高三上学期期末学业水平考试英语试题

高三上学期期末学业水平考试英语试题山东省烟台市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末学业水平考试英语试题

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“Unbelievable,"Jadescreamedwhileexamininghercamerathat,secondsbefore,hadbeenaccidentallydroppedintotheseawaterbyher.Itwasherfather’sfavourite.Shehadbroughtittoherclassbeachbarbecuetorecordmemorablemomentswithherhighschoolclassmates.Jadeheldthecameraclosetoherchestbeforedryingitwithatowel.Shepressedthepowerbuttonseveraltimes.Noresponse.

Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes,Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave.“Jade,whereareyougoing”Herpuzzledclassmatescalledbehindher,butsheignoredthem.Withoutsayinggoodbye,sheranawayfromthebarbecue.Shewantedtotakethecameratotherepairmanimmediately.UncleLee,thetrustyrepairmanforallthingsdigital,couldonlyshakehishead,giveheraresignedlookandsay,“It’sbeyondrepair."

ThecamerawasagiftfromJade’smothertoherfatheronhisfortiethbirthday.Sincethen,ithadbeenhiscompanionforallevents,bigandsmall.Ithadbeeninstrumentalincapturingallthesignificantmilestonesintheirfamily.Numerousadvanceddigitalcamerashadcomeontothemarketbuthisfatherhadnointentionofreplacingthetreasure.Butthistimeshehadsecretlytakenitoutandruinedit!Herfatherwouldgetcrosswithherandprobablynevertrustherwithhisbelongingsagain.Thinkingofthis,Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietlyinherfather’sdrawerinthehopethatherfatherwouldn’tfindoutthetruth.

Jaderemaineddisturbedforafewdays.ThencamethedaywhenherfatherwentforhiscamerabecauseJade’syoungersisterwouldbegraduatingfromkindergartenandhewaspreparingfortheceremony.

“What’swrongwithmycameraItwasingoodconditionlastSaturday.Maybeit’stoooldtowork,”Jade’sfathersaidindisbelief,havingtriedturningitonseveraltimesandfailed.“Takeiteasy,dear.Perhapsit’shightimetochangeforanadvancedone,"Jade’smothercomfortedhimsmilingly.“ButIcan’tpartwiththisbigtreasure.”Herfatherresponded.

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.

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Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.

“Unbelievable,"Jadescreamedwhileexamininghercamera(状从省略)that,secondsbefore,hadbeenaccidentallydroppedintotheseawaterbyher(定从).Itwasherfather’sfavourite.Shehadbroughtittoherclassbeachbarbecuetorecordmemorablemoments(目的状语)withherhighschoolclassmates.Jadeheldthecameraclosetoherchestbeforedryingitwithatowel(介词短语做时间状语).Shepressedthepowerbuttonseveraltimes.Noresponse.

Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes(独立主格),Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave(adj做主语补语).“Jade,whereareyougoing”Herpuzzledclassmatescalledbehindher,butsheignoredthem.Withoutsayinggoodbye,sheranawayfromthebarbecue.Shewantedtotakethecameratotherepairmanimmediately.UncleLee,thetrustyrepairmanforallthingsdigital(adj修饰不定代词放其后),couldonlyshakehishead,giveheraresignedlookandsay(动作串),“It’sbeyondrepair."

ThecamerawasagiftfromJade’smothertoherfatheronhisfortiethbirthday.Sincethen,ithadbeenhiscompanionforallevents,bigandsmall(adj做后置定语).Ithadbeeninstrumentalincapturingallthesignificantmilestonesintheirfamily.Numerousadvanceddigitalcamerashadcomeontothemarketbuthisfatherhadnointentionofreplacingthetreasure.Butthistimeshehadsecretlytakenitoutandruinedit!Herfatherwouldgetcrosswithherandprobablynevertrustherwithhisbelongingsagain.Thinkingofthis(非谓语动词做原因状语),Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietlyinherfather’sdrawerinthehopethatherfatherwouldn’tfindoutthetruth.

Jaderemaineddisturbedforafewdays.Thencametheday(倒装)whenherfatherwentforhiscamera(定从)becauseJade’syoungersisterwouldbegraduatingfromkindergartenandhewaspreparingfortheceremony(定从).

“What’swrongwithmycameraItwasingoodconditionlastSaturday.Maybeit’stoooldtowork,”Jade’sfathersaidindisbelief,havingtriedturningitonseveraltimesandfailed(非谓语动词做伴随动作).“Takeiteasy,dear.Perhapsit’shightimetochangeforanadvancedone,"Jade’smothercomfortedhimsmilingly.“ButIcan’tpartwiththisbigtreasure.”Herfatherresponded.

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.

___

Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.

1.按高考英语读后续写要求，对该文章进行分类

分类类型分析

类型情感类（家庭责任与亲情）

续写思路构思本篇文章续写重点在于情感的逐步解开和父女关系的修复。续写中要注重情感的转折和人物心理的变化，展示Jade逐渐面对责任、勇敢认错的过程，以及父亲的理解和宽容。

布局与框架提炼续写的结构可以分为两个部分：第一部分是Jade鼓起勇气与父亲对话；第二部分是父亲的宽容和温情展示。

实施首先描述Jade内心的挣扎，接着让她鼓起勇气去和父亲谈论失误，再展示父亲的宽容。

承接原文的事项1.保持Jade对父亲的愧疚感；2.继续强调相机的情感价值；3.注意过渡情感变化，从悔恼到坦诚；

整体注意事项1.语言要简洁且富有感情；2.保持人物心理状态的一致性；3.通过动作和心理描写体现情感的变化。

巧妙设计续写内容在续写中要通过Jade的内心独白、父亲的反应来推动情感的发展，并用对话推动故事的走向。

2.故事山模式分析

阶段内容分析原文反应句

开端Jade不小心摔坏了父亲最爱的相机。"Unbelievable,"Jadescreamedwhileexamininghercamera.

上升Jade不敢面对父亲，决定将相机放回父亲的抽屉里，避免父亲发现。"Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietlyinherfather’sdrawer."

高潮Jade担心父亲会责怪她。"Herfatherwouldgetcrosswithherandprobablynevertrustherwithhisbelongingsagain."

下降Jade准备坦诚告诉父亲，但仍感到内心矛盾。"Thinkingofthis,Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietlyinherfather’sdrawer."

结局父亲发现相机故障后，母亲安慰他，Jade开始下定决心要面对问题。"Takeiteasy,dear.Perhapsit’shightimetochangeforanadvancedone."

3.续写时可以与原文衔接的内容分析

分析角度内容原文反应句

人物刻画Jade为家庭成员感到愧疚，父亲则沉浸在对相机的珍视中。"Ithadbeeninstrumentalincapturingallthesignificantmilestonesintheirfamily."

情感层次Jade的内心充满自责，而父亲则无法理解相机的损坏。"What’swrongwithmycamera"

关键情节点Jade决定面对自己的错误并主动与父亲交流。"Jadegathereduphercourage."

语言特色使用简单却富有感情的对话，展现父女之间的情感冲突与和解。"Takeiteasy,dear.Perhapsit’shightimetochangeforanadvancedone."

心理描写Jade的心理由自责到勇敢告知真相，再到获得父亲的理解。"Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes,Jadegatheredherbelongings..."

动作描写Jade的内心活动通过她的动作传达，如放回相机、收拾东西等。"Sheheldthecameraclosetoherchestbeforedryingitwithatowel."

环境描写描述环境通过影响人物情感变化，如海滩、家庭场景的描述。"Shehadbroughtittoherclassbeachbarbecuetorecordmemorablemoments..."

隐含主题面对错误的责任，勇敢承担并获得亲人的宽容。"It’sbeyondrepair."

4.续写所需的动作、心理、环境描写推荐英文例句

场景动作描写心理描写环境描写

紧张时刻Jadenervouslypacedaroundtheroom.Jadefeltherheartracingwithguilt.Theroomwasdimlylit,castinglongshadowsacrossthefloor.

安慰对话FathergentlyputahandonJade’sshoulder.Jadetriedtocalmherself,takingdeepbreaths.Thesoftglowofthekitchenlightfilledthespacewithwarmth.

反思时刻Jadestaredatthebrokencameraforalongtime.Shefeltalumpriseinherthroatasmemoriesofherfather’sloveforthecamerafloodedhermind.Thequiethumoftheairconditionerfilledthesilencebetweenthem.

解开心结Jadeslowlywalkeduptoherfatherwiththecamerainherhand.Jade’schesttightenedwithfearasshepreparedtoconfess.Thesunlightstreamedthroughthewindow,illuminatingtheirfaces.

5.文章中的语法现象分析

语法现象例句搭配/近义词

时态"Jadegathereduphercourage."Simplepasttenseshowingacompletedaction.

情态动词"Maybeit’stoooldtowork.""Could"forpossibility,"Should"foradvice.

条件句"Ifyouwanttofixit,youneedtotryharder.""If"clausestoshowcauseandeffect.

感叹句"Unbelievable!""Howincredible!"

6.高考核心词汇分析

单词词性词义近义词联想词例句

resigned形容词顺从的，听天由命的patient,tolerantacceptance,forbearanceJadegaveheraresignedlookwhensherealizedthecamerawasbroken.

treasure名词宝藏，珍品gem,valuableitemprecious,keepsakeThecamerawasatreasurethatJade’sfathercherishedforyears.

guilt名词内疚，愧疚remorse,shameblame,regretJade’sguiltmadeithardforhertofaceherfather.

comfort动词安慰，抚慰console,soothereassurance,solaceHermothercomfortedher,tellinghereverythingwouldbeokay.

treasure动词珍爱，珍藏value,cherishprotect,holddearJade'sfathertreasuredthecameraforitsmemories.

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Version1

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Shehadbeenavoidingthetruthfordays,butnowitwastimetocomeclean.Withadeepbreath(介词短语做状语),shewalkedtothelivingroomwhereherfatherwassitting(定从),staringatthebrokencamera(非谓语动词做伴随动作)."Dad,"shebegan,hervoiceshakingslightly(独立主格),"Ineedtotellyousomethingaboutthecamera."Herfatherlookedupather,amixtureofconfusionandconcernonhisface(名词短语做补语).Jade’sheartraced,butsheforcedherselftocontinue."Iaccidentallydroppeditinthewaterduringthebarbecue,andIcouldn’tfixit."Shebracedherselfforhisanger,buttohersurprise,herfather’sexpressionsoftened.Hereachedoutandplacedahandonhershoulder."Thankyoufortellingme,"hesaid,hisvoicecalm(独立主格).

Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Herfatherhadleftanote:“Forcapturingallourmoments,justliketheoldcamera."Jade’seyesfilledwithtearsassherealized(状从)thatherfatherwasn’tangryather(宾从).Heunderstoodthataccidentshappened,andhewaswillingtomoveon.Asshepickedupthephone(状从),herfatherenteredtheroomandsmiled."Iknowyou’llmakeupforitbycapturingevenmorememorieswiththisone."Jadefeltaweightliftoffhershoulders(补语),knowinghermistakehadbeenforgiven(宾从)andthatherfathertrustedheroncemore(宾从that不可省).

Version2

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Herhandstrembledasshereachedforthecamera(状从),thetruthbubblinginsideher(独立主格).Sheknewshecouldn’tavoiditforever(宾从)."Dad,"shesaid,hervoicebarelyaboveawhisper(独立主格),"I’mreallysorry,butIruinedyourcamera."Herfatherlookedather,atraceofconfusioninhiseyes.Jade’sthroattightenedasshecontinued(状从),"Itookittothebeachandaccidentallydroppeditinthewater.Itriedtofixit,butit’sbeyondrepair(原文衔接)."Silencefilledtheroom,andforamoment,Jadefearedherfatherwouldbefurious(宾从).Buttoherrelief,hesimplysighedandgaveheragentlesmile."Iguessthesethingshappen(宾从),"hesaidsoftly."Thankyoufortellingme."

Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Anoteaccompaniedit:“Forthemomentsthatmatter,nomatterwhat.”Jadepickedupthephone,feeling(非谓语动词做伴随动作)awaveofgratitudewashoverher(宾从).Herfather’sforgivenessmeantmoretoherthananycameracould(比较状从).Sheknewshehadmadeamistake(宾从),buthiswillingnesstomoveforwardwasalessoninitself.Assheglancedatthephone,herfatherappearedinthedoorway."Let’sstartcapturingsomenewmemoriestogether,"hesaid,atwinkleinhiseye(独立主格).Jadesmiled,feelingarenewedsenseofconnectionwithherfamily(非谓语动词做伴随动作).

Version3

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Shehadbeenholdingontotheguiltfordays,butnowitwastimetofaceit."Dad,"shebegan,"there’ssomethingIneedtotellyou(定从)aboutthecamera."Herfatherlookedupfromhischair,hisexpressionfilledwithcuriosity(独立主格).Jadehesitatedforamomentbeforecontinuing,"I’mreallysorry,butIaccidentallydroppeditinthewater.Ididn’tmeantoruinit,butit’sbrokennow."Herfather’sfaceshowednoanger,onlyaquietsadness."Iknowhowmuchthatcamerameanttoyou(宾从),"Jadeadded,hervoicefullofregret(宾从).Tohersurprise,herfathersmiledfaintlyandsaid,"It’sokay,Jade.Accidentshappen."

Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Attachedtoitwasasimplenote:"Fornewmemories."Jadefeltasenseofreliefwashoverher(宾从).Shehadbeenafraidofherfather’sanger,buthisunderstandinghadputheratease.Assheheldthephoneinherhands(状从),sherealizedthatthecamerawasasymbolofherfamily’scherishedmemories,butitwasthepeopleinherlifethattrulymattered(定从).Herfathercameintotheroomandsmiled."Let’screatenewmomentstogether,"hesaidwarmly.Jadenodded,knowingthatforgivenesshadallowedthemtomoveforward(宾从).

语法加分点分析

虚拟语气（SubjunctiveMood）

搭配：Iwish,Ifonly,It'stime

同义替换：Ihope,Iregret

例句：

IfonlyIhadbeenmorecareful,thecamerawouldn’thavebeenruined.

IwishIcouldhavepreventedthisfromhappening.

倒装句（Inversion）

搭配：Neverbefore,Notonly...butalso

同义替换：Rarely,Seldom

例句：

NeverbeforehadJadefeltsoguiltyaboutanaccident.

Notonlydidherfatherforgiveher,buthealsoshowedhercompassion.

情态动词（ModalVerbs）

搭配：couldhave,mighthave,musthave

同义替换：shouldhave,wouldhave

例句：

Jadecouldhavebeenmorecarefulwiththecamera.

Herfathermusthaveunderstooditwasanaccident.

情绪与动作描写亮点词汇

情绪描写：

Tearsofsadness(悲伤的眼泪),relief(宽慰),guilt(内疚)

升级替换：

Sadness→grief→sorrow

Relief→comfort→ease

动作描写：

Gatheredhercourage(鼓起勇气),placedahandonhershoulder(搭上肩膀),pickedupthephone(拿起手机)

升级替换：

Gatheredhercourage→summonedherbravery→musteredherresolve

Pickup→take→grasp

语料积累与升级替换选项

短语升级：

Tofacethetruth→confrontthereality→cometotermswith

Moveforward→progress→advance

常见词汇替换：

Forgiveness→absolution→pardon

Accident→mishap→incident

情绪描写亮点词汇：

Guilt:"Hervoicequiveredwithguilt."

Surprise:"ToJade'ssurprise,hesmiled."

Disappointment:"Shecouldalreadyimaginehisdisappointment."

动作描写亮点词汇：

Gathereduphercourage:"Shetookadeepbreath,steelingherselfforthedifficultconversation."

Steelingherself:"Everystepfeltlikeamountain."

Placed:"Sheslowlywalkedtoherfather'sstudyandplacedthebrokencameraonhisdesk."

情绪描写亮点词汇：

Guilt:"Hervoicebarelyaboveawhisper."

Relief:"Iwasn’tupsetwithyou,Jade."

Regret:"I’msosorry."

动作描写亮点词汇：

Walkedslowly:"Shewalkedslowlytowardsherfather."

Paused:"Shepausedatthedoor."

Tookadeepbreath:"Jadetookadeepbreath."

情绪描写亮点词汇：

Guilt:"Theweightofheractionswasoverwhelming."

Relief:"I’mnotmad."

Regret:"Iruinedyourcamera."

动作描写亮点词汇：

Hesitated:"Jadehesitated,thenplacedthecamerainfrontofhim."

Lookedather:"Hereachedoutandpattedherhand."

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