2026年浙江省高考首考英语作文写作指导课件（含范文）

浙江1月首考小作文旧形式新主题保护图书馆书籍，防止乱涂乱画真题回顾你发现学校图书馆里书本上够花涂写的现象很普遍，决定向本校英语报投稿说明这个现象。内容包括：1.阐述现象；2.呼吁珍爱书籍注意：写作词数应为80个左右标题：TreasureLibraryBooks:OurSharedResponsibility作文体裁：

校园现象评论+倡议书写作任务：

观察性描述+说服性呼吁逻辑要点：从“现象描述”自然过渡到“行动倡议”现象影响呼吁做法评分关键1.现象描述的具体性；2.论证的逻辑性（为何要珍爱书籍？）；3.倡议的可行性（怎样珍爱书籍？）；（1）提出“具体建议”，避免“抽象说教”和“空洞口号；（2）避免过度情绪化的职责；（3）正向倡导。4.语言的准确性与词数控制语言积累：现象描述类1.涂写乱画相关scribble/leavemarkonthepages在书页上乱涂乱画drawrandommarks画随意的记号writenotesinthemargins在页边空白处写笔记foldpagecorners折角leavegraffitionbooks在书上留下涂鸦语言积累：现象描述类2.现象普遍性相关acommonphenomenon/sight一个普遍现象bewidespreadinthelibrary在图书馆中很普遍canbeseeneverywhere随处可见existamongmanystudents在很多学生中存在语言积累：现象描述类3.影响分析damagethephysicalcondition损坏实体状况reducethebook’slifespan缩短书籍寿命makepagesunreadable使页面难以阅读leavepermanentstains留下永久污渍

spoilthereadingexperience破坏阅读体验distractsubsequentreaders干扰后续读者语言积累：呼吁珍爱书籍1.珍惜爱护相关treasurelibrarybooks珍爱图书馆藏书takegoodcareof好好爱护keepbookscleanandintact保持书籍干净完好protectpublicproperty保护公共财物handlebookswithcare小心翻阅书籍语言积累：呼吁珍爱书籍2.责任与倡议相关sharedresponsibility共同责任raiseawarenessof提高……的意识appealtoallstudentsto呼吁所有学生……setanexampleforothers为他人树立榜样maintainagoodreadingenvironment维护良好的阅读环境常用句式：倡议呼吁Itisourshareddutyto...everyborrowerbearstheresponsiblityof...awell-keptbookservesgenerationsusebookmarksinsteadoffoldingpagestakenotesseparatelyhandlebookswithcarereportdamagedbooksestablishnewrulesforlibrarymanagement写作练习：句式升级一、

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并列句/复合句1.Manystudentsscribbleonbooks.Thisaffectsotherreaders.（定语从句)2.Wemustcherishpublicbooks.Otherwise,bookswillbedamagedquickly.(条状从+否定）Manystudentsscribbleonlibrarybooks,which

seriouslyaffectsotherreaders’readingexperience.Ifwedonotcherishpubliclibrarybooks,theywillbedamagedbeyondrepairsoon.写作练习：句式升级二、普通主谓句

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倒装句/强调句1.Itisimportanttotreasurelibrarybooks.（强调句)2.Wecansolvethisproblemonlybyworkingtogether.(Only倒装）Itislibrarybooksthatweshouldtreasuremostassharedpublicresources.Onlybyworkingtogethercanwesolvetheproblemofbookdefacementinthelibrary.写作练习：句式升级三、

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动态分词/介词结构1.Studentsarecareless.Theydamagebookseasily.（-ing作原因状语)2.Weneedtotakeaction.Wewanttoprotectbooks.(目的状语）Beingcareless,manystudentstendtodamagelibrarybooksunconsciously.Inordertoprotectlibrarybooksassharedpublicproperty,wemusttakeimmediateaction.写作练习：句式升级四、

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同义高级表达1.Wehopeallstudentswillstopscribblingonbooks.（Itis+名词+that从句)2.Thisproblemisveryserious.(名词短语+现在完成时）Itisoursincerehopethateverystudentwillrefrainfromscribblingonlibrarybooks.Thisproblemofbookdefacementintheschoollibraryhasreachedanalarminglevel.范文赏析Recently,scribblinganddefacingschoollibrarybookshavebecomeincreasinglycommon.Manylibrarybooksaremarkedwithrandomdoodles,marginalnotesorirrelevantunderlines,whichcanbespottedeasilyontheshelves.Suchbehaviorbringsnegativeimpacts.Itnotonlyruinstheneatappearanceofbooksbutalsohindersotherstudents’readingexperience—keycontentmaybeobscured,makingithardforsubsequentreaderstograspthetexts’coreideas.Weshouldallcallfortreasuringlibrarybooks.It’soursharedresponsibilitytohandlebookswi