship.Youcanbuildmutualtrustbylearningtoforgiveandapologisesincerely.Inordertoresolveconflicts,youshouldbebravetotalkaboutboundarieswithpeoplearoundyou.Whenfacingaconflict,you’dbettercalmdownfirst.Youwillfinditeasiertoforgiveandmoveon.句式升级Inmyopinion,municatingopenlyandputtingyourselfinothers’shoesisofgreatbenefittorepairingyourrelationship,bywhichyoucanbuildmutualtrustthroughforgivenessandsincereapology.Whenfacingaconflict,you’dbettercalmdownfirst,sothatyouwillfinditeasiertoforgiveandmoveon.参考范文DearFriend,I’msorrytoknowthatyou’retroubledbythemisunderstandingwithyourfriend.I’mwritingtoexpressmyconcernandsharepracticaladviceonresolvingit.Inmyopinion,municatingopenlyandputtingyourselfinothers’shoesisbeneficial,helpingrebuildmutualtrust.Besides,bravelyapologiseandtalkaboutboundarieswiththem.Calmdownfirstwhentroubledbytheconflict,andyou’llfinditeasiertoforgive.Ihopethesetipshelpmendyourrelationships.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,十三、实战写作训练第一部分基础题一、词性转换训练将下列单元核心动词转换为名词或形容词，用于建议句式：apologise→(n.)______→(adj.)______forgive→(n.)______→(adj.)______resolve→(n.)______→(adj.)______municate→(n.)______→(adj.)______用括号内单词的正确形式填空：It’simportanttohave______(open)municationwhenresolvingconflicts.Mutual______(trust)isthefoundationofanygoodrelationship.Theteachersuggestedwe______(apologise)toeachotherforthemisunderstanding.参考答案apology;apologetic2.forgiveness;forgiving3.resolution;resolute4.munication;municativeopen2.trust3.apologise二、句子仿写改写原句：Youshouldtalktoyourteammate.Ithelpsrebuildtrust.→合并为复合句：______→用单元核心短语改写：______原句：Don’tspeakcarelesslywhenyou’reangry.→用单元习语改写：______提升层：高阶句型原句：Youneedtomunicateopenlywithyourfriend.→虚拟语气：______→倒装句：______原句：Sinceremunicationisimportantforresolvingconflicts.→强调重要性（结合单元核心）：______参考答案基础层：Youshouldtalktoyourteammate,whichhelpsrebuildmutualtrust./Talkingtoyourteammateisagoodwaytoresolvetheconflict.Remember“Looselipssinkships”—don’tspeakcarelesslywhenyou’reangry.提升层：IfIwereyou,Iwouldmunicateopenlywithyourfriend./Notonlyshouldyoumunicateopenlywithyourfriend,butalsoyoushouldexplainyourtruefeelings.There’snodenyingthatsinceremunicationplaysavitalroleinresolvinginterpersonalconflicts—thisiswhatourunitemphasizes.三、翻译句子要求：用建议信常用句式翻译，结合单元核心词汇。我建议你先向你的队友道歉。为什么不冷静地和你的朋友谈谈信任的重要性呢？换位思考是解决人际矛盾的关键。参考答案Isuggestthatyouapologisetoyourteammatefirst.Whynottalktoyourfriendcalmlyabouttheimportanceofmutualtrust?Puttingyourselfinothers’shoesisthekeytoresolvinginterpersonalconflicts.第二部分提升题假定你的朋友来信说，其好友总是随意翻看她的日记、打听她的隐私，让她很困扰，不知道如何拒绝。请你给她回一封建议信，内容包括：①表达理解；②提出具体建议；③表达祝愿。（词数80字左右）佳作示例DearFriend,I’msorrytohearyou’retroubledbyyourfriendcrossingyourboundaries.It’stotallyunderstandabletofeelunfortablewhenyourprivacyisn’trespected.Isuggestyoutellheryourfeelingsdirectly—sayyouvaluethefriendshipbutneedpersonalspace.Youcanalsosetclearrulespolitely,likenotlettingothersreadyourdiary.Asourunitsays,mutualrespectiskeytofriendship.Ihopethesesuggestionshelp.Wishyoutwogetalongbettersoon!Yourssincerely,你的同学因小组项目和组员发生摩擦，双方互相指责，项目进展受阻。请你给他写一封建议信，结合单元“理性沟通”核心，提出解决建议。（词数80字左右）佳作示例DearFriend,Knowingyou’restuckinafightwithyourgroupmemberovertheproject,I’mwritingtooffersuggestions.Blamingeachotherwon’thelp—ourunitteachesustoresolveconflictscalmly.First,listentoeachother’sopinionspatiently.Then,focusonsolvingproblemsinsteadofpointingfingers.Youcandividetasksbasedonstrengths.Sinceremunicationwillmaketheprojectgosmoothly.Hopeyousortitoutsoon.Bestwishesforyourproject!Yourssincerely,假定你收到笔友来信，对方因拒绝好友的不合理请求（如抄作业）而被疏远，感到难过。请你给他回信，提出建议。（词数80字左右）佳作示例DearFriend,I’msorrytohearyou’resadaboutbeingalienatedbyyourfriendafterrefusinghisunreasonablerequest.It’sbraveofyoutosticktoprinciples.Isuggestyoutalktohimcalmly—explainrefusingtolethimcopyhomeworkistohelphimlearn.Youcanoffertohelpwithhisstudiesinstead.Remember,truefriendshiprespectseachother’sprinciples.Wishyoutworeconcilesoon!Yourssincerely,十四、高考真题衔接题目要求假定你的外教计划组织“人际沟通技巧分享会”，向学生征集建议。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：①说明分享会的核心需求（如解决朋友矛盾、团队合作摩擦）；②提出具体建议（如案例分析、角色扮演）。佳作示例1DearTeacher,I’mgladtohearyou’llorganizeaworkshoponinterpersonalmunication.Asstudents,weoftenfaceconflictswithfriendsorteammates,sopracticalskillsarebadlyneeded.Isuggestaddingcaseanalysesfromourunittodiscusssolutions.Roleplayingisalsoagoodidea—wecanpracticeresolvingconflictsinrealscenarios.Besides,invitingteacherstoshareexperienceswillmakeitmorehelpful.Thankyouforyourefforts.I’mlookingforwardtotheworkshop!Yourssincerely,佳作示例2DearTeacher,I’mexcitedtoknowyou’llholdaworkshop